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New Beginning….new life epi 4

Requesting Ishra fans to pls read THIS EPISODE… …. that too…till the END……..
(I have not changed the pair) but……shown a little of raman’s extent of love …..
After which I am ready to accept………..If you throw Chappals on me!!!……..Or even Roses!!!

Epi4
HOSPITAL
Ishita is taken on stretcher ………all family members run with her till the emergency door ………..Ishita is taken inside the emergency room…..Ishita is uttering pihu’s name………(pihu notices this)
Amma-vishwa, what is this happening??why my ishu always has to bear all this??
Vishwa consoles her……..
Ruhi[crying]-Ishi maa….[praying]plss…god , I want my Ishi maa back….
Raman comes and hugs Ruhi…………Both cry together….
All family members are weeping………..

Mani standing at the corner of the wall …..alone……his shirt is red ….filled with blood…..
His tears are just not stopping…….He is trying to convince himself that ishu will be alright ……..but the scene of ishu’s accident is coming in front of his eyes again and again………
Alliya was also broken seeing her amma wounded…….and then seeing her appa’s such a condition…… she could not control and ran off………..

WAITING AREA
Alliya is crying……….
Adi[even his eyes are full of tear]-U need to be strong alliya……..ur appa needs you…..
Alliya-I am trying my best…..when I go near appa…ahh….i cannot see this condition of appa….and amma is also not responding……….so many nurses are running in and out of emergency room………..this shows that amma’s condition is critical………and…
Adi-stop….[putting his finger on her lips to make her quite] Nothing will happen to ishi maa……U call urself Ishi maa’s daughter …….then prove it ,…..and be storng like her …….My Ishi maa is very strong and she will be OK soon……..I know that………

Alliya hugs adi ………Adi consoles her and in this process their embrass becomes tight….. and Adi kisses on her forehead……………
Both of them share their pain…….

Another CORRIDOR of Hospital
Pihu is standing alone……..Shagun comes finding her…….
Shagun-Pihu……why are u here?……..
Pihu-Mumma……..that aunty is not bad ………..she saved me………….that car was coming towards me ………I got so scared[pihu’s eye seemed scared as if that scene again came in front of her eyes….] ….
Shagun[hugging her]-Don’t be scared pihu………nothing will happen to Ishita……
Pihu- Mumma ….I saw that vamp aunty driving the car…………
Flashback shown
Pihu seeing towards the car after the accident……she sees Nidhi in Burkha… who was driving the car………..Nidhi smirks seeing Ishita fallen on road from her rare view mirror…………….
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Shagun-what……… Nidhi did all this???
Nidhi comes from behind in that same burkha…….pihu gets scared and runs away……
Nidhi-Yes I did this…….Why you look shocked…… even u wanted this……..
Shagun gives a tight slap to Nidhi…………
Shagun-How dare u aim my pihu in your game………And another thing……….
Yes………. I wanted to Get Ishita out of my way but……….I never wanted to harm her………..
She saved my daughter……..
Nidhi-Oh..shut up………… I don’t have time for ur nonsense talk………This Slap……was ur biggest mistake…………[Nidhi leaves]
Shagun-I hope Ishita gets well soon………..

OUTSIDE emergency room
Ishita on stretcher is taken out of emergency room…..towards another room
All the family members move towards her……
The doctor comes out and stops them…….
Doctor-Pls….understand…..
We are taking Mrs.Ishita to ICU…….…we have saved her life……..but due to excess bleeding….she has gone into the state of COMA………
Everyone is shocked……….
Mani-When will she be out of coma???
Doctor-I am sorry but ………it is just uncertain……It can take either a week ,a month, a year….or whole of her life time………..
Raman-Can I meet her?
Doctor-Sorry but right now ……..no one can meet her…………I have called Dr.Verma, the Best Neurosurgeon to see ur wife’s case…….After he checks Ishita………then only you all can meet her………[He goes away]

Mrs Bhalla- Matta Rani…….. Make Ishita alright…….
Amma[angry]-No need for all this………….[Everyone is shocked]………Till she is with Raman and Bhalla family ………..She can never be alright…….
Mrs.Bhalla-What are u saying madrashan???
Amma-I am saying right…………..These seven yrs she was away from Bhalla family and was safe………..
Ishu is my daughter…………so I have taken the decision………….
After my ishu is cured……….she will stay with Mani in our Iyer house……….Like this she can even meet her children next door …..
Vishwa-This is not the time to talk like this Madhu……..[Vishwa takes Madhu]
Mrs.Bhalla[to Mr.Bhalla]-Ishita cant go away from Bhalla House……….
(mr.Bhalla consoles her)
Raman who heard all this……..could not control and leaves in a huff…………
Mani[to himself]-I just want Ishu to be alright soon………..nothing else………..

After 12 hours ………..
Ishita in ICU………Raman and Mani outside ….near the door…..
Dr.Verma comes out
{ I have written further dialogues in hindi……..to give a little intense feel…….hope u all like it}

Dr.Verma-Mrs.Ishita ka operation karne ke liya mai ready hoon……..Thoda risk hai par ………..
Mrs.Ishita ko kuch nahi hoga ………..I garanteee…..

Mani-Doctor, Ishu ke Darkano Se Dusro Ki Saanse Chalti hai………Ishu ko thik karke aap na sirf ek jaan ko ……….balki aur bhi zindagi ko baccha rahe hain……….

Dr.verma-Mai apke bhavnao ko samajta hoon………[now addressing Raman]…Mr.Raman ….aap Ishita ke pati hain….isliya apko consent form par sign karna hoga……

Raman[loud tone]-Nahi………mai sign Nahi karonga………Mai Ishita ki life ka risk nahi le sakta……

Dr.verma-Aap Bahut Bari galti kar rahe hain Mr.Raman Bhalla…………..Ishita ko HOSH aane me saalo lag sakte hain………..vo har pal ZINDAGI AUR MOTH SE LAD rahi hai…….itna dard kitne saalo tak dena chate hai aap………tab toh accha hai ki aap abhi hi …..apne hatho se ushka oxygen mask nikal de………

Mani[immediate reflex]-Docctorrr……..
[Now addressing Raman]…Dekho Raman ……..Dr.Verma bahut acche doctor hain …….Maine sara information nikala hai……….Hamari Ishu thik ho jaigi………muje yakin hai…….

Raman-Tum bhul rahe ho ki Ishita meri patni hai …………….AGAR YEH OPERATION UNSUCCESSFUL HUA TOH …………Agar tum ushke HOSH me aane ka saalo tak WAIT nahi kar sakte toh koi bath nahi………….Par mai ushka saalo tak intazaar karne ko taiyar hoon………….
[Raman leaves]

Mani[falls on his knees……….crying]-Raman Tum intazaar ki baat mujse kar rahe ho………Ishu ke liya mai toh JANMO tak Intazzar kar sakta hoon………Par Ishu ko is halat me dekh kar Mera dam ghut raha hai,……………….
Aaj Pehle baar Muje dukh hai………. ki Ishu par mera koi hakh nahi hai……………..
[Weeping]

In ICU
Raman[to unconscious Ishita]-……..um…..tumhe shayaari bohut pasand hai na ishita ……….toh ek meri bhi soono…….
“Neend Me Girte hain Meri
Aankhon se Aansoo,
Jab Tum Bhi Khwabon Me
Mera Haath Chhod Deti Ho…..”
[tears roll down his eyes]
Mai Nahi Jaanta ki mai sahi kar raha hoon ya galat……….Bas itna jaanta hoon ki tumhare bina mai ahoora hoon, jaise barish ke bina samundhar, taro ke bina Ashman aur sooraj ke bina subha………………….
Agar tumhe hosh aa gaya toh tum mujse dhoor chali jaogi…….Mani… ke sath…………Par mai tumhe dhoor jate nahi dekh sakta………
Tumhe aise dekh kar muje bhi dard hota hai PAR………. .Mere pas bas yahe raasta hai tumhe apne pas rakhne ka…………….
Tumse mohabat Karna mera zindagi ki sabse badhi khush-nasebi thi…………….aur isi mohabbat ke liya tumhe coma me rahne dena meri sabse badhi Dukh-nasebi………..

Precap- A LEAP OF 1 YEAR
………Mani shown with gray shawl around ………..beard all grown ……..in black and white outfits,…………..shown in JAIL,
Mani[to himself]-You were right Raman ………….We shouldn’t have done Ishu’s operation…………I deserve to be here………

Screen shifts to an open ground ………everyone wearing white coloured clothes
Raman is seen putting fire to a heap of wood……….and performing the last rites………..
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If I have disappointed any Ishra fan then…….. I am sorry!!…………
ALL comments and also critics are welcomed……………..

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