Here goes the next episode
Epi 6
In the shopping Mall
……….Ishita is in western outfit and a modern look……….She is talking on phone…….
Pallavi who was also present there sees Ishita and calls her out……
Ishita turns around to see her
Pallavi-Hi Ishita!!!
Ishita[a little confused]-Umm…….I am sorry I din’t recognise you
Pallavi-Don’t you remember me…….eight years back……[ishita interrupts]
Ishita-Oh …..I think you were my patient ………..ah …….I know I was a dentist but I am sorry I cannot help you……..Actually I had an accident a year before……so…
Pallavi-So??
Ishita-…..so,…. I don’t remember my past …….um……I neither remember my studies nor my patients……….So I am really sorry….
Pallavi-Haven’t your family told you anything about your past….. about your friends??
Ishita looks on………..then …..Ishita’s phone rings again……..
Ishita-I m sorry………My car has come….I need to leave…….(she leaves)
Bhalla House
Ishita enters her room…..Her head is aching a bit
Raman enters just then……..
Raman-Ishita, why you took so long to come from shopping wall???………..You know I get worried………[saying this he hugs Ishita,………….But Ishita feels a little awkward and frees herself]
Ishita-I am okay…….[she tries to change topic]….I got so many things for all family members……..
Raman-Ishita….It has been one year you are with me and in this bhalla house ……Do you still feel like we are strangers???
Ishita-Its not like that………See Raman……….I don’t remember my past………You told that this is my family……..I agreed………..You told I have three children………I agreed…….and actually I feel that connection between me and my children…….But when it comes to you….ah…..I need time to accept you as my life patner……….
Raman-um….as you wish Ishita….
(Ishita leaves)
Mihir enters just then…
Mihir-Why don’t you tell everything to Ishita??
Raman-I have told her everything …….. the way we used to stay happily 8 yrs before……….
Mihir-And the coming of nidhi in her life,….Ishita’s suicide………7 years time when she was with abhimanyu ……….why don’t u tell her about all that…………..This was the reason why nidhi troubled you this whole year and……….. tried to tell Ishita about abhimanyu……..
Raman-And that lead to her ruin…………and ……….as far as abhimanyu is concerned ………why to tell her about someone who is in jail……… Its becoz of him that Ishita lost her memory…..
Mihir-…….but…..
Raman-I don’t want to hear it again……..
They put a stop to the topic……….
Back to the JAIL
Pallavi-You were right abhimanyu ……..Raman hasn’t told Ishita anything about you………AND in this one year her memory hasn’t also come back…………
Mani-Why are you fighting my case,,……….If Ishu doesn’t remember me then what is the use of coming out of jail………..atleast I can punish myself like this…………
Pallavi-What punishment???
Mani-By my hands I made myself away from Ishu…..I am not even a part of her memory……….
FLASHBACK
The bulb outside operation theatre is red………
All the family members are waiting outside……….
A nurse comes outside and asks mani to get some injections….which are needed at an urgency………..To which Mani agrees……….
When Mani gets the injection………another *nurse at the entrance of hospital stops him……..
*nurse-Was waiting for you sir………I will take this to operation room
Mani-But ……….I want to give it to doctor myself………..
*nurse-You cannot go to the operation room sir………..Now pls do not delay……
Mani gives her the injections………
After Three Hours of operation
Dr.Verma comes out……….all family members look towards him………
Dr.Verma-Operation is successful……….Ishita will be conscious after one or two hours……….Then you all can meet her……..BUT
Amma-But what???
Dr.Verma-The injection I had asked for was of a low dose……….But……..The injection with low dose cover actually contained a high dose medicine……….We din’t know that and used it in the operation………And now becoz of this…………….[all looked shocked]
(Mani was in extreme shock and could not believe his ears)
Raman(worried)-What happened??Ishita is alright na?
Dr.Verma-Yes she is fine ……..but She has lost all her memory………….everything from her mind is erased………….
Flashback ends………..
Mani-Then what else had to happen…………..Raman held me responsible for wrong injections……….Infact when even I hold myself responsible for that wrong injections then It was obvious for Raman to think like that………
Pallavi-But that was not your fault………..It can be the chemist’s mistake from whom you bought the injection ………or the nurse who took the injections…………. Or any hospital staff could have done that…………..
Mani-The truth won’t change that Ishita had lost her memory………..And then I had also signed the legal paper taking the responsibility of Ishu’s operation………..Even that documents partially held me responsible for Ishu’s memory loss during her operation……….Becoz I had given the consent of it………..So, case was filed……….And…….
Pallavi-You were sent to jail for Three years……………
Mani-hmm…………Being out of Ishu’s memory is itself a jail for me for my whole life………
Pallavi-I have promised ………..so I will get you out…..
Mani-Promised?? …whom?
Pallavi(with a smile)-Your daughter alliya…….I know…….
You made her promise that she should never come to jail to meet you………..So…….
Mani-So?
Pallavi-Past one year she has tried to find many good lawyers………but none agreed……After a lot of research…..she came up to me……….and I have assured her that I will get you out….
Mani(with tears)-How is my princess daughter??
Pallavi-She is good……she misses you a lot…………..She had convinced many good professional staff to join your company…….and now she is herself studying management…….so that after you come out of jail……. she can assist you in business……….
Mani-Hh….It will take another two more years……………..
Pallavi-No……I will surely get you out…………..I have filed request to reopen the case…………..
Screen shifts to Big Company……….
In the room of the owner……….
The owner is sitting on huge chair………
Secritary-Sir, the two interns you have chosen have come…………
Alliya and Adi come from two different doors……….they get shocked to see each other………
Owner turns around…………this is none other than……..Romi………….
Romi-This is my new company ………..and I have selected both of you as interns looking at your efficiencies……….
Alliya-Sir, I knew that this is your company……and after thinking a lot I joined here,………..But I din’t know I will have to work with him( pointing adi)
Romi-Well, If you both have problem with each other then…….work as strangers……….
OKAYY………..so no more wasting time………..[he gets up]….we have to go for a meeting in 15 minute(saying this Romi leaves)
Alliya and Adi look at each other……
FlashBack
Society compound
Aliiya goes behind Ishita……..
Alliya-Amma…..
Ishita turns around with an instinct ……….
Alliya-Amma, I made this pisam….by my hands for you……….
Ishita-um….I am not ur amma……..
Alliya-No …….you are my amma and Mani is my appa……..Pls try to remember……..
Ishita-Ah……(Ishita’s head starts aching……..she was about to faint ………when adi holds her…….)
Adi-Ishi maa……….are you okay…..come I will take you inside
[after leaving ishita in her room to rest, adi comes out and confronts alliya]
Adi(angry)-Why are you doing this……..You know if Ishi maa thinks about past ……….She gets head ache………
Alliya-Becoz you and your family haven’t told amma about Appa………..If you all tell amma that appa loved her and even she…….(adi interrupts)
Adi-And what else should we tell……..that Abhimanyu sir changed the injections becoz of which Ishi maa lost her memory…..and.…….now he is in jail……
Alliya(angry)-My appa din’t do anything……….Raman sir has put false allegation on my appa…….And the day amma will know this ………….she will never forgive Raman sir……..
Adi-ENOUGH……..and one more thing…………You stay in Iyer house …………its good for you……but don’t try to come behind my Ishi maa and give her any kind of stress……….
Alliya(with water filled eyes)-After my appa is out of jail……….then all my amma stress will go like that only………..my appa is the solution to all my amma’s problem……..
Adi leaves……..Alliya stands alone
FLASHBACK ends
Secretary comes and takes both adi and alliya for meeting………..
PRECAP-Ishita feeds pihu, Ruhi and Adi dosa by her hands……..
Screen then shifts to a GARDEN…..
Someones handkerchief drops down……..
Mani bends down to pick it up and his head collides with a lady……..
Lady lefts up her hair…….
Mani is surprised to she the lady………..Its Ishita…….Both have an eyelock
Song plays in background….(veer zara song plays…..)
37 Comments
ooohhhhhhhhhhh, I don’t have any words to say and you may also get bored to read the same words again and again, it is MIND BLOWING…… that’s all I have to say
Thank u 🙂 …keep reading
Wonderful. ….eagerly waiting for next
Thanks pooja….
Really it’s superb…plz my request don’t separate ishita and Raman
Thanks guru…..
But about pairing. ….i have a little different story. ….its about a person’s second love story…..
I hope you like the way further story will unfold…
Ishita and raman’s is a second love story. …plz don’t separate them…if you do you are going to portray ishita as an unfaithful wife. …I know raman has done mistakes. ..but never gave ishita’s place to anyone in his heart. ..all short tempered ppl do not deserve divorce. …and mani it’s his fault that he loved somebody’s wife. ..you are a VERY GOOD WRITER. ..give a good message to everyone about a husband wife relation. ..A mother how much ever she hates her children’s father will always have a connection with him. …After memory Loss also. ..don’t show as if it’s not there. ..she bore his child in her womb once. …that relation will always be there. ..its my strong opinion. ..plz think about the pairing. ..
Grt…….nice to read today’s episode……..but pls don’t separate Ishra……even if it’s the person’s second love story……..bring some twist and join them……..pls pls pls……???
🙂 🙂 I must say you are a really big fan of Ishra………..well…… will surely think about it…….
Till then keep reading………
Nice episode
Thanks Swastika………….
Please unite Ishita & Mani. Raman does love Ishita but he is selfish & doesn’t deserve Ishita. Your story is awesome (y) But you are making Raman way too negative. Keep him as the spineless idiot in the original YHM but don’t transform him into a cold blooded monster.
Hi Niharika………and …….Raman will ofcourse be a positive icon ….i promise…..
thanks for suggestion
Hi Niharika………and …….Raman will ofcourse be a positive icon ….i promise…..
thanks for suggestion……….
Ishita and raman’s is a second love story. …plz don’t separate them…if you do you are going to portray ishita as an unfaithful wife. …I know raman has done mistakes. ..but never gave ishita’s place to anyone in his heart. ..all short tempered ppl do not deserve divorce. …and mani it’s his fault that he loved somebody’s wife. ..you are a VERY GOOD WRITER. ..give a good message to everyone about a husband wife relation. ..A mother how much ever she hates her children’s father will always have a connection with him. …After memory Loss also. ..don’t show as if it’s not there. ..she bore his child in her womb once. …that relation will always be there. ..its my strong opinion. ..plz think about the pairing. ..
Nice but please don’t let ishu hate raman
Yeah Kumud…..Ishu will not hate raman…….and as the all dear friends are demanding…..I will surely bring changes in my script……..
Ishita and raman’s is a second love story. …plz don’t separate them…if you do you are going to portray ishita as an unfaithful wife. …I know raman has done mistakes. ..but never gave ishita’s place to anyone in his heart. ..all short tempered ppl do not deserve divorce. …and mani it’s his fault that he loved somebody’s wife. ..you are a VERY GOOD WRITER. ..give a good message to everyone about a husband wife relation. ..A mother how much ever she hates her children’s father will always have a connection with him. …After memory Loss also. ..don’t show as if it’s not there. ..she bore his child in her womb once. …that relation will always be there. ..its my strong opinion. ..plz think about the pairing. ..
Hii …..Radhikaji…… (First of all I am happy to know that you read my ff)………
As there is a popular demand I will surely not disappoint all……..And bring changes in further script……… the way all ishra fans want……..but it will go in a little smooth pace…..(I am working on it )
I respect your views Radhikaji…………and I will surely think about the pairing………
(But to say truely If I would be in Ishita’s place I would have agreed to stay Alone……but wouldn’t have forgiven raman)…..(.why should always a wife has to bear a short tempered husband……..Why don’t we ever hear any opposite cases……)
Thanks for suggestion 🙂
Of course….There will be lot of husbands who bear short tempered wives….its the general habit of women to blame men…but in this world men and women do equal compromises. …we need to understand that. ..when ishita went around acting like mad …also when she killed chaada (root cause of all problem) raman stood by her. .should not forget that. ..
Plz don’t seperate ishra manI and sha gun make a good couple plz don’t separate ishita and ra man because they make a realy gd couple
Hi rashida……..I m working on the script ……………tanq for ur views……..keep reading
Don’t make Raman negative and unite ishra we don’t want ishitha to hate raman
And want some cute nokjhok between ishra plsplspls
Hi ayesha………..raman wont be negative…..So many ‘pls’ was not required :)…….as i said won’t disappoint ishra fans………keep reading
🙂 I give up Radhikaji….. ;)………these all things are really going over my head…….
I just know that relations are not balance sheets………..raman’s good actions do not give him right to hurt ishita……….whatever ishita did was not for her benefit ……..she behaved like mad for raman’s safety(though i know it was just ekta kapoor’s senseless twist to increase TRP 🙂 )…….and killing chadda was a self defence…….even that she did to save pallavi………but raman treated ishita badly for his own grief , …….Ishita suicided becoz of him……..It was mani who saved her……It was mani who suffered paralysed legs for 7 years for her……..Mani always respected her……I believe this much is enough for a girl to love someone………that’s why i started this ff……..
anyways ,
as far as my ff is concerned……..i will surely not disappoint ishra fans………and ………..sabka hukum sarako par…………..I m working on the script
Plz don’t take my comments as an offence. …I just justified raman’s character. … u are right mani saved ishita’s life ….because he was there. …if raman would be there of course he wouldn’t stand simply seeing ishita dying..He would save her even at the cost of his life. ..He might have scolded her…but also loved her unconditionally. …and after she went he showered all that love to ishitha’s daughter. ..pihu…you might have seen 1st ishra meet after leap…where raman was drunk. ..He was only talking about ishitha. …Once again I really admire your work….but our pov is different
thanks for suggestion..:)
Pleaseeeeeeeee, do whatever you wanna do but don’t reunite Ishita with Raman. It’s an earnest request. Off all the ff I have come across your one is far better since you have portrayed Ishita as a person & not as an idiot who easily forgets everything. If not with Mani let her stay single but please don’t change the script.
Hehe!!….atlast………after a long ….I came across someone who has same views as mine……….
Niharika………..my ff is also published on another site….’wattpad’……..
After so many requests ………..I had decided to upload a little changed script here and publish my initial ones on other……… Do read both of them and give your views………
Amazing purna be it ishra or Ishita n mani I love the way u present so I will keep reading anyways something different is always wonderful keep the good wrk going on All the best 🙂
Hi Rushi……I was just waiting for your response………….You are just too good……..I am thinking over the story……..I hope further updates will keep my ff interesting………..
Your views really means a lot……….Thanks
Hi purna,
Really gud yar…i’m speechless.. Nice way if story telling… Nd mani- ishitha jodi also i lykd alot… A change frm the original one.. When the story of yhm getng bored me too thought of this jodi nd you made it possible…its nice to see ishitha with mani…
Well done my dear… Keep going
Thank u khushiarvind!!!………will try to keep my ff interesting…….pls…keep reading
Plz plz plz don’t take my comment as offending you….I had no intention of hurting you or your views. ..sorry if I have hurt you. .. also waiting for the next episode. …plz upload. ….and my humble request once again plz don’t separate ishra. …
Ya….Of corse Radhikaji……….I really enjoyed conversing with you ……………..I liked ur concern for my ff……….will update soon……….keep reading
Hey purna!! Sry 4 not commenting on ur previouse epi.. Last month i was busy with my exams…. Bt now i’m free…Plz unite ishu & mani.. I like ur story line very much!!! Ur writing skills are fantastic dr!!
Hi sweety…..missed u!!!…….I hope you like the way further story unfolds……….pls….keep reading……….