Here is the first episode of my ff…..hope u all like it ………
Epi 1
BHALLA HOUSE
Ishita at the study table, sitting and writing a dairy …….wind blows from the window near it…. Her hair flies and she tries to close the window….. suddenly she remembers something…….
Flash back
Mani-keep this window open ishu…..the fresh air feels like giving someones message…..
Ishu-whos message ?…
Mani-someone whom we are far from ……ur family and ur children……..
Ishu-hmm…..the ones who don’t even want to see my face….
Mani-one day u will be with them surely and…..
Ishu-and wat….
Mani[lightening the mood]-ur hair looks gud flying like this…….
Mani moves her hair round her ears and they have an eyelock…..
Background music plays……(dekha hazaro daffa)
..hmmhmm….dekha hazaro daffa apko…..phir bekarari kaise hai……..
Samhale samalta nahi ye dil…..kuch aapme bat aise hai……hmmhmm….
Back to present
Ishu[to herself]-as u said I am with my family!…um…but still feel incomplete….
[writing in her diary and also thinking in her mind]-I have got used to another family that u made mani….the family the I really miss very much…….the memories which have no worries no sorrow only good sweet memories ………for the first time I felt i am living and enjoying ….u made me feel special……..
Neelu-ishita bhabhi alliya has come to meet u…….
Ishu-oh..i m coming
In HALL
Alliya is sitting on sofa and waiting for ishita….
Adi passes by……
Adi[clearing his throat]-heard that u make really gud dosa….
Alliya –yeah amma taught me…….my friends …especially rohan my friend from Australia is a big fan of it……….
Adi[feeling jealous]-umm…its not so great also…poonam….my classmate prepares better one …..
Alliya[being angry and even jealous]-how mean……[she is about to get up and go when adi holds her hand and she is about to fall when he holds her by her waist..]
Adi-you have beautiful eyes !!!!….
Alliya shies ………then she feels the closeness and frees herself……
Ishu-alliya wat a surprise …..happy to see u….
Alliya hugs ishita …
Alliya-amma I was just missing u…..
Adi[to himself]-I am sure she was missing me…[he gets a call so excuses himself]
Alliya and ishita continue talking……….
Ruhi paases by and feels jealous seeing ishita pampering alliya..
Alliya [to ruhi]-hi ruhi…..pls come and sit na…
Ruhi goes and sits on sofa ………….ishita smiles seeing her but ruhi ignores her…
Alliya-u know wat…..i know everthing about u ….amma usually used to talk about you…..
[hearing this ruhi couldn’t help smiling to herself]
Raman also hears this as he returns from office and goes to all of them…
Raman –ruhi actually has some magic that no one can stop loving her……
Ishu-well ruhi …….is our princess ….so no one can stay away from her
Just then the lawyer calls ishita and raman.. so the leave…….
Alliya[to ruhi]-you can consider me ur friend ……
Ruhi-don’t u feel insecure when ur amma is away from u and is with me here…..
Alliya –why to feel insecure I know amma loves me a lot and I think u have forgotten that …….i feel sad to see that amma and raman sir need words to make u believe how much they love u……..appa always says love is unconditional…….
Ruhi-these words sound good but it is not reality[she goes away]
Alliya feels sad for ruhi…….
In LAWYERS OFFICE
Lawyer –few days are left for the judgement day…
Raman –don’t know how to convince ruhi ….
Ishu-hmm…
Just then door opens and all eyes turn round to see in the direction of door………its is none other than our handsome and dashing Mani…
Mani-I think I can help you….
Lawyer-pls go on …we are listening
Mani-ishu ruhi needs to spend time with the whole family….so why not plan a holiday trip to some beautiful place
Lawyer-yeah I think u are right….
Ishu-I liked the idea….and as always u have solved my another problem…
Raman feels a little jealous ….but then continues
Raman-I will do the arrangements right away…..
Vandu who has listened the whole conversation comes forward and says
Vandu-it’s a nice idea…
Ishu-Oh ….akka ….we should go and inform the family……
Vandu-ya ya we will go but I have to say something……….when whole family is going then…….even mani and alliya should accompany……they are also a part of ishita’s family
Mani[looking towards raman’s uninterested face]-i don’t think we should accompany…..
Ishu-why not……..akka is right….i will feel good if u come
Mani nods ….raman excuses and leaves ….
Raman [to himself in car]-I thought by this trip I can correct my mistakes that I did seven yrs back…………get ruhi back and even ishita….but…(with a deep breath)….it seems even though she is with me and family, her heart and mind is somewhere else……
As vandu and ishita reach the colony compound vandu asks ishita to sit on the bench and continues….
vandu-ishu I know you are here for ruhi … I even know that everyone in bhalla house and iyer house want u and raman to patch up again …..but I want to talk about you….
Ishu-wat about me ….
Vandu shows her a butterfly and says
Vandu-look this butterfly is free happy and beautiful……it had another life before…….of a caterpillar….that soon was caged in cocoon……
I am sorry to say but ur life with raman before was like that caged cocoon caterpillar ……u gave all ur efforts to keep raman and family happy but dint think about urself ……..atlast what happened ……for one mistake ……..raman broke all bonds………
ishu –I don’t want to remember that akka….
Vandu-ya exactly….it hurts right… U desrve to live a life like that butterfly ……..along with mani…..
Ishu-akka right now I want to just get my daughter back….. I don’t want to think about myself or anything else ..,pls
Vandu-hmm….
Screen freezes on the butterfly flying through the flowers…….
PRECAP-all the family members go the resort…
So this is it …..hope u all like it….all comments and also critics are welcomed…….
17 Comments
really nice!!!!
plz keep writing
Thanx..i m glad that u liked it …
Purna again u nailed it
this story is so fascinating really
n trust me loving every bit of it n yesterday there was a demand to see adi n alliya n my god u paired them that too in just one day n so perfectly
superbbbb
Thank u so much Rushi…..actually i was waiting for ur comment…..feels good to know you liked it
superb keep on going
Thank u kumud….keep smiling
Hey purna..i’m a ishra fan…. bt i like “mani” as well…ishu & mani scene was FANTASTIC!!! plz add more ISHNI scene..i love to see raman’s jelouse toward ishu…
I m really happy to know that u read my ff though being a isra fan….i will surely put more isni scene….keep reading
Awesome as usual, please update regularly
Thanks sarayumane …will update soon
Nice start and pizza continue yrr
Thanks nisha ….will update soon
How to write a ff
Hi abhishek….rushi has already given u the method…(nice instructions rushi
.)…so eager to read ur ff…..
and do comment on mine also…
Hii Abhishek first register urself on telly update u just need to put ur name, some password n email id after successful registeration log in ur account n then from menu select submit article then give title write ur story update pic if u want n submit
hope this helps n hope to read ur ff soon
This is great! Adi and Alia are love❤❤ Keep your good work up. We are loving this ????
thankx rithika………keep reading…