Hello guys!!Mars back… with another part… you all didnt liked my past part… actually me too didnt liked but what can i do… it will start a track so … sorry for that..
Shot 3
swara: why sanskaar why??? why you done this to me…??
san: shut up swara i dont need to explain you..?
and he leaves..
swara's pov
sanskaar you are cheap very cheap… you dont know how to play relationship… sanskaar i will never forgive you… never???
his pov
swara… i know that i have done but… yesterday i didnt had control on myself…i am cursing myself for doing this… sorry swara sorry??
sanskaar was going to office …. he was driving himself lost in thoughts…
when some cars blocks his way…
sanskaar couldn't understand … when he got a knock on his car window… he open it..
the man standing there makes sanskaar unconscious by placing the handkerchief which was containing medicines…
sanskaar' s eyes opened in a isolated room.. the room was filled with goons…
sanskaar was tied with ropes on the chair…
soon a voice came from behind
man: welcome sanskaar…. we are meeting after couple of days…. how are you dear… acha forget about yourself… howzz my swara… hope she is fine… now whether she is fine or not but now she is gonna faint… as you are gonna die…
san: who are you??? are you sahil??
man: the right answer … mr maheshwari… a right answer..
san: you are gonna pay for this…
sah: i also dont prefer free things..
san: leave me… or else… i will not leave you..
sah: uff ohh sanskaar… i have brought a gift for you…
san: gift??
sah: haa …. pls brings sanskaar 's gift…
two men bring swara…
swara's hands were tied and little blood was flowing from her lower lip….
san: swaarrrraaaa!!
sah: gift is wonderful naa…
san: leave her…
sah: i will ofcouse leave her… but after the show of your death..
sahil picks up the road … swara sees sahil moving towards sanskaar…. swara bites the goons of sahil …. sahil with full energy was about to beat sanskaar when swara came in between… it injured her head..
sanskaar: swaraaaaaa!!!!!
sah: swara you again came in between…
sanskaar sees a pistol lying near his legs…
sanskaar shoots…. it hurts sahil's shoulder…
Sah: for now i am going… but i would be back with a bang…
he leaves with his goons..
sanskaar takes swara in his lap..
san: i am sorry swara… i am sorry…
he picks swara in his arms and moves towards hospital…
swara's eyes opens in her bedroom with sanskaar holding her hand…
sanskaar: are you fine doll..?? how are you feeling now..
swara remebers the accidents of last 3 days..
swara jerks her hand off!!
swara gets down of bed..
san: swara why are u standing …. just sleep my doll..
he cups her face.. swara moves back..
sw: dont dare to touch me… you cheap man..
san: sorry.. swara… i am really guilty for that… sorry my doll…. sorry.. i know that i have done wrong.. princess that night i was not in my senses swara… pls swara forgive me…
sw: sanskaar it is very easy to say sorry…. how many times you have said sorry… dont i have self respect…. i didnt accepted this from you… i loved you sanskaar… i loved u… i had more trust on u than i have on myself….. but u broke my trust… i thought that i would be safe with u… but now feeling unsafed when u are around… sanskaar i think you are not a human … firstly i thought that its mine mistake that i distrusted you… but i was wrong … i am right… you are the reason for missing of laksh… yes you are reason… and this is not the first time when you are the villian of the story…
first you came to take revenge… you broke mine n laksh's relation… then you beaten laksh and he gone missing and now a raper…
wowww… mr Maheshwari wow… what a great victory you achieved ….
okk lets categorize you
one . you are a kidnapper..kidnapped ragini
two. a acid attacker… . it was mine luck that i got safe..
three. a beater… a goon
four. a raper…
sanskaar only one achievement is left..and that is a murderer…. yaa a
murderer….. kill me sanskaar… kill me … what you are waiting for… achieve your goals…
sanskaar i literally dont know how you could do this to me… you made mms…. is it gone viral ..or not.. if not.. upload it naa…. i feel that so badluck maa has… she has a son like you..
you didn't even know how relations are palyed … you didnt have its value… you sidnt have its respect… you are good for nothing…
i can stay with a person like u…. i need divorce… is that clear i need divorce..
sanskaar gets angry … he pushes swara and pinns her to the wall… blocking her way…
san: what you think swara…. that i am a devil… no swara no…i am hell guilty on myself…. swara i told you before also about seeking revenge from bade papa n laksh was a misunderstanding …. i know that i also spoiled ragini and made her against you… and about laksh…. he is my brother…. even i am seraching him since months… about that … i dont know what happened to me… i lost my senses… or there was some one else… i dont know swara what happened…. pls swara try to understand…. i am not villian swara… pls…and about divorce…. no way… i will die but dont file divorce…
sw: you are shameless sanskaar and thats finale … get out of my room…. i dont wanna see your dirty face…. go… just go away…
san: swara do you still love me??
sw: love is done with humans…. not with devils… you may leave…
sankaar leaves…
sanskaar picks up beer bottle from fridge and moves towards terrance…
swara starts crying like hell…
sw: sanskaar …. why you do this… why you gives me pain.. why sanskaar…. whats going on in your mind…. are you a made or whatt….
sanskaar finishes beer in one time …
he recalls all his moments with swara…
their meet
their hug
their kiss
his confession
her confession
their marriage..
their first night
their puchka moment…
her rape
finally the quarrel of today
swara… pls forgive me… pls …. i loveeee you swaraaaa….. i love you….. i dont need revenge…. i dont need revenge…
epi ends with swasan crying face….
precap: a fight n little romance…
A/n: guyysss yesterday's episode was a worst dream for me also…. i need to do this to add some more tashan in my story…. hope you now enjoy the story…… actually the stories i have read always shown swara wrong…. but this time i wanted to make sanskaar suffer.. that's why tried something different….
love you all
Happy Rakhi
good noon
bye
tkcr
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26 Comments
Nice….Happy RakshaBandhan
awsome
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What do u mean by acid attacker? I dont remember such incident…..
Heyyyyy… Just read all the 3 parts and I am loving it.. ❤️❤️.. Though what Sanskaar did was v wrong but now seeing his guilt and him crying it’s nice to see his regret.. Would love to see how he will Manao his Swara after all this.. ????.. Thou Swara should not forgive him soon.. but please keep them together now.. ???.. Lovedddd how Swara even after going thru so much she came and saved Sanskaar from Sahil.. ???.. Too good.. All the emotions were perfect.. in the name of revenge Sanskaar crossed a line with Swara but hopefully he will win her back and we will get to see our lovely couple back together.. ??.. AWESOME STORY.. ???.. Thankkkkk you for writing this one.. In love with allllll your storiesssss.. ???.. Pleaseeee update the next part v soon.. ??????.. Loveeeeee this…
Awesome, this Sanky I like ????? but sanku alcohol is injurious for Heath take care about yourself…??????
One more thing about acid attack Sanskar told that man just to threatened Swara he had no bad intension…
I love the chappy… Waiting for next one.. ????? u r too go UPADTES fast so taht reader shouldn’t wait long bye and happy raksha bandhan
Awesome
Awsm Dr….. Update soon
It was,awesome but sanskar did wrong but he is suffering also but please unite them soon and happy rakshs bandhan
awesome
awesome
post soon
awesome..
Sorry yaar but this was too odd u know actually whatever stories I read showed sanskar wrong ALWAYS but this time also I got tht it’s ok…
Gud go on …
Best of luck
Awesome.. M
Mars, read this story from the first episode. It was awesome. Mujhe toh ab sach mein chakkar aane lage hain siso. Tum kitni saari stories ek saath sambhal rahi ho yaar. You are just fantastic. Keep writing siso. Take care. Loveee youuuu?????????
awesome dear
happy rakshabandhan dear..
hmm.. he is very guilty..
but i wanna say something.. swara has never brought their past between them.. so this alone.. try to not do it again na.. please????
because i just find that one a little odd as sanskar has already repented a lot for them..
and this sin of his..
okay that one was drunk.. but when he was in senses only.. he took the camera and told about the video to her, right??
but i still wait for your updates but the story is very interesting..
and i am waiting for you to justify everything and make it a happy story!!
sorry again!!
Ok so sanskar is guilty..but still he did a sin..I think sahil drugged sanskar and becoz of this he became violent..don’t know if I’m right or not..waiting for ur further parts..tc..
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Really??? Swara trusts Sanskaar?? When?? When all are accused her that she was behind in nagini’s missing or when whole dumb MM blames Sanskaar in laksh’s missing! Did she trust him in these situations??? And what was acid accident??…sorry I didn’t remember anything like that. More over now she brought their past life……I can’t take this! This is too much. She can give any punishment what she want but drag their past life in this matter is absolutely wrong(according to me). And u forget Sanskaar’s pain, makes him feeling guilty?? Both r wrong!!
Sorry Mars no.2, if I m wrong or hurt u! I . really sorry.
Superb…. ?
please post soon… n I didn’t like this fight between swasan. ..
Nice
Nice….
Awesome dear