Hi everyone….!!!! This is my first time to write something on EDKV….*fingers crossed ok lets start….
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Lets start *-)
IN A BIG MANSION
A girl is sitting in the floor near her bed…in a bridal attire she was crying misserably…..a old man of 63 came to her and patted her shoulder….she held his legs and cries misserably….the old sits on the bed near her….
O.man – beta suman ro mat…please…..
Suman – what i have done dada…why all are happening with me…..
Dada – beta please…..
But suman was crying misserably in his lap…..then dada makes her look at him and said….
Dada – suman beta plz….listen to me agree to this marriage…shravan is ur childhood frnd only…he will keep u happy….please bul jao sab ko…..he is ready to accept u….
Sum – how can i dada….i love someone else then how can i marry shravan….
Dada – beta please its my prestige problem….if this marriage not happened then i dont have any other option then dieing….
Sum – dada please aeisa mat bolo….
Dada – man jao…beta…
Suman – blankly nods….and dada takes her to mandap….there shravan already present in the mandap….suman sits beside him like a lifeless body…pandit starts the mantras….shraman took 7 rounds and shravan made her wear mangalsutra and puts vermillon in her maang….a long tear escaped from suman eyes……
after marriage all went frm the mansion and shraman also went to MALHOTRA MANSION…
AT NIGHT IN SHRAVAN ROOM
Suman was sitting in a bed with a vail in her head….shravan enters the room…and sat on the bed and removes her veil….she smiles at him…he slowly caresses her cheeks for asking permission…she closes her eyes…shravan takes this as permission and he cuped her face and captures her lips…..
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So guys here is the prologue of the story…do tell me if u like or not….then if u like it do comments and ya i ll start this ff after my xams only that means after 23…ok guys i hope u didnt bored u..love u all….keep smiling…bye…..
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It was really interesting…. I really liked it…!! Please post soon.. But one thing, is it not supposed to be ‘Nanu’ instead of ‘Dadu’? Anyways, excited to know what happened in the past, and even what is going to happen in the future.. So really hoping to see more of your work here!
Love,
Nishita…
thx NIKITA dear…but my friend LAVANYA aka LAVSS will continue this…
Superb!
thnx CHRLSTLE dear…and my frnd LAVANYA aka LAVSS will continue this….
inersting yaar. you should continue it.
I am waiting for your post.
take care.
thnx REEMA dear…my frnd LAVSS will continue this after our xams..
Superbbbbbb will be waiting post soon loved it.welcome
thnx PRETTYPREETI dear…my frnd LAVANYA aka LAVSS will continue this…
Awesome !!!!
I really lyk it ???
thanks dear…