Hi guys ??? first of all, wish you a very happy new year!!! I know I should’ve posted this before but couldn’t finish it!! This is an os, which I tried soo soo hard to make a bit short but it turned out to be so long. If any of you don’t like it, I won’t blame you. Coz I know I’m very bad at writing os. That’s why I only write ffs or fs. New years always doesn’t give us happiness. Sometimes it gives us unforgettable sadness too. In the beginning of this story, it’s a bit emotional and in the end it’ll be different. So don’t leave halfway ???.
Let’s start.
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–31st December, 2015–
A shiny black Mercedes I’d parked near a cliff. A young handsome lad is sitting on the hood of that car. On his right hand, there’s a beer bottle. That arm was supported by his knee. He was drinking from the bottle and thinking about his life, looking at the starless sky.
“Why did my life turned to be like this? Why does people get close to me, if they want to leave me alone? Why my life is like this? Today, I have everything a person would ever want in life, but what I want, the person I need the most, to be with me, isn’t with me.”
“I’ll start my story from the beginning. I was an orphan. When I was little, both my mother and father died in a car crash. After that, a couple who didnt had children, adopted me. Later they had their own son, but they loved me more then their own son. Sometimes I think, he gets jealous because of that. Of course he would think something stupid like that. Why?? Because he’s immature Veer Malhotra and I’m sensible Kabir Malhotra. He always play pranks and get in to trouble. I’m the one who always ha e to save his sorry a** from Anand papa’s wrath. But no matter what, he and I grew up like brothers. Our bond was stronger than the real brothers.”
Kabir’s pov
Both Veer and I took medical path, following papa. I’m a senior doctor and the in-charge of interns in my dad’s hospital, Savitri Devi College and Hospital aka India’s no. 1. Veer is an intern there. The day Veer became an intern is the day that changed my life forever. Don’t get the wrong idea. It’s not because of him.
Now I’m 30. Savitri maa is nagging me from a long time, to get married. Sometimes she talk about her friends daughters, sometimes come to me with a bundle of girls photos. It’s sooo ANNOYING!!! But what to do? She’s my mother, I can’t hurt her, I love her. Finding a girl for me isn’t an easy task. Why? I have high expectations. I don’t expect her to do all the household chores. I have enough money to get maids for that. But she should be modern as well as cultured, educated (dont have to be much but to some extent is necessary), kind hearted, caring for the whole family, beautiful not just from the outside inside as well and most importantly she should be able to handle me. Why? I can be a very difficult person. Only a girl who got all these qualities, can be my wife. I know what you’re thinking. This is impossible right? Yes, I thought the same, until a met her”
Like I said before, it all changed the day Veer joined as an intern. In other words, a girl who joined as an intern. Long black layered hair, beautiful brown eyes that make you lose yourself in them whenever you look at them, she’s not fair but even her tan complexion has it’s own beauty. Her name…… Sanchi Mishra!!!
She was the top student. Anyone would think she’s a complete nerd coz she spend her free time studying when others enjoy partying. But no that’s wrong. At first I thought she’s just a ‘know it all from the book’. I didn’t pay much attention to her until that happened. That day she came late to the class earning my favourite punishment…… record room duty. She had to spend her whole day there. In the evening, I was passing there. Now I don’t remember why I went there. It was like I was pulled there by a force. I saw her from the gap of the door, climb the ladder to get a file from top. Suddenly she slipped. I don’t know how but the next thing I knew was I ran to her. Luckily I was in time to save her. She fell right in to my arms. When I held her securely, relief washed over my whole body. I couldn’t understand why I felt so much fear about something happening to her.
Little by little, little by little we got closer. We became friends. When we have free time, we just talk and talk and talk. Nothing important, just random things. Her life, her two besties Pragya and Isha, my life, chotu Veer, our childhood. Everything. We knew about each other more than we knew ourselves. Then I realized something.
I HAVE FALLEN FOR HER!!!
How? when? why? I don’t have answers to these questions but all I know, is that I love her. But how could I tell her? What if she don’t see me that way? Then I’d lose her forever!! I’d rather stay as a friend than losing her. So I stayed silent. But it was unbearable!! I wanted to tell this to someone, to get this out of my chest. Who is the best person to share your problems other than mother. I went home to talk to Savitri maa.
……….flashback……….
“MAA…. MAA…. I want to talk to you!!” I went to the living area and found her talking with her best friend Jaya, Sanchi’s mother. I greeted her.
“Pata hai Kabir. Sanchi iss ghar ki bahu hone wali hai!!” Maa said happily.
I was so happy. A wide smile might’ve appeared on my face. I couldn’t believe my ears when she said that. I knew I will never find a life partner, better than her. She’s so lovely and she understood me better than me.
“Haa haa…. When Sanchi come to this house as Veer’s wife, she’ll be Kabir’s bhabi!!!” Jaya aunty said further wiping out my smile.
Veer’s wife? My bhabi? No this can’t be happening!! Why?
My whole world crubmled down. I excused myself from there and went to my room. They didn’t even notice it in their excitement.
I just hid myself behind the closed doors. “Why god why? What wrong have I done to lose everyone that I love?”
Then maa knocked at my door. “Kabir? Beta are you there? You said you wanna talk na? What’s it beta?”
“No maa it’s not important. I’ll talk with you later”
……...end of flashback……….
Again I lost the courage to tell her. I stayed silent. Few days later, both Sanchi and Veer had agreed for the marriage. Hell!! He’s my brother. How can I do that to him? How can I ruin his happiness and be selfish? My silence became my enemy forever.
I must be very unfortunate to lose my love but I’m fortunate to have her in my life. I’m fortunate to get a family like this. So I made up my mind.
Now it got me to this situation. Their wedding day. Today, the last day of the year. I will always remember this day as the day I lost my love. And I don’t blame anyone. It’s all my fault.
Ok enough of my self pity wala kahaani. Veer already called me more than 10 times. I better go home. After all I have a wedding to attend and a babhi to welcome.
Normal pov
He jumped down from his car, throwing the bottle away. He got in and drove off.
……….Mishra Villa……….
The house is decorated beautifully. Anyone could tell that there would be a wedding here. Pragya and Isha are helping Sanchi to get ready.
“Abae yaar!! You’re getting married yaar!!” – Pragya
“Really Pragya? You just noticed?” Sanchi asked annoyed.
“??? anyways, I’m so happy it’s Veer. You’ll be happy with him. You two love each other” – Isha
“Yes it’s good it’s Veer. Yes we’d be happy. Yes we love each other but no Isha. That love is only the friend kind. Not woh wala love” – Sanchi
“Sanchi…. You’ll learn to love him..” – Pragya
“May be… may be not. Only time can tell that. You know I don’t believe in this love and all.” – Sanchi
“Ok ma’am. Let’s go. We have to get you married ???” – Isha
She laughed and stood. Looking at herself in the mirror, she smiled but then her face turned confused. **Why do I feel like something bad is gonna happen? Sanchi… you’re too much. You’re getting married!! What could be more bad? ???**
She was going with her besties. Then her phone rang loudly. She answered it amidst of their complaining to go to the mandap on time.
“Hello?…. yes, I’m Sanchi…. yeah I know him…. WHAT???” The phone dropped.
“Kya hua bae?” – Pragya
She didn’t hear anything. She just ran from there. Isha picked the fallen phone and got to know what happened.
In the hall, all had smiles. They turned their heads to a sound of anklets and saw Sanchi come down in a rush with tears running down her face. Everyone called for her but she ran out passing the mandap and everything. (Like Paro in Devdas)
Prasha came too. “Kabir sir ka accident hua….” they gave the news.
Then all went to the hospital. Kabir was in OT.
“We found him on the highway. He was calling the name Sanchi repeatedly. We found her number from his phone and called.” People who brought him to the hospital said.
Finally after what felt like hours, doctor came out. “That was a major accident. He was critical. I’m sorry. We tried our best. But he slipped to a coma.”
Shock, sadness and agony. Everyone felt these. Not a good way to start the new year. Yes, the new year has arrived. It’s 2016.
Days turned to months. Now it’s 3 months since Kabir went to coma. Doctors said that it seems like he doesn’t want to wake up. Like he has lost hope. But no one was able to understand why. So Sanchi took his case. She tried everything she could to wake him. Everyday she comes in the morning with fresh flowers. If you can’t find her anywhere in the hospital, you should just check Kabir’s room. She’d definitely be there. All her free time was spent talking to his motionless, calm self.
Veer’s pov
Hi! Main hoon Veer Malhotra. Dr. Anand Malhotra’s younger son. I have a bro. Kabir bro or Kabir bhai. He isn’t my real bhai but our bond is stronger than any real brothers bond. No one can break us apart for anything. We can do anything for each other. True sometimes I feel like maa and papa love him more than me and I get jealous, but I know bhai loves me the most and I probably love him more than I love my parents.
When I see him motionless on a hospital bed, it’s unbearable. He’s khadoos and annoying, yes. But still he’s my bro na. I can’t believe how disastrous that day turned to be in our life. Last day of the year, my wedding day. I was to get married with one of my best friends, Sanchi. Nayi saal ke shuruwath ke saath nayi zindagi ke bhi shuruwath! That’s what maa said when they decided the day. But now no new beginning. Only hope is for bhai to get well.
Same as I was doing for past few months, I’m gonna visit bhai now. I opened the door, only to find Sanchi there talking with him. It’s not a surprise. She’s always here. She’s trying her best to get him wake. Sanchi was the most affected by bhai’s accident outside the family. I guess that’s because she and him are close friends. Actually it’s pretty surprising. Don’t know how or when they became friends. He’s her senior and she’s his intern. He’s khadoos and she’s sweet but she’s the only one who could get him open up. Whenever she’s there, he acts carefree. It’s like he’s alive or something. Don’t look at me like that when I talk so seriously like that.
So now I was about to join her but didn’t want to disturb her. So I stood by the door and listened to her talks.
“Why are you staying like this Kabir? Do you have any idea how worried everyone are? Don’t you care about us even a bit? Savitri aunty, Anand uncle, Veer…. all are so sad. It’s all because of you, you know!! And me? Don’t you care about me? It’s been 3 months!! 90 long days. Do you know how hard it was for me to spend those days?”
She was talking to him holding his hand. I was surprised to hear her talk like this. I’ve heard her talk with him before, all the time she talked happily. Doctors said to make him happy with words. But today she’s talking sad. Why?
“Everyday I come here thinking you might open your eyes and talk to me…. But each and every passing day you’re breaking my heart. They said you don’t want to wake. But why? And how can you be so selfish? You have to wake up for your family. You have to wake up for me!! Please…. Kabir! Please wake up. I can’t live without you like this. I love you……!!” She said placing her forehead on his shoulder, sobbing.
To say I was shocked, would be the understatement of the year. She loved him? Really? Then why did she agree to marry me? I know we don’t love each other like that, but we’re friends!! Why didn’t she tell me she loved my bhai? I was pulled from my thoughts by her scream.
“Oh my god!! Kabir? Kabir, you’re waking? Kabir?…… nurse!!”
I was there in an instant. Yes!! My bro finally woke up!!
Sanchi’s pov
I’m so happy!! He finally opened his eyes. We checked him and he was completely normal. His parents came. Veer was there. All were happy.
“I’m so glad you’re alright Kabir!” I just couldn’t stop myself and hugged him. He slowly removed me from him.
“Thank you doctor. But why are you hugging me like someone close?” He said sounding annoyed.
“Ok Kabir. Enough of your drama. Now your pretending to have amnesia?” Now I got annoyed.
“What? No I’m not lying. I really don’t know you. Who are you?” He said honestly.
So he does have amnesia. He don’t remember me. Or anything about me. Nothing I told him earlier is useful. He had forgotten me completely. How can I blame him. I don’t even know if he loves me or not. It was when I got to know about his accident was the moment I realized that I love him. I thought I’d lose him forever!! But now… what’s the difference? He don’t even know who Sanchi is!!
Normal pov
“Yeh Veer ki-” Pragya was about to tell but Sanchi interrupted.
“Veer ki dost, Sanchi, Sanchi Mishra Veer ki dost and your doctor” with so much difficulty, she controlled the tears that were trying to escape her eyes and replied with a smile. “You take some rest now. I’ll take your leave” she quickly went out of there.
“Veer, why did your friend looked so upset?” – Kabir
Veer looked at him. “Bhai, she’s not just my friend!…… (he paused for a couple of seconds)…… She was your friend too. Who won’t be upset when your friend, who was in a coma for 3 months just woke up and said that he doesn’t remember her?”
Kabir looked lost.
Again, days are passing. Sanchi and Veer’s had to talk about their postponed marriage. Now the two are talking in a cafe. (In an outdoor table facing the road)
The two were silent. Actually, Veer was waiting for Sanchi to start. So she finally broke the silence. “Veer…… the wedding………”
“Let’s call it off” he said interrupting her.
Sanchi was startled. “Wh-wha-what?…… Veer-”
“I’ll get to the point miss golgappa ???. I know you love Kabir bhai” – Veer
“Veer I-” – Sanchi
“No my sweet golgappa!! You don’t have to say anything ???. I understand ???. Look, we didn’t love each other like… you know… like that. And we just agreed to our parents coz we didn’t have anyone special in our life. Now you have. So we should cancel all this ???” Hearing Veer talk so lightly made her cry.
So he came near her and knelt. “Abae ooo!! Now why did you open this tap? Don’t you know how many die without water?” He joked.
“Stop na Veer! Aren’t you angry with me?” – Sanchi
“Angry? Why? No Sanchi I’m not angry or upset with you. Patha hai kyu?…. Kyun ki, because of your sad wala emotional wala confession, bhai got conscious. Haa… i heard all of it. Yaar it’s all because of your love he got conscious!! Yeah, he may have amnesia, but if you want me to, I’ll hit his head to get his memory ???” – Veer
“Shut up yaar!!” Sanchi hugged him tight. “Why are you so nice?”
“Coz I’m so cute???” he replied through the hug.
“You know, I love you” – Sanchi
Veer broke the hug and had a serious expression. “Dekhiye Sanchi, this isn’t fair. You have to decide. You cant have both of us. Me or bhai?”
“Idiot!! Woh wala love nahi hai. Friendship wala love” both laughed and hugged again.
Unknown to them a pair of eyes were watching them in a black Mercedes. “I’m glad you two are happy now” he said sadly.
They told their parents about their decision and they agreed. But didn’t tell them that Sanchi love Kabir. They just told them that they don’t match… or something like that ???.
Meanwhile with passing days, Kabir and Sanchi became friends again. But she couldn’t help but to feel like he’s distancing himself from her. She talked to Veer about this and he made a plan.
“This won’t work! I’m telling you yaar this won’t work at all!!” – Sanchi
“Do you want to know whether he loves you to or not? If he got jealous, he loves you. We just have to do this for few days. Just let me handle everything. I know what I’m doing. Pragya? You will help na?” – Veer
“Dost ke liye kuch bhi. But make sure you made all the preparations for my funeral coz hitler will definitely kill me when he got to know” – Pragya
Within few days, Veer told Kabir that Sanchi is his fiance (Veer’s) and made his family agree for the plan, without telling them the truth.
“Maa, you want a bahu na? We all want bhai to be happy. That’s why were doing this” that’s how veer convinced Savitri.
Savitri pestered Kabir to meet a girl, another daughter of her friend. This time he agreed without complaining, making Savitri wonder what happened to him.
So today he’s meeting this girl in the cafe. To his surprise, it’s….
“PRAGYA??” (Really surprised)
“KABIR SIR AAP??” (Fake surprised ???)
Kabir was honestly trying to be nice to her and Pragya got a shock because of that.
Few days and more ‘dates’ later, Veer made him agree to a double date. So now, Veer, Sanchi, Kabir and Pragya are sitting around a table. On one side Sanchi with Veer, the other side Kabir with Pragya. Kabir’s in front of Sanchi and Veer in front of Pragya.
They were ordering drinks.
“Caramel latte for me” Pragya
“Black coffee” – Kabir
“Sanchi what do you want?” – Veer
“Chocolate milkshake!!” Both Kabir and Sanchi said together. She looked at him shocked. “How do you know?”
Kabir was alarmed. “Don’t know why just slipped from my lips”
“Ok then I’ll have the same” Veer told the waitress giving Sanchi a wink which didn’t go unnoticed by Kabir.
“Sorry sir we only have one milkshake left. Could you order something else?” – waitress
“No problem. We’ll share” – Veer
“Just order something else Veer” – Kabir
“No bhai. Haven’t you heard that when you share with your partner, love grows?” – Veer
Waitress brought the drinks. Veer and Sanchi was sharing the drink with two straws. They bent their heads at the same time and their heads hit. They were laughing and looking at each other lovingly. All these were happening right in front of Kabir. He was glaring at them angrily and drank his coffee. Suddenly, he slammed his cup making everyone startled and stood.
“Excuse me guys, I have to take an important call” he went out.”
They just nodded and watched him going. Then the trio blasted in to laughter ???.
“Oh god yaar! Kasam se!! I can’t believe he drank that boiling hot coffee without sugar, just because he was jealous!!” – Pragya
“Hope his alright! His mouth might’ve burned!!” Sanchi said worriedly.
Veer laughed hard and said, “Then go and kiss him to make it better ???”.
“VEER!!!” She got angry ???.
“Oh ho just forget it!! Mission to make bhai jealous – accomplished!! Now this means he loves you too. If not, he won’t look at me like had kill me any moment!!” – Veer
After few more dates, Sanchi was waiting for Kabir to do something but he’s just getting more closer to Pragya. It was making her jealous!!
2016 is almost over now. Anand had to go to some annual meeting thing and Savitri went with him too. So for the new year, Kabir suggested to Veer that they should celebrate with their girlfriends, making his jaw dropped. **Did bhai really start to love Pragya? No Veer what’re you thinking? Aisa nahi hoga. Just few more days and if bhai didn’t confess to Sanchi, then let’s stop this act**
And now they’re having a small party in Malhotra Mansion. Isha, Garv are invited too.
“So when are you guys getting married?” – Isha popped a question winking Veer.
“Hmm probably in 2017 ???” – Veer
Sanchi slapped his arm. “Of course in 2017. How would we marry in 2016? Today’s the last day na! Pagal!”
“So what about you Pragya? You and Kabir?” – Garv
Sanchi gripped the glass on her hand tightly.
Kabir decided to answer instead of Pragya. “Well… maybe we can get married on the same day with Veer and Sanchi” just as he finished that line, a glass shattering sound was heard. “SANCHI!!” He yelled, rushing to her.
“Its nothing. I might’ve been holding it tightly. That’s why it blasted” she said simply avoiding him.
“What nothing? Your hand is bleeding!! Wait here. I’ll get a firstaid kit” he scolded her and ran.
When he came back, she wasn’t there. “Where’s she? Why did you let her go like that?” Yelling to others, he went out looking for her.
He found her sitting on a bench in the garden. He went near and saw her crying. Seeing her like that broke his heart.
“Hey, give your hand” – Kabir.
“Just go” – Sanchi
“Don’t be stubborn Sanchi!” He took her hand forcefully and started to treat it.
“Ah”
He blowed. “See how hurt you are!”
“This is so small compared to the wounds you have to my heart.” She said looking away.
“What? What do you mean?” He asked while treating her wound.
“Nothing” she pulled her hand back and got up from the bench.
“Sanchi, give your hand back. It needs to be treated. Can’t you see-”
She was enraged. “So what! Why does it matter to you?…. oh!! I forgot!! It matters to you. Why? Coz you’re a doctor!! Well listen Mr. Doctor, I don’t want your help. I’m fine. You just go and plan your wedding with your bride to be. She much be waiting for you na? Don’t leave her alone. If I live or die, why would you care? Tumhe koi faraq nahi padtha!! Just leave me alo-”
Her words died as a pair of lips capture her own. Her eyes widened in shock. She just stood there like a statue. Holding her face with his hands, he was kissing her.
“Aur kitna bologi, tum? Think before you say something!! Now you’re quiet aren’t you? How dare you talk about dying in front of me? Do you have any idea how I feel when you get a simple wound? If anything happened to you, I’ll die!!” Realizing what he said, his face turned unreadable. He let go of her.
“What have I done?” He mumbled.
“Kabir…” – Sanchi
“No! Don’t come near me! Please!” He turned away from her.
“Are going to run away like a coward again? If you cared that mucb for me, why did you pretend to forget me?” – Sanchi
“I don’t know what you’re talking about. Why would I pretend?” He was walking.
“STOP LYING TO ME!! You know things about me that a person who is supposed to have forgotten me should never know!! Are you saying it’s a coincidence? It can happen once, twice. Not plenty of times!! Why were you doing all this drama? And now out of nowhere you show me so much concern. Why did you kiss me Kabir? Do you always kiss girls just to stop their talk? Do you think I’m a toy? When you want you take closer. When you don’t want give someone else-”
“CHUP!!!” He came to her angrily and held her by her shoulders. “You want to know why I kissed you right? Sanchi Mishra, I love you!! I love you more than anything!! I could do anything for your happiness. But I love Veer too. He’s my brother. I cant take you from him. Yes I did drama. I wanted to keep you away from me!! I know you two love each other. So forget what just happened and go to him. I don’t want to take your or his happiness away!!”
She smiled through her tears and placed her palm on his cheek. “You said you love me? Me?? You love me???” She was mumbling and leaning closer to him.
He stopped her. “Sanchi, go”
“You don’t understand it do you? Veer and I aren’t together! Like you did, we did a drama too.” She explained to him, how she realized her love and how Veer and Pragya helped her to know his feelings.
“Don’t blame them for this. They did it because of me. I love you Kabir, I love you so much!! I won’t be able to live without you!! You don’t know how I tolerated you with Pragya. Even if I knew she was just acting, you were going away from me. The mere thought of seeing you with someone else!! I can’t bear that!! I love you too much!!”
To say Kabir was shocked would be putting it simply. “So that means…. you love me? Me? Not Veer? Sanchi, you…”
She laughed at his blabbering. “Yeah. I love you. Only you. How many times should I tell this to make you understand? ???”
He gripped her by her waist and lifted her up. “How stupid was I? Only if I understood it before…. (he started to spin around)…. Now I’m not letting you go ever. You’re stuck with me!!”
“I don’t have any complains” she laughed heartily.
“Even of you did, I don’t care. I love you” he put her down and kissed her forehead.
Then the whole night sky was brighten with colourful fireworks.
“Its new year!” – Sanchi
“Hmm happy new year!” – Kabir
“Happy new year Kabir!! Nayi saal ke nayi shuruwath!! The beginning of our life….” She had a happy smile.
He knelt in front of her offering his hand, making her eyes widen. “I know I don’t have a ring right now but i want to start every year with you. Not just every year. Every day I want to wake up and see you and every night I want you to be the last person I see before I sleep. Would you like to spend your every moment with me? Sanchi, would you become my wife and make me the happiest man alive?”
“YES!!” He caught her as she jumped on him.
Their eyes shine with the love they have for each other. Both came closer, closing the gap between them. Under countless sparkling fire works, pulling her impossibly closer to him, he kissed her with so much passion, in promise to never let her go, ever. This time, she too responded him with equal passion.
-That’s the start of 2017-
(Ok let’s leave them for a little while ???)
Finally, they told their parents. What gave them a shock was to know that Veer and Pragya are together!! Kab, kaise, kaha? No one knows ???. So as Kabir had suggested last year, both brothers for married in the same day and are living their lives happily.
-1st January, 2018 passed Midnight-
Kabir came to their room, removing his watch. He was wearing a black suit with a red shirt, top 2 buttons undone with messy hair. Looking handsome as ever ???. He saw Sanchi, near the vanity, removing her jewellery. She was wearing a super hot thin red saree. He came from behind and hugged her.
“Kabir!!”
He was playing with her blouse, kissing her shoulder to her neck. Her breath hitched. “Ka-Kabir!!”
“I don’t know how I made my mind to go to this damned party, when I see my beautiful wife like this? All I wanted to do was to welcome the new year with her in my arms and there’s more to that talk ???” He asked nuzzeling her neck with his nose.
She turned to face him in his embrace. “We organized the new year party, and you wanted to ditch it?” She asked removing his coat.
“Can you blame me? It’s your fault for looking so beautiful!” He cornered her to the wall and began place kisses from her shoulder to her neck.
“Another new year….” he said between the kisses.
“Hmm…. another new beginning….” came her voice.
“You said you wanted to tell me something important, when we get back. What’s it sweetheart?”
She slightly pushed him back and looked in to his eyes. “Umm that we…. um…. Kabir, we’re going to be parents!!”
She watched his reactions. His face turned in to shock and then lightened with pure joy. He lifted her up and spinned her around with a broad smile making her laugh happily.
“Thank you thank you thank you so much!! You don’t know how happy you made me love!! I love you! I LOVE YOU!!!”
He gently placed her on the bed. He laid beside her, looking at her with love and adoration. She broke his intense eye lock by wrapping her arms around his neck and pulling him by his collar.
“So Mr. Patidev, I remember you telling me something about, you wanting to welcome the new year with me in your arms and there’s more to that story? So…. now, I’m here…. with you…. You know…. we can go to work a bit late tomorrow…. or not go at all…. So……..”
“Haha ??? naughty wifey ???” towering her small frame, he switched off the lamps and slowly began to kiss her. That simple gesture gradually turned in to something more than that, leaving them to spend their night in each other’s passionate embrace.
*****************THE END*****************
Phew ??? finally done!! Won’t tell much. There’s so much os is posted by my pagal sisters!! I’m sorry I can’t read them now. Too sleepy right now. So I’ll read them in the morning!! Hope my lil sisters who practically ordered me to right an os, like this, and other readers too. Love y’all ???
36 Comments
awesome mind blowing amazing
when sanchi hand was cut and kabir treating and their confession made me cry dear you wrote it soooooooooooo good just lost in it.as usual perfect
Thank you Swetha ??? glad you liked it dear ???
Amazing Superbbbbb fantastic
Thank you Alia ??? glad you liked it dear ???
OMG!!!! That was fantastic. I know I’ve been invisible for a few days but mom blowing OS. The way you transistioned the story through so many different phases was amazing!!! It’s was the best NYE present ever.. i’ve Always admired your writing skills and this is wooow!!! I loved it soo much… and yes, Happy New Year Ru.. hope you have an amazing year ahead. Love you loads..❤️???
*mind blowing
Happy New Year Annie ??? so happy to see your comment after sooo sooo long!!! My writing inspiration is admiring my writing!!! What could be more amazing than this ???. Love you too ???
it was amazing
you wrote very well
it was so good
Thank you Cherry ??? glad you liked it dear ???
Awsm os
Thank you Risu ??? glad you liked it dear ???
dear ruwani,
story was superb, fantabulous, mind blowing……………….when sanchi’s hand cut and the way kabir show his concern toward her it was just superb…………..i haven’t any word to express my feeling………..i love your writing skill always…………………
love you…………tc………………please write Unwritten Love Of Destiny wala part and Soch Na Sake ( Can’t Even Imagine ) wala part also…………….i’m waiting for these please write asap………………keep write this type of os sometime………………..i know i’m a little demanding friend but what to do?he he he……..
Thank you so much Dhruti ??? glad you liked it and I’m gonna post next part of unwritten love of destiny now ???
Hi dii my self kiara.. I know u nd read all of ur ff .. I m a silent reader…i read almost all ff fs os on by all sdch writter..u r my fav. Author dii. I know i never commnted on ur article actually i m in 10th nd my family not allowed me to use phn but my dii r also a kanchi fan so she give me her phn for reading kanchi ff??.. U r an outstanding writter dii i hope one day i would get a chance to read ur novel nd u become a official writter..plzzz di post ur article regularly i know i m demanding that too becoming a silent reader?.. But u get one like always from my side ☺.. This would be my ist nd last commnt on ur / anyone article hope u don’t mind after my exam i will regularly commnt dii promise.. But till then post regularly .. Btw os is supeer duper blockbuster the way kabir show concern.. The confession is ??.. U always came up with different idea ist in ur ff confession in morgue nd in unwritten kanchi confessed in lift then soch na sake mein romance scene on road now this one .. What to say more about u dii u r extraordinary talented writter…i ever met in my life.. whom writting gave a shooting effect…. Lovvv u dii ..???plzz forgive me not commnting nd apologizes in advance for not comntg in future bye tc nd again post ur article asap???
Sorry dii itna lengthy commnt ho gyi mujhe pata nahi chali???
No probs dear, I’m glad to know how you feel about my stories ???
Hi Kaira ??? thank you so much for commenting!!! I’m so happy to know I’m one of your favourite writers ???. Glad you liked my stories dear. Thank you for being with me since my first ff, but dear I don’t plan to be a professional writer ???. I’m studying to become a lawyer. I just write here on TU to share my ideas with you guys coz I love Kanchi!! Keep giving me your constant ssupport, but don’t forget to study hard!! Your studies are the most important thing in your life right now. So pay more attention to that!! Ok? Love you sweetie, take care ???
Superb outstanding perfect mindblowing beutiful story
Thank you Sanu ??? glad you liked it dear ???
Ruwani…who told u tht u r bad at writing OS???..tell me her name..i will beat her/him….u r amazing in writing OS & u r just fab….& sry for late comment…i m out of town thts y…& a happy new year
Happy New Year Dhruvi ??? and I myself think I’m bad at writing os. Would you beat me??? ??? thanks dear. Glad you liked it ???
Superb ..Awesome… Amazing.. Fabulous…. I just loved it….
Thank you Vanu ??? glad you liked it dear ???
Sorry!! *Aafiya ???
fanabulous
just loved it
Thank you Vanu ??? glad you liked it dear ???
I don’t know how could I express my feelings by comment………. reading this story i am speechless ………..ruchu darling you are amazing writer…. ……you are one of my most favourite writer……this story is most gorgeous and my most favourite story yaar……..I can’t imagine in my dream this story…….ruchu darling love u so so much and lots of kiss for you sweety……….I can’t express my feelings after reading the story by the comment………
??? awww Anu thank you so much for this lovely comment!! I can’t express MY feelings to thank you!! Love you loads ???
Its so amazing…. Loved the way u represented the whole story…. Loved kaanchi moments
Thank you Amnaa ??? glad you liked it dear ???
Ohh so miss ruwani u r bad at writean os can u plzz 1000000 os wo kya h naa i loved to read boring os like this?.. Samjhi how much i loved it its an outstanding os ever i read ..we r lucky yaar u r a member of our kanchi family.. Feel amaz to read ur article plzzz plzz post ur ff.. Otherwise ??..haha.. Abki phir se bhottni mat banjaana.. Bye tc lovv u ig p aati raha kar..gud nit???
Hahaha ??? thank you sweetie!!! Sure I won’t disappear!! Just gonna post the next part of unwritten love of destiny now. Love you loads ???
Miss Dinu…hehe…ab tujhe kya kahoon…hats off…khidkitod…amazing…kabhi kuch boora bhi likh liya karo…taaki kuch alag kehne ka mauka toh mile…haha…just kidding…yaar congratulations for ur debut os…Sach kahoon mujhe laga as if tu pehle 99999999999999999999999 os likh chuki thi aur ye uske baad waala tha…luv u a lot sweetie…milte hain ig pe
Yeh debut nahi hai yaar!! I’ve written one before ??? maybe you forgot it ???. But thanks ???. Unwritten Love Of Destiny chapter 19 is also posted. Read it too ???
Hey dinu 1st of all so sorry dear for late comment. Actually nowadays I don’t comment directly after I read bcoz 4 tunes I have been caught by my sister so these days I have found a solution to my problem. When any new article is published I copy paste in word pad and there my sis doesn’t investigates coz there some of my study file r also there so I change it quickly. Yesterday I commented on ever left over articles but I think I missed urs and when I was reading this again I thought let’s see what I commented ???
Anyways leave these and about this os mind blowing yaar. It was awesome. U know till now I have read this more than 4 5 times. I loved it so so so much. Luv u loads sweetie ? ? ? ❤
No probs at all priyu ??? im glad you liked it to read 4-5 times!! Chapter 19 of unwritten love of destiny is also posted. And what’s the problem with your sis? Doesn’t she know you’re writing or something ?????? Anyways love you too… loads ???