Hey Guys Its RiaNa ??…And here i am back with first SS…Genre is Thrill…Romance..Horror…Hope u all will like it…If u then pls share ur comments below…
MAIN CHARACTERS:
Giaa Manek aka Gopika Taneja
Mohammad Nazim aka Ahem Taneja
LETS START….
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MUMBAI City is shown….
@SKYHIGH APARTMENTS
The beautiful 3Bhk flat is shown…
Scene shifts to a room which is decorated with lots of candles…red roses…n red stuffs…
On the bed…There a man is shown sleeping…
He is shirtless n he is none other than Ahem…
Ahem: Gopi….
He moans n wakes up…
But Gopi is not near him…
Ahem: Baby…baby where r you…
He wakes up quickly n searches her all over house…
He is in shorts only…
Ahem shouts: Gopiii….
Suddenly he comes to search in bathroom…
Ahem: Gopi…Baby where r you ??…
He starts getting tensed…
Suddenly a something falls on his shoulder…
Ahem scares: Aaaaaahhh !!…
He is a couple doll…
Suddenly someone sings…
Ahem: Uhh…
“HAPPY ANNIVERSARY TO BOTH OF US”….
Ahem: Gopi…
Gopi opens the wardrobe n comes out wearing a maroon babydoll dress…long hairs…
Gopi: Happy anniversary baby…
Ahem: Gopi u know naa…i get scared whenever u leave me…
Gopi giggles: I wanted to surprise u…
She comes near him…
He holds her passionately n plants a kiss on her cheeks…
LATER…
Gopi is shown in red inners inside the bathroom…
She is shown pushed by ahem towards the shower panel…
Ahem comes near her n puts his right hand on wall…
And switches the shower button from left hand…
Water falls…
He holds gopi’s shoulders n they gets into wet liplock…
She holds his short n pulls down them…
He kisses on her chest n navel…
And soon they gets intimate…
@SKYHIGH APARTMENTS
Gopi n Ahem r shown sipping tea…
Gopi: I think Bangkok is a quite good place to visit…
Ahem: Hmm…But lets go to Hong kong…
Gopi: Really Hong kong…No i think bangkok is more better…i heard that there r many haunted bungalows…
Ahem stammers: Noo Haunted…haaun..
Gopi: Ahemm..dont be soo afraid…u r still the same like in childhood…
Ahem: Noo not any haunted bungalow…
Gopi: Baby…it will be full funn…lets gooo…
Ahem kills his wishes n…
Ahem: Okay…we will gooo…happy…
Gopi: Yehhh…Thankuu Baby…
She hugs him…
Scene shifts to there room…
Where Gohem’s wall hanging photoframe is shown shaking…
Suddenly it falls in SLO MO n breaks…
Gopi n ahem: Whats that sound ???…
They rushes to there room n gets SHOCKEDD !!….
4 DAYS LATER….
BANGKOK
@ A RIVERSIDE BUNGALOW
Guide: This is a perfect place for ur stay…
Gohem looks at the bungalow…
Gopi: Its soo beautiful…perfect for us…
Ahem is still scared…
Gopi: Ahem…How did u find it ??…
Ahem: Nice…we can stay here for some hours…
Gopi: Ahem…
Ahem giggles: Just joking…
The guide is shown smirking…
Ahem n gopi goes inn…
Gopi looks at the room n wonders who stayed here…
Ahem: Gopi…can i get a kiss from u ??…
Gopi: Ahem stop being naughty…
Ahem: Gopi…whats there ??…
Gopi: what ??..
Ahem: look at the f*cking view…
Gopi laughs: Whaat ??…Whats view ??…whats there…
Ahem: come…
Gopi moves with him…
ON THE OTHER HAND
REAL Ahem is shown coming out of bathroom…
Ahem: Gopi…gopi…
Gopi: Yah I am here…with u…
She is in a white saree…
Ahem: Why did…u had wore this white…
Gopi: Bcoz i love white !…
Ahem smile…
IMPOSTER Gopi smiles looking at him…
ON THE OTHER HAND
Gopi comes in the room…
Gopi: Whats the view…what the hell is here ??…
Suddenly the door closes…
Gopi: Ahem Open the door…
Suddenly the IMPOSTER Ahem’s shadow is shown getting vanished !…
Gopi inside the room…
Gopi cries: Open the door…pls pls pls dont do this baby…
Suddenly she hears a voice “Grrrrr”…
She gets scared !…
The room is filled with DARKNESS…
Gopi comes near the wall…
Suddenly the sound gets more clear…
She slowly comes near a box…
The box is shown having that weird n creepy sound…
Gopi starts shivering…
She is about to open the box…
Suddenly…
BG: THIS IS JUST A TEASER GUYS…SOON THE STORY WILL BEGINN…??
— FREEZE —
PRECAP-
Gopi cries: Ahem ji…pls…pls save me…
Ahem rushes towards the dark room…
Suddenly someone stops him…
He turns n sees gopi…
Ahem: Gopi…
Gopi weirdly smiles looking at him…
Ahem smiles n his eye sight falls at the mirror n sees NO REFLECTION of Gopi ???…
Ahem gets shivered !…
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Plssssssss share ur views…??
Thankuu n Lots of love ❤
RiaNa ❤
10 Comments
Wow awesome do update soon
I loves it ………..wow perfect horror perfect romance
Thnkuu dear…stay tuned ??
Wow! Congrats on writing a horror romance thrilling ff.. I think its first time you’re writing such ff first time..wow GINA ARE HERE…
Gohem getting intimate in washroom and lip lock was romantic….wow..GiNa anniversary…Visiting bangkok was superb idea…. But there is horror…. Waiting for next part….BTW..-ive update next part…
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Precap is superb…. Waiting for next part.—
Thnkuu bro…Yah it is an SS ??
First of all congrats on ur new SS??n it’s on Gina???a horror thriller romantic it’s first of it’s kind dear??their anniversary n they going to Bangkok???? but here comes the twist in the tale???but why the guide was smirking???precap is scary?update soon ?
Thnkuu mansi ??
Very nice story Raina loved it . I love horror stories keep writing raina
Thnkuu sid ??
you brought another Gina ss. thanks.a horror thriller great.gopi surprising ahem on anniversary was sweet.loved gopi’s appearance.in that dress gopi would have been a real baby doll as gia is like cute doll.shower scene was sensual.they went to Bangkok haunted area.oh.after the photograph shake something abnormal is happening. ahem with imposter gopi and gopi with imposter ahem.I am confused.is the real gohem with ghost gohem?please clear it.what’s with that box?
Thnkuu jas…soon u will get to know…??