Hello guys….I’m Arooja with an os….this will be only a teaser…Pls say u r interested or not……this is my first os Pls support me………..
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A big mansion beautifully decorated like a new bride…..
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A boy dressed as groom….with eyes anger and hate filled…tears flow down showing his pain..
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A girl…ofcourse…the new bride….with teary eyes….who was trying to figure out what happened mins ago….corner of her lips was bleeding………..
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Girl:(choking voice) what happened suddenly……why are u….
Before could complete…
Boy:…Don’t dare to question me…….you don’t deserve even this……
He moves out of the room out leaving the new bride alone…..
He turns: you know what I can do….Don’t even think of escaping……
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The girl falls on the bed crying……..
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Two pair of eyes…watching all these helplessly……They don’t know how to make the things fine……
One of them moves towards the girl and stands beside her while the other looks on…to the boy leaving and then to the crying girl and then to the one who is helplessly watching the crying girl cursing their fate…..
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The boy enters a room…..sits on the bed……crying face of the girl flashes in his mind….
Boy:(crying) I’m sorry……I know it’s not ur fault………(with anger) but he should get the same pain….He should feel it….the pain he gave me…….
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So this is the promo of my first os……Pls say whether to continue or not…….
22 Comments
pls continue
intrestinng promo
beautiful dear..plz continue..?
nice..continue soon..
superb
I don’t want to sound rude. But OS means one shot and one shots dont need teaser. and please write only if you love writing dont write for comments. just express your views.
Hey dear its rlly awesome..continue soon
Awesome.. Please continue it…
9nice but plz make pair swasan raglak
Good one dear.. Make it swasan.. Will love reading this
Awesome dear. Plz write it
plz make the bride ragini i love her
Please continue
interesting…!!
Nice
Super amaznggg yaaaar!!!!waitng eagerlyyy for it….keeep rockng n stay blessed dear???
Interesting and waiting for next
Please swasan
Interesting. Pls continue
nice
Awesome…continue soon…
nice