Hello this is —ANNIE— back with next shot of “Not First Love, But Last Love”
Please guys do comment after reading! And thanks to those who commented…
*IGNORE SPELLINGS AND GRAMMETICAL MISTAKES…. INCLUDING TYPOS*
*HAPPY READING*
Shot-6
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People were gathered near a car which was of shivaay which bumped into a tree after getting hit by a truck…the car was damaged badly people were gossiping “no chance of him to be alive” “useless generation will never drive carefully” “seem to be much rich so expensive car” “must be using mobile” “they will never change always high speed, they died but take others too”
While some were busy checking if the person was alive shivaay was on the front passenger seat fully drenched in blood…a pool of blood formed in car… everyone was damn busy in chattering or clicking the damn pics of him to get the damn followers on their fuc**ng social media… none of them were bothered about him dying… a person moved forward and looked at him carefully “he is great businessman shivaay singh oberoi” he shouted “oh let’s take him hospital maybe his family reward us something good” another person added and putting their mobiles in their pockets they started trying to bring him out and after taking him out they tied a cloth on his head and took him to hospital… well they did this too for the sake of money only… anyway finally he was taken to hospital nothing can be done of this inhuman and heartless world all they cared about is Fu**ing followers and money! They can never do something for the sake of humanity! Just money! {it’s the bitter reality of today’s world… all the damn care if for money and followers a person can fall to any extent for two things followers on social sites and money in their life and more to add lust! Well let’s move toward SS}
He was taken into emergency and then shifted to OT as he was businessman and much famous police was informed but they didn’t wait for the police to arrive…
{@same time}
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Annika was running to her room when she stood still on her place as someone stopped her
Annika’s POV
“I never felt so hurt before and due to which I was standing still… I felt as my something very important is going to leave me when there was none so special…I was getting much hurt and my heart was crying and the reason was unknown to me I wasn’t able to understand anything and collapsed on the stair only due to which I slipped down the stair {3 to 4} and feeling tha pain in heart of something going away I fainted”
POV ends
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{in hospital}
Doctor came out of OT and police was standing there with daksh…
“doctor is he fine” daksh stopped the doctor “we are sorry but it seems very difficult to save him a person’s wish of living matters the most in saving firstly he is injured much badly than we can even think…the worst accident case I have ever seen…and secondly he isn’t responding to any of our treatments we still trying our best so hope for the best and pray as much as you can” doctor patted on daksh’s shoulder and he was taken aback…
Daksh’s POV
“what the hell is wrong with you shivaay why you don’t want to live without you I’ll be nothing! What have someone done to you that you lost the wish to live… accident you were never so careless shivaay I must find the reason and I can’t even inform his family and before that I need to stop letting it known to media! I walked to corridor to see police questioning those who bring him here and in their crowd I saw a person who was smiling looking at his mobile I know they can fall any low to get followers so I snatched his mobile it was my right and saw him typing caption for the pic of shivaay I was enraged and I asked police to take their mobiles away from them and don’t let this news to spread it could be a matter of rivalry and they did so and all mobiles were in the custody of police “we thought we will get prize money for saving him but here only our loss” I heard a person telling to other “oh hello? It is your duty to save a person if you see him in trouble and who told that prize money will be given for a human act this is your responsibility” I shouted at him “this isn’t our responsibility but police’s” another shouted “not really even you’ve some responsibilities too so stop this drama after the deletion of the damn pictures you clicked for your so called followers your mobiles will be handled to you” I said and walked away…right now I can’t do anything only shivaay can answer me”
POV ends
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Annika started getting conscious with heavy head and getting up she again felt the pain it was 10 PM she was shocked seeing the time and ran to the couch with her blood oozing out from her feet’s but the flow was slow and low blood rate
Annika’s POV
“I need to call shivaay why I don’t know I need to call him now only but my cell isn’t in my bag did I break it too? I facepalmed and tried searching it in the mess and found it in several pieces by each passing minute I was getting restless and reason I didn’t know just one thing was coming in my mind again and again ‘call shivaay’ thinking nothing much I ran out of my cottage and reached the shop of uncle and he was surprised seeing me… he should be first time I went there “uncle I’m annika can I use your mobile? Do you have magazines?” I said in one breath and he was just looking at me all num “uncle” I shouted and he came to his senses “beta why you’re in so bad state” instead of answering me he is asking me well I looked at myself I wasn’t having my stroller hair all messed up hand bleeding head had a wound too and without slipper and that too with bleeding feet’s but never mind I looked at him “uncle please do you have a cell and magazines?” I again asked him and he just nodded… what kind of friend am I? I don’t even have his number but yes I have uncle who has magazines, he handed me his cell “uncle business related magazines?” I asked and he gave me a bunch of them well I live in a place where people read Hindi magazines not English and they don’t even use touch cells… I started checking magazines he offered me a seat but I wasn’t ready to sit and there I found 10th magazine with his pic yes all about oberoi I read and read and at last in one page their office number was given and I immediately dialed the number “hello can I talk to shivaay singh oberoi?” I asked “no! mam sir has ordered not to disturb him” that fool answered me “don’t you know how much important it is for me dammit ask him to talk to me tell him his singer friend has called…I’m his best friend” I answered rudely and loudly “sorry mam whosoever you’re it doesn’t matter he has asked not to disturb even if his parents call sorry” he again said that bull shit “dammit I’m telling you please” well I was adamant to talk and I even said please “mam we will inform his PA and he may contact you soon but we can’t connect you to shivaay sir so sorry he will contact you if needed bye” did he just disconnected the call? I was hell angry on shivaay for behaving in such way but I wasn’t feeling good at all, I felt as if he is in some problem but never mind he isn’t ready to talk why should I waste my time, I handed him his cell back and he called me as I was leaving “do you know him?” that uncle pointed toward the pic of shivaay in magazine “yeah he is my friend! New friend” I looked at him “do you know him?’ I questioned “yeah he came here few days back and asked about you as I told him he was sad and left, good guy he is” uncle smiled “uncle If someone calls you on this number don’t tell my name just come to me please call Is much important and my cell is dead” I said and as he nodded I silently walked back to my cottage… I was still wanting someone to call back and tell me his whereabouts or well-being but why the reason is unknown I walked in to see the mess whole flashback started playing in my mind what happened in evening between us 2 and what I felt and then what uncle said… he is good he just wants me to be safe and pain free and what I did with him slapped him? Kicked him out for the person who is no more in my life… shivaay is right I should punish daksh but I’m not that strong to punish him my love for him is still there why? I don’t want to have love for him neither I want to leave his love I was wrong and my behavior toward shivaay was something he wouldn’t have expected ever and it wasn’t even right I need to apologize to him for such bad behavior he will not even forgive me! and he is so egoistic that he isn’t even called me! but why should he call I was the one who created that all mess! But I called him he shouldn’t have stopped me from contacting him huh! I didn’t want to clean the mess so giving the food I went to my room and fell on bed with shivaay’s thoughts only what he did for me is something few people do and why I did I just ruined it I want to apologies but I don’t know how”
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In hospital!
shivaay was shifted to ICU but he wasn’t out of danger he was still critical and chances were less for his survival… doctor gave up “you should call up his family here as soon as possible we don’t think he can be saved now… with passing each and every second his situation is getting worse maybe listening to his loved one he get some help in responding 2 possible conditions are there he may slip in comma in few hours if he doesn’t wake or even may lose his beats and breaths so do in hours only” doctor told daksh and went away
Daksh got call from office “sir some singer friend of shivaay’s sir was calling she was pleading to meet him as it’s urgent sorry, she wanted to talk I’ve send you her number bye” call disconnected
“doctor said someone whom he may love to listen and he is addicted to music and even I saw him with a girl and maybe she could be his GF and calling her here may help us in shivaay’s case I should call her here” thought daksh and dialed the number given by office member…
“ring, ring”
Uncle looked at cell and picked up “hello I’m daksh I wanted to talk to the girl who called us” daksh said “oh yeah I’ll give her phone wait a minute” uncle said and daksh hummed uncle leaving his shop ran to the cottage and started banging the door but none was responding…
Annika was sitting in her room listening to her favorite sad songs to calm down her restlessness and she was failing so she turned up the volume of her MP3 and was unknown to the bangs on door…
She was pacing in room and there his beats were falling!
“meri saanson ko zaroorat hai tere pass hone ki, tu na aya toh me kahi inhe kho na du” well I wrote it myself pardon me!…
TO BE CONTINUED…
A short note of daksh’s character
“daksh Is the childhood friend of shivaay, for shivaay he was a well-mannered and good boy of his parents and best buddy of himself since childhood they used to be the shield of eachother none can harm them! Daksh is really not what shivaay think he is lusty and ridicules person when It comes to the girls he never respects them but he is the best person to be friend with! Best friend for a reason the way he reacted in hospital was his real face for his friend he can kill and die for his besties but not GF” so if still any confusion asks below!
“will annika be able to meet shivaay or destiny will not let that happen…”
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So guys this is the Sixth shot of this SS…if you feel something isn’t good tell me
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Next update depends on the response you guys will give!
If you read it do comment also otherwise I won’t be able to update anymore!
“WWMTBTF will be updated in a day it is under process 😛 it is quite long I’ve thought and wrote on notes document writing is left see you soon on that post too…!”
This update is short I wanted to create suspense and had less time too, manage this time and again pardon me love you all!
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THANKYOUSOMUCH EVERYONE
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Annie signing off- tc see you soon stay safe and stay tuned…
16 Comments
The suspense was too much, I really wanted to know about Daksh’s character to find out why Annika loves him so much despite his treatment. Please do let Shivaay recover to teach Daksh a lesson.
Awesome update!
Yeah slowly and steadily all the suspense which is left will be cleared and will be satisfying too i think ❤
Thankyousomuch ❤❤❤❤❤❤
Annie diiiiiiiii
this was such a super fantabulous chapppppppyyyy …
honestly fallen for it .
this not only represents your writing but also the society today . I genuinely agree with you that the world today is soo cruel . but I’m glad to have a sis like you.
Annika’s dilemma was really worth a praise.
and I felt really happy and relaxed to see daksh’s character as a VERYY loyal and good friend . it’s hard to get good friend and even harder to get good friendship and FRIENSHIP is there in this SS(LIKE KOOT KOOT K BHARI HAi…) either it be shivika friendship or daksh and shivaay’s frndship. the last line was fab. good attempt
post soon
With love,
SAIRISH ???
Thankyousomuch sairish ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ actually i took out my frustration of people’s inhumanity here I’ve seen alot people like this weather it’s on TV or real! And yeah daksh is best friend for whom peoples crave and same with annika… and as you said it’s really hard to get one! Once again thankyousomuch sairish for the appreciation my cutie and Many many happu returns of the sweetie God bless you have a blast today party hard ????????❤❤❤❤????
Wht an epi !! Couldn’t comment on the last part… sry for tht ?.
The msg u have given in this ss is very imp. It’s really sickening to see people not caring abt the others rather they just care abt themselves and their benefit in it…. and even if ppl care and take the person to hospital… thn the doctors don’t strt treating them until and unless the police arrives ?.
I feel so bad for both shivay and anika. Anika doesn’t want to punish daksh caz she truly loved him a lot and somewhere in the corner of her heart she still does… and can’t imagine anythin bad happening to him. Her behaviour with shivay was kinda harsh and rude but she wasn’t in a prpr state of mind to understand wht is right and wht is wrong. Wht a connection they share…. one side shivay is injured severely and unconscious and other side anika feels pain in her heart and is also bleeding and falls unconscious ?.
Shivay…. ur really very nice. He tried his best to bring her out of daksh’s memories and make her live life to the fullest and enjoy it…. he even made her a step closer to her dream. And when he came to knw tht it was daksh who was responsible for her state…. he didn’t even think twice before trusting her which is really very nice of him… since daksh was his childhood friend and they are very close buddies. Hope shivay has tht wish to live again and forgives anika for her behaviour. ( did shivay beat the waiter in the restaurant… caz he had a black eye later on ? ?)
Can’t say much abt daksh…. he is a really good friend but no one would want such a friend who says something in one place and does the opposite somewhere else…. and doesn’t respect girls at all ?.
For the first time… i guess i am commentin early ? otherwise am always late. Do continue this ss… It’s going amazing. Take care dear and love u loads ?❤❤❤❤❤
Don’t be sorry and sad to bilkul nai ???? I’m okay if you read only so don’t feel sad for not commenting on lastt part as you commented here that’s enough for me… i try to make my articles as real as possible and these social messages are the first step toward that❤ well daksh is Person with 2 faces will reveal soon… and yeah shivaay was the reason behind black mark on the eye of waiter that is yet to be revealed… when two persons are connected by the fate they shares some special connection without knowing ? same the matter with shivika! Well annika will be fine with shivaay soon! And daksh will get what he really deserves and something serious too…! And let’s see if shivaay wishes to live again or not ?
It’s the 3rd time you commented early ??❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ and thanks for the comment maryam ????? this means alot and appreciation too❤ take care you tok❤ and loads of love too????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Shivaay I just love him… please dont lose ur hope annika will come just for u..the suspense is sooooo nice
Thankyousomuch ❤❤❤❤ yup hope hope hope hope❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Wow…..U explained such a harsh reality of people in this chapter….well done….
the matter has become so complicated….I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter….
Thankyousomuch nita❤❤❤❤❤ the harsh reality is the thing i hate the most and i try to pull in this everywhere i can?soon next will be posted???
AWESOME EMOTIONAL INTERSTING NICE SUPERB??????
Dear Annie
First I Confuse With Daksh Character But After Reading Your Describe About His I Cleared?ShivIka Ko Ek Hona Chaahiye Okay???It’s Emotional And Nice Part??????
Take Care And Stay Safe?
Thankyousomuch UF … i knew it some will be confused so instead of later i gave the description now only but that’s not whole later will reveal more! And let’s see how shivika will be one?!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Awesome…I hope shivay will be fine waiting for next part update soon
Thankyousomuch yeah hope so… by night❤❤❤❤❤❤
Awesome
It is lovely dear.. Full of emotions…