Hello this is —ANNIE— back with next shot of “Not First Love, But Last Love”
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Shot-8.
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Annika’s POV
“he was shocked little hearing that I’m no I was a nurse even I was shocked how he guessed it but we both hidden our shocking expression by faking a smile and he kept on talking on which I too didn’t stopped him “shivaay I think you should rest now for some time and let me clear the garbage I made outside” I smiled on which he gave a serious look “annika I want to ask if you did all this or your pets?” shivaay looked into my eyes… his deep ocean like orbs are something in which I lost every time I look into them well this matter isn’t like it seem to be something is there a hidden connection “shivaay” I whispered not wanting to answer him “don’t lie” he held my hand “yes I did all this” I looked down and sighed replying “and why you did this” he asked in a very low tone I was hardly able to guess what he said “umm I don’t know maybe anger” I replied much lower than him “well it wasn’t anger it was guilt and hurt” he smiled “no it isn’t” I tried declining “no use I know it” he left my hand “hope you understand soon what is right and what is wrong” adding this he slide down on bed and before I could reply khanna entered in room “sir your work is done” khanna spoke to shivaay and I looked at them in confusion
“good now do the rest and what about daksh did he left to America?” shivaay asked “London” I corrected him “yeah” he nodded and khanna too “great ”shivaay closed his eyes and I moved out still wondering what work did he gave to khanna and I saw something out in the hall “fhat the wuck who are they?” I shouted and the 10 ladies looked at me “we are servants for a day” one of them replied and I got what was the work shivaay gave to khanna “shivaay” I entered the room but he didn’t respond and I checked if he was even conscious… and yeah he was but sleeping… I was angry at him for doing this as I could do this but my anger went to somewhere else seeing his cute sleeping face and yeah wounded too… I was mesmerized seeing his innocent face and automatically my hand went to his face and caressing it I smiled but soon the reality hit my mind and I removed my hand but he opened his eyes “maa” he looked at me and then again closed his eyes I think he was assuming me as her mother I smiled and went out of the room the hall was cleaned I went to kitchen area and it was cleaned too, on opening a cabin I realized he filled all the Rashaan ‘cute he is’ muttering this I went to my room to change clothes and came down in black simple suit and went to him but he was still sleeping with khanna sitting beside him making soup for him I went to kitchen.”
POV Ends
“sir here are the bells” khanna handed shivaay the bells he got after the clearing of hall “my wallet? Did you get it from hospital??” shivaay looked at khanna who gave him the bells along with a wallet… “sir what you told is done here is your new mobile and dealers will be coming anytime soon before night so don’t switch off the phone I’ll take a leave” khanna left the cottage and annika entered the room with a bowl of soup in her hand, that was when shivaay was able to see her bandages “annika” shivaay tried sitting “need not to say anything” annika shushed him and sat on a sofa chair beside his bed “have it” annika forwarded him the bowl “I don’t feel like having it annika please” shivaay zipped his mouth “okay what would you like to have” annika placed the bowl on table “sometime I need sometime I’m feeling suffocated feeling as if someone is slanging my neck along with hammer hitting on my head” shivaay closed his eyes and annika too as some tears escaped from her eyes “shivaay please have it and then I’ll talk with you” annika wiped off her tears and forwarded a spoon filled with soup “but” shivaay looked at her “later” annika stuffed the spoon in his mouth and he gulped down that making several weird faces “you are cute” annika smiled “yeah I know my mom too says this”
shivaay smiled broadly and then clenched his jaw “ahh” “what happened” annika looked at him curiously “nothing even my jaw hurts, I can’t even smile” shivaay made a sad face “no worries soon you’ll be fine and then you can laugh how much you want to” annika smiled and fed him the soup the soup finished in their irrelevant talks “annika whose room this is?” shivaay looked into her eyes “daksh’s” annika smiled looking at the whole room “you know I thought it as a store room and didn’t even imagined it to be a room and now seeing it I’m shocked” shivaay rolled his eyes “um yeah the room was of daksh and mine time spending room” annika’s eyes filled up with a smile on her face “you know what some guests are coming” shivaay diverted the topic “who ”annika literally jumped from her place “what happened they are guests not ghosts” shivaay smiled little “yeah! But first time guests are coming here na that’s why I reacted in this way” annika sat back to her place calmly “you’ll know” shivaay looked down rolling her eyes…and went silent annika kept quite too but soon breaking the silence “shivaay” annika spoke but he didn’t reply and she got curious “shivaay” she held his hand and it was hot like fire! “oh GOD!
He is having fever…” annika muttered and shooked his hand little “shivaay!” annika whispered with tears in her eyes a lot thoughts were surrounding her mind and he finally looked up at her with his red eyes and tears in his eyes “what happened?” annika held his face in her hand and asked in a low tone “my head” shivaay hardly whispered and started closing his eyes “no please don’t close eyes now” annika shooked him and he looked at her and she ran out and came in with injection and gave him that “annika!” shivaay whispered “ssshhhh calm down and don’t speak” annika sat beside him and held his hand as if he is running away and she is holding on to him so he won’t go anywhere! “why is tuffy not allowed” shivaay asked being drowsy “daksh hates him” annika answered him so he doesn’t stress his mind “allow him I won’t mind I will feel good” shivaay smiled in drowsy situation “ofcourse” annika checked his temperature “meet the guests please” and he dozed off and she broke down…
“I’m the reason behind this situation how much ever I try but the fact will not change I pushed him to death and his fault was being my friend he is still thinking about me only and I thought nothing about him but just about daksh! I’m mean very mean” she yelled at herself tuffy looked at her from the door “come here tuffy” annika sobbed and called him in but he didn’t “don’t be scared he is shivaay not daksh he will not say anything” annika assured him and he walked in like taking baby steps being afraid of the beating he got from daksh and soon jumped on annika and annika hugged him and the flashback ran into her mind
“annika was in kitchen and daksh in the room on call with someone and tuffy entered the room and jumped on him and soon tuffy shouted in pain {you know barks} and annika ran to the room all shocked to see daksh beating tuffy with note book and tuffy ran out “what was that daksh?” annika looked at him “sorry baby actually he scratched my jacket it is new and you know how costly I don’t hate him but ask him not to come to me or in this room ever again” daksh caressed annika’s face and went out…”
FB ENDS!
“he is different tuffy he isn’t daksh he is shivaay you can come in this room now” annika kissed tuffy and he licked he cheek!
soon the guests arrived
“you need to give us the agreement papers and from day after tomorrow you can join” man said not coming in as shivaay wasn’t awake “okay” annika nodded and gave them the agreement papers she locked the door and walked to shivaay’s room with cold water and a towel and placed wet towel on his forehead till the temperature went low and caring him and holding his hand apologizing a lot she dozed off with her head on his hand!
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So guys this is the Eighth shot of this SS…if you feel something isn’t good tell me
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The story begins soon Past will be revealed!
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17 Comments
Awesome..Heart touching
Thankyousomuch ❤❤
It is lovely dear
Thankyousomuch ❤❤❤
Hi Annie..Atleast now annika realised that what she did with shivu is not correct I am happy for this realization…please do update it every day and i must tell u ur stories r really different and fresh
Hi deepu✋ thankyousomuch for the comment many realizations and regrets are on the way?? I’m trying to be regular but some other works are there too so gets busy I’m glad you consider it something fresh?❤❤❤❤❤
Hey Annie.. Have a look at my O/s.. Hope u like it
https://www.tellyupdates.com/mere-ghar-aayi-ek-nanhi-pari-shivika-os-ayushi/
Hey Ayushi✋ i read it and commented how i felt i loved it ❤❤❤❤
its good but seems like a little slow
Nice ss .. i admire your writings
AWESOME FANTASTIC INTERSTING SUPERB??????
Dear Annie
Anika Pov?ShivIka Talk Anika Care Shivay??It’s Awesome And Intersting Part??????
Take Care And Stay Safe?
Awesome part
Super amazing. Thanks for the flashback with Ani and Daksh. If Daksh cannot be kind to animals, then he is definitely not a good person. Ani’s care for Shivaay is superb, before long she will realize her real feelings.
Have a blessed weekend
Awesome…..waiting for next update soon
Fabulous epi Annie….
Hope Anika realise reality soon…..
Lovely update….there were so many awww moments in this chapter….
Wonderful update… Loved it..