Hi guys I am new here … I have been reading all the fan fictions of krpkab and since I have my last exam tomorrow, I gathered courage to write one (it’s my Hindi exam so I’m writing one… a bit relaxed)? please do comment I’ll be thankful to you.. Now let’s start
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It was 6:00 a.m. the alarm clock rung and a girl on the bed banged it hard leading it to fall on the floor.. The alarm once again rung and she got up cursing it “kal 12 baje soyi thi , kuch toh daya kar ” she saw the time and removed her blanket and headed towards the washroom..She came out with wet hair and went in front of the dressing table and applied a little lip balm,kajal and eyeliner… Her phone rung and she picked it up and said ” Hello!Dr. Sonakshi Bose speaking”…….. Yes it’s our Sona. The person on the line said” jaldi aa kahan hai?? Mai kabse tera wait kar rahi hu! “Haan Ele 2 minute”She was wearing a kurta and black leggings. Her attire
The scene shifts to man shouting ” please do it quicker I don’t have this much time ” he was instructing the people who were taking the things out of the house ( he and his family were shifting to a new house )
After a few hours the stuff was placed in his new apartment. He rushed down talking the blessings of his mom. He is our Dev Dixit, one of the leading business tycoons of Delhi.
Yes he had shifted to Hope Apartments. While walking towards the parking slot he collided with a girl and the flour she was carrying got spilt on his coat and the girl shouted ” chalne ki tameez nhi h to ghar par baithna seekhiye” and he replied “baat karneki tameez nhi h to chup rehna seekhiye!” They gave each other a stern look and passed… Now you must have guessed who were they !! They were our devakshi!!!
To be continued…..
Plz do comment I’ll be highly grateful to you all
Harshita??
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Super start. All the best for your exams. Waiting for the next episode. N one request pls do post regularly.
Sure and thanks for commenting??
Heyy…It’s nice but please post long one next time.. Waiting waiting waiting
I’ll surely post by the evening
Thanks for commenting
Nice strt post soon dear ????
Ya sure and thanks for commenting
Awesomeeeeee❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Post soon
Ya I’ll do and btw I am also a die hard fan of ranbir and deepika
Thanks for commenting
???u should check my wall then❤️❤️
Awesome
Thanks
Amazing…post the next one sooner and a longer one plzzz..i understand as it was ur exams so ..but next on longer Haan!??
love u?..all the best???
I’ll surely post by the evening
Thanks for commenting
awesome. post soon…
Actually it was just a preface and I’ll surely add twists ….. Thanks for commenting and suggesting .. Really grateful and sorry if you didn’t like it I’ll try to improve..??
Sorry yeh copy paste ho gya
Thanks for commenting
it is really nice dear..
i think u could try to add up something from ur own stuffs..
that can make the ff more interesting right
just a small request from ur siso
because it seems just like the short note of krpkab story
sorry for commenting like this but i have done it not in the mind to hurt u but to make u better
that’s all..
sry siso if i hurt u..
Actually it was just a preface and I’ll surely add twists ….. Thanks for commenting and suggesting .. Really grateful
it’s ok dear
rock it next time
and frnds???
Friends and sisters .. ??
Awesome!! Post soon, and next one longer plssss!!
Best of luck for ur exams!!
Sure and thanks
It was awesomeee but I was some what same like the serial…
Sry if I hurt u…
U can add something 2 crisp ur story…
Other than this, ur writing were superbb
Nd if u have time..check my os-I Found U…
Post ur nxt epi asap…
Actually it was the preface and I’ll post the first episode today that’s why thanks by the way
Nice post soon but this time post longer . how was your exam
My exam is tomorrow (I wrote the ff after 12 midnight ) thanks for commenting
Nice start nd plzzz be regular☺☺
Thanks for commenting and reading and I’ll surely try to be regular ??
Good job …. Waiting for the next one
Thanks just now wrote it it’ll hopefully be published by tomorrow