Hello friends, I am feeling as now I am flying in the sky. Because I already posted a story and it was rejected bofore a month. Yesterday I playfully posted the intro and I did not wait for the update. But suddenly just now I saw my story with 16 comments. My happiness is limitless. Thank you infinitive times for your support and valuable comments. Thank u with great happiness and gratitude. O.k. Here is my first episode.
An idiol of LORD GANESHA is shown from bottom to top. He is in an inside temple. A lady’s face is shown. She is our Sumi and she does the aarti with a song. Then she turns and gives the aarti to a man. He is Shekhar. Then she calls “Sanskar and Princess come down fast”. Before she finishes, a voice is heard. “Maa and Papa! Good morning. I am coming”. An youngster is seen from bottom to top. He is wearing a black jeans and yellow t-shirt. Yes. His face is revealed. He is our Sanskar. He comes down and gets bleessing from Sumi and Shekhar.
Shekhar: Princess u r late today. So bad.
A sweet voice: Papa, Maa and Lawyer sir Very good morning! But, this is unfair. Today only Lawyer sir is early. But always I am the first. What happened lawyer sir? Why did u get up early today?
A girl’s lips are shown. She tells the above. Now upstairs are shown. There is a girl standing with rose colour full skirt and white colour sleeveless collarless blouse. Her face is shown. Yes. She is our sweet Ragini. She has a cute smile on her face. She comes down and gets blessings from papa and maa. Once Sanskar comes near her and holds her ears in each hand.
Sanskar: I ordered u to call me “bhai”. But u always call me “lawyer sir”. Whay is this princess?
Ragini: If I should call u “bhai” u should call me “Ragini”
Sanskar: I won’t. Because u r our princess. Now he pulls her cheeks with lots of love and smile on his face and leaves her.
Ragini: O.k. Then I’ll call u as lawyer sir.
Sanskar: O.k princess.
They make faces to each other. Sumi and Shekhar smile at their childishness.
Sumi: Why r u behaving like children?U should grow up in minds.
Sanskar: Listen Princess. U should follow Maa’s advice. Otherwise my cousin – ur husband will suffer for life time. I do not know that how will he manage u?
Sumi and Shekhar move to hall with smiles on their faces.
Ragini: Why r u talking like this? If Swara is for u to bear ur tortures then a person will surely bear my tortures lawyer sir. But Swara is poor. Oh! How did I forget that?
She comes to the hall and sits with Shekhar.
Ragini: Papa I have found the reason for lawyer sir’s change. Today at 8.00pm Swara will land in India. She turns to Sanskar and tells ” Swara will land to night not 8.00am lawyer sir “. She starts to laugh. Sanskar blushes.
Sumi: Sanskar y r u blushing?
Sanskar: Maa!
Sumi: U should not blush. U should teach it to our princess. So, then she will go to bride groom’s house with blushing face.
Shekhar: U r right Sumi.
Sanskar: Then I will get relief.
All trio laugh and Ragini gets teary eyes and asks: U all r eagerly waiting to chase me from here. But, I won’t leave or go from here.
She starts to cry. Others get shock due to this as she is a playful girl.
Shekhar: Princess we told it for fun. U r our princess. Do not cry.
Sumi: Princess we r sorry. She comes and hugs her.
Sanskar: Sorry da Princess. I promise I will not repeat this.
Suddenly, Ragini wipes her tears and says ” lawyer sir u should keep ur promise. O.k”. She smiles sweetly.
Sanskar: U r not only our princess but also drama princess.
All three hug Ragini and the screen freezes with their smiling and teary eyed faces .
Precap: Swara’s introduction. Sanskar gets heart broken due to a fact. What is it?
Tell me friends whether u like my story or not. For Raglak fans, they will meet after some episodes due to their places. Until that u can enjoy our heroine’s dramas and plays. I hope that I wasted neither ur time nor ur hope. Tell me whether I may continue or not. I am ready to all. Once again thank u all friends.
13 Comments
Super start… Love the family bonding… Eagerly waiting for Raglak first meeting…
Waiting for raglak meeting
Hi ilavarashi.. Even I’m a tamilian…. Ur ff is really good…. Sema bonding pa…….. If u can post next part soon…..
Nice
Nice
raglak/ragsan. super
nice start n waiting for next part upload soon…..
Nice
Nice.. Swasan
nice waiting fr next epi…
very nice….loved it….waiting for swaras intro….
Very nice cont
Nice starting.??Love it yaar.??but why sanskar is heartbroken???plzzz don’t saparet swasan or raglak . I love both couples.??