Hello guys! Aleena here!! I am literally so so happy after seeing your response on the first shot and it feels really really good after being loved like this by all of you!! A big thanks to all of you for supporting me so much and giving me so much encouragement!! And a big bunch of thanks for welcoming me to tei tu was just countless!! And am also so so sorry for making you all wait so much actually my best friend was a little disturbed and I had to be with her as you all know na a friend in need is a friend indeed!!
Ps: I am so sorry the links did not work so telling about Twinkle’s dress she wore a light purple and silver gown silver glittery at top and then from bottom it is light purple of net and the gown is floor length and is sleeveless and strapless hope you guys understand!
Link of previous shot I just really hope it works: Part 1
So here it goes,
Twinkle’s p.o.v:
We just settled ourselves in his car. As soon as I sat I could smell his manly cologne and fragrance throughout the car and I just inhaled deeply to enjoy it. But as soon he noticed me I just turned my face towards the window and began to look outside and secretly also inhaled his fragrance.
I was just sitting quietly when he called me. ”Twinkle”, he said. “Yes sir”, I replied. “Twinkle don’t call me sir over there just call me by my name. Ok. Hope you understood”, he said. “Yes sir,” I replied.
After this short conversation silence again took over the car. And I again turned my head towards the window and began to look outside. After a while we reached the venue before entering inside when I stepped out of the car, he just moved his right arm towards me and I looked at him blinking twice. “Twinkle stop looking at me like this and just put your arm,” he said. I just quickly moved my gaze from him and readily put my arm in HIS.
I just don’t know why I was so comfortable with him. Soon we stepped inside, all the gaze turned towards us and I started feeling quite nervous and tightened my grip on him. “Don’t worry Twinkle, I am with you,” he said as he realized my nervousness. Don’t know why I just felt my getting relaxed and a small face crept my face after listening to him.
We both entered and greeted Mr. Queen and Mrs. Queen our foreign clients. And started talking to them while we were talking to them songs started to play and we were forced by them to dance. I was about to interrupt but Kunj sir said “Yeah why not,” and moved his hand forward. I eyed him angrily and he chuckled seeing me like this. I hesitantly put my hand in HIS. Song started to play….
Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
He just placed his hand on my waist and my hands moved toward his shoulder. We slowly started to move slowly according to the beat and automatically our eyes met. And again I felt myself losing in him. And I started to move away from him….
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Tu humsafar hai
Phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi hai
Marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
har kisi ke liye…
As I moved away from him, he quickly started moving me in circles and then pushed me a little forward while holding my both hand backwards and then quickly pulled me towards him. And I could feel my back getting crushed by his car. I just closed my eyes….
hmm Meharbaani jaate-jaate mujhpe kar gaya
Guzarta saa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tera nazaara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Taqdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila
Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri sohbat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye
He started nuzzling his nose in my crook of neck I don’t why I felt so good whenever he did like this. I again opened my eyes suddenly felt something wet in my neck it was then that I just realized that he had placed a soft kiss over there. But again I closed my eyes to feel him.
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fiqar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi hai
Marna issi ke liye
As the song came to end, he just held my waist tightly still my back facing him. Suddenly I felt myself in air, he had held me in air while still holding me tightly and me still closing my eyes. While picking me in air, he started to move in a circular pattern…
Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye…
We both came in senses when the song ended and the people started to clap. He quickly left my waist and I left him and started to walk down the dance floor followed by him. As soon as we came down, we were approached by Mrs. Queen “Wow! You both share a beautiful chemistry! And yeah my husband was right you both are a perfect couple!” she said. Again I started to blush and I could feel him too blush a little. AWWW!!!.
“Oh thank you so much Mrs. Queen for the compliment and thank you for the lovely evening but now we would like to leave because it is quite late now.” He said. “Oh yeah why not and thank you for joining us.” She said.
Soon after bidding reply to all the clients we left. We just came and sat in his car. As soon as I settled myself in his car, sleep came over and unknowingly I slept. After a few while, my trance of sleep was broken when he applied brakes. I just came down and was shocked no no surprised to see the place….
I was at a beach. No no that was not the shocking thing but the shocking thing was the set up over there. There was a huge white tent maybe of silk with Chinese lanterns decorating it and in middle of the tent there were a lot of roses spreaded. Not only this, there were small candles on the corner of the tents that were illuminating the area. Apart from this all the waves of sea were increasing the beauty of the area.
Unknowingly my feet started to move towards it. After a few minutes I realized I was standing in the middle of it.
“Twinkle,” I heard his voice and turned back only to see him standing on his knees holding a rose towards me. “Twinkle, I know you would be shocked by this set up and have gotten what I am going to do. Coming to the point, I wanna say that Twinkle I really love you, you must wondering when and how I fell in love with you so the truth is when you came on your interview I fell for you on that day. Hmm maybe love at first sight you know. But I thought it as a mere attraction but it was not. *sighs*. I tried really hard to forget you but I was not successful at it. And now when it is really difficult for me to control my feelings for you and I thought to propose you before anyone else does. I don’t know that what you were expecting because I don’t really know any cheesy line and am sorry if I failed to come over your wishes. Twinkle I really love you and would love to be your better half. Twinkle, I really love you!! Will you marry me?!!”
I had tears in my eyes listening to his lovely proposal and he understood me very well though. But I did not know why I had tears; tears of happiness maybe because finally I had found someone who loved me to this extent. I just closed my eyes and the tears flooded out of my eyes.
When I opened them again, I could see him quickly standing up and throwing the rose out of his hands. He just stood up and cupped my face with his hands “Twinkle, is there anything wrong?!! I am so sorry if you are hurt by this I really did not wanted to hurt you!! I,” before he could again continue I stopped him and said,” Kunj! I really did not knew that you loved me so much and I am very happy after your proposal!”
“Then why these tears?” he asked. “Budhu!! These are just tears of happiness!” I replied. “Then may I know your answer?” he said. “Kunj, first listen to me calmly and don’t interrupt me while I am saying. OK?” he just nodded his head silently. Uff!! So cute!!
“Look Kunj I really like you but I don’t love you. I know you love me and I really saw true love in your eyes and that is the only reason I am ready to give this relationship a start but I don’t want a start of the relationship with only one sided relationship. That is why I want some time so that I could fall for you.” I said. He just nodded his head and said “Look Twinkle I understand completely and don’t worry you have your own time.”
I just nodded happily. Indeed I would be lucky to have him as my better half. While we both stared each other while cupping each other’s face I saw him looking at my lips. I understood what he want and maybe I could give him at least what he want. Hmm maybe I was ready for it. He just came closer to my ear “May I?” he whispered and backed off to his original place and kept looking at me.
I just closed my eyes giving him a positive answer and within no time I could feel his lips on mine. My hands automatically went up to his hair to caress them and I slowly began to respond him. He tried to enter in my mouth but I protested maybe I was not ready for it. And I guess he too understood it and stop trying and again began to kiss me.
Soon we broke off and joined our foreheads panting. Soon we entangled our hands and started to walk towards the sea shore while entwining our hands….
Recap: Would Kunj be able to make his lady love fell in love with him???
I am so sorry guys I am really really sorry for keep you waiting for so long and yeah I said that it would be a two shot but I am just so last to type more and my fingers are also paining so I’ll post the last part soon.
And please drop your comments!!
17 Comments
Loved it too good ❤?
The song selection as so good ??
Loved Kunj’s proposal
Hope Twinkle falls for him soon
Love you post soon ❤❤
Hey aleena its lovely the proposal was too good loved it
Hey aleena!!
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Aamna here…… the shot was lovely….. I luved it…… n…. also read ur first shot….. u r truly a great writer n I luv ur writing….. sorry for not commenting on first short….. actually i am busy these days so can’t comment on any ff or os or ss……
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I am aamna…. I am 16…… n a writer of twinj ff….. would u like to be my friend???
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. Do continue soon dear
Hey aleena a big sorry for not commenting in ur previous shot but it was osm n coming to this part it rocked u know I was waiting for this part so long (though u posted 2 days ago but then also ????) just look I m reading this ff at 3’o clock in (ghost time ??) but it is soo intresting waiting for kunj efforts to make twinkle fall in love ab kya kare kunj fast forward nikla
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N ya u said that link did not come in that but in my it came I saw that gown it was osm ??
Everything was nice and kunj proposal ? Hope soon twinkle also fall in love with him
Hey aleena.. This is just amazing….
love it very much dear….The song
is just awesome.. And love the way
kunj proposed twinkle and their kiss..
hope soon twinkle started to love
kunj.. Plzz post next epi soon…
Keep smiling.. Love you..
Superb aleena
Awesome amazing
N frm first I have no idea dat kunn loves twinkle
Proposal was soo cute
Loved it
Loads of love keep smiling
Awwww!! Thats sooo sweeet?????i loved it to the core. Its just fabulous very lovely
Post mext soon??
I loved it aleena and the proposal was so cute
Wow yaar the episode was marvelous and awesome
Their dance was fabulous
His proposal was cute
Do continue and post soon bye
Episode was soo awesome and cute yaar
Their dance was fabulous
And I liked twinkles dress very much
Do continue and post soon bye
Awesome ts
do continue soon
i just loved it aleena…..u nailed it
Wow superb epi.. loved their beautiful dance?? and kunj’s confession was so cute.. loved it.. eagerly waiting for the next ❤
awesome amazing fabulous cute marvelous epi
It’s lovely n awesome
Amazing one yrr.. will b waiting for next