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A/N:Guys a big SORRY before starting as today’s epi is the separation track, many of you didn’t want separation but guys if Mr. Bagaad billa has to be brought on track then their should be a solid reason for that and this separation will bring all of them more close to each other. Consider this separation to work as a cupid for all the couples as they will know each other more deeply and truly.
So pls keep reading patiently and keep enjoying.
@LEAF 27
@SINGHANIYA’S MANSION
@ROKA DAY
All have gathered in Singhaniya mansion and are busy doing the perpetrators for the roka.
Shivaay is walking ? in the garden with tension clearly visible on his face. Karan who was coming from outside sees him in tension and goes to him. Karan keeps his hand on Shivaay’s shoulder. Shivaay turns to see Karan.
Karan: Is everything ok Shivaay.
Shivaay: Ya everything is ok Karan Bhaiya.
Karan nods his head in disagreement.
Karan: Don’t lie to me Shivaay, tension is clearly visible on your forehead and as much as I know you, you are tensed about something really serious and I even know that you won’t tell the reason to anyone
Shivaay tries to interrupt but Karan cuts him.
Karan: It’s ok Shivaay I can understand. But in any case you ever need anyone’s help then remember your this brother is always there.
Shivaay nods and hugs him, Karan reciprocates the hug after while Shivaay feels relaxed and releases the hug.
Soums: Bhaiyu it’s neither your bidaai nor bade Bhaiya’s so why you two are being so emotional.
Karan: It’s nothing like that, what happened to you why are you roaming here and there.
Soums: Bhaiyu is the roka today itself.
KarShiv nod.
Soums: Then you will have to get ready today only na.
Saying this she begins to pull Karan along with her but turns to Shivaay and says
Soums: Bade Bhaiya you are looking dashing today.?
Shivaay smiles: Thank you Soumya.
Shivaay is wearing a black velvet sherwani and is looking really dashing.
@KARAN’S ROOM
Anika is standing along with Ishu and both are looking at few dresses in total confusion.
Karan who entered right now saw them looking at the dresses and gives a pissed off look.
Karan: Both of you not again, it’s enough I had had enough of you yesterday now no more.
Ishu: Come on bhai stop overreacting we are just confused ? with these three dresses that’s all.
Karan : Ma ma where are you, this idiot Abeer is also not here today, he has left me with all his devils alone.
AniIshSoums: What did you say Bhaiyu.
Karan: Nothing.
He again shouts: Ma papa where are you guys.
Saying this he comes out of the room and finds Pragya, Jhanvi, Pinky and dadi talking to each other.
Karan: Ma you are here and I am searching for you.
Pragya: What happened.
Karan: What happened, ask what did not happen ma.
Pragya being confused ? asks: Ok then tell me what did not happen.
Karan: Ma is this time to joke. Three of them can’t choose one single dress for me and I am not aloud to wear what I want to.
Abhi from back: And that is because your fashion scene is useless.
Karan: Oh really.
Soums comes out with a dress: Bhaiyu try this once.
Karan being completely pissed off by now: No ways I will do roka in these clothes itself and that’s final.
Pragya: Ok come with me I will select a dress for you.
After 20 minutes.
Karan comes down accompanied by AniIshSoums.
Karan is wearing a dark olive coloured velvet sherwani with golden work done on it.
Ani is wearing a golden embroidered lehanga with kundan and pearl earrings along with mangtikka of same combination.
Ishu is wearing a dark violet and golden combination lehanga with earrings and hair tied in bun leaving a few flicks out.
Soums is wearing a pink and dark blue combination lehanga with golden embroidery accompanied by gold earrings and open hair.
They all are complimenting their respective partners even though they aren’t colour coordinated.
@GARDEN ?.
Shivaay is in the garden when he receives a call after attending the call he burns in anger and marches towards the house.
@HALL
Prinku comes to the hall accompanied by Jhanvi and Pinky.
She is wearing a beautiful green and golden combination lehanga with heavy earrings, mangtikka and a necklace.
Karan gets mesmerized by her beauty and AniIshuSoums begin to tease him.
Dadi: Come on now begin with the ceremony.
All nod, when Prinku and Karan notice something and together say
Karan: Where is Shivaay.
Prinku at same time: Where is Bhaiya.
Shivaay marches in with his face clearly showing anger.
Om: What happened Shivaay is everything ok.
Shivaay in full anger shouts: No nothing is ok Om.
Karan: Why what happened?
Shivaay raising his eyebrows and giving him questioning look says in sarcastic tone.
Shivaay: Don’t you know Karan.
Karan gets shocked hearing his name from him as Shivaay always use to call him Bhaiya but he composes himself and nods in no.
Karan: What is the reason of your anger Shivaay.
Shivaay loosing his cool completely shouts at him.
Shivaay: YOU, YOU ARE THE REASON BEHIND MY ANGER MR. KARAN SINGHANIYA , OH SORRY I MEAN MR. KARAN.
Karan in calm tone: What happened Shivaay.
Shivaay in same way shouts: DON’T ACT AS IF YOU DON’T KNOW ANYTHING.
Dadi: What happened Billu why are you shouting at Karan what did he do.
Shivaay: Dadi he lied to all of us, he made a fool out of us.
Dadi: What are you saying billu, say it straight.
Shivaay: Ok Dadi, THIS MAN IS NOT A SINGHANIYA, HE WAS ADOPTED BY MR.& MRS. SINGHANIYA. AM I RIGHT KARAN.
Karan: Stop it Shivaay if this a joke then pls stop it right now.
Prinku: Bhaiya what are you saying.
She starts crying ? as soon as the words leave her mouth.
Anika: Pls Billu ji stop saying all this.
Om: What are you saying Shivaay.
Rudra: Bhaiya pls don’t say like this, Karan Bhaiya is so nice, how can you say like this about him.
Shivaay: Don’t you guys dear interfere and this man was about to spoil my sisters life.
Karan: Stop it Shivaay. I am not saying anything, that doesn’t mean that you will say what ever you wish to.
Shivaay: Oh really stop acting like an innocent, Karan, you didn’t even think once that my sister is going to marry you and you should tell her your truth at least. MAY BE YOU DIDN’T SAY BUT AT LEAST MR. & MRS. SINGHANIYA YOU SHOULD HAVE TOLD US.
He turns towards Abhi and Pragya. Pragya’s eyes ? are filled with tears and they are flowing continuously and she is holding Abhi’s hand tightly. Abhi isn’t able to understand what is happening.
Ishu goes near them and shakes them.
Ishu: Ma papa pls say something, tell Bhaiya that Bhaiyu is our brother, tell him na that he shouldn’t accuse bhaiyu, scold him na papa.
Anika: Papa how can you stay silent like this scold him for speaking rubbish.
Soums: Papa say something pls we know that you can’t hear anything against Bhaiyu then why are you silent today.
Karan was looking at Abhigya all the while with painful look.
Shivaay: WELL THEY CAN’T DENY THE FACT THAT KARAN IS AN ORPHAN. NO ONE KNOWS ABOUT HIS FAMILY BACKGROUND, NO ONE KNOWS THAT WHOSE BLOOD FLOWS IN HIS VEINS. THERE IS NO PROOF OF HIS BLOOD LINE, LINEAGE. AUKAAT KYA HAI ISS KI, PATA NAHI KIS KI GHATIYA AULAAD……….
THAAAAAAAAA…………….
Somebody slaps Shivaay across his face and the person is reviled to be Anika.
All get shocked by Anika’s this action. Shivaay just keeps his hand on his cheeks and looks on being flabbergasted by Anika’s act.
Anika shouts her lungs out: HOW DEAR YOU MR. OBEROI, HOW DEAR YOU WHO THE HELL GAVE YOU THE RIGHT TO BAD MOUTH ABOUT MY BROTHER.
Abhi finally speaks up: Yes you are right Shivaay that we don’t have blood relation with Karan, but we have a relation beyond it, which is above blood lineage and all. KARAN IS MY SON AND I AM PROUD TO SAY THAT AND NOW DON’T YOU DEAR SAY A WORD AGAINST MY SON.
He leaves Pragya’s hand and joining both his hands in front of Dadi says.
Abhi: Ma pls forgive me that I didn’t reveal this fact earlier but nothing in the entire world is more important for me than my children. Priyanka pls try to understand him, he didn’t hide anything from you, he himself didn’t know this reality.
Saying this Abhi starts leaving being completely distort.
Pragya sat down on the sofa with a thud and tears aren’t willing to stop today.
All the three sister’s are crying ?.
Anika: Bhaiyu, where is Bhaiyu.
All look here and there.
Pragya being scared ? and gets up.
Pragya shouts and begins to search for him like a mad.
Pragya shouts: KARAN, KARAN, KARAN…..
Hearing her Abhi comes out running and hell worried, he holds Pragya by her shoulder and says.
Abhi: What happened Pragya.
Pragya : Karan where is Karan.
Jhanvi: He was here only right now.
Abhi: But where is he now.
Rudra who was searching Karan near the entrance shouts.
Rudra: Karan Bhaiya is there.
All come towards door and see Karan walking like a lifeless man in the garden area. Abhigya do not have guts to either see him like this or to go near him. So three of the sisters go to him.
By now Karan sat down on a bench.
Dadi signals the entire Oberoi family to leave and they all oblige.
@GARDEN ?
AniIshSoums goes where Karan was sitting, three of them bend down on their knees and sit encircling Karan, Ani’s hand is on Karan’s lap while he is completely lost in thoughts.
Anika shakes him and he looks at her with pain and tears clearly visible in his eyes ?. AniIshSoums also become teary eyed again and the tears that had stopped a while ago again broke the barrier ? of eyes and begin to flow uncontrollably seeing their brother in such a vulnerable condition.
Anika after gaining alot of courage speaks
Anika: Bhaiyu pls say something, don’t be quite like this, won’t you scold anyone of us today as we disturbed you alot.
Karan in broken voice: I don’t have a right anymore.
All the three sisters become angry ? on his this statement and Ishu gets up and holding his hand says
Ishu: Bhaiyu how can you say all this aren’t we your sister’s anymore. So what if we are not related by blood aren’t we related by emotions. Aren’t we your sisters now, won’t you treat us as your children now.
Karan doesn’t reply but tears flow and combination of pain and guilt can be seen in his eyes ?.
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BG MUSIC ? PLAYS:
Abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi
Jagi dhadkan nayi
Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi
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Ani: Hmm answer us bhaiyu if not you but anyone of us would have been adopted by ma and papa would you have stopped loving us after knowing our reality, would you have left us.
Karan nods in no, with tears flowing harder now.
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BG CONTINUED:
Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo’n zaraa
Mar jaaun ya jee loon zaraa
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Soums: Don’t we have any right on you bhaiyu, after knowing this truth will you go far away from us.
Soums asked innocently but with tears flowing and Karan couldn’t see this and he truly didn’t have an answer to any of the questions of his sisters and their wasn’t a question of being away from them as he can’t live without three of them.
He just hugs three of them tightly as if he wants the world to stop there itself. The sisters respond to his hug even more tightly.
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BG:
Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo’n zaraa
Mar jaaun ya jee loon zaraa
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Abhigya look at four of them with teary yet a bit satisfied eyes ? and pass a painful smile to each other.
Screen shifts back to four of them where they are hugging each other. **********************************
Ho o.. abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi
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They release the hug and three of them wipe of the tears from Karan’s face and nod in no just in order to indicate him not to cry and then he points to their eyes ? showing that even they are crying ? all of them chuckle between the tears on the newly found irony.
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BG CONTINUED:
Ho.. dhoop mein jalte huey tann ko
Chhaya perh ki mill gayee
Roothe bachche ki hansi jaise
Phuslaane se phir khill gayee
Kuchh aisa hi abb mehsoos dil ko ho rahaa hai
Barso’n ke purane zakhm pe marham laga sa hai
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Karan looks at three of them and lightly pecks their forehead.
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BG CONTINUED:
Kuch aisa rahem, iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zara
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zara
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo’n zaraa
Mar jaaoo’n yaa jee loon zaraa
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Karan looks at three of them and remembers their excitement a while ago for his roka and he remembers Prinku and their first airport meet-cum-fight, then second time when they met in Soums college, meeting on the day of puja and finally when they were talking to each other in his room and the promise he made to himself of keeping her always happy and now everything was over, he couldn’t help thinking ? what would happen next.
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Dor se tooti patang jaisi, thi ye zindagani meri
Aaj ho kal ho mera naa ho
Har din thi kahani meri
Ik bandhan naya peechhe se abb mujhko bulaaye
Aane waley kal ki kyun fikar mujhko sata jaaye
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Then he looks at his sisters who are looking at him keenly trying to figure out what he is thinking ?, he keeping his thoughts away hugs them even tighter than before. All three of them are confused ? but nothing is more important for them than their brother at that moment so without another thought they reciprocate to the hug.
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BG CONTINUED:
Ik aisi chubhan iss lamhe me hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera aa
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zara
Mar jaaoo’n ya jee loon zara
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo’n zaraa
Mar jaaoo’n ya jee loon zara
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PRE RECAP:
Reaction of the Oberoi’s
&
Karan talks to Priyanka.
Okay guys here this comes to an end and I know todays epi was a bit emotional but it is matter of only few more episodes.
So till then bye ? bye.
Take care ?
Keep smiling ?
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For now signing off
Shivika…….?
29 Comments
It was such an emotional episode. The bond between the S siblings was really heart touching. dear shivika pls post the next episode asap ?
Such an idiotic billuji. Such an emotional episode???. Waiting for the next?
Shivaay………. What the hell has happen to him? Why he reacting like that? Yes he is such a fool, idiot. Anika did right with him. I expected more. Waiting to see how Oberoi’s scold that idiot.
Shivika I am really sorry that I can’t comment inyour previous parts..My college re opened…lot of works there…But I read your previous parts and it awsome ..And this epic I really cried….I love anishsokar bond very much…ee bhagad billa will never change..I love Anika’s reaction towards Shivay…he need it..Totally it was awsome…..
such an emotional episode yr..??
nd the BG song is it self so painful..
i was lost in todays epi..
S’sissos nd karan’s bond is so beautiful..
waiting for oberois reaction..
post next epi ASAP..
Wooh its a matter of few episodes means what? Are you talking about the separation or something else well aaj toh real IB khoon khandan devyanka ka rishta yaad dila diye …. And what I felt cool was…. Bindaas anika ka slap… Bro- sister immense love and unique bond my tooti fruity ?? …. And now what I am going to say don’t take it on ? or be hurt OK…..
Tum ek no.1 ki duffer ho log tumhe ,tumhare ff os ,nature ko pyaar karte hai toh return me bhi toh truck bharkar bhi toh # pyaar bare comments hi milege…..
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Zara socho toh bhala ….
Ek dost me hote hai kitne rang joh chalte hai parchaai ban humare sang dost kabhi bante hai ?khushi ki wajah kabhi ban jaate hai saaja.
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Arrey saaja…..that’s means joh Marne ko rahte hai taiyaar chahe hasaa kar????? yaa rulakar ???
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Wese hum ban jaate hai thode sacho abhi bhi # writing me hai hum baache but I was willing to give u a ?surprise batao….ummm kyu…chalo bata hi deti hu….per kyu tumne suspense precap diye toh dost kar bhi #440 volts ka jhatka zarur milega…. Tumne mujhe thinking mode me daalna toh ab tum bhi thinking mode pe jao becoz yeh surprise …………….
Omg I guess bahut long comment diya aur tumhe bore kiya……
@ late bye……
Surprise
Thank you ? so much di .
Aur agar apna phir kabhi kaha na Ki aapki koi bhi baat mujhe hurt karti hai toh Mai kabhi baat nahi karungi.???
Aur pls surprise ? jaldi baata toh nahi toh Mai suspense Mai hi mar jaungi.
Aur mujhe nahi lagta Ki comment lamba tha.???? itu Sa toh hai.??
Lalchi me?
Aagar Teri doosti saza hai,
Toh yeh saza do mujhe,
Iski kaaid Mai Puri zindagi rehna gawara hai mujhe.????
Aha koi bani hai shayara kabhi na tha Hume paata per ab jaan ka accha laga wese kisne meri wall per comment back kiya tha ki patience ka phal mitha hota hai
Agar Instagram per ho so plz drop karo I’d ….
Isa kehta hai aapna paar khud kholadi karna.
Meri billi mujhi ko muanoooo.
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Sorry di I don’t have an insta account.☹
It was awesome dear the love was immense i love it alott..i hate shivaay….he had just not done rght but fine with twist …post nxt one soon
Woah!! Dear I am overwhelmed after reading all your ff’s at one go…
I just loved it and you have made a perfect portrayal of Shivaay’s character and his words… top of all i am loving not the leads but Karan, he knows everyone’s heart and after all the way he cares for his sister’s is one big thing which is making me feel like khaash… even I would have a elder brother but what can I do Mom and Dad gifted me a younger brother….? I have to say Karan is the best part of your ff…
I know right there are many best things in your ff after all naming them on by one is a big task as we have to list out many things..
And one special thing that is I have to talk about the back ground music… I know one song is enough to express all our emotions and in this episode the bg music is peaks it’s so emotional and perfect for that scene…??✌?
I have no words for Singhaniya siblings bonding I just know I have to give a standing ovation to you for such a great work…??
I am so excited for next episode…. post it soon…
Love you?
THANK YOU ? SOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR LIKING THE FF AND ESPECIALLY READING ALL THE PARTS FROM BEGINNING.
AND THANKS FOR LIKING KARAN’S CHARACTER DEAR. ? ? ? ? ? ?
Shivay is like this only such an idiot and karananishmya bond is so emotional?????
Offff….very emosional….and the bg is perfect for here…..waiting to know prinku and obroies reaction (excep shivay)
I just loved the last part… hope the separation part will clear soon 🙂
Superb emotional too
it was emotional
again a super duper hit episode bhai maza aa gaya every emotion was clearly visible whether it was of mother or father and best thing was bond between brother and sisters that was so lovely so lovely you nailed it dear so today as you give such a sweet episode so for you
Aankhon ke teer mere jigar ke paar kar gayi
Bhole sanam ke dhoke se dil pe waar kar gayi
Jabse apni deke gayi naram chhuan tu
Udan choo hua hua
mera chain udan choo
Udan choo rahe neendein
saari rain udan choo
such a sweet song for you and then for episode again it was a lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy episodeeeeeeeeeeee yr ye kambakht PC me emojis nahi hotey hai unke bina har baat adhoori lagti hai waisey samjh ja kudiye sanu twadi writings pagal karti hai love you
Ahaaa kya gana hai I toh loved it didu.
And don’t worry aapka emotions Mai samajh gayi.
THANKUUUUUUUUUUU SOOOOOOOO MUCH.? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
LOVE ❤ JU TOO.?? ❤
It sure was emotional but wonderfully written and the background music was awesome????????.
Am happy that Anika gave Shivaay a tight slap if she would have given him a second one then it will be great.
Waiting for the separation track along with twists and turns.
so senti i mean emotional episode yaar…..
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U made cry today shivika I Was really emotional by reading this ff but as always I must say it’s awesome love dear pls post asap
OMG can someone please slap shivaay? He is driving me crazy! The s siblings bond was so emotional!! Awesome Shivika post next soon Plzzzz????
Very good episode. Whats wrong with shivay. I want to slap him.
Shivika its superb… Esp d slap by anika… Hope karan n priyanaka r united… Waiting fr d next episode… U have our support…
Thankuuuu aku, your support means alot dear ??
waiting for next part shivi..
kb post krogi yr..
Awsm episode…..
it was really nice…can u pls update epi 22 to 26…