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@LEAF 66…
@O&S HOUSE CHAWL
IshKara with Abeer enter the house three of them were more than disturbed. They sit in the main hall as no one is at home Abeer goes to fetch water for all of them while IshKara are pre-occupied by Rahul’s words and Abeer is in a mess of his own.
@DADI & SHAKTI’S SIDE
Shakti: Dadi why did you get me to temple?
Dadi: Puttar Jo hum karne ja rahe hain Vo ek tarhan se sahi bhi hai aur ek tarhan se nahi bhi. Badla ke bhawna insaan ko khokhla kar deti hai. Mai iss ishwaar se bas itni binati karne aayi hun ki hume sahi raha dikhaiye kahin humare bachon se koi Galati na ho aur Jo sabke liye sahi hai wahi ho. Karam karne wale toh hum hain par uss karam ka phaal hume bhagwaan dainge. Inki sehmaati ke bina toh ek pata nahi hilta ye hi toh hain Puri dhaarti ke Karta dharta. Bas aab yahi hume raha dikhainge.
(Dear, what we are going to do is right in a way but in other it is wrong also. The thought of revenge makes a person hollow. I just want to pray to God that he should show us the right way, I want to pray to him to show the right path to our kids they shouldn’t do anything wrong and the thing that’s right for everyone only that should happen. We are the one to do everything but he (god) is the one to give the results. He is the one because of whom everybody survives. Now only he will show us the right path.)
Shakti: As you say mummy ji.
@KARAN & PRINKU’S SIDE KHORANA’S OFFICE
Prinku: What will we get here Karan?
Karan: I don’t know Prinku let’s see.
Both move in together in disguised clothes and make up.
Prinku: Karan I am feeling scared what if they find out about us being here. Khorana will not leave us.
Karan holding Prinku’s hand: Don’t worry I am there with you. Nothing will happen to us.
Prinku nods.
Karana to the receptionist: Is Mr. Khorana in office?
Receptionist: May I know who you are sir?
Karan: I am… I am a businessman I want his permission for some work.
Receptionist: Oh okay. But Sur isn’t in office right now. Tell me your name I will fix an appointment of yours with him.
Karan: Mr. Amartya Dhanraj.
Receptionist: Okay sir you may meet him next Monday at 4:30.
Karan nods.: Btw where is washroom.
Receptionist show them the way and Karan takes Prinku along.
Prinku: Where are you taking me Karan?
Karan: Just come.
Both see a record room on their way and enter in.
Prinku: Karan you go inside I will keep an eye out here.
Karan: No come with me Prinku.
Prinku: But…
Karan: Shhh…. Just come.
Prinku check the files maybe we find some clue against Khorana.
Prinku nods.
Both start searching for clues when Prinku doesn’t notice that the rack is unstable and files from above fall on her.
Prinku: AAAAAAHHHHHH….
Karan goes to her and quickly helps her out of the files. While a ward boy who herd the noise enters the record room but on finding no one there leaves locking it. While Karan and Prinku were hiding behind the cupboard with Prinku’s back touching Karan’s front.
Prinku: Sorry.
But Karan doesn’t reply as he is lost in her Prinku senses something wrong and turns to see Karan whose eyes are glued at her.
Prinku: Wrong timing Karan ji.
Karan gets out of his traces and gives her confused + questioning look.
Prinku: Karan ji we need to leave.
Karan looks around and curses the surroundings and nods while Prinku chuckles at his antics. He moves towards the door when Prinku holds him back.
Prinku: Where are you going Karan ji?
Karan: Again ji. First stop this ji (Prinku nods) and secondly do you want to stay here for life.
Prinku pats her head: Pati dev that ward boy just locked the door where were you lost.
Karan innocently: In you.
Prinku blushes and hits him: Find a way out.
Karan nods and looks around the record room carefully examining it he finds an open window he helps Prinku out of it but when he moves out his feet gets twisted.
Prinku: Are you alright Karan.
Karan: Ya don’t worry let’s get out of here first.
Prinku nods and both leave.
@O&S HOUSE CHAWL
After IshKara and Abeer, dadi & Shakti reached followed by Karan & Prinku & Janvi, Tej, Pragya and Pinky. Finally after an hour or so ShivIka enter balancing an injured Abhi on their shoulders. He actually got injured while escaping from Khorana’s house and got shot on his leg. Everybody gets worried and runs to him and makes him to sit on sofa comfortably.
Pragya: What happened Abhi?
Shivaay: Aunty got shot.
Pragya: WHAT? WHY DID YOU GET HIM HERE YOU SHOULD HAVE GOT HIM TREATED.
Anika: We said it many times but he isn’t listening to us.
Abhi: Calm down all of you the bullet just touched me. I am completely fine.
Pragya: Have you lost it Abhishek how can you say you are fine. Anika go and get the first aid and Shivaay call the doctor.
Abhi: No Shivaay don’t call the doctor.
Ishu: But why papa?
Abhi: I said I am alright a doctor isn’t needed.
Pragya: Aap pagal ho Gaye hain doctor ki zaroorat kaise nahi hai.
(Have you gone mad? Why a doctor isn’t required?)
Abhi: Pragya calm down and clean my wound I will be fine.
Pragya nods her head in disbelief seeing him adamant and cleaning his wounds she puts the medicine.
Pragya: Mummy ji you only explain him.
Abhi: Ma I am fine and I need some rest leave me to room.
All nod and Karan and Om leave him to his room.
Dadi: What happened Shivaay?
Shivaay: Dadi while we were going from there Khorana’s guard got attentive and shot in air to stop us but as we didn’t stop he shot on Abhi uncle’s leg.
Dadi nods: Pragya go be with him and give him haldi milk (turmeric milk.).
Pragya nods and leaves.
Dadi: All of you also go and take rest. Everybody leaves accept Ishaana who is standing like a statue there.
Once all leave she falls on her knees and cries miserably trying her best not to make any noise. She holds her legs closer to her chest and hugging her legs she cries but closes her mouth.
Om, Shivaay, Abeer, Karan see this.
Karan goes to Ishu and holds her shoulder she looks upto him and hugs him tightly.
Ishu: Bhaiya….
Karan: Shhh…. What happened princess? Say something princess.
Shivaay keeps his hand on her shoulder and runs his hand over her back to calm her down.
Ishu: Bhaiya…. Please stop all this.
Karan: What princess? What are you talking about?
Ishu looks at him: All this revenge game bhaiya. I am tired of all this. Once I am saved but not always destiny won’t be kind to us always what if something happens to anyone of us. Please stop this blo*dy revenge game. I won’t able to forgive myself.
Karan: Shhh…. Chup silent Baccha nothing has happened to anyone and nothing will happen to anyone.
Ishu nods in no with tears flowing down her eyes: Bhaiya didn’t you see papa’s condition today. Today the bullet just touched his leg what will we do if tomorrow something happens to anyone. Please bhaiya stop this I beg you please.
All the while she keeps moving her head madly while Karan cups her face.
Karan: Nothing will happen to anyone nothing.
Shivaay holding Ishaana’s shoulder: Ishu trust us we won’t let anything happen.
Ishu: Bhaiya it’s not about trust I trust you all but those people are really powerful.
Om: Ishu so what if they are powerful we will also be very careful don’t worry noting will happen. Just calm down.
Ishu stands up nodding in no her hair completely dishevelled she has lost her entire strength by now but with having whatever courage left in her body she voices.
Ishu: What do you think we can fight with them no we can’t they won’t leave anyone of us. They are blo*dy dogs they will kill all of us. Please leave all this and lets go from here. Please I beg all of you. I will also forget whatever happened you also forget it let’s go from here. Please.
Abeer who was a silent spectator till now was highly enraged by the last words of Ishaana, his eyes became blood shot and he moved to Ishaana and held her by her shoulder tightly. His hold bought the almost lost Ishaana back to senses she was silenced just by his touch and the dangerous look in his eyes not only silenced but that anger in his eyes means destruction, that anger means much more then just anger.
Abeer’s every single word being curt and clear filled with lots of anger: ISHAANA WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU WILL FORGET EVERYTHING AND THIS WILL END HERE ITSELF. NO THIS WON’T END. THIS WON’T END TILL A FULL STOP IS PUT TO THIS STORY AND WHAT YOU ARE PUTTING IS A COMMA. YOU WANT TO BACK OUT JUST BECAUSE OF ONE FEAR OF LOOSING EVERYTHING THEN BACK OFF BUT I AM NOT GOING TO STOP. THIS WAS NEVER ONLY YOUR BATTLE IT WAS OF EVERYONE OF US AND IF YOU DON’T HAVE COURAGE THEN SIT BACK I DON’T MIND AND IT MAYBE VERY EASY FOR YOU TO FORGET EVERYTHING BUT NOT FOR ME DO YOU GET IT. AND IF NOT THEN GET IT STRAIGHT.
Karan makes Abeer loose his hold: What are you doing Abeer? This is no way to handle.
Abeer is still looking in Ishaana’s eyes and with determination more then anger this time. His eyes shake her as he moves out of the hall Karan follows him while Shivaay side hugs a numb Ishaana.
@BALCONY
Karan: Have you lost it Abeer she is a child.
Abeer: Karan leave.
Karan pushes Abeer to look at him: No. I am not leaving until and unless you aren’t telling me why are you so disturbed.
Abeer sternly + angrily: I said leave Karan.
Pragya who had seen the entire outburst stops Karan from saying further and signals him to leave. Karan obliges without another word and leaves.
Pragya places her hand on Abeer’s shoulder: You aren’t yet able to forget that night.
Abeer looks at her: How can I forget it? I saw my sister burning that day. People have seen dead burning but I saw a live girl, my sister who was completely alive burning. How can I forget it? How? That time keeps flashing in front of my eyes every single second. I can never forget it. Never.
Pragya: Calm down Abeer. Tell me what happened because I know that’s not the only reason for your outburst today. Your eyes are saying a different story.
Abeer looks up at the lady in front of him she isn’t his mother, she never gave birth to him, she wasn’t there for 20 long years after his birth but the day she came in his life after that day there wasn’t a single second when he needed her and she wasn’t there. True mother is mother in every way no matter whether she gives birth or not. That eyes which spoke volumes about her motherly affection made Abeer to pull out all his pain in her embrace. He hugged her as tightly as possible, she wasn’t able to bear the weight but she didn’t leave him rather both slides down the wall and Pragya sat down while Abeer cried in her embrace. Pragya cares his hair and back to calm him down.
Abeer after 20 long minutes of crying speaks to his mother: My father is a devil, ma. He is a devil.
Pragya gets shocked hearing these words from his mouth and cupping his face makes him look at her: What are you saying Abeer?
Abeer nods: He is worse then a devil ma. He is an opportunist.
Abeer stands up so does Pragya.
Pragya: What do you mean Abeer?
Abeer with tears overflowing his eyes and hatred his mouth he speaks: Today when I had gone to factory I herd him talking to Khorana. They both pull up innumerable illegal activities. I feel disgusted. Till date the father I considered to be my pride, the money I thought was hard earned everything was a lie a big lie. That man broke my trust my pride my reason of living.
Pragya cups his face: No Abeer, you are a self made man. Your pride is your music. Your life is your music and not anything else.
Abeer hugs her and cries out his entire pain in her embrace.
Pragya: It’s okay Abeer calm down.
Abeer: I was to rude to Ishu.
Pragya: No, what you did is right at this time maybe our love wouldn’t have given her that much strength as much as your scolding did. At least now she knows that there is no looking back.
Abeer nods.
@LIVING ROOM
AniIsh, ShivKara, Karan and Prinku were siting together talking on random stuff. Abeer comes there and Ishu gets up to talk to him.
Ishu says feebly: Bhai…
Abeer: Hmm…
Ishu a little louder: Bhai.
Abeer: What Ishaana?
Ishu holding both her ears, with a cute put: Sorry.
Abeer smiles seeing her cute antics: Come here.
He hugs her.
Ishu: I won’t repeat this again. I will never forget that this isn’t only because of me, it’s for our entire family.
Abeer: Good enough.
@FLASHBACK PAUSE
@TEMPLE
Janvi to Mrs. Khorana: We are sorry for what we are doing.
Mrs. Khorana: Don’t be Janvi ji whatever my husband has been doing till date he has to pay for it one day. He is worse then a demon. He deserves this. The man who can do anything for just power even if that includes taking life of his own family isn’t worth anything. But the only thing that I will feel bad about is that my son also walked on the footsteps of his father and became a demon. He didn’t even think twice before doing such a disgusting thing. He is just a disgrace to me. I feel ashamed that I am his mother and I am ashamed of myself too I was silent for so many years.
Janvi patting her back: It’s okay don’t worry. Everything will go good.
Mrs. Khorana: I hope so and I hope that Meher chooses the right path this time.
Janvi: Don’t worry she will choose the right path only.
Outside the temple Pragya, Pinky and Madhvi (Abeer’s mother) are waiting for the duo. As soon as they arrive they leave from there.
@STADIUM
Khorana: Priyanka you will be staying with me throughout the campaign.
Priyanka’s facial expression changes she turns completely pale and nervously says.
Prinku: But sir why me?
Khorana: That’s an order.
Priyanka nods and moves with him sweating profusely.
KHORANA’S P.O.V.
What did you all think is it so easy to make me DAWENDRA LAL KHIRANA LOOSE. NO it’s impossible to make me loose and moreover when you will be with me your family won’t be able to attack me. I will surely show your place to all of you. No one ever dear mess with me. Who the hell are you people. Dawendra Lal Khorana isn’t only a name but a brand I will show you my power let me be the Chief minister this time. I will throw you all out of the world.
@END OF P.O.V.
PRE RECAP:
Samarth Khorana: Aaaahhhhhh…… No don’t kill me. Dad please save me.
GUESSING TIME:
What do you guys think whom is Meher fooling???
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What is the plan???
Think… Think… Think…
For now signing off
SHIVIKA ?…
8 Comments
FANTABULOUS update Shivika….
Soo much mystry….. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt…
Sema update yar pls update the next one soon pls pls pls
AWESOME EXCITED FANTASTIC INTERSTING PERFECT SUPERB??????
Dear Shivika kapoor
Dadi Shakthi Talk Is Really Nice??Prinku Karan Scene Is Cute And Nice???Abeer Talk To Ishana Is Suuperb???Praghya Abeer Talk Is Nice??Ishu Abeer Talk Is Cute And Nice???Mrs.Khorana Jhanvi Talk Is Awesome???Precap Is Excited And Nice???Totally The Episode Is Really Awesome And Intersting????
Who Is Meher Fooling..Hmm Let’s Wait And Watch……..I Think Meher Fooling Is Khorana?
Take Care And Stay Safe?
It is awesome dii.. Please update soon
Wonderful update… loved it… priran scene was cute… ishu n abeer part was excellent… Eagerly waiting for the next part…
Awesome update di
I have read your ff from first episode… However commenting first time…. Really loving the way the story has developed…. Awesome work…. Post next part ASAP… Waiting eagerly… Keep rocking…. Loved it
Fabulous update