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Part 10
Karan: Why are you silent tell me, I wont spare them. Anika you are like a sister to me and I cant stand anyone hurting you.
Anika: Wo( she and Shivaay share an eyelock)
Karan: Will you say anything except for Wo..
Anika: I just fell over, nothing major.
Karan: You sure.
Anika: I am… (She can’t make eye contact with Karan)
Karan: Because I trust and love you I’m letting this slide but I hope you are not lying, I hate lies and you know that Anika.
Rudra: Looks like Truth got another best friend.
Om: Shut up Rudra.
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Karan: I’m not that stupid. Can’t you see how Anika is feeling. Please fix her, your the one that can do this only.
Shivaay: I can’t, you..
Karan: If you hurt Anika, then just remember I’m a Rana, and Rana can do anything just for your friends and family.
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Rudra: We can’t tell Shivaay
Om: Obviously, we all know he loves Anika secretly and if he found out what she was doing with the pills and what injection that was, he wouldn’t leave us alive.
Rudra: I don’t want to Die Om, I still haven’t married my dream girl.
Om: You did but you just didn’t realise.
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Shivaay: Can I come in Anika
Anika: Why are you asking Mr. Oberoi, it’s your home after all I am only a middle class employee.
Shivaaay: What nonsense you are my wi…
Anika: I’m pretty sure employee in hindi doesn’t begin with a w.
Shivaay: You’re my wi…
Anika: Toy that you can just hurt and hurt and hurt,
Shivaay: I’m sorry for what I’ve done, Can we be friends.
Anika: Its okay Mr Oberoi, you didn’t do anything wrong.
Shivaay: Can we be friends
Anika: Let me think… first you divorce me and then don’t even tell me the truth, then you let your mum let out all her bad language and hate on me, and then you slap me, and break my bracelet, the only thing that I really have. Well of course we can be friends.
Shivaay: Really ( goes and hugs her)
Anika: (pushes him away)No! Shakti uncle said my house will be available in a couple of days so let’s pretend we don’t know each other, you don’t talk to me and I won’t too. Mr. Oberoi.
Shivaay – But Anikaa…
Anika: Trust me it’s best for all of us. You don’t want me coming in between all your relationships and work.
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Shivaay: With Memory or Without she still shows a lot of tadi.
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Anika: (Holding her phone) Um.. Dadi someone called Sahil is apparently going to coming.
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ShivOmRu: (shocked)Sahilll!!!
Dadi: Oh good. I really want to see that cute face of his. You two have a really cute bond.
Anika: Me
Dadi: Yes puttar.
Anika: But I don’t even know who he is.
Dadi: Sahil is your….(realises that she has lost her memory) I think Tej is calling me.
Anika: I don’t think so
Dadi: He is. I can feel it. Shivaay can explain it.
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Shivaay: (sarcastically) Thanks Dadi.
Anika: So Mr. Oberoi, so who is Sahil.
Shivaay: Sahilll is… Rudra will tell you.
Rudra: Me?? No today I cant speak that much. Om will tell you.
Om: What??? You know what Dadi said Shivaay should tell her so actually Shivaay you should tell her.
Shivaay: Um… Sahil is my cousin.
Anika: Your What know.
Shivaay: My mum’s brothers son, he studies in a boarding school near about here so he lives with us for a bit.
Anika: Oh that’s cute.
Shivaay: Before you two would always get along.
Anika: Wait Sahil had called me earlier this morning and said he’s my brother, wait me and you aren’t cousins na.
Shivaay: What the wuckkk!!! What goes in your pea: sized brain.
Anika: More stuff than yours.
Shivaay: What??
Anika: Nothing. Thank god I’m not related to you.
Shivaay: Millions of people would die to be related to you.
Anika: Once they’d actually met you, they all run away. Trust me we’ve all tried.
Rudra: True dat.
Shivaay: Actually Sahil calls you did for respect. You two are so close he feels like he’s your sister.
Anika: Aww your cousin has feelings.
Shivaay: What do you mean.
Anika: By the way you are describing Sahil he’s won’t be nothing like you. Cute. Sweet. Good looking,
Shivaay: I never said good looking.
Anika: So he’s gone like you in that matter.
Shivaay: Mind your manner.
Rudra: Will you two stop arguing. My best friend is coming after so long.
Shivaay: Can I talk to my brother… Alone
Anika: Yes. I’ve seen enough of your face today.
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Shivaay: Now we can’t tell Sahil about what happened to Anika. It will destroy him.
Rudra: What shall we say Anika is doing some sort of drama for charity.
Om: Stupid Rudra, just( realises what Rudra said) That’s actually not bad. He’s mature and clever he’ll won’t ask more questions.
Shivaay: But on the other side he is mature and clever he might ask too many questions.
Boy: Who are you talking about Jiju.
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Shivaay: Sahil, How are you?
Sahil: Tired but Jiju I am not talking to you, I can’t believe you are so mean.
Shivaay: I didn’t do anything I didn’t do anything on purpose. Anika is fine.
Sahil: What are you talking about. I think you are ill Jiju. What are you on about. Did Anika did tell you to do this.
Shivaay: What Anika! Her memory is fine.
Sahil: What are you on about. My di’s memory is so good. She always remembers stuff. I’m talking about your horrible driver.
Rudra: What did he do. Tease you, hit you. I’ll sort him out.
Sahil: He did something worse.
Om: What did he do.
Sahil: He wouldn’t give me chocolate. He said it was bad for me.
Shivaay(in relief) Don’t worry Shivaay will sort it out. Go to the Kitchen there is chocolate cake for you.
Sahil: Thank you JIju(hugs him )
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Rudra: Real smooth Shivaay.
Shivaay: Shut up.
Sahil comes back with chocolate all over his mouth and a muffin in his hand.
Sahil: By the way, have you seen didi.
ShivOmRu: No!
Sahil: Earlier this morning she said the stupidest thing she said that she didn’t know me. Have I gone for soo long that she has forgotten me( starts crying)
Shivaay:(picks Sahil) Don’t talk like this, When I’m here nothing can harm Anika.
Sahil starts laughing and Shivaay is surprised before he can react, a cupcake is smashed into his face.
Sahil: Now that was fun.
Shivaay: Like sister, like brother.
Rudra: Not fair sahil, you didn’t say Hi to me.
Sahil:(hugs him so hard) I got you a present.(hands Rudra a box of tissues)
Rudra: Why this??
Sahil: Because you cry so much, you will need some tissues.
Rudra: you joker(he looks at Om and Shivaay smirking and rufles Sahils hair)
Sahil: Where is my di. She hasn’t said hi.
Shivaay: Your anika is doing a sponsored memory drama for charity, she has pretended to lose her memory for the kids in the orphanages.
Sahil: Ohh. I get you. My di is so nice( walks off and he pauses) Rudra…
Rudra: Yess.
Sahil: Make sure you take Shivaay to the hospital.
Shivaay: Why?
Sahil: I think you have gone mad
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Om: That will keep Anika and Sahil busy.
Rudra: I am clever na, come on Shivaay.
Shivaay: Where.
Rudra: Hospital. To check you up.
Shivaay. What???
Om: What nonsense.
Shivaay: Exactly.
Om: He has to freshen up first, he has cake all over him.
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Om: Thanks Shivaay.
Rudra: I had just taken an shower.
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Anika: Nita said that sahil is here.
Shivaay: Nita??
Anika: Oh in your language maid 23.
Shivaay: Her name is Nita??
Anika: Forget that, where is Sahil. I’m dying to meet him.
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Sahil – Hello Didi. Not fair you weren’t the first person to say hi.
Anika: I was cleaning your room sahil.
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Anika: You have an adorable sweet cousin. Maybe your feelings and attitude came from your dads side.
Shivaay: Don’t push it.
Rudra: Don’t worry Bhab… di, Only Shivaay got the tadi flu.
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Shivaay: Shes so cute. She cares about the people that she doesn’t know.
Rudra: Who are you talking about.
Shivaay: Anika.
Om: Who??
Shivaay_ An… I just remembered I have a meeting to attend.
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Omru: Shivaay’s gotten a dose of Ishqbaazi.
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(Scene 5 The hall: I hour later)
Pinky: Ugh, Sahil is here. I though that I middle: class person was enough.
Shivaay: Stop it.
Anika: How can you talk to your nephew like this.
Pinky – Nephew( gets confused) Nephew my foot. All I know that he’s a ignorant middle class boy who has nothing better to do than roam around our house.
Dadi: Enough He’s only a little boy.
Pinky: If I was you I’d throw him out of this house. He’s a thief, who stole Tia’s necklace.
Anika: Knowing Sahil, he wouldn’t.
Shivaay: That was a misunderstanding.
Pinky: What happened to you Shivaay. At the moment you didnt trust Sahil and you made him and anika apologise to Tia.
Anika:(turns to Shivaay) I cant believe it. How could you stoop so low.
Shivaay: Anika
Anika: (holds hand in front of him) I dont want to hear your lousy escuses, He might be middle class but hes your cousin, your family you should give him some respect.
Pinky: Hes a bad omen for us. Take you and your disability away from us. She drags Sahil and pushes him on the floor.
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Anika: Aunty. What are you doing.
Pinky: Something that I should of done ages ago.
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Anika: Enough I cant watch you torture a innocent boy like that.
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Anika: I’ve had enough off this, you can talk to me like this shout about my class or speak ill:mannered about me but you I wont stand if you speak like this to my brother Sahil. Even though you are elder then me you should know when to stop and I am younger than you but when the matter comes to Sahil. Who ever it might be upper class or not I will not bear someone treating him like some dirt. And Shivaay you are the same as well. I bet you treat him like this as well. I am sick of how you just treated a boy like that. There was a saying when people like you have money you forget about feeling, I have just witnessed that. I cant stay in a house who treats people like that.
Dadi: Anika…
Anika: Please forgive me, put If someone bad mouths my brother I will fight anyone.
Shivaay: Anika.. Sah..
Anika: Dont you dare say Sahils name. (turns to Sahil, do you want to get ice cream)
OmRu: I’ll come with you.
Shivaay: me too.
Anika: No Mr. Oberoi. I dont want people like you near my brother.
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Thats a wrap. Thank you for commenting. This one is very long. 2,002 words. Comment if you are happy with what I’m writing and message me if you want to change anything or add a new concept in.
Precap- Anika comeback at Oberoi Mansion
15 Comments
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Amazing epi…. waiting for next…
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Amazing update. Does it means that Anika hasn’t lost her memory because in the end she got angry and she said no one should bad mouth her brother
Did Anika didn’t loose her memory?????Update soon dr and it was superb
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Fantastic.. Thanks for the wonderful episode.. Waiting for the next episode eagerly