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Objection My Lord ! Ragsan (Few shots) (Shot 1)

Zuha FatimaBy 38 Comments4 Mins Read

Hey guys I am back with the first shot of this FF… I hope I come across your expectations…Disliking is appreciated but no abusive Language!
And yeah I am making Swara and Laksh a part of this story!

So let’s get to the story….

Ragini reaches her home, and starts yelling, “That idiot, khadoos Maheshwari, how dare he talks to me like that! Yeh toh vohi baat hogai ke ulta chor kotval ko daante! Anyway, why am I spoiling my mood because of that Khadoos, I should prepare for the hearing! Let’s to Swara’s house!”

And she leaves, after changing her clothes (as they got dirty by Sanky, in the previous shot!)

Ragini reaches at an apartement, and rings the bell. A woman opens the door, who is wearing a blue sari with silver stars over it, she has curls in her hair, she is looking very much elegant!

Ragini: Hi, Mrs.Swara Lakshya Maheshwari!
Swara: Just shut up Ragini! Call me Swara, Swara Bose.
Ragini: Okay, but you are not divorced yet!
Swara: That is why I have hired you, so I can get divorce from that idiot!
Ragini: Okay chill!
Swara: Now will you stay outside, come in!
Ragini: Thank you!

And they get inside….

The scene shifts at an apartement, where Sanskaar is seen talking to a man in an angry tone!

Man: Why are you looking upset!
Sanskaar: Don’t ask me Lucky, what happened today! (The man is Laksh)
Laksh: Okay I am not asking!
Sanskaar: No, no ask! You know what I met a girl!
Laksh: Was she hot?
Sanskaar: Hot?? She was hot top to bottom! Hotness was in her brain! Sach a badtameez girl she was! She herself was walking near the mud pool and blamed me! Well leave it, let’s focus on the case!
Laksh: Sanskaar, I got to know that my Chudail wife, which will be soon turning my, ex-wife, has hired her friend as her lawyer, and it is her first case!
Sanskaar: Sometimes I feel pity on your wife, she is so stupid, firstly she is divorcing you, and then hiring a lawyer who is fighting for the first time that also in front of Sanskaar Maheshwari, who…
Laksh: Who never loose case!

Scene shifts to Swara’s residence…

Ragini: Look Swara, before being my client you are my very good friend, so as a friend I am asking are you sure you want divorce! Look you are a mother, of a daughter, and I will not say much but don’t let your decision effect your daughter! And I am quite sure, that after getting divorce Laksh will definitely file for custody!
Swara: No Ragini, I am doing this for Naina (Swalak’s daughter) and he can’t snatch my daughter from me! Never!
Ragini: Look, Swara divorce is a big step please think once again!

The scene shifts to Laksh’s place…

Laksh: Look Sanskaar, I want my daughter at any cost, do anything, but I want Naina with me not with her!

(Naina is with Swara right now!)

Sanskaar: Relax Lucky! I will try!
Laksh: You better do!

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Next day ; court…

Swara and Ragini reach there, and so do Laksh and Sanskaar…

Swara and Laksh sit…whereas Ragsan go ahead…Sanskaar and Ragini come face to face…Both are shocked…

Both say at the same time pointin towards one another, “TUM!!”

Screen freezes on Ragsan…

Precap: The hearig begins…Ragini finds Naina crying…she feels bad for Naina…she decides something and goes to Sanskaar’s place to talk somethin to him…What is Ragini going to talk to Sanskaar?

Hey fellows…the episode ends…sorry for short update…and I have a question should I make Laksh as negative in Swalak or Swara? Do tell me!
And thanks to all who supported me previously, Arshi, Halima api, Sunehri, Sanju, Kriya, Nuszz, Kashfia, and sorry if I am missing any but I am grateful of you all
Bye!
And I ♥♥ u all !

_Zuha Fatima

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38 Comments

  1. S priya on

    I don’t want c laksh negative nor swara …better Another one..but itz ur wish

    • S.Z.F.Z on

      Thanks for the suggestion dear…I will try my best but I can’t promise 🙂

      _Zuha Fatima.

  2. varsha on

    didi i hv seen lucky as a villian so i wnt swara as villain bt nt as a mother, jus c tamanna serial, they way dhara speaks and is being the best mom for her child shubangi

    • S.Z.F.Z on

      Thanks for the suggestion…and I will try dear….but as I said I can’t promise =) My bad 😉

      _Zuha Fatima.

      {I would love to watch that serial dear but I live in Pakistan and unfortunately the serail does not airs here, and I don’t use hotstar but will try to come across your expectations 😉 }

  6. Priya15 on

    Amazing sweetie… See our coincidence… Even I updated one os tdy.. It l be published hopefully….

    • S.Z.F.Z on

      Thank u Priya di! And I read your OS and commented as well! It was so good!
      Love you,
      Zuha.

    • S.Z.F.Z on

      Thanks dear, just posted the next shot, let’s see when will it arrive?
      Regards,
      Zuha.

  15. Isabel on

    Amazing and interesting but pls I’ll feel bad if I see Laksh or Swara negative, pls don’t make them negative, just a request.. Nice story

    • S.Z.F.Z on

      Thankssss Isabel! Will try to come acrosa your expectations?
      Regards,
      Zuha Fatima.

  16. sonya on

    nice
    i think ragini try to unite swalak for naina
    dont make them negative or if u have anything in mind then go ahead with ur idea

    • S.Z.F.Z on

      Thanksssss Sonya? Maybe or maybe not? Let’s see..Stay tuned for more updates!

      -Zuha Fatima.

  18. Nuszat.Nusz.SuNusHaZuRah on

    Wow Zuha this episode was rocking.

    Loved the Tum part. :))

    Keep smiling like always love you tt.

    ~Nusz