Episode 14
Hey guys it’s alia back again …thanks for the beautiful comments …couldn’t update yesterday …due to some work ..
Anyways here is the story ,
@plane
Laksh made swara sit forcefully in his lap …and wrapped his arm around her
Swara (angry) : Laksh leave me …this is too much
Laksh : no baby it’s not ….in fact I have the right to
Swara (angry) : right …my foot !
Laksh smiles
Laksh : whatever u say …nothing is gonna affect me …
Swara signs impossible and tries to free herself from his grip but Laksh was tight enough ….
Laksh : see na swara beautiful is life ..
Swara : for me it’s the worst nightmare Mr Laksh ..
Laksh : oh come on… I mean u got everything which I asked for ….like u also ..
Swara (angry) : correction I didn’t come to u …it was you who took me
Laksh laughs ..
Laksh : you are very smart na
Swara rolls her eyes
There at maheshwari mansion
Ragini was working in laptop
Ragini : ya rakul listen finish that deal before the gupta’s because they are bit introvert …
Rakul : OK ma’am
Ragini : hmm did u see swara
Rakul : hmm ma’am swara went to Paris
Ragini (shocked) : Paris ????
Rakul : yes ma’am …with Laksh
Ragini (shocked) : Laksh ….oh ..
Rakul : OK ma’am I will finish the job and inform u …
Ragini nods and disconnects …
Ragini : why they both went to together ..but swara was upset with Laksh …. (confused)
Sanskar comes In with his men’s discussing …he finds Ragini In deep thoughts …
Sanskar : swa….I am sorry Ragini
Ragini comes to senses
Ragini ; huh…
Sanskar : where are u lost ….
Ragini ; hmm swalak have went to Paris
Sanskar (confused) : Paris ..??
Ragini : yes
Sanskar : but for what …..
Ragini : don’t know …
Sanskar in mind : did Laksh take her forcefully
Ragini looks at him
Soon they reached Paris …by that time swara slept … on Laksh chest
Laksh was admiring her beauty…he wasn’t able to take his eyes off her
He picks her up and comes put of the aircraft …
Many officials comes to Laksh (he is also famous yaar)
A big black Mercedes comes
Laksh makes swara lay in it and talks with the officials
Laksh : did u make the arrangements ….
Men : yes sir ….
Laksh : good
Men : ma’am is very beautiful sir …
Laksh : oh ya i know ….
Men smiles
Laksh (smirks) : did u see her
Other men’s signs him not to tell (to the men)
The men was confused
Men : yes sir …I saw her that’s y I said she is beautiful
Laksh smiles …but in fraction of second …he shoots the men …
No one cared because they know this was gonna happen …
Laksh sat in the car and they left the place ….
Laksh keeps his gun inside his side pocket …
Laksh caresses her hair
Laksh ; no one have the right to even look at u swara ….because u are Mine and always mine ..
Later that night
They were in the hotel room
Swara was still sleeping …and Laksh freshen up
He was making his hair frizzy seeing the mirror …that time swara woke up …without turning his face
Laksh ; welcome to Paris baby
Swara rubs her eyes …
Swara ; did I sleep so long
Laksh : ya but it’s OK ..I know u are tired …baby …
Swara looks on …
Laksh : erase your thoughts ..freshen up we are going out
Swara (angry) : I am not your slave Mr maheshwari…you come where ever u say
Laksh : oh baby don’t say your self that word … you are queen of Laksh ‘s empire …
Swara looks at him
Laksh : now if you don’t come by yourself ….I will have to carry u
Swara widens her eyes and quickly goes into washroom ….Laksh laughs
Maheshwari mansion
Ragini was having dinner all alone while Sanskar was denying to eat
Ragini ; you said she betrayed and then why the he’ll are u still thinking about her and spoiling your health huh ….
Sanskar : even though she played with me …I loved her truly …you know what first love is always first (sorry dolly …your title)
Ragini looks at him and then gets up ….Sanskar holds her hands
Sanskar : u didn’t eat …
Ragini ; but u didn’t eat from last night …
Sanskar : don’t think about me u eat ….now !!!
Ragini ; even though our marriage wasn’t a good one …but I have set of values ….if u eat then I will think of eating
Saying this she turns to leave…but Sanskar holds her hands and made her sit …
Sanskar took plate and kept the dishes …and started to eat ..
Ragini smiles and eats with him ….
Sanskar looks at Ragini eating
There at Paris
Swara comes out wrapped in towel and was searching for dress ….Laksh wasn’t there in room
Swara : babaji …why did u make me trap with this Laksh …now what should I wear ….
She was busy searching dress …Laksh opened the door and came in ..
He was shocked seeing swara in towel …she was so hot ….very very very ..hot ….her milky neck , hands and neck were shown ….
Swara notices laksh without looking at him
Swara : why are u seeing me like that
Laksh : don’t u feel shy
Swara : why will I …. this is not the first time I am in front of u like this I guess
Laksh feels good with her answer ..he goes towards her and back hugs …
Laksh : I love u baby ….
Swara didn’t reply …
Laksh kisses her neck ….
Swara : ya ya ..love u too (tensed)
Laksh smiles ; good girl …now get ready …
Swara gives a light smile ….and takes the dress to washroom to wear …
Laksh : you can wear here also … (teases)
Swara (fake anger) : not so funny
Laksh smiles
Precap ; swalak romance …..Ragini developing feeling for Sanskar ….Sanskar slaps Ragini
Thanks for reading …comment if u like ..
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24 Comments
Awasome Alia di.
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Miss u 3 sis
Thanks dear …miss u too
Ohhh!!! Woww amzing can’t wait for next update very keen to know why Sanskar slapped RAGINI when will start loving RAGINI? please plllzzzz upload asap please plllzzzz!!!!
Oh thanks dear ….u will get an update asap sweety
superb
Thanks j
kitni mohabbat hai …ahaan laksh…amazing episode.love swalak and ragsan..why sanky slap my baby ,dont know but i love rag personality in this ff..ragini dont hate shona
Oh sissy thanks for the comment ….I am glad u like ragini in this ff …hmm about slapping …that’s suspense …
wow !!!! loved it !!!!!!
Thanks pooja
Interesting precap
Thanks tani
superbbb dear…i loved it…omg y Sanky slap our ragini…
Thanks dear …hmm that’s suspense …
Its awesome love swalak scene..hey dear cn u pls give links of last update actually i miss 12 epi in which swasan broke up..so i dnt knw the reason fr their breakup so pls atleast give link of that epi..pls
Oh sure dear ..here is the link for the 12th episode
http://www.tellyupdates.com/obsessive-lover-alia-dolly-chapter-12/
Hope u see it or else I will give in next update
nice epi dr nice scenes of swalak
Amazing I love RagSan a lot in here, butsetes I would love to kick Laksh’s ass????
Sometimes*
its too early ragini feel for sanakar i thing they should be friends first or she feel pity on him but i miss the naughty sanskar with ragini he become too serious which is boring
awesome .loved swalak a lot.post next one soon.
Loved it yrr laksh obsession for swara awesome pllzzz post the next part soon
awesome
nice