Hi To All I am Writing an Os on Raglak name…
RAGLAK: HATE U WEDS LOVE U !!…
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KOLKATA…
: OPHELIA SOCIETY
: FLAT NO-35
Some of the people r shown attending a PARTY…
Ladies: Btw where is Mr & Mrs Maheshwari ??…For them this party is organised !!…
All looks on…
Suddenly a spotlight falls on stairs…
Raglak is shown standing…
They comes downstairs…
Ragini is in a Pink designer saree wherereas Laksh is in a Pink coat n White shirt n pants…
They both comes down..
People congratulates them !!..
Raglak thanks them !!…
Raglak puts hand on her belly signing that she is 3 months pregnant…
Laksh smiles…
And holds her…
Ragini’s pov: Dont think that…all was okay like now actually…Let me tell you the story from flashback…
1 YEAR AGO…
Two couples r shown entering with their luggage…
Ragini’s pov: I was from Kolkata’s middle class marwari family…And laksh was from jaipur’s one of the reknown Marwari family “Maheshwaris”…Our marriage was fixed by my n laksh parents…Though we had an arrange marriage…But i…okay see this !!…
Ragini enters in flat…
The whole flat is shown extremely well decorated…
Laksh fumes: Oh god…i think its all done by my family…
Ragini: But its good…
Laksh: I know its good but so boringgg…
Ragini: You found it boring ??..
Laksh: Uff…its sooo…
He throws the luggage…
And ruins all decorations…
Ragini gets upset…
Ragini in her mind: Its been 2 weeks we got married…but laksh isnt romantic…he just hates me…
As bcoz..
Laksh shouts: Raginiii…Ehh Ragini…
She runs to him…
Laksh: Listen to me carefully…ur room is in nxt corner…go nowww…
Ragini nods n leaves…
He holds an alchohol bottle n drinks with full rage…
She comes near the corner n puts her luggage…
Ragini looks at the moon n stares…
Ragini: His face is just like this moon…i wish is heart was also pure !!…But i know its all bcoz of that Kiara (Laksh’s gf)…She wanted to create rift between us thats why she came here too…
Suddenly she hears a sound from breaking thing…
She rushes to laksh room…
Ragini screams: lakshhhh…r u okay ??
She sees the pillow…bedsheets n a broken lamp on floor…
Laksh screams: Ughhhh…
He breaks a vase…
Ragini gets tearry eyed !!…
He continues drinking alchohol…
Ragini sits on floor n worries for him…
After sometime laksh too lies on bed…
Ragini closes her eyes n sleeps..
MORNING…
Sunlight falls on ragini’s face…
Her face looks like gold !..
She wakes up…
Ragini in her mind: Where’s laksh ??…Is he in Office ??…Or…
She looks at the room n sees empty…
Ragini: Where can be he ??…
She rushes towards the society compound..
Laksh is shown hugging a Beautiful girl !!..
Laksh: I need you only…no one else !!…
That girl’s (ROOP DURGAPAL) face reveals…
Ragini: Kiara…
She kisses on laksh’s cheeks…
Kiara: U know what ??…I was only waiting for you..
Kiara in her mind: And ur property n wealth…Ohh…Amazing…Very soon i will trap this handsome stupid in my trap !!…
She smirks…
Ragini looks from behind…
Laksh: You r soo beautiful…
Kiara: Really…Thankyou so much baby…
Laksh: I LOVE YOU !!…
kiara: I LOVE YOU TOO…my cupcake !!…
He smiles n gets tearry eyed !!…
Laksh: No one can take my place…
Ragini gets angry n moves back to flat…
She comes in n sits on sofa..
After sometime laksh enters…
He sees ragini on sofa but ignores her…
And tries to leave…
Ragini: Wait laksh !!…
Laksh: I have no time for u…
Ragini grabs him…
Laksh: How dare u ??…how dare u too touch me !!…
Ragini cries: You love Kiara ??…When why did you married me…
Laksh smirks: Oh…So dont u know that our marriage was forcefully done by our parents…As ur n my dad r business partners…
Ragini: I know it well…but u should understand that u r married now…
He pushes her angrilly…
Laksh: Ragini dont make me angry…already i am in a mess !!..
Ragini: Shut up !!…You make me frustated everyday but i never offenced…now u will listen to me…You have to leave kiara…she is not a good girl her character…
Laksh shouts: Raginiiii…
He tries to grab her throat but stops…
His sight falls on side table n he kicks it…
Ragini: What do u think u can only have the license to break things not me ??..
She takes a pillow throws in air…
Laksh: Ragini stop this…else…
Ragini: Else what Mr laksh Maheshwari ??…You will torture me or kill me ??…
Laksh screams: Aaaaahhh….
He rushes to the bookshelf n berserks it…
All the books falls…
Ragini: Oh…then stage 2 huh ??…
She takes a glassy vase n breaks it…
Ragini: You will answer me…whats ur wish…with whom u want to stay ??…me or that b*tch…
Laksh screams: Enoughhh…enoughhh ragini…
He rages out on the magazine rack n throws it…
Plus he punches on glass center table n breaks it….
His palm bleeds…
Ragini gets tensed…
And tries to move forward but he stops her…
Laksh: Dont u dare ??…
Ragini fumes more…
She holds the sofa n tries to berserk it but unables..
Ragini: Ugghh…
Laksh laughs at her…
Laksh: U r so weak ragini…
He comes to her n pushes her…
He holds the sofa n berserks it..
Ragini cries: Stop it laksh..
He stops..
She starts crying !!…
Laksh softly: Why dont u ignore…huh…why r u sooo irritating ??…
Ragini shouts: “I WISH I COULD IGNORE U…LIKE U IGNORE ME…. BUT I JUST CAN’T!!! ”…Bcoz I LOVE YOU LAKSH MAHEHSWARI !!!…
Laksh hears it n gets Stunned !!…
Laksh: What did u said ??…
Ragini stammers: I…I…I…LO…
She gets ashamed n runs to her room…
Laksh looks at her…
Ragini cries inside the room n closes door…
Laksh starts to clean the living room…
ON THE OTHER HAND…
Ragini cries badly ..
Laksh for the first time gets concerned for Ragini…
He comes near the door n goes to knock…
But stops…
Ragini screams: I am soo unlucky….soo sooo unlucky !!!…
Laksh overhears her words n leaves for office…
Time passes…
Ragini opens the door…
And sees the room clean…
Ragini wonders: Did…Laksh ??…
She smiles lightly n goes to kitchen !!…
: LAKSH’S OFFICE
Laksh in his office recalls Ragini’s 3 magical words…
Suddenly a man enters in his cabin !!…
Laksh: Sanky bro…
Sanskaar smiles looking at him (HERE SWARA N SANSKAAR R LAKSH’S FRIEND N FRIEND’S WIFE)..
He hugs her…
Laksh: When u came from Honeymoon ??…
Sanskaar: Last night…and in the meanwhile u got married ??…without my permission…
Laksh: Haa…Whaat ??…
Sanskaar giggles…
Swara comes in…
Swara: Hi Laksh…
Laksh: Swara…how r you ??…
Swara: I am goood…and what about ur wife Ragini ??…Is she good !!…
Laksh: Yah she is ??…
Swara: Oh thats good…btw Our Honeymoon was Superhit…London is an awsome place…Why dont u visit there with Ragini…She will be glad…
Laksh: Sure ??..
Sanskaar: Soo…why u didnt call me ??…
Laksh: But yaar u was in Honeymoon that time naa ??…
Sanskaar: Yah…yah i was joking !!…
They giggles…
Laksh smiles…
Swara: What happened laksh ??…Are u okay…
Laksh: No actually…we had an arrange marriage…and Ragini loves me…but i dont love her !!..
Swara: Soo whatt ??…You think that me n Sanskaar’s marriage was love…No dear it was also an arrange marriage…but as time changes human too changes…and i am sure one day u will accept Ragini…Like how i accepted Sanky as my Life partner…
Laksh: But i am committed to someone…She is Kiara…
Sanskaar: Ohh…Then why did u ??…
Laksh: We were forced to get married by our parents…as our parents r business partners…
Swara: Hmm…then did u judged that girl whom u love ??…
Laksh: Nope…never infact i always found her as my soulmate…
Sanskaar: Soulmates r not like this who comes in between to break there soulmates married life…where Kiara is doing all this purposely…
Laksh: What should i do now ??…
Swara: In my opinion…First let know that how much kiara loves you ??…And then Ragini’s love…But talk to ragini softly….she needs a bit of comfort…
Laksh understood…
Sanskaar: Oh okay…then i think we should leave…
Swara: Bye…
They leaves…
Laksh: Bye…
He looks on while thinking…
: OPHELIA SOCIETY
: FLAT NO-35
Laksh comes in…
Ragini: Hi Laksh…how was ur day ??…
Laksh: It was a good day…and whats in today’s dinner !!…
Ragini: Come…here is ur favourite Dal Baati Churma…
Laksh: I mean really…did u prepared this by ur own hands…
Ragini: Noo Neighbour made it…Ofcourse i did it…
Laksh: Then i have to taste…
He talks softly…
And have it…
Laksh: Mmm…Its yummilicious…
Ragini: Really…I am glad…let me bring more…
Laksh: Ragini…come naa…why dont u join me in dinner ??…
Ragini: Okay…as u say…
Ragini’s POV: On that day i saw a sudden change in Laksh…He was like saying i want to get change for ragini…
Laksh: What r u thing…Give me more…
Ragini: Umm…yah…
She passes him…
TIME ELAPSES
SOME DAYS LATER…
Ragini is now in love with Laksh…
Laksh is too getting into a caring guy…
Suddenly…
Laksh gets a call from Kiara…
Laksh: Yah Kiara..
Kiara: Lakshu…Baby i am missing u a lot..
Ragini fumes…
Laksh: Come to my home then…
Kiara in her mind: Oh…soo u want me alone…naughty !!…
Kiara: Okay then…i am coming…
He cuts call…
Laksh: Today it will be revealed that who loves me through heart core…u or kiara…
Ragini smiles…
Ragini’s POV: I understood his plan…his plan was dynamically Superb !!!…
Aftersometime…
Kiara enters…
Kiara: Hey baby…
She hugs her..
Laksh: Kiara i want u to sign on these papers…
Kiara: But which papers r these…
Laksh: Here is strictly written…That if by any reason i lose my property then u will stay with me…if i lose my job u will still support me…
Kiara stammers: Laksh…What r u saying all these ??…I…i…
Laksh: Will u sign or not ??…
Kiara shouts: No i cant…i need both of these…u n ur property…
Laksh fumes…
Ragini snatches the court papers…
Laksh stuns…
She without any reading or hesitation signs on the paper…
Kiara: Ragini…did u checked the paper ??…Here is written…
Ragini looks at kiara…
Ragini: I love laksh…Not his property !!…
Laksh smiles looking at Ragini…
Ragini: Believe me or not….but truth is truth !!…
Kiara: Laksh…i am sorry but…
He SLAPS Kiara !!!…
Ragini shocks…
Laksh: U r a cheater…You did all this to snatch my property…
Kiara shuts in shame…
Laksh shouts: I have no relation…with you…Today ragini proved that she loves me…n u…u r just a foster…GET OUT of my house n my life before i dragg you…Out !!…And never ever show me ur dirty face !!…I said Out !!…
Kiara gets angry n leaves…
Laksh closes the door…
Ragini looks on..
Laksh holds Ragini…
Laksh: I am sorry Ragini for what i did ??…I am soo sorry…
He weeps…
Ragini: No laksh….stop crying its all happened bcoz of destiny !!…Which dropped me here…
Laksh: But Ragini…
Ragini: I need u laksh…not ur sorry…ur sorry will not fulfil my dreams…like…
Laksh: Like ??…
Ragini: Well if u kiss me ??…
Laksh holds Ragini’s back n pulls her more close to him…
And liplocks her for a while…
She gets mesmerised…
He too feels sensous…
He was just chewing her lips…
She cupps his face n chews his lips…
Both gets into a sensation…
He lifts her in his arms…
And takes her to bedroom…
And puts her on bed slowly…
She was in a sleeveless blouse…Red designer saree…her hairs were open…
He was in a white transparent shirt which 3 buttons were open…and a blue denim…
He puts his finger on Ragini’s hairline n drags it to her nose…lips…neck…
He liplocks her again..
SONG:
Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re
She blushes…
He kisses on her navel n sucks it..
He pulls out the string of her blouse…
She holds his palm n kisses him there…
He passionately removes her blouse…
And kisses on her br**sts..
Soon he sucks it…
Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re
Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re
Jog laga de re
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main toh teri joganiyaan
Tu jog laga de re
Ram ratan dhan
Lagan magan man
Tan mora chandan re
Ujli kori preet piya
Satrang laga de re
Ang laga de re
Mohey rang laga de re
Main to teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re
She moans in pleasure…
He holds her legs n kisses on her knees n thigh whole heartedly…
Ragini moans: mmmm…
He removes his shirt n throws it….
She holds his pants removes it…
He pulls up the blanket…
Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re
Jog laga de re
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re
She moans: Umm…yahh…
He moans: Ragini…Ragini…”I LOVE YOU” !!…
Ragini: I LOVE YOU TOO…
They liplocks each other n gets intimate…
Ram ratan dhan
Lagan magan man
Tan mora chandan re…
It was daytime…
Thats why no candles…
But their Love Aroma was all over filled in the room…
PRESENT
Ragini’s POV: That day i asked him for kiss …but he gave me his everything !!…
Laksh: Ragini where r u baby ??…Lets cit the cake…
Swasan was too present there…
Raglak cuts there 1st Anniversary cake n feeds each other…
Swara: Congratulations…
Sanskaar: Wish u two a very happy anniversary…
They gifts Raglak a beautiful Photoframe…
Ragini: Thankuu…
She looks at Laksh…
Laksh too looks at her eyes n they gets into an eyelock !!…
6 YEARS LATER…
KOLKATA
ITS A HOLIDAY…
Ragini is cooking…
Laksh is shown running after their kids a girl n a boy…
Ragini: Come guyzz…The food is ready…
Laksh: Lets see whats today in Dinner !!…
Ragini: Today’s is special something…
They comes to dining table…
Ragini: Lehar’s favourite Malai Kofta…Rohit’s favourite Shahi panner…Laksh’s favourite Dal Baati Churma…
Laksh: Wow…lets grab it…
Kids: Lets start…
Laksh feeds Ragini…
Ragini: Mmm…Its yummy…
They have it…
Scene shifts to a wall near living where Raglak’s cute family photoframe is shown gifted by Swasan…
THE END
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