Hello everyone … Here i am #Manju with next part of #OhMyLove .. Enjoy Reading and please give ur Feedback..
#OhMyLove
Episide:3
Nxt mng
Laksh came out of MM and stood near his white BMW hurricane series.He grinned his teeth and stomped his foot.His fist was tighter.He got into his car.
@Baadi
Kitchen
Dadi was preparinge breakfast.Suddenly..
Dadi:Arrey…yeh vegetables….
“Ragini” she shouts
Ragini came down from her room.
Ragini:ji dadi ma…
Dadi:(she hands her a bag and a list) bring these vegetables from the market. (She didnt face her)
Ragini nodes and gets the bag from dadi.
Laksh reaches baadi and gets out from his car.Just the Ragini comes out of baadi entrance.Laksh moves forward while Ragini was coming from the opposite direction.Just few steps behind to see each other.finally when then came few steps closer,two men cme btwn them with a big mirror coz of which Raglak who walked opposite each to other couldn’t see each other.The men were between them with the mirror.Laksh walked in and Ragini out.
Laksh stood at the middle of baadi.He looked around and then at Ragini’s room.It was locked.A tear skipped out from his eyes.He wipped it.
He then turned towards gadodias house.He tightened his fist and grinned his teeth.
Laksh:Excuse me ladies n gentlemen….Can u please let me speak to u all for sometime
Every one gathered around him Few looked him from the upstairs too. Hearing his sound the whole baadi came there to listen him.Gadodias and dida too came out.
Dadi:kya hua…why are u gathering every one n wat u want to talk.
He was quite nd he saw swara behind dadi.She was standibg with her frowned eyes nd she ws starring laksh.Laksh wlkd to her and pulled her hands and threw her hands when she was in the middle of baadi.
Laksh looked at a woman there and asked her in a loud voice so that the whoke baadi could hear it.
Laksh:Aunty jii….what do u think about this girl(he points her)…swara (he asks casually)
Lady:achi ladki hai
Laksh:Nahiii..mmmm wait I will prove it.
All looks him confused. He moves near swara.
Laksh:This whole Kolkata knows that I Laksh Maheshwari is married to Ragini Laksh Maheshwari.Infact we got married in front of u al(he asks looking at all)
Laksh:Even u all know tat swara and sanskar are married.Firstly they came hand in hand to baadi with garlands around their neck n then again they married infront of all at Maheshwari house
Dadi:Haan laksh but y r u talking all these now.Wats the need..
Laksh:its important (he shouted )…its needed for me(like a whishper and in a broken voice)
Laksh:(He pointed Swara) this girl…now wants to marry me.This girl… Swara Sanskar Maheshwari(he stressed her name ) is already married to my brother, they are not even divorced too but this girl wants to marry me that too her husband’s brother who is already married.We all know…Ragini lost her nemory n Thats why she is away from me.
Laksh:And this girl…she is using this opportunity and trying to enter into our lives.Arrey kaisi woman hai yeh.She is dreaming of marrying me when her husband is alive and they are not even divorced.How cheap she is.Its disgusting to say that she is My Ragini’s sister.
Laksh:Just think about this…will any girl will think to do such a crap thing.
He asks the same lady whom he asked bfr
Laksh:Aunty jii…now tell me. ..do u think that this girl s good..
Lady:nahi beta…these kind of girls shouldn’t be allowed to live in this world.She shouldnt even be mentioned as a girl.
Another lady:How mother was just like the daughter is now. Sharmishta took Janki’s place and now this girl is doing just like how her mother did
Laksh was looking swara with a smirk in his face.The gadodias and dida were trying to stop all others but it ws in vein.
Another lady:Arrey swara dont u feel shamed for ur doings…u r married and ur thinking for ur sec marriage before ur divorce that too with the man who married ur sister.
Another lady:No..No…this girl shouldnt be mentioned as Ragini’s sister.who will let someone to fill her mother’s place.But ragini did that.This swara snd sharmishtamust be thankful to her butswara….chi chi I feel its sinful to even say ur name.
Laksh:These talks will never affect her..I will blacken her face now.
All looked him.The gadodias,swara n dida were shocked.
A lady:Before that..(she stepped forward) she slapped her hard.swara held her cheek.
Dadi kept her hand on mouth.shomi and dida went near swara.Shekar n dada were too shocked.
Laksh smirked….
Swara had her eyes red shot.She starred Laksh.Laksh had the same smirk and he felt like he achieved something high.He was damn happy for swara.
Laksh:one more thing is left…
He moved to her and looked at her.Both wre starring each othr like they would kill ech other now.With no time a slap sound was heard.Swara held her other cheek.This slap was more harder than the previous one.
Laksh:This is for my Ragini (he grinned his teeth)
And he took a pack of black powder from his pocket.He opened it still staring her.
Dadi who saw it came to him.
Dadi:Laksh…
She was interrupted. …
Laksh:please dadi ma..plz move back…she deserves this.
Dadi caught his hand but he was too strong. WHEN his hand moved near his face Dadi took her hand back.Laksh blackened her face and smiled now.Whole baaadi laughed at her looking how ashamed she is.
The ladies came to laksh and took the powder and did their part.They too blackened her face.
Laksh stepped bck with a smile on his lips.He was about to step out still facing her (he moved in backward direction)
Swara:laksh …(she spoke in her stern voice)u didnt do good with me
Laksh smiled heavily and nodded his head and moved backward. ..
He moved out of baadi and when he turned he bumped into some one.Both fell down.laksh was at top and the person was at down.Laksh lifted his head.
bheegi bheegi saDkon pe main
It was a girl n her hair covered her face.Laksh moved her hair
tera intezaar karoon
dheere dheere dil ki
He was stunned in her beautiful eye…
zameen ko
tere hi naam karoon
Even Ragini was looking into his eyes forgetting the world.
khud ko main yoon kho doon
Laksh smiled without his knowledge…
ke phir na kabhi paaun
haule haule zindagi ko
ab tere hawaale karun
Their beautiful eye lock was broken when Laksh heared dp’s voice…
Both Raglak stood up.Ragini took the vegetables inside the bag n Laksh helped her.Ragini thanked him nd moved in.
Laksh was smiling like a mad..He was watching her from back.
When Ragini went in all were bck to their work.Ragini handed the bag to dadi and went to her upstairs room.
Laksh was tapped on his shoulder by adarsh.The whole Maheshwaris were stnding there unaware of the things that happened.They went in calling Laksh to come in.Laksh taught something and followed them.
They entered in…
Laksh again clled every one at baadi to listen him .Except swara and Ragini all came to listen him.Laksh looked around to find his heart throb.
He again shouted calling every one.
A lady:beta all have come….tell whats the matter now…is anything left tht u forgot to tell us…
Maheshwaris frowned their eyes looking at Laksh.
Laksh noticed their gazes and acted like he didn’t see them.
Laksh:no aunty jii all havent come.. (just then Ragini comes out from her room and looks down)
Laksh notices her and smiles.
Laksh:(He remembered how he took Ragini from badi with dadi’s permission. N how he asked her hand in front of whole baadi)I… Laksh Maheshwari… (he paused) will never marry Mrs.Swara Sanskar Maheshwari..She will never be my wife…And….I want my babi to live with my brother at MM.. (his voice was so loud)
Ragini:*Mrs.Swara Sanskar Maheshwari* …y does she wants to marry someone else when her husbands name is still along with her name (she thought)
Maheshwaris were shockedwith his speech..
The screen freezed…
Credit – #manju
30 Comments
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