#OhMyLove…
Episode:4
Hearing Laksh’s speech swara too now came out washing her face.
Swara:y should I listen to u laksh
Laksh and every one turned hearing her..
Laksh(he made a Ahaan act with his head movement and facial expression).He turned towards the lady who slapped her.The lady understood him.
Lady:yeeee swara…do u think we will let u ti stay here..never
The whole baadi shouted against her.Laksh smirked seeing her.He felt the he had accomplished his mission and that was clearly visible in his face.
Swara agreed now wth no choice and she said she will leave tmr mng.
Dp asked wat was happening even other Maheshwaris wanted to know that.Laksh replied he will tell everything once they are home.
Meanwhile swara took the lamp which was lit up for the tulsi plant at baadi centre.She poured it behind Laksh and put some brojen glass pieces there.She did these without anyone’s knowledge.She waited for Laksh to step back.
Dida folded her hands and asked other baadi ppl to leave.They left….
Ragini was watching everything from up.She taught Swara is wrong.She didn’t notice when Swara was planing against laksh.She was lost in her thoughts then.
Finally. …Laksh stepped back.He was on the ground in fraction of seconds.
Bfr he and any one else could react..every body heard a voice.
“Lakshhhhh….”
All turned their gaze towards the voice.
..
(Jeen laga hoon tune) Ho ha….ho played
Ragini whi was rushing down.
Jeene laga hoon
Pahle se zyada
Pahle se zyada
Tumpe marne laga hoon
She was hell worried.It was clearly visible in her eyes and facial expressions.It was noticed by red abd tear filled eyes of Laksh when she reached down and was near him on the ground.He was on the ground lying….
Mai mera dil or tum ho yahaan
Phir kyun ho palkein zukaye wahaan
Tumsa haseen pahle dekhaa nahin
Tum iss se pahle the jaane kahaan
Ragini caught his hands and looked the injuries on his hand and the partially inserted glass pieces that pierced inside his skin here and there from half down his elbow to palm.Laksh was lost in her eyes.He was reading the love and care fr him fom her eyes.He slided his head on right-back side and tears came out from his eyes.
Jeene laga hoon
Pahle se zyada
Pahle se zyada
Tumpe marne lagaa..
Rehte ho aake joh tum pass mere
Tham jayein pal ye waheen
Bas main yeh sochun
Song stopped..
Laksh thought he was really lucky and blessed to get Ragini in his life.
Ragini was shedding her tears.The gadodias and Maheahwaris didnt know whether to pull her away from Laksh or not.They simply stood on their places.Swara stood without caring for Laksh and Ragini.
Ragini stood from her place and ran towards her room.Laksh looked from her behind.Ap came forward near Laksh but he showed his right palm to her indicating to stop there.
Laksh thought,”even now ur unconditional love for me is not changed Ragini”.
His damn red and moist eyes were shown.His eyes had tears that were ready to come out at any moment.
Ragini came running with the frst aid box.She sat down near him.
Ho ha hoo…ho tune played throughout…
she lifted his left hand that was injured.She tried to take those partially inserted glass pieces but her hands were trembling.Laksh noticed it.
He pulled those glass pieces one by one.Ragini looked his hand actions like a kid.Laksh looked her then the wound…then ragini…then wound…
When Laksh finished it…
Song cntnd….
Sochun main tham jaye pal yeh
Pas mere jab ho tum
Sochun main tham jaye pal yeh
Pas mere jab ho tum
Ragini looked at laksh like a kid when he looked her she put her head down and she took cotton from the box.She cleaned his wound.She blowed the wound.
Chalti hai sansein
Pahle se zyaada
Pehle se zyaada
Dil theharne lagaa
Laksh just looked into her eyes.He wanted to hug her now and cry now on her shoulders.He forwarded hus right hand to hug her but he stopped making a fist.
Tanhaai mein dhoonde tujhe dil
Har pal tujhko soche
Tanhaai mein dhoonde tujhe dil
Har pal tujhko soche
Tanhaai mein dhoonde tujhe dil
Har pal tujhko soche
Tanhaai mein dhoonde tujhe dil
Har pal tujhko soche
Milne lage dil,
Pehle se zyada
Pehle se zyada,
Ishq hone lagaa..
Ho o.. ha aa…
She rolled a cream coloured roll around his wound with medicine dipped cotton inside it.
She lifted her eyes to meet those painful eyes that was already lost in her teary eyes.Bfr they could meet.Ragini was pulled back.It was Swara.
Swara:leave to ur room now. (she Ordered)
Ragini noded and left from their crying.Laksh grinned his teeth and stood up tokill swara now.But bfr he could do that Ap came to his and careased his cheek with teary eyes.
Laksh was frustrated. His life was crying bfr him but he couldn’t confront her.His heart painef abd that was visible in his eyes and face.
He left from baadi…
Dida explained what all happened with swara.Dp apologiesed on behalf of Laksh and Maheshwaris left from there.
Ragini Sat on the bed.
Aaaa……
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushqil
Do lafzoon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik ladka ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi
Do lafzoon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
She felt her cheeks wet.She touched the tears with her hand and saw her hand which had tears.Just then something flashed in her mind.she realised that she cried for Laksh.
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushqil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik dooje se huey juda Jab ik dooje ke liye bane
She thought:wound for him….pain for me (she looked the tear drops on her hand )she was lost in her thoughts.
Song stopped
Laksh was driving. …
Laksh:when u r wounded….dard (pain) mujhe hota hai… (he was crying)
Song cntd
Aaa…
Tumse dil jo lagaya toh jahaan maine paaya
Kabhi socha na tha yun meelon door hoga saya
Kyun khuda tune mujhe aisa khwaab dikhaya
Jab haqiqat mein usey todna tha
Ragini opened her wardrobe and found a wrist band and a coat.she took them from there.A breez blew over her face.She touched the coat with her palm.She felt an unknown feel in her heart.
Aaa…
Tumse dil jo lagaya toh jahaan maine paaya
Kabhi socha na tha yun meelon door hoga saya
Kyun khuda tune mujhe aisa khwaab dikhaya
Jab haqiqat mein usey todna tha
Laksh stopped his car.He touched his left hand that was injured.He had a flash of ragini’s face that he saw when Ragini was treating his wound.
Ragini kept the band and coat inside the wadrobe.She closed her wardrobe.
Aa….
Ik dooje se huye judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushqil
Do lafzon mein yeh Bayaan na ho paaye
Laksh smiled…amongst his tears.
Laksh:Mera bachchaa…(he paused) first it was u who cried for me.. and now… see…. its my turn.This is called KARMA (He smiled sarcastically)
He was home.He was in his room.
Dp shouted his name at top of his lungs.
Laksh came down and stood bfr him like nothing caring his dad’s anger.
Dp:do u think what u did with swara was right…
Laksh(he took a sigh):if u all think that what u are
Up to do with me and swara was right…then wat I did ws also right
Dp:Laksh dont u dare to rise ur voice
Laksh:if I rise will u throw me out from home again papa….
Dp:behave ur self laksh.I am ur papa
Laksh:but u didnt behave like that.Hiw did u think of getting me married to Swara.Did u ask me papa.U r just imposing all your thoughts on me.
Laksh:I am Laksh….ragini’s Laksh(seemed like he was proud to say that)….Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari is my wife (with the same grin he had just before).And papa nobody can take Ragini’s place in my life.
He moved from there…but he stopped to say these lines…
Laksh (he turned):If any one (he showed his finger) If any one thinks of getting me married to someone else other than Ragini… (he paused)….that will be d last day for me in this home.And papa…….Nor u r my mastwr nad I am it dog to obey all ur comments.
He left…to his room.
Dp was in hell anger.The screen freezed on Dp’s face and splitted into two showing two angry faces of Dad-Son duo.
Nxt mng….the sun rise was shown…
It was around 7 pm…
Laksh and dadi were facing each other.
Dadi:Laksh…how can I believe u.Swara cant do this..she can never harm any one…
Laksh smiles sarcastically..
Laksh:If u can believe swara then why cant u believe Ragini dadi ma…
Laksh:Dadi….if Ragini was wrong…then will I support her now. ….just think dadi……what did swara say….she loves her sister.she didn’t want to spoil her sister’s life…she said she doesnt love me and she doesnt want me In her life when Ragini’s truth came out.Then y does she wants to marry me nw If she really cared for Ragini why did she come to me to prove that Ragini was wrong.She said I m nt imp for her but Ragini and her parents are imp for her.If she really thought that she must have gone to her parents not to me.If u dont want to believe me its ok….but plz dadi (he folded his hands) dont punish Ragini.
He moved from there.He stopped in the middle.He turned…
Laksh:Dadi…..It was me who hated her the most. Now….(he paused) its me who loves her the most…
He turned and walked.
Dadi:Damad jii….
Hearing this Laksh turned with a smile.
The screen shifted….
It was d time..finally swara was infront of MM.Dida and the gadodias with Ragini was behind her.
The whole Maheshwaris were giving her a warm welcome.Two people among them didbt like it. It was Dadi and Laksh.
Swara stepped in after Ap’s aarti.Directly she was taken to the temple in.
All had their closed eyes and folded hands.But Laksh was only aseing Ragini all d time.
Laksh(in mind):Ragini..soon u will be back here as Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari…
Swara got blessings from Ap-Dp, Ram-Sujata.
Dadi signalled Ragini to take blessings from Ap and Dp.Ragini noded and went to Dp.She bent down but Dp moved back.
Ragini felt worried.she Stood up.Dadi and laksh felt bad but swara was happy.
Laksh got an idea.
He called Ap,”Maa”.He went near her and caught her.
Laksh:Ragini…come…take Maa’s blessings.Come here.
Ragini looked dadi.Dadi signalled her to go with a smile.Ragini smiled and moved to Ap.
Laksh (in a low tone):Maa plz…plz maa
Ragini came near them and she bent down to take blessings.
Laksh again pleaded silently to Ap.Ap closed her eyes and hesitatingly moved her hand forward.
Ap:khush raho beta
Only RagLak and dadi smiled while others were uninterested.
Laksh thanked Ap silently.Ragini stood up with a mesmering smile.
Laksh (in mind):This smile…to bring this smile on u…If it means to fight with this whole world….I will Ragini….only for u mera bachchaa…(he wiped his tears without anybody’s knowledge.)
But dadi noticed him.
Dadi (in mind):Hey bhagwan!!keep my children happy.
The screen freezed on Dadi’s face and splitted into three showing smiling faces of Ragini at middle, Laksh at right and Dadi at Left.
Credit – #manju
29 Comments
awesome waiting for next part
Happy happy birthday my doll teju??????
Awesome episode dear raglak Awesome lucky love towards her was speechless..
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
nice
Amazing part nd can’t wait for next
Amazing
Loved it
That was an amazing update dear…
Awesome superb amazing
Awesome dear
Amazing
fabulous dear….loved it alot…eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear…
Awesome
Awesome……
As usual outstanding episode dear and loved Raglak scenes. Laksh love and care for Ragini is so cute. Eagerly waiting for more Raglak scenes and Please post next part ASAP
This ff is simply AWESOME!!!!!!!!! I love this ff very much because of Laksh’s mature character and his love for Ragini!!! I love the way Laksh said ‘It was me who hated her the most, Now… Its me who love her the most’!! These simple lines are really superb and heart touching. Really awesome story!! Please next part soon!!
Cute episode
Simply superb di…lovely raglak
lovely
Awesome
Interesting
Superb
Awesome dear
Fantastic really fantastic
This FF never fails to make me crazy with low and joy. This is the Laksh we all wanted. Thanks a lot Manju???
Awesome
U nailed it
Awesome, loved it. Next part soon pls
Fabulous dear
nice xx