Hi guyzz.. I am new to TU. I would just like to Thank Shradha di, Verna di, Nilash, Radhika sharma , Astra bcoz..by reading their works I Inspired in writing and thus posting for you peeps.
Plzz do ignore grammatical and spelling errors…
After seeing the spoilers and upcoming twist..suddenly a spark came in my mind..
Here is the same plot as that of DBO except the fact that Gauri is really pregnant. All come to know that Gauri is pregnant.
Gauri feel very sad with the words uttered by Om.(She cannot be pregnant and if so..its not my child she is pregnant with). These words echos her ears continuously.
Lately Om Confirms her pregnancy with the doctor and is shocked but some where in his heart he is emotionally moved by the fact that he is gonna become a Father.
Om sees Gauri sobbing in her room. He feels guilty for uttering such words but he doesn’t find it necessary to apologise to her. At the time he over hears Gauri’s murmur.
“What to do sankarji. I don’t know why..but he has fixed himself with such a bad opinion on me. I don’t know why he has such a opinion about me. If I am pregnant it would be with his child naa… but why did he say such. I cant bear his words. Its my mistake. When he neared me I should have stopped him but I was helpless after all he is everything to me. I wish my maa is there her to console me right now. I am missing my mom a lot. It would be Nice to meet her at this situation as she is my strength and she would have been happy with this news”
On hearing dis Om felt very bad for his words and decided to takecare of her. His heart slightly melted on the fact that she could not be with her mum in this condition. So he decide to take her to her mum.
Gauri slept in her Knees while sobbing. On noting dis Om took her in his arms nd slowly laid her on the bed. Gauri murmurs “Why did you you say such about me Omkaraji. I am not such a person..” Saying dis gauri dozed off while Om is in deep guilt realizing the fact that his words has hurted her much. He caressed her hair and Dozed off down to the bed.
Next morning.
Gauri wakes up and is shocked to find herself in bed. Lately she saw Om sleeping down and get sad reminiscing his words. Gauri decides not to show her face to him and anger him. She moves into the bathroom to get fresh.
Om wakes up and finds Gauri missing. “Where is my child’s mom”. Without his knowledge he smiles on the fact that he accepted his child.
Gauri comes out while Om is taking his dress from the cupboard. He finds her eyes still red due to continuous crying.
Om: Gauri, after having breakfast get ready we are going out.
Gauri(with sad tone without facing him):Hmmm
Later both completed their breakfast and Om informed everyone and took Gauri with him.In the car Gauri not even uttered a single word and was just looking out through the window. Om found her actions weird.
Finally they reached their destination. It is the hospital where gauri’s mom treatment is going on. Gauri has no clue that why Om has brought her here.
Later they enter the hospital ward and meet her mom. Gauri is happy to see her mom conscious and fine. She ask about Om who was standing beside her. Gauri narrates everything from their marriage till her pregnancy. Gauri’s mom was filled with happiness on Hearing the good news. Her joy was unbound and the spark in her eyes described how she longed for her daughters happiness.
Gauri went out to meet the doctor about her health. Meanwhile Gauri’s mom call Om near her.
GM(Gauri’s mom): Thank you beta. You accepted my guddiya even after knowing what Kaali did with her.
Om(confused): What are you saying maaa?
GM: haan beta. U never know whatever my doll faced bcoz of him. He blackmailed her to marry him by keeping me in his clutches. But my gauri’s belief won. That’s why she has got such a caring husband like you.
Om looked further more confused. By the time Gauri’s friend Ragini whom he kept for caretaking Gauri’s mom came.
Ragini: Jiju..you here..How are you? And how is my Gauri?
Om: yeah she is fine.
Then Om called ragini to the other side and enquired about the words Gauri’s maa was saying.
Ragini explains how Kaali Thakur forced her for marriage by taking GM custody. “My Gauri smiled at all his touches and tortures just to save her mother from torture. She warned Kaali not to misbehave with her before marriage by blackmailing that she will die.”She then narrates all the incidents happened back in Bareily with Gauri.
Om was able to connect all the dots and finally he understood his mistake. He was horrified on how cruel he can be to an innocent soul like Gauri. Thinking his behavior towards Gauri his eyes filled, but soon he controlled them hearing Gauri’s voice.
Gauri: Maaa..i just talked to the doctor. He said you will be fine very soon.
GM: When I have a son like son-in-law then definitely I would be fine soon.
Gauri: MAAAA…(teasingly jealous tone)
Ragini: wow..Gauri Kumara Sharma is jealous… Unbelievable Gauri..are you jealous of Jiju..
Gauri turned silent. Om understood the reason for her silence. Then soon they bid bye to GM and went to the car.
While returning Gauri was so happy and felt more grateful to God for her mom’s betterment. Meanwhile Om was lost in pool of thoughts especially Guilt for his behavior and how he refused to accept the truth. He finds himself melting for Gauri’s selfless character and is completely lost in her thinking. The silence was broken by Gauri.
Gauri: Thank you Omkaraji for making me meet my mom.
She just said them facing his eyes and finds him tensed. She was confused whether she should ask him or not. But to her surprise Om stopped the car and dragged her out. Gauri shivers by his sudden action thinking that her voice angered him.
Gauri: I am sorry if I upset you with my voice. It’s just I wanted to say thank you bcozz.. I missed my mom so much and you have helped me unknowingly by taking me to her.. Sorry Omkara ji ..I will not talk hereafter.
Om’s heart pricked by her innocence. He moves near her more close and cups her face. Gauri was shocked by his behavior. He raised her chin and made her face him. Gauri was able to feel his guilt from his eyes but could not understand why..
Om moved more closer… Gauri was breathing heavily due to the proximity and gets lost in his eyes. When Om neared her face she came to reality and jerked from his grip.
Gauri: I think we should leave to house
Om (with at most love): Gauriiiiiiiii
Gauri was shocked to hear her name with such care. Om came forward and kneeled in front of her, took her hand and cupped his face with it. Meanwhile Gauri could not even understand what’s going on and she was hell shocked.
Om: I know Gauri you are shocked. But believe me I didn’t mean to hurt you. I am really sorry it’s my mistake.
Gauri thinks that Om is apologizing for his harsh words he said yesterday.
Gauri: It’s nothing like that Omkaraji. I know you are shocked with my pregnancy news and that’s why reacted like that. No problem.
Om thinks “she doesn’t even know that I am apologizing for everything I have done to her.”
Om stands up and move closer to her. He holds her by her waist and moves near her face. Gauri feels restless and stammers…”Ommmmm..Kaa…raaa…..jiiiii….” Suddenly to her surprise Om caught her by his lips. Gauri’s eyes widened with shock, she tries to stop him but she can’t as she can feel the love in his grab. Om too kissed her passionately with love. All of sudden the part away due to suffocation.
Gauri in her mind “What was that”
Om in his mind “Sorry Gauri, I touched you forcefully but I couldnt control my emotions and was not able to face my guilt”. Om tried to start the convo but..
Gauri: Enough..Its has gone too much Omkaraji. Whenever you need you come close, do as you wish then question over me and my character.
Om tries to explain.. But gauri shouts.. “Why are you doing dis with me. Just bcoz I love you doesn’t means you can play with me and my feelings”. Saying this she breakdown infront of Om and fall on her knees.
Om was not able to see her in this state and was shocked with her confession. Om too kneels down and says “I know Gauri I have hurt you much with my undermined words. I am sorry. Sorry for not understanding ur goodness, sorry for not listening to you, sorry for doubting your innocence, sorry for questioning your character, sorry for all the accusations without knowing the truth about you and kaali, sorry for nearing you without your permission, sorry for the pain I have caused you till now, sorry for hurting you Gauri, sorry”
By saying dis he emotionally breaks down in front of her. Gauri who cannot see her husband breaking apart move towards him and cups his face. On feeling her soft hand over his cheeks, he couldn’t control anymore and hugs her by placing his head over her heart and cries his heart out.
Gauri pacifies Om like a small child. Later Om compose himself.
Om: Sorry..Actuallyyyyy..
Gauri: Its okay… Lets go home. Its already time.
Saying this she stands up and move into the car. Om was left with no option he too sat inside and drove off to OM.
Both didn’t utter anything nor faced each other. Gauri tried her best to avoid Om and never went to the room as she felt that she was confusing his feelings for her and thought that he is doing this all out of sympathy.
Meanwhile Om was lost in her character and goodness both when he found her as chulbul and Gauri.
But he could connect with only one thing. He decided to think about it later.
Its night. Gauri as usual takes a glass of cold water for Om. On entering she found the room dark. She switches the light and turns but some one held her eyes closed. She could feel that it is Om.
Gauri “Ömkaraji..what are you doing.. Leave me”
Om: Just few minutes baby
Gauri (in mind) “Baby!!! Achaanak..issko kya hogaya?”
Om takes the glass of water from her hand and bring her to his room corner. Later he takes off his hand from her eyes. Gauri slowly opens her eyes and is dumbstruck on her vision.
She saw a cradle made out of silver (after all they are the Oberois) completely decorated with flowers toys and baby stuffs.
Om who was standing beside her hugged her from the back.
Om: How is my surprise? I am sorry Gauri I forgot everything happened between us but believe me I didn’t mean to hurt you. Will you forgive your Jatadhari pati?
Gauri was emotionally moved by his actions and words. She was speechless. She turned and hugged him . He found solace in her arms and she felt secure in his embrace. Both lost themselves in eachother.
Om: I love you Gauriiii
Gauri was shocked. She released herself from his hold and pushed him.
Gauri: What are you saying?
Om: I know its hard for you to believe, but I really love you
Gauri: Are you in love with me or your child’s mother. Are you doing this out of sympathy?
Her words pricked Om’s heart and he held her shoulder with anger.
Om: Do you really think it’s a sympathy. Can’t you see in my eyes?
Gauri: Yeah ofcourse I can see the guilt in your eyes, but love…
OM tightens his hold over her shoulders. She winces this made him realize what he is doing. He backed off and held his hands behind his ears and says sorry.
Gauri is moved with his humbleness. She removes his hand from ears and cups his face and questions him.
Gauri: But I couldn’t understand the fact how you realized this all of a sudden
Om: Teri maa…
Gauri: what my maa?
Om then narrates the hospital scene on knowing the truth and his apology afterwards for all his actions which she misunderstood for.
Gauri is about to shoot the nxt question but Om stops it by placing his fingers in his lips “shhhhhh”.
Om: enough Gauri. (he takes her hand and place it over his chest) Cant you hear my heart beat beating faster by your touch. Cant you feel the love in its beat and realize it from my eyes.
Gauri is awwstruck with happiness. She kissed his chest and hugged him tighter.
Gauri: I love you too Omkaraji
Om: ( Hugs her more tight) I love you Gauri. I will never let you down. I trust you and your beliefs.
Gauri is overwhelmed with happiness. After few Minutes she broke the hug.
Gauri: Shall we sleep now
Om: sure(bends towards her belly and caresses it) Shall we sleep my choti.
Gauri chuckles and smile through her tears.
Both headed towards the bed. Om asked Gauri to sleepover bed with him. First she hesitates later she lays down as he insist.
Om moves near her and back hugs her. Gauri shivers in his warmth lately feel good in his embrace. Om kept his hand over her belly and said “ I will take good care of you and our choti Gauri. Just believe in me and trust me plzz”
Gauri: My trust for you will never break at any cost Omkaraji. I will be always with you in every part of your lyf.
Om: Gauriiiiii
Gauri: Haan..
Om: Until now I couldnt figure out one thing. (hesitatingly)Its justtttt
Gauri: Say it. I will not misunderstand you
Om: After knowing the truth I was able to connect every thing and found it was not your fault except….
(he hesitated but blurted) Why did you push Buamaa into pool that day?
Gauri was shocked by the fact that he visualized that scene.
Gauri: So this is why you wanted me to get arrested
Om(hesitatingly): Yessss
Gauri: Do you trust me?
Om: I dooo, but how does dis connect with this?
Gauri turns towards Om, places her hand over his cheeks and says “ just wait for one night, I will answer all ur doubts, now just have a beautiful sleep” Saying this she kissed his forehead and cuddled into him. Om too held her by her waist and they dozed off.
Next morning.
As the sunrays strikes, our lovebirds sleep get disturbed. Gauri wakes first and reminisces all the incidents happened yesterday and smiled. She then got off and went to freshen up.
Slowly Om wakes up and is dumbstruck with Gauri’s beauty. Gauri was wearing a white long salwar. She was drying her hair with towel. Om’s heart races seeing water droplets all over her neck and back. He slowly gets up and hugs her from back.
Gauri is shocked but later composes herself in his hold and continues drying her hair.
Gauri: Omkaraji, I think you should also freshen up
Om: what is so hurry in it?
Gauri: Omkaraji….( Gauri touches her tummy) see choti, your father has started his antics in the morning itself. Ask him to be in control as you are also hearing us.
Om: Waise…choti.. you will be dads princess so you should be in my side
Gauri: Accha..You started teaming up even in womb.. Let me see what happens after your arrival.
Om: What will happen? You will team up with chotu after choti’s arrival (saying this he smirks at gauri)
Gauri blushes “ Basss.. Bahut hogya aapki romance.. Go and get ready” saying this she pushed him inside the bathroom and handed him his towel.
Om(naughtily): wait, I will bath then teach you a lesson.
Gauri smiles at him and gets ready. She then prays to god for all her happiness and keeping her belief alive in all circumstances. She then takes sindhoor in her hand and is about to apply her hairline. But was stopped by a hand.
Its none other than our Omie.
Om: from today its not your duty to apply sindhoor but my right to fill it in your maang.
Gauri is overwhelmed with happiness and just gets lost in his eyes. Om fills gauri’s hairline( Mangalam bahgwan Vishnu plays as bgm). Gauri closes her eyes as she feels her hairline filled.
Om then kisses her forehead. Gauri is still emotional about his words and still lost in his eyes. To light the mood he smirks and says “ If you stare me in towel like this then my mood will change pagli” and holds her cheeks.
Hearing this Gauri comes to her senses and turns away in shy and asks him to get ready and goes out of the room.
Om is getting ready and gauri comes in with coffee. Om take the cup and naughtily stares Gauri. He nears her for but it was disturbed by a dragging sound.
Om: What is this sound in morning?
Gauri senses the sound and asks “ Do u trust me Omkaraji”
Om: Haan gauri. But achanak .. Y are you asking it
Gauri: Come with me. Don’t say anything or ask me. Just come with me and see.
Gauri holds Om by his wrist and take him with her. She takes him to the same dark room where Buamaa is seen singing lullaby front of the cradle. Om is about to talk. Gauri closes his mouth with his hand and signs him to listen.
Buamaa: Ratan..you will come back. Gauri is pregnant with Omkie’s child. You are reborn to come to your mumma. Don’t worry after your arrival We both will punish Omkara.. and sings Tu aayega aur Omkara jayega
Gauri feels something moist in her hands and turns to see. She sees Om breakdown due to Buamaa’s words and actions. She wipe his tears and take him to their room.
Om is shocked and sobs by sitting in the bed. Gauri comes near him with a glass of water.
Gauri: Have water Omkaraji, You will feel better.
Om breaksdown and hugs her by tummy and cries “ Its bcoz of me Buamaa lost Ratan. I am responsible for her state. I just give pain to all that’s why nothing good happens with me”
Gauri pacifies him by combing his hair with her fingers. After he cried out his heart she starts..
Gauri: Omkaraji… There is something you should know about. Yesterday you was not able to connect the dot about me pushing buamaaji..(om look into her face confusingly)
“After you drank the juice even after my saying, you were not in your sense and you were so close to me. By your closeness I lost myself in you and thus we united that day. But after realizing what has happened between us I cried and ran out. That time Buamaaji came to me and asked why am I tired and enquired about you. Then I realized she has given you spiked drink bcoz of which all this happened. To find out what is her profit in our union I followed her and found what you saw today. Then I came back to our room and saw you trying to reminiscing what has happened between us. You could remember only few and apologized for that. I was completely shocked knowing that you don’t remember them and could not respond. I thought of leaving you after proving Buamaaji’s true intentions. That’s why while you were apologizing I asked you a promise. But when I called you, you were not picking up. I called you bcoz Buamaaji was confessing all her motives and suddenly she pushed me into the pool. She pushed me into pool bcoz I lied to her that I cant become a mum. She realized that I can’t bring her Ratan so may me out of your lyf she tried to harm me and you must have watched us in such a condition and must have misunderstood about me”
Om could not believe his own eyes and ears. He is trying to register the fact that Buamaa wanted to harm him which he cannot believe until now.
Gauri(caressing his hair and cupped his face): Omkaraji.. I know it is hard for you to believe. But don’t misunderstand Buamaaji. She is mentally affected by the loss of his son. We can cure her. Don’t worry. Its not your mistake in the first place. Its Destiny playing games with us. I believe that whatever happened is for good. Just get her treated and everything will be fine. She will see her Ratan in you
Om hugged her by her waist.
Om: Gauri.. forgive me… I misunderstood you.. I …. I …
Gauri: Koi baat nahi hai.. Now just get freshen up and have breakfast. Then we will decide what to do (saying this she wiped his tears and kissed his forehead and went to get breakfast).
After her arrival, Om was not in a mood to have breakfast. Gauri made him sit near her and fed him with her hands.
Om hugged her and said “ You are the best thing that has ever happened to me in my life next to my brothers. I love you Gauri”
That day Om explained everyone about buamaa’s illness and admitted her in a mental asylum for the treatment.
3 days later
Morning
Gauri: Omkaraji…
Om(from bathroom): wait I am coming. Only I should do it.
Gauri murmered “ why is he so adamant.. Jatadhari hippy”
Om: I could still hear you
Gauri bites her tongue and move towards mirror. After putting up all accessories she was waiting for him to fill her hairline. Om comes “ Hello, Jatadhari hippy ki patni ji”. Gauri giggles by his comment.
Later he fills her hairline and kisses her forehead and then kisses her tummy.
Few months later
Gauri gave birth to a cute girl. Om was jumping in joy and distributed sweets to the whole hospital .
Later he goes near Gauri, takes the baby in his arms, sit beside and says “ Thank you for this special gift pagli.. You, me and my choti…” and kisses Babys tiny fingers and forehead.
Gauri: she looks exactly like you Omkaraji
Om: with your cute smile
One week later
Gauri: Kitna cute name na.. Omkaraji.. Omika suits our choti well
Om(sits near gauri): Hmmm.. Afterall its my selection
Gauri: yes.. You proved you are artistic in every field
Om: I think still one thing is yet to be proved
Gauri: What?
Om: Our choti came…(He slowly moves his hands over Gauri’s back and teasingly) I think its time for our chotu
Gauri (blushes): Aapp..you start anywhere… (she quickly pecks his cheeks) Still its not time you have to wait.
Om(pouting): I think sooo and caringly hugs her by one side…
They see themselves in a mirror… and the screen freezes with Gauri holding Omika and Om looking at his baby by back hugging Gauri by waist.
Finally my first rendition is complete. Sorry Guyzz if I bored you much. I didn’t add any Shivika or Rudy scenes sry for that.
Thank you for reading. Just comment if you felt it worth or u can criticize my mistake too. Thank you once again.