Sorryyy frndzz for making angry in Om n Dev OS..I just need ur happiness while reading bt the previous OS fails to make.. sometimes my hope needs review even -ve reviews,actually Itz +ve for me..to enrich..
Here,I add DevShi..They enter in the nxt end part…Itz a 2shot story..n DevShi=Luv..
With 100%simple….
Om’s Luvable Jingle Bells.. .
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Frndzz..I m hearing #MirzyaTitleTrack…now…The story too starts with the track in background..
A one way road to a city…
(Intro of Om…..)
In moonlight,A long haired man travels towards tat city with his bag…
While his legs touched the entrance of the city,He just kneels down n see above..n closed the eyes..
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He:(thinks) “Ishaana”(Breeze of Air…His Hairs r flying)
(His Eyes Open)
MelodicBeat plays in Background…
A jingle bell’s sound also coming…
He wear a very small bell in his hand….Sound comes from tat bell..
He sees a veiled girl in front of her..Actually He strts imagining..
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She:”Om..”…
Again his jingle bell ring..
The girl disappears…
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Om seeing the road n stands up n he strts walking towards the city..
His right side ear bead r lightly seen out in moonlight..
He walks..slowly…
He finally reached a place full of huts in which many people r making masks of animals…They surprisingly sees Om..
Om goes towards the huts.. .n his jinglebell rings for his every move…
A shop full of Rings,Ear Beads,Ornaments…Gifts..
Om buy some charts from tat shop…
He takes his painting brush n draw her lips..n Earrings..(None other than Ishaana)..
The clock Rings.. .
Om sees the time n make some yellow n Orange color lines on his face like a Lion…
Loc:Near…
Many people r dancing by surrounding fire…
A girl makes pinkish red color lines on her face…
Her hairs seems curly n she wears earbead on her left ear only..
Om enters the place..
n goes towards her….
Om on her ears:”Saahibaa..Ur Mirzya comes here to see U”…
The Jingle bell on his head rings…
She suddenly turns.. .
(Again the flute version of the song in background)….
Someone near Om hear Om’s saying”Ur Mirzya is coming”…The news reached the last one there rapidly..”Mirzya Comes…”..
“Bullet Sound of A Pistol” comes in all people’s minds…Ishaana sees Om n her mind goes flashback…
“The moment of Om was drawing her””Om gave earrings to Ishaana” comes on her mind..
Hope U like tiz frndzz..Tanqq for reading n write ur cute thoughts after reading.. .
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Nice one.?
Tanq Ayushi..
Good one✌
Tanq Sakshi..I wish our frndzz read tiz.Om story too.I got more review than here..to enrich my work..
Rumbo nala e tak da…similarly saying in Tamil that mean its nice good one n thanks for reading my ff
Rumbo nala e rak da…similarly saying in Tamil that mean its nice good one n thanks for reading my ff
Tanq Shama..Magizhichigaludan HarSHaN..Plz post soon..with more Ishkara..