One more chance to hold you twinj ff part 8
Kunj and twinkle in car ,kunj dropping twinkle to home in whole journey twinkle ignoring kunj talks and kunj asking her to forgive him n to give him one chance
K – twinkle I love u really I do plz forgive me
Twinkle looking out of window acting like she is not hearing anything
K – twinkle…. no response
K – galath tha mey bahuth bahuth hey galath kiya there sath wid painful voice twinkle eyes has tear remembering those days
K – I’m really sorry twinkle I did very big mistake u can give me any punishment for that but plz don’t go away from me I can’t live without you???
T – u can’t live without me hahaha??? like seriously kunj den how u managed to live dis 2 years when I wasn’t with u ,n I’m not understanding y r u sad now huh u should be happy na bcoz u were d one who told me to get out of your home na and you said I don’t deserve to be ur wife n sarna’s bahu
K – plz don’t say like dat twinkle mey gusse me kaha vo sabh u know na I don’t have control over my anger n….interrupted by twinkle
T – yes who knows dat better Dan me huh aap saara gussa mujpe tho nikaal they the na(remembering all the tortures kunj gave) ur anger showed me real shade of u n in dat phase only I got to know who is real kunj n got to know the one who I loved was fake n his love also fake n fake promises everything was fake
K – plz twinkle don’t say my love is fake
T – plz don’t eat my head now I don’t have any interest in your talks now n drive fast now ghar pey sabh pareshaan ho rahe hogey muje aur babies ko dhoond rahe hogey all bcoz of u ,u kidnapped us
K – ha ha abhi unn longo ke sath time spend karle bcoz after some days ull come to me to stay wid me forever
T – only in ur dreams Mr
K – acha g dekhenge
K – babies ull come to my home na
Kush and tanu looked at twinkle face she needed in no n dey also nided in no
Kunj stopped car in front of twinkle mansion n opened car door twinkle stepped out of car n carried one baby n kunj carried other
T – don’t touch my baby
K – don’t forget dey r my babies too
T – huh??? n where u coming wid me huh if u come inside my home na my rocky bhayya ll hit u if he got to know u kidnapped me den dey ll kick u
K – first go n wake dem up den u can tell rocky jocky to hit me n kick me
T – huh dey reached at door twinkle went inside der were no one she kush on floor n kunj was stepping in d house
T – don’t dare to come inside but kunj came smiling twinkle snatched baby from him forcefully bcoz tanu doesn’t wanted to leave him
T – shut up come to me ?? in angry tone baby got scared n started to cry
K – twinkle plz yar I know u r angry wid me but plz mera gussa bachi pey tho math nikhal
T – oh hello plz huh dey r my babies I can do anything wid dem who r u to ask me n u can go now
K – no
T – y what u want now u left me to home na ur work over now plz go showing door
K – who said my work is over haan he placed tanu near kush n looked into twinkle eyes n moved close to her twinkle started to walk back
T – w…w..what han
Kunj didn’t talked anything but moving close to her n twinkle walking back n she got stopped by wall
T – c go a…a..away from me don’t come near to me
K – let me do my work twinkle
T – w..wt work
Kunj come near to her face n moved hair strands behind her ear n placed kiss on her cheek twinkle got angry n slapped him hard across face kunj touched his cheek n smiled at twinkle he took her hands n kissed it
Kunj moving his finger on twinkle face sensually twinkle closed her eyes
K – baby my work is dat I’ll leave u to room same way as I took u
T – means
K – simple by lifting u baby
T – no need of it I can walk
K – but I’ll not allow u to walk now don’t disturb me now n he lifted twinkle in bridal style
T – leave me Mr.sarna besharam kahika leave me n started to kick him kunj held her more tighter n der babies saw dem like dat
Babies clapped looking at dem kunj smiled at them
T – no don’t clap n u besharam leave me put me down
K – no ways baby n look at my babies dey r so happy he twirled around n babies giggled looking at dem
K – babies wait for me here only k aap ki mom ko chod ke aapko bhi leke jaunga n sorry babies to entertain u guys I can’t lift dis siyappa queen for much time she is heavy u know vo moti hey
T – ???? don’t teach dis thing to my babies n how dare u to say me moti huh leave me
Kunj took her to room all d way twinkle was kicking n fighting n when he was placing her on bed kunj leg got slipped n dey fell on bed kunj on top of twinkle both r very close followed by eye lock kunj eyes were showing love n guilt n twinkle eyes showing pain n hate twinkle broke eye lock n pushed kunj .
Kunj fell down from bed
K – ahha meri kamar siyappa queen
T – ?? sahi huva thera sath
K – siyappa queen plz help me to get up at least
T – no ways wahi padgey raho mujhe kya
K – ahha really plz yar its paining
T – k come n forwarded her hand kunj pulled her too she fell on kunj
T – ahha how dare u y u pulled me bhayya bhabhi????? bachavo
K – haha what happened siyappa queen badhi hasi aa rahi thi na tuje abh hass ke dikha n he switched der position kunj on top of twinkle kunj looking in twinkle eyes n twinkle avoiding his gaze kunj made her to look at him
K – I love ur eyes n kissed on eyes twinkle struggled to get up but can’t
Kunj Nuzzled his face in her neck n gave wet kisses n looked st her face she was closing her eyes twinkle remembering all those beautiful moments dey shared tears rushed out from her eyes kunj wiped her tear
K – u said u hate me ryt tho y my touch effect u this much twinkle
Twinkle opened her eyes kunj made her to stand n pinned to wall
K – tell me twinkle u still love me na
T – chodo mujhe mera pass math aavo nahi karthi mey thum se pyar ???
K – jhoot jhoot bhol rahi ho thum
T – no I’m telling d fact huh yes I loved u once upon time n dat was my life biggest mistake uski sazaa abhi tak bhugath rahi hun..??? mujhe thera shakal bhi nahi dekhna hey javo yaha dey chale javo
K – but plz think abt our babies twinkle dey need father too I know I did very big mistake but plz don’t punish me dis way give me one last chance to prove my love to u tumhe shikayath ka kohi mohaka nahi milenga wid tear filled eyes
K – I want to play wid my kids I want to spend time wid dem I want to see dem growing
T – shut up kunj ??? don’t take my kids name from ur dirty mouth n haan ☺☺now I get it y u want me to come back to u bcoz I have ur kids wid me na dey r hire of sarna’s n how can I forget that time also when u got to know dat I’m pregnent u started to show ur fake care n love to me bcoz of my kids u want me kunj
K – noooo….who told u dis all huh ur brothers na no twinkle I love u n my care n my love for u ll never be fake
Rocky viren jeevitha woke up after sleeping for long hours dey came to look at twinkle n saw d scene going on der rocky n viren blood boiled looking at kunj
T – dis time I’m not going to trap in ur sweet talks go from here??
R – how dare u to come here kunj???
K – arey saala manners nahi hey kya room knock karke andhar avo
T – bhayya say him to leave me n u guys know he mixed sleeping pills in sweets so u guys were sleeping till now n he kidnapped me n my babies n forcefully celebrate my b’day n he k…..
Kunj closed her mouth
K – slowly meri pyari siyappa queen abhi thank bachi hy hey thu kiss aur romance ki bath dusro se nahi kehthe bacha Gandhi bath hey twinkle bites his hand
K – such ahha rocky dragged him outside twinkle room
K – I can walk sale chodo mujhe
V – get out from here how dare u to touch my sister.
K – don’t forget viren bhayya she is my wife I have very damn right on her
Rocky held kunj collar
R – saala kaun sa haq ha she gave divorce to u ,she don’t consider u as her husband
K – but I consider her as my wife na n I didn’t gave her divorce still now she is my wife
V – v won’t allow u to come near her
K – dhekenge who ll win
R – dehekthe hey now go from here n pushed him as dey r edge of stair kunj fell from stairs
R – marr javo
K – such ahha n rolling from stairs viren n jeevika looking at him in shocked expression twinkle saw dis n got shocked
T – kunj…..n came running to him
K – ahha kunj forehead got cut n blood started flowing
T – bhayya ?? wt is dis huh kunj r u k get up ?? n made him to sleep on her lap kunj smiled at her looking at her concern for him
R – what d hell twinkle get up leave him
T – plz bhayya dekho tho kithna khoon aa raha hey bhabhi give me first aid box
R – just shut up ??u idiot get up n dragged her but twinkle wasn’t ready to leave him but forcefully rocky pulled her
Kunj get up from floor
K – thank u so much rocky bcoz of u I saw love in twinkle eyes n I got to know she still loves me
K – bye ll meet in court n next time I’ll take twinkle also wid me
T – ill not come
K – but I’ll take u darling now bye sweet heart n my babies where r dey ? Tanu..kush
V – I’ll not allow u to look at dem
Kush and tanu came to kunj crawling kunj looked at dem n smiled
R – meena take dem from here
Kush n tanu didn’t went wid her n looking at kunj
Kunj sat wid dem n talked cutely wid dem
K – hey babies papa ko aishe kyu dekh rahe ho haan n next time sake apko aur apki mom ko le jaunga k na u guys ll come wid me na
K & t – haa haa mum pa mum
Kunj looked at twinkle n winked at her n went from der saying spend as much time wid ur brothers now only after some days u r coming to me
V – how dare imhe is to tell like dat I’ll not send my sister wid him
J – haan viren g nahi bhejenge twinkle ko uske sath its his new drama
T – but bhayya u did wrong wid him how u can push him like dat use ouch ho jatha tho
R – kya hotha marr jatha tha na Marne dey usko kam se kam thab tho thum chain sey jee paungi
T – bhayya???
R – kyu tumhe kyu ithna thakleef ho raha hey don’t tell me u still love him
T – screaming nahi nahi karthi mey usse pyar ???? I don’t love him he is cheater he broke my trust I hate him i hate him
V – calm down twinkle
T – but bhayya he is confident he ll get back me n my babies den really he ll do dat.per mey nahi chahthi hun uski bhuri Saanya (shadow ) bhi meri bachi per nahi padey
J – he can’t do anything twinkle v r wid u
Babies started to cry bcoz twinkle was crying
T – shh don’t cry babies y u crying ha
R – bcoz u r crying na so dey also joined u now u also plz don’t cry n take dem to room do rest for sometime don’t take tension abt him vll look after court case
Next scene
Kunj comes to twinj mansion
Bebe n all came der from Amritsar
B – kunj puttar
K – bebe n hugged her n started to cry
K – bebe finally I saw my twinkle I talked wid her n bebe aapko patha hey mujhe aur twinkle ko twin babies huve hey air vo dhono kitne cute hey bilkul unki maa ki tarah cute n beautiful
B – acha??? bache se mile
K – haan bebe app ko jaldi asna tha abhi thak vo idhar hey they abhi gaye hey dragging bebe to his room
B – where u taking me puttar
K – (touching his bead very dey sat) dey were sitting here only bebe n my twinkle celebrated her birthday wid me bebe my twinkle is same bebe same cute n innocent look n my kush n tanu my babies also so cute n dey talk very cutely I played wid dem danced wid dem n I…
B – bas puttar bas saans tho le n she saw cut on his forehead wid dried blood
B – arey puttar ye kya chot lagi hey tumhe
K – kuch bhi nahi bebe chodiyena
Usha rani came in his room n saw him
U – kunj puttar ye chot kaishe lagi tumhe haan vo twinkle ki wajha se na
K – bebe tell dis lady to get out from my room n y she came here I don’t want to look at her face she is d one who destroyed my happy family bcoz of her twinkle left me mere bache mujse dhoor ho gaye sabkuch inka kiya dhara hey ???
U – kunj? I’m ur mother where I’ll go leaving u
K – go to hell I don’t care ???
B – usha javo yaha sey ??? kithna ghar kehna padega tuje mera pothey ke aas pass avo math bcoz of u kunj state is like dis bcoz of u I can’t play wid my great grand children’s
U – children’s
B – ha meri twinkle nu ko twins huve hey ek ladka aur ek ladki
U – mera potha
K – dey r nothing to u now plz go away from my sight usha goes from der
B – arey puttar mujhe bhi dekhna hey meri nu ko aur bacho ko
K – ha bebe I’ll get her here den u can play wid babies n wait I’ll show u der photos n showed her baby photo
B – arey kithne sone hey ????? twinkle jaishe pyare hey
K – arey bebe sirf twinkle jaishe pyare kyu mere jaishe bhi pyare hey
B – chal khotte ke puttar meri nu bahuth hey pyari hey
K – ha abh mujhe aapki pyari bahu ki payar jithna hey ??
B – ha puttar for dat u should work hard she ll not forgive u easily
K – yes bebe I’ll
Next scene twinkle mansion
Twinkle folding babies clothes n cleaning d mess dey have created in room
Kush came to twinkle crawling holding a toy he throwed it away n took other toy from toy bag tanu too came n started to fight for toy kush holding dey started pull each other hair n started to cry
T – kush n tanu don’t fight like dat kya huva thum dono ko haan
Kush showing toy to twinkle n complained abt his sis in his way vch twinkle can understand
T – tanu I have brought same to same toys for u both na take it n gave same toy she took it happily abh chalo dhono friends ban javo shake hand karo she made dem to shake der hands dey did
Kush n tanu looked at each other n smiled naughtily n dey made toy bag fall n started laughing n clapping
K & t – hyyyyy n clapped cutely twinkle slapped her forehead being irritated bcoz from 1hr she collected all toys n put in bag
T – u both r little devils go I won’t talk to u ? n turned her face
K & t – hahaha mumma n kissed her cheeks making twinkle smile
Twinkle took dem to bed n made dem to lye on bed n tickled dem dey laughed cutely
T – u both r my life bcoz of u guys only I’m alive till now nahi tho ussi dhin marr jathi thi mey jeevan mey bacha hey kya tha jisko mene ithna pyar kiya usne mera pyar ko value hey nahi diya mujhe uske ghar mey slave ki tarah rakheti naukrani ki tarah he never gave me respect as wife he treated me like his servent n tortured me n now he is asking for chance huh I gave him many chances but vo sudharne walo mey nahi hey aur abh mujme sehne ki thakath bilkul nahi hey now he is trying to snatch u guys from me no dis can’t happen I’ll not give u to him thum dhono mere ho mere ansh ho u know babies jab mumma ko aap logo ki aane kabar mili mumma bahuth hey kush thi n I thot aap ki papa ko mey pehle jaisha kardungi per galath thi mey sab logo ki husband unki wife ka kithna dyan rakhthe hey USS samay ne per mere husband ne tho muje ithna torture kiya ithna ki muje hospital mey admit hona pada tha iss bhar mey use bhadla lungi may he win court case also I’m ready for everything now mujhe ghar mey le Jana chahtha hena vo let him take me to his house usse nahi paths ki twinkle abh pehle jaishe nahi hey I’m no more innocent n buddu to be trap in his sweet talks I came here to destroy him completely he should also feel d same pain vch I felt dat time
T – after 2 days court case ll start let’s hope for d best
K & t – hmm like dey have understood everything
T – wt hmm come let’s sleep now twinkle made dem to sleep n she too slept cuddling dem
@morning
T – bhayya bhabhi I’m going to mandhir wid babies
R – k take care
J – I ll also come wid u twinki
V – yes take her too
T – k bhabhi
Twinkle n heevitha reached mabdhir eid babies n dey prayed to god usha came to same mandhir jeevitha had gone somewhere to bring some flowers for pooja usha saw twinkle n her babies .
Twinkle was sitting in temple side garden wid babies n dey were playing wid her usha came der to see d babies
T – aap???? y u came here
U – its mandhir anyone can come here
T – no devils r not allowed in mandhir
U – u r telling me I’m devil huh how dare u n I don’t wanna talk to u I want to take my grand children’s .
T – sorry I’ll not allow u touch dem too
U – I’ll c how u can’t give dem
T – I’m telling u be away from my babies
Usha snatching babies from twinkle n dey were crying being scared
T – r u out of ur mind look dey r scared leave dem
U – no give my potha .
T – potha bhi nahi milenga pothi bhi nahi milengi
U – arey keep dat girl child wid u only give me my potha he is sarna’s hire
T – chodo
Kush – Mumma mum mm??????? mumma cha..chye (chahiye)
Usha snatched kush from twinkle making twinkle fall
J – twinkle utho wt happened
T – bhabhi my kush?? she is taking him
J – arey aap kaishi aurath hey dijiye baby ko maa hey pass kush was crying like hell bcoz usha was holding him so tight
T – leave my baby otherwise I won’t leave u
U – hahaha wt ull do twinkle ll u cry?
T – wait ill tell u
T – screaming help help arey is der somebody to help dis mad old lady took my baby plz someone help me all people gathered der
Aunty – wt happened puttar
J – arey dhekiye aunty g iss pagal aurath ne ek maa se bache ko chin rahi hey
Aunty 2 – arey sharam nahi aathi tujko dekho tho kitna to raha hey baby bache churathi hey thu dhey bache ko
U – arey nahi ye mera potha hey
T – arey bhagwan nahi nahi jhoot bhol rahi hey meri saasu maa tha pichle saal hi mar gayi ???? crying dramatically
Aunty3 – jhoot bolthi hey n dey took baby n gave to twinkle n dey took nice class to usha by hitting her twinkle winked at usha n gave victorious smile n left d place
J – twinki acha huva na unke sath
T – ha bahuth hey acha huva kunj ko bhol ke mujhe maarne ke liye kehthi thi na abh janatha sey maar kha rahi hey badi aayi potha ko lene
To be continued
( tomato,eggs,chappal everything expected guys I’m so sorry for boring episode next time I’ll give nice one plz forgive me for dis boring episode really I’m sorry for being late I was caught up in exams n all)
Precap – twinj in party twinkle to insult kunj
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Awesome
Loved it…
Happy new year…
Love u…
Post soon
Awesome Yaar Anusha ….
Loveddddd it Yaar kunj ???loveddddd him …
Wow wow twinkle to take revenge exciting ?????…
Can’t wait for next post soon ??
It was awesome
Awesome Amazing superb
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Loved it!
That was amazing ???
Loved it ❤️❤️
It’s not boring at all
Loved the way usha was treated ?I hate her so much ???
Post soon??
Wg
twinj scene awesome
usha ka jo haal huva na maza hi aa gya mtlb gajab
aur twinkle revenge legi ye to super se bhi uper mindblowing yrrrr
bas ab jaldi se post kr dena plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz??
luvvv u dear
Happy new year ?????dear
Superb…
TOTally loved it..
NOW it’s pay back time..Twinkle will take revenge.. Very excited for upcoming track.
PLZZZZz post soon…
Love u
AND really sorry for lare comment,as I am hell busy with my studies.. My pre boards are near…And sorry in advance.. As I think I will not be able to comment in ur coming FFS.. As my pre boards will start from 6 jan..After it will end,I swear I will come back and wil comment on each n every ff..Till then keep writing..
KEEP smiling…
Super se upar episode
Loved every bit of it…
Lovely episode
TOTally loved it???
Do post soon
Superb fantastic…
Funny episode….
Totally loved it…
Do post soon
Lovely episode
Anusha!!! Fantastic! Great job! Well done!!! Poor Kunj! Looks like he’s genuinely sorry! The excitement in his words as he described his babies to Bebe… that was so beautifully written! And then, that scene where Twinkle expresses her concern for Kunj! Looks like she still loves him…. The babies were so cute!!! They never fail to win my heart… And finally, the icing on the cake was the super cool way that Twinkle handled Usha!!! Wonderful!
phle toh sorry yr isse phle wale ff comment ni kr payi !comments closed ho gye
awesome episode
twinj scene were superb
usha ke sath acha Hua
ab mazza ayega
post next soon
luv you