Thank u guyz for giving me ur suggestions.
I loved ANu’s suggestion.
So credit of this topic goes to ANu.
Recap- sanskar is jealous . pillow fight between swara and sankar.
Previous episode link-
http://www.tellyupdates.com/one-month-agreement-episode-4/
*3rd day of agreement*
Cloudy morning . (it’s cloudy morning becoz there will be clouds of misunderstanding between swara and sanskar)
Sanskar wakes up and didn’t find swara on bed. He calls her, “swara whr r u?”
But be didn’t get any reply. He searches her everywhere. But she is not at home.
He calls her. Her phn is switched off. He tries again and again , but its switched off.
He thinks that she is busy in her assignments that’s why she kept phn switch off.
And he fumes wid anger .
He recalls the things why he hated her 2 much.
Flashback
It’s rainy days.
Sanskar is heading towards home. He is driving car fastly to see swara but suddenly the truck coming from opposite side hits his car.mistake from both..sanskar is badly injured .
Some people helps them. And takes sanskar to hospital.
He was in coma for 1 week due to heavy blood loss. When he opened his eyes, he was expecting to see swara but….
Kavita was der wid him. She is taking care of him.
He asked about swara to his colleagues and he knows that from d day of accident they tried to call swara but she didn’t responded to any of the call. Her phn is switched off. So some colleagues go to sanskar’s home to inform swara but der was lock to house.
When sanskar got discharge ,
He finds swara in home. When he asked abt why her phn was switched off and where was she. She just replied that, ” u knw na sanskar dis assignment is necessary for me. So while working on this assignment I switched off my phn to avoid disturbance and I was at my office for all those days. Leave that hows u now?”
Sanskar is angry coz of her reply. He thinks m I disturbance for her. And she is asking me only abt how r u? She is not showing little concern for me. And she is saying that her assignments are important for her. But they are more important than me.?
And kavita I knw she loves me. One sided love. But she was with me when I needed swara most.
He just replied ,” I hate u swara.”
He sees that this words r not affecting on swara.
Flashback ends .
Sanskar becomes ready. He prepares coffee for him and he goes to the office. Again hatred for swara in his mind..
He calls her again.. But again phn is switched off. He is restless now.
He recalls the moment from clg days. How her absence in clg affected him.
Flashback
Sanskar was waiting for swara to come to clg. Coz he wanna trouble her but she dont come.
He is thinking ,’ why she is absent? She left her clg coz of my trouble, didn’t she? No she can’t ! If she will leave the clg then to whom I will trouble. Or something is happened to her. No! Nothing can happen to her. Plz swara come!’
Full day He is restless .
His frnds tease him , ” oh sanskar! Its ur wish na she hv to leave the clg as a punishment. Den y r u restless? ”
Sanskar (angrily )- “shut up guyz ! How can she leave me without informing me?”
All frnds (in chorus)-” wht”
Sanskar(composes words) – ” I mean how can she leave the clg without informing me?”
One frnd- ” oh so she hv to take ur permission to leave the clg?”
Sanskar – “yes” (in determined voice)
And goes to search her…
Flashback ends.
Kavita comes into his cabin.
Both greets each other.
Sanskar asks her ,” so kavita u wanna go for dinner na? Let’s go today ” (he is angry on swara dats y he accepts kavita’s dinner plan)
Kavita (happily )- ” really sanskar?
Sanskar -” yes kavita! We will go directly after office . ok”
Kavita hugs him in the excitement. And gives peck on his cheek.
He is angry with swara. But still he felt that he is not doing right. And moves away from her.
Kavita asks him(coz of his weird behavior) – “r u ok sanskar?”
Sanskar -” yes I m fine! Plz leave me alone for some time. And dnt forget abt the dinner”
Kavita smiles and goes to do her work.
Here sanskar again calls swara. But her phn is switched off.
Whole day He is restless.
@ evening kavita comes to him
And both headed towards fancy restaurant.
Kavita says ,” yeah I m 2 much happy . at last u r giving divorce to her”.
Sanskar (trying to be happy)- ‘
” yes! I m 2 happy kavita”
Kavita feels that he is not happy -” den y I feel that u r not happy as much as I.”
Sanskar -” coz u r thinking like that!”
They both finished der dinner.
Sanskar comes to home.
And finds swara is sleeping on couch and der r 2 coffee mugs on table.
Sanskar (thinks ) oh god she is waiting for me from evening. And drinks that coffee even though it’s cold. And he talks to her ,” u r waiting for me now. Den y u r not with me when I was in coma. Y swara?” Tears r flowing through his eyes.
He takes swara in bridal style and places her on the bed. And covers blanket on her.. And he sleeps on couch.
Precap- 4th day of agreement. And flashback .
So guyz do comment wht u wanna see between swara and sanskar on 4th day of there agreement..
Do comment.
And I will give the credit to that person whose suggestion is best(according to me)
Love u all.
81 Comments
Intense anger from Sanskar towards Swara followed by a passionate, heart rending romance scene…also kavita’s name shouldn’t even appear!!
thank u anjali.. I will try to satisfy ur requirement 🙂
awesome….
thanks newbie. good morning.
I wud like t give one suggestion
Make sure tht swara is stuck in sum serious prblm( wich is related t sanskar)wen sanskar is in hosp n she hide it by saying this assignment excuse
Later sanskar shud get t knw te reasn n start t feel again lik bfre fr swara
I tooo like it that way….plz think about it…
Yeah yeah plz use this..
thanks akshu. ur suggestion is really nice. I will think on it. 🙂
Even its hurt sanskar….. I dunno I get happy when I read about sanskar’s concern toward swara…… I think swara is the one take care of sanskar
In hospital but kavitha lie to him…..
no yar. kavita was der wid him.. swara was not der.. kavita is not that much bad in my fanfiction.. but I also hate kavita.. 😉
Gud epi. There should be some cute fight between swasan, n then sanskaar shud struggle fr patch up.n shud do various things to please swara, n this accidently kavita shud gt knw, misunderstanding between kavsan, n sanskar shud struggle between swara n kavita, it will be gum,
P.s dont frgt to add some swasan romance,
Updt soon.waiting.
really nice suggestion Sasha.. swasan romance will be always der in each episode.. coz I also love dem :-p
superb……my love for your fan fiction is increasing day by day…
but I love ur comments more than my fanfiction.. 🙂
Ooops,it will be fun, nt gum lol
Superb yaar..its good
thanks sethooty 🙂
Nice..bt pls make it long waiting fr nxt
ok kittu.. I will make it longer . thank u..
Dear I found it very short I wanna read more, update asap next part.
thank u anam. read next part n tell me that u wanna long than that ? k?
Superb anu :-)i realy enjoy hau a sweat drmz
thanks zoyafathima. good morning. have a nice day.
Hate nd love… in 4th epi… first hate swara did nt pick up the call.. nxt she may have sone genuine reasin.. agn patch up… jst my hope.. k let c wt u have for us… btnw today ws nice.. cn u make it bit long..
good… dear…
Wow superb I really love it yaar.bt it s vry short Plz make it long. Plz update nxt part soon dear
a reason fr disappearance of swara
although nt to sanky bt to someone who troubled her during the tym
i know dis is vry boring bt still
Well, u can keep lyk in past swara’s mom or dad falling ill nd she is taking care of them nd being responsible well dis responsible behaviour is liked by sanskaar …nd present sanskaar thinking that there may b sum solid reason 4 swara not being at hospital …lyk 4 sum family member of sanskaar …..
thank u shruthi.. for suggestion
Nice…..
thanks dear 🙂
Awesome going…
Nice .
Hey wat happened y did swara do this ??
Its awesome
Omgggg….this ff is rocking… Keep goinggg
Suprrbbb trackkk…luvin ittt
i am interested to know how ur going justify swara’s actions….
I will justify. but plz give me some time yar..
I hope Swara us fine…. Plz don’t let anything happen to them…. I m sure Swara has a reason…. Is kavita blackmailing her… Plz…. Hope for some more swasan moments… Some explanation on y Swara does not answer her call… I think swara is I’ll… Plz
its suspense dear.. I will reveal it ..
Its really awesome yaar…why didn’t swara went to see sanskaar when he was in comma…i want to know…
It was awesome dear…uhh rocked Anu..splendid work… Incredible job….how lovely u described yrr.. Fantastic.. It was so nice. But just wanna ask dear will swasan unite or separate coz I also have a plot in my mind which is till now similar to uhh. And I would start it after my boards.. So plzz tell me…if it is similar so I will drop my idea… N you are really superb… Love uhh dear…
swasan will unite in the end. coz I cnt see them separate for long time.. love u 2 aashi 🙂
when sanskar in coma… Swara may have in sm trouble, she dnt want to tell the reason that cause misunderstanding…
nice guess roja 🙂
Had read the five episodes in one go dear. Good plot. A small suggestion from my side..please don’t add too many flash backs in a single episode because there are two reasons..one is that it becomes messy and second is you cannot hook up your readers. I really didn’t mean to offend you but sorry if it conveyed in that way.
And in fourth day,…it depends on your choice dear cause you know the plot better than us. We all will be always here to support you and your ideas. Fingers crossed for next episode. All the best.
Hi sree… hw r u dr?? Missed u… sorry ambika forbir using ur ff page..
it’s OK navi. u cn use it.. dnt be sry..
Fine dear. Just come to today’s episode. We will chat there.
ok sree harini I will add only one flashback in 1 episode.. thank u 4 ur suggestion. 🙂
Super episode dear.sanskar should realize his affection towards swara.
he knw he loves swara. but he dnt wanna accept it.. 🙂
Maybe swara is ill and she tries to hide from sanskar
nice guess dharsha. 🙂
all these comments are motivating me to write the next part now only..but
but dnt wry guyz i will try to post next part in morning.. love u all.. 🙂
good night
Hmm waiting for nxt @ mrng…