One more chance to hold you twinj ff part 7
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@hospital
K – can I c twinkle doctor
D – yes Mr.sarna u can
Kunj was above to open door but bebe stopped him
B – don’t dare to come near my twinkle
K – bebe? plz sobbing
B – no kunj I’ll not allow u to go near twinkle bcoz of u she is in dis stage how u can hit her like dis kunj I doubt ur love for her is real or fake ,if u loved her truly den u would have trusted her
K – s..s..sorry bebe plz I want to c her
B – k cum but I’m sure twinkle ll never forgive u
Twinkle was lying on bed she looks so dull like lifeless body n no charm on face n no moments at all only blinking eyes some time she saw bebe n when she saw kunj her eyes showed him hate n anger
K – twinkle ???? I’m really sorry I wasn’t knowing abt ur pregnancy n I’m stupid to not to trust u twinkle I’m really sorry n cried lot holding her hand twinkle wanted to jerk his hand but couldn’t she didn’t looked at him once too she looked at bebe n her eyes questioned her something bebe didn’t got it but kunj got it
K – u r asking bebe y I’m here na twinkle
T – ??
K – where ll I go leaving u haa
Twinkle POV
( I just don’t want to see him I don’t want him in my life now who tried to kill me n my babies I hate u Mr.kunj sarna I just want to push him n want jerk his hands vch is holding mine but my body not supporting me today I’m in dis state only bcoz of u kunj ,loving u was biggest mistake of my life )
K – don’t hate me twinkle plz I know u r angry on me but plz give me one chance
Twinkle POV
( chance to u no kunj no its enough now I’m fed up wid u always I tried to make u happy but what u gave me in return by listening to others u blamed me for everything I’ll never forgive u dis same day on last year v became one u tied knot to me dis day u promising ull never leave my hands but dat all r fake wt harsh words u said me yesterday still eching in my ears)
B – twinkle puttar I’m sorry twinkle signed her not to say sorry
K – she is telling u not to say sorry
T POV – Jamal hey kunj sarna u can understand wt my eyes r conveying n speaking now but yesterday wt happened to u not only my eyes but my mouth also told u truth but u were not ready to listen to me
Kunj kissed on twinkle forgead twinkle gave disgusting look kunj heart breaked into many pieces looking at her eyes vch showed him hatred n anger he knows it its all bcoz of him its his mistake
K – punish me twinkle hit me if u want kill me but plz don’t hate me ??? n he fell on his knees crying bebe felt bad for him she knows he loved twinkle always n was very crazy abt her n he was ready to go against his mother to marry twinkle n he showered her wid love always but wt made him to behave dis bad wid twinkle ,d problems started before few months when dey started live in Amritsar n she knows her bahu usha rani didn’t liked twinkle from day1 she was hating her like anything n dat lead to dis state now she promised twinkle dat she ll not leave usha for dis.
B – kunj sambalo khud ko abb Rone se kya faidha puttar n twinkle ko leje ghar challenge chal aur much din rahengi twinkle hamare pass jab thak uske parents nahi aa jathey n leela hi told me dey ll take twinkle wid dem
K – no bebe I want my twinkle
B – I don’t know anything kunj n I can’t tell leela ji anything bcoz she is right
K – my twinkle ll never leave me bebe I’ll not let her go away from me plz bebe I want twinkle punish me bebe but plz don’t take my twinkle away from me
B – abb chalo ghar
Kunj asked doctor to discharge twinkle
D – can I send nurse to ur house to look after twinkle
K – no doctor I’m der na I’ll take her care
D – k be careful wid her n take wheel chair as she can’t walk
K – doctor when ll twinkle recover
D – v can’t say anything Kunj ven she wants she can walk she is in shock ryt now take good care of her now
K – k
Kunj lifted twinkle in bridal style n made her to sit in car n drove off to home
K – c twinkle v came to home
Maya – arey kunj n twinkle came mummy g n kunj y r u lifting her like dis can’t she walk or she doesn’t want to walk
Kunj told her state everyone r shocked n Alisha n Maya became happy from inside faked concern for twinkle ,usha thinking only abt her potha or pothi vch r in twinkle womb n prayed for only for der health
Twinj room
Kunj placed twinkle on bed n he too sat wid her holding her hands n cuddled wid her twinkle showing only her anger n hatred too kunj from her eyes kunj felt bad looking at her like dis he was taking her care
2 days later
K – come twinkle I’ll make u take bath ull feel good n he made her to take bath he made her ready n tried to feed her something but twinkle didn’t responded
K – plz u r angry on me na k be angry on me but not on food eat it twinkle c our baby ll be hungry na
B – I’ll make her eat
K – thank u bebe twinkle eat from bebe hand
K – bebe I’m going to hospital to get twinkles medicine plz be wid her
B – ha puttar as soon as kunj went from room twinkle got up from bed n closed room door
B – shocked ????
B – puttar ☺ thu teekh hogayi
Twinkle hugged bebe n started to cry
B – shh puttar don’t cry now n wait I’ll tell dis to kunj
T – no bebe don’t tell him I’m hiding dis from 2 days
B – means
T – ha bebe after coming home I got well n got to know I can talk n walk now but I hided dis things from u people especially from kunj its thought to do but I have to do bebe to show him real faces of his mom n bhabhi
B – plan kya hey puttar I’ll help u
T – I’ll tell u bebe now u don’t give dem any clue dat I got well
B – ha puttar n she left from der in sad face n told usha n Maya dat twinkle is not recovering
Usha Maya Alisha sent bebe to mandir n trio went to twinkle room
U – arey bahu rani aishe shanth kyu beti hey
M – arey twinkle get up n dance now also na like u always do jumping n dancing
A – ha she was always wid my kunj always roams wid him uski hath chodthi hii nahi thi had waqth romance romance ???
T POV (chudail kahi ki she is getting angry like I’m romancing wid her husband kunj is mine so I’ll dance wid him roam wid him wts her problem n Maya n mummy g go on??? talk more rubbish things n smirked inside )
U – don’t worry Alisha puttar now she can’t romance wid him n I think after giving birth she ll not survive n after dat I’ll make u marry wid my kunj u both can stay happily
A – ha aunty good idea but do u thing she ll die
U – if she ll not die den vll say doctor to kill her I want only my potha or pothi I don’t want twinkle to come in kunj life again
Usha went near twinkle n held chin tightly twinkle wanted to wince in pain but she controlled herself twinkle looked at her teary eyed
U – hahaha twinkle bahu wt u told me dat urs n kunj love is so powerful huh n u challenged me na n yesterday u got answer I think now u can’t move also hahaha bechari I locked myself in store room before sometime n acted in front of kunj like u locked me n tried to kill me n u know kunj loves his mom lot so he hit u like dat its not over twinkle I’ll make kunj to hate u
T POV (I promise u kunj ll hate u not me)
Usha went out of room
M – so twinkle how I acted kunj believes me like fool
A – di wt dat usha aunty told dat I have to look after this twinkle kids in future no di yuk I can’t
M – k don’t do ll give dem to twinkle parents
Alisha went near twinkle n sat wid her
A – no di I’ll tell u wt I’ll do c she snatched kunj for me ryt after giving birth as usha aunty said she ll die n I’ll make her baby as weapon to marry kunj saying to take care of baby I’m marrying him n after marriage I’ll make kunj to hate baby too by saying bcoz of baby twinkle dies. n I’ll make dat baby as beggar its twinkle n kunj live symbol na so I’ll make its life hell I’ll make it as slave I’ll throw it on road I’ll k….
She got interrupted by hard slap n she fell on floor n looked at direction shockingly n Maya too twinkle slapped her hard
A – u …u can stand now how??
T – yes n also I can kick wait I’ll show u m started kicking her she was screaming n twinkle looked at Maya n she took out belt from kunj wardrobe she locked room door n started to hit her like anything both sister running through out room both r shocked looking at twinkle like dis twinkle heard something she went to Alisha n made her to hold belt n she ran to door n opened it n saw kunj coming she started to scream
T – ahha Alisha don’t hit me ahaa bebe????☺☺????☺?
Kunj ran to twinkle n saw her crying n saw Alisha standing wid belt
K – twinkle wt happened?
T – she is hitting with belt ahha??? kunj looked at Alisha wid anger n took out belt from her n started to hit her hard
T POV (yeah yeah majaa aa raha hey u wanted to marry my kunj n wanted to romance wid my kunj na abhi kunj se maar kya ley bcoz of u guys he hit me so much now ur turn )
A – plz don’t hit me kunj ahha
M – kunj stop don’t hit her
T POV – ha kunj not fair hit dis Maya too wait I’ll help u n she pushed Maya on Alisha kunj told her to move n kunj didn’t waited he hit her too while hitting Alisha
M – ahha n she ran from der to call usha
K – meri twinkle ko maregi thu huh???? how dare u ,u b*t*h
T – k..k..Kunj she said me she ll kill my baby ????
K – wt u don’t worry twinkle I’ll kill dis Alisha only how dare she is to tell like dat n started to slap her hard
U – stop it kunj
T – no don’t stop
U – shut up twinkle ???
T – no u shut up usha ???
K – ???? twinkle(he was busy in hitting Alisha forgotten twinkle standing n talking to him) ☺☺☺☺ u can walk n talk now I’m happy for u n hugged her twinkle didn’t responded
U – u r hugging her did u heard wt she told me
K – no
T – I told shut up usha
K – wt y baby twinkle pushed him
T – don’t dare to touch me kunj sarna
K – I’m sorry twinkle??? plz don’t say like dat
T – everything finished between us kunj
K – twinkle??
T – n u my so called mummy g u were stopping kunj to hit Alisha but when he was hitting me u were enjoying na now also enjoy na mummy g n congratulation u win d challenge I n kunj r over now
K – no twinkle ? n wt challenge
T – patience Mr sarna I’ll tell u everything let bebe also come bebe came twinkle on d TV connecting to her mobile
It was video twinkle made just now ven trio entered her room it revealed everything to kunj n it was crystal clear to him dat everything happened bcoz of his mom she did every damn thing to spoil der marriage
K – maaa???? u did all dis bebe slapped usha hard
K – y maa y screaming y u did it y u filled my ears against twinkle n y u made me to hit her n dis all ur plan so I can hit twinkle
U – vo vo??? kunj puttar
K – shut up??? don’t take my name from ur mouth I hate u maa I hate u loudly
Kunj cupped twinkle face
K – I’m idiot n stupid twinkle plz forgive me I wasn’t knowing dis all everything is der plan twinkle jerked him
T – no kunj dey can make 1000 plan like dis but where was ur trust n love on me at dat time u only cared abt ur ego n muje torture kiya ??? kithne maare tumhe muje not only yesterday kunj d day v came to Amritsar u were changing ur ego was important to u more Dan me if I take my brother name ull not like it so I wasn’t raking his name thinking not to hurt u but u????
K – twinkle sorry twinkle
T – let me complete kunj oh sorry so called kunj g my foot u n ur rules kunj but I followed dem without arguing n it wasn’t problem for me to call u like dat bcoz I loved u so listened u but u took it as granted n was ordering me like I’m ur slave kunj
K – nahi bacha listen to me
T – no no I’ll not loudly n she held her stomach kunj became tensed n gave her water to drink she throwed it den bebe made her to drink water
B – puttar don’t shout na it ll effect ur n baby health
T – no bebe let me tell everything today I bear everything only bcoz of my love but der is no love left between us bebe kunj doesn’t love me bebe he said me dat…dat???? sobbing n crying l..ov…ing me was his biggest mistake in life n he is r..regretting now n he said I don’t deserve to be bahu n wife n I’m worst ????? he said I…I…I’m his biggest problem n bcoz of me his family in danger???? he didn’t included me in his family bebe I’m nothing to him only mom n her words matter to him I begged him to listen to me but he didn’t he thought I was going to kill mummy g by locking her in store room it was mummy g plan but he believed dem n not me n mey usko surprise dene ke liye pagal ki tarah thayari jar beti thi but iss aadmi ney muje hey surprise dey diya USS din ???? muje maar maar ke n he told me to get out from his home not thinking where I’ll go n he readily dragged me out of home n was kicking me out of home not thinking where I’ll go in dat night is dis love Mr.kunj sarna ??? now u know I’m pregnent so u showing me love bcoz I’m giving u baby ryt
K – no?? twinkle I love u,u r my first priority I came to u bcoz I love not bcoz I want only baby
T – stop ur drama kunj I’m not fool to believe u now
Leela n rt – twinkle
Twinkle ran to dem n hugged dem n started crying telling everything n sobbing
Leela went to kunj n slap him hard next RT also did same wid him viren n rocky shocked to see twinkle state n dey started to hit kunj badly he didn’t stooped dem dey were hitting him badly twinkle also stayed silent rt stopped dem after sometime as kunj was serious now his forehead n lips got cut
L – chi kunj didn’t expected dis from u chi u were torturing my daughter but she didn’t said us anything n bear everything
Rt – kunj wt u said me dat day u promised u keep my princes happy always n now wt u did huh? shame on u
Rocky called police to arrest kunj for domestic violence
Police was taking kunj but twinkle stopped dem
R – twinki y u stopping dem let dem take him
T – no bhayya take complaint back if kunj goes to jail sarna respect ll go n bebe ll be hurt I don’t want to hurt her bhayya plz police went back
L – chalo twinkle puttar vll go now
Kunj held twinkle hand
K – plz twinkle don’t go
T – leave my hand kunj
K – no plz don’t do this wid me I’m sorry twinkle plz don’t go away from me twinkle jerked his hand n slapped kunj hard making everyone shock
T – I hate u Kunj n I’m going away from u I’ll not let u come near my baby
Twinkle goes to room n packed her luggage she left der jewels given by kunj ,kunj ran behind twinkle to stop her but she ignored him while packing a letter fell from wardrobe twinkle checked it n smiled went to kunj
T – u know wt is dis kunj
K – wt twinkle
T – my dream check it kunj checked it n got shocked
K – twinkle u got chance to work under famous fashion model dat was ur dream but u said u got rejected
T – ha ha I lied dat time bcoz if I go der to join our marriage ll be postponed n I don’t wanted leave u I wanted to be wid u so I said I got rejected n married u thinking my dream is not big Dan u n I did very big mistake dat day I was idiot in ur love drama
K – twinkle forgive me plz twinkle kill me if u want but don’t hate me
T – I hate u kunj I hate u she went out wid luggage n kunj behind her tried to stop her but twinkle jerked him he fell from stairs n got hurt he didn’t cared he ran behind twinkle ,viren took luggage n kept in car n dey all sat in car waiting for twinkle ,twinkle took bebe blessing n went from der kunj tried to stop but no use she looked at her hubby house last time n was above to sit in car but stopped n looked at kunj n came to him kunj thought she coming back to him but twinkle removed her mangalsuthra n throwed it on his face n ran from der crying kunj started to run behind car but no use he fell on road crying.
End of flashback
Both twinkle n kunj crying remembering those things twinkle wiped her tears n got up from her place looked at home correctly its new lavish mansion very spacious n its name is twinj mansion n twinkle saw from balcony it has swimming pool n everything wt all she said to kunj when kunj asked her how her dream home should be she explained everything its just like dat
Here babies got angry on looking at der parents one is busy in looking at home n other was crying still dey got angry bcoz no one gave dem attention n forgotten dat dey were also wid him so both started to cry louder after parents crying session now babies crying session twinj ran to dem kunj lifted tanu n twinkle lifted kush both tried to convence dem but dey were also stubborn like dem didn’t stopped but cried more
K – y they r crying
T – don’t know I feed dem sometime before only
K – may he hungry now also feed dem na
T – oh hello I know when to feed dem no need to tell me k
K – areyvwt I said now
T – u shut up don’t talk to me sadu
Ku & ta – ???? chadu(sadu) ma ma mum?? (laughing)
T – hyee my babies smiling
K – siyappa queen its called laughing not smiling
T – if I say it as smiling den its smiling only??? yes na babies
Ku & ta – ma ma ma n kush kissed her
K – arey kush wt made u so happy dat u kissed my wife n tanu u were so happy supporting mumma she is teaching bad words see if we laugh like hahaha showing dem it’s called laughing n dis ☺☺☺ called smiling got it
Ku & ta – ??? haha
K – im I joking here to laugh but good laugh like dis always u both look good
Kush signed kunj to take him kunj gave tanu to twinkle n took kush in his arms n started playing wid him kush did sussu on him ????
K – chi kush to do susu u came to me
T – ???? hahaha good baby twinkle took him in her arms while kunj removed shirt making faces
K – how mean twinkle u said baby to do susu on me
T – wt y I’ll tell like dat he is baby he ll not get to know if I tell also n bcoz of u my babies can’t wear Huggies now all bcoz of u
K – arey wait I’ll give u n gave her pack of it
T – oh u buyed dis also
K – actually no I didn’t buyer its d same pack vch is in ur room I forgotten to buy it so wid u all I kept dat too
T – chi kunj besharam kahi ka wid me n babies u kidnapped Huggies too
K – whatever now I’m going to prepare cake for u
T – but I’ll not cut it
K – u have to cut otherwise
T – otherwise wt
K – no problem dear be here wid me only I’ll not leave u to ur home
T – kunj u na ??? kunj ran from der n prepared pastry for her wid much love
K – twinkle wear dis dress n get ready
T – ???
K – k be wid me only den
Twinkle got ready in gown given by kunj its white n pink color long gown twinkle looking like princes she did light make up n wear accessories (don’t ask me from where she got all dis kunj bright everything for her ,he arranged room like how she want) kunj was waiting for her in hall wid pastry n also he made babies to get ready he brought cute skirt for tanu n small shirt n pant for kush buth looking so cute kunj cuddling n playing wid dem twinkle came der kunj got mesmerized by her n he went near twinkle n said her s*xy she blushed n kunj kissed her forehead n looked at lips n both forgotten everything n kunj connected his rough lips on soft lips n dey both were kissing each other passionately der kiss conveying how dey missed each other in days dey broke kiss after some time breathing heavily n dey both got back to senses twinkle thinking y she did dis kunj smiled thinking still twinkle loves him
Kush and tanu ????? shocked dey did it in front of dem n Wt dey did is it d way to kiss der mum
Twinj picked dem up quickly kush gave kiss on kunj lips n tanu on twinkles dey both smiled at dem but kush not leaving kunj lips again n again he is kissing by pulling his hair like how kunj kissed twinkle twinj were shocked n laughed at dem
K – ma’am cut cake
T – k after dis u should leave me to home k
K – cut cake ma’am ll talk later
Twinkle cut d cake kunj said happy birthday my love twinkle feed cake to kush and tanu n came to kunj he opened mouth twinkle took cake near to his mouth n kept it in her mouth
K – good
T – now leave me
K – no feed me cake now fully
T – k . twinkle took piece of cake n applied it on his face dey started laugh on kunj
K – now u c n he too applied cake dey enjoyed moment like dis
In twinkle house all were searching dem dey got up now from sleep dey didn’t found twinkle n her babies her phone is also on he’d dey got worried
Twinj mansion
T – k now leave me may be dey were searching for me
K – k but simply u r going twinkle bcoz after some days u should come here only to stay wid me
T – only in ur dreams
K – acha g let’s c n he dropped dem to home
To be continued….
Precap – court case started who ll win d case kunj or twinkle
(Hope I didn’t bored u guys love u all ,keep smiling ,bye)
15 Comments
Thank u soooooooo much for posting………..
The epi was worth waiting……..
Twinkle shouldnt forgive kunj sooo easily……
Post sooon
Awesome
loved it
That was amazing… Plz post soon
Nice
Awsm episode…
Totally loved it dear…
What kunj did with twinkle in past was totally wrong….he shouldn’t be forgiven easily…
Post soon and ur other ffs also..
Love u
That was just wow. Like just wow. Oh my god,yaar how come you write so well. I’m just so happy after reading the last part. It literally made me laugh. And thanks for posting such a long one. PoSt the next one soon if you can. Your ffs are just love. ?????????
Anusha!! This was so beautifully written…. Too amazing for words!! The way Twinkle brilliantly unveiled the villains in front of Kunj was amazing!!! Finally we know what had actually happened in the past…. Twinj moments were amazing!! The babies ??? Awesome!! I can’t wait to know what is going to happen next…
wow yr superb!
mazza aya pdhkr! thanks for posting
keep writing
post next soon
luv u
no words left to appreciate u
it was toooo amazing yrr
luv twinj scenes …
they were tooo cute..
post asap
love u ♥♥♥
Awesome amazing fantastic fabulous episode dear
superb
plzzz post soon dear
luvvvv u
Lovely. Loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Amazing ❤️❤️
Loved it ❤️❤️
Twinj a past was very bad…emotional too ?
The babies r super cute. ???
Just awesome ???
Post soon??
Waiting ??
Awsm episode
Loved it.
Twinkle’s past was very scary…
Their babies are so adorable and cute???
Post soon
Nice episode
Totally loved it
Awesome Amazing
Past was worst
But twinj moments were lovely