Hello everyone. Happy friendship Day to all ??. Here’s the last shot.
Days r passing on. Vinit gets more attracted towards Ragini day by day. Whenever ragsan were absent in home, he used to go to that room and imagine Ragini with him.
One day Ragini was doing some work. Vinit was sitting on chair watching TV but his all attention was on Ragini only.
Rag: u know Vinit, sometimes I don’t like sanskar’s photography passion. Coz of that he stays out many times and I always miss him.
She makes pout remembering him.
Rag: hey let me show u our marriage album.
She brings it and sits beside him. She starts to show him each photo and explaining in which situation those pics r taken.
Rag: see, in this pic we decided to stand seriously. But sanskar kissed on my cheek at clicking time. All were seeing us only.
She smiled remembering. Vinit gets little angry seeing Thier kissing pic. He dint wanted to see further. He was abt make any excuse but ragini’s hand touched his hand while showing pic. He smiled sensing it. He sat there itself. Riya comes that time calling ragini. They both started chatting. Vinit cursed her for coming and disturbing.
All were having dinner in akshat’s home. After dinner sanskar signs riya. She took ragini out while chating.
Aks: wat happened?
San: tmrw is ragini’s bday.
Aks: we know that. We r already prepared for celebration.
San: that’s ok. But I want to make it more special.
Aks: don’t ask idea to me. M bad in that. Even for riya’s surprise I take ur and ragini’s ideas.
San: I very well know that. I have idea. Just need to execute. We will celebrate her bday in resort. I hav seen one. Mrng we will leav. M going now. u tel to riya.
Aks: ok done.
Sanskar and vinit left from there. Vinit in guest house.
Vin: tmrw is ragini’s bday. I’ve to gift her something special. She shud like it.
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Mrng all left for resort. As usual all 4 were chatting whereas vinit staring ragini.
At nite party only few guest were there. Ragini cuts the cake. Vinit was also there holding gift. Ragini made sanskar eat first, then riya and akshat. Vinit thought she’ll make him also eat. Ragini looks at him holding piece then only laksh says
San: chinnu, where’s uncle aunty part of cake? U forgot?
Rag little teary but soon smiled. She goes back to sanskar makes him eat 4 times.
Rag: this bite is dad’s, mom’s, uncle and aunty.
San eating cake with heavy voice: god bless u bachha. Live happily forever.
They hug. Vinit was feeling jealous.
San: hey, u dint give cake to vinit. Not fair ha.
Rag: m so sry.
She took piece. He got happy seeing her coming to him. he was abt to open his mouth but ragini gave piece in hand and left. Vinit felt like anger. He smashes cake in anger and throws it. Sanskar sees that but took it lightly. Vinit gave her his gift. He insists her to open now only. She does so and finds her beautiful painting.
Rag: wow vinit. Its super and very beautiful. I liked it. Thanku so much.
Vin: happily. Thanks ragini.
They did party at nite. Then they left for there home.
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@ dinner
Ragsan and vinit were having dinner. Always ragsan prepare dinner or any thing together. Ragini serves vinit ate full dishes made by ragini. He was eating with different expression as if ragini made it for him only. Sanskar observes that.
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Sanskar goes to call vinit to guest house and saw him holding ragini’s dupatta and staring at it. Now sanskar clearly understood that he started to like ragini. If ragini comes to know abt this she’l feel bad as she has also considered him as her friend. Sanskar thinks to sort out this alone.
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Next mrng all went to hillstation for picnic as sanskar decided. They stayed in their respective room there. Whole day sanskar was observing vinit’s behavior towards ragini without letting him know. They decide to go back in eveng.
San: ragini, m going out with vinit. U get ready till I b back, then wil go.
Rag: where? Y?
San: actually I want to click some pics of nature. I forgot yesterday.
Rag: u and ur photography. Ok. Come fast. We will b waiting.
San: ok.
He goes to vinit.
San: vinit lets go to hillstation till they get ready. U r ready rite?
Vin: yes. Sure.
Both left in car.
Sanskar stopped car at a hillstation. Both got down and started admiring nature. Sanskar took his camera and started to click pics.
San without looking at vinit: vinit, shall I ask u one thing?
Vin: with smile. Yes.
San was talking to him while clicking pics.
San: how r u now? feeling better after meeting all of us?
Vin: ya.. m feeling good.
San: I know that u started liking ragini.
Vinit’s smile vanished and he looked at sanskar who was still busy in clicking pics. He was staring him only.
San: I brought u here so that u shud forget ur past and move on. i thought to bring happiness in ur life, but u r trying to snatch my happiness only.
Vinit was still staring him without any expression on his face.
San: still ragini don’t know abt this. She’s like a kid. She believes everyone easily. She thinks u r very gud and loyal frnd. If she comes to know abt this, she’ll b hurt. And I don’t want my chinnu to hurt. So its better to u to leav us now. u can go and live ur life. Go from our life. Now after going back u shud leav before mrng. Ragini shud not come to know abt this.
Vin: but..
San: (looks at him and in serious tone) no but and ifs. U cheated our frndship. U took her frndly nature in wrong way. U saw her with ur bad eyes. Now before I loose my control over my anger u leav from here.
He again started to click pics. Vinit was staring him angrily now. he looks at car and thinks something. He goes to car and sees sanskar who was exactly opp direction busy in clicking pics. Vinit removes the gear. Car starts to move towards sanskar slowly. He was unware and busy in his work. Vinit was giving evil smile. Sanskar turned and saw car too near to him. before he cud move car hits him and fell in cliff. Vinit smiled evilly and turned back to go but he heard sanskar’s voice. He goes near cliff and saw him hanging to a branch. Still sanskar dint knew that it was done by him, he thought accidentally it happened.
San: vinit. Forward ur hand. Pull me up.
He was still standing.
San: come on vinit. Give ur hand. I cant hold for long.
He started to smile evilly. Laksh understood everything.
San: it means u?
Vin shouts: yes its me. And yes u r rite. I love ragini. I love her so much. I want to marry her. I want her as my life partner. I don’t know when but m loving her. U cant stop me. I’ll get her at any cost. For that if I need to kill u, then I’ll do that also. Only u r between us. Aftr ur death she’ll b mine. Forever.
He shouts loudly. Sanskar was shocked.
San: u will not succeed in ur evil work. U r hurting a pure soul. Don’t do this vinit. Pull me up. I’ll forgive u. I’ll make u start afresh.
Vin: no way. I don’t want ur forgivness. I want ragini. I want u to die. Bye.
He turns.
San: vinit. U r doing wrong. God wont forgiv u.
He turns back and bend towards sanskar.
Vin: u r rite. Give me ur hand.
Sanskar tried hard to hold his hand. Vinit holds his hand and sanskar leaves branch and start to come up.
Vin: u r rite. God wont forgive me. Sry sanskar. Gud bye.
He leaves his hand. Sanskar falls down shouting his name.
Vinit goes back. Before entering in home he made his face look sad.
Rag: vinit. U both came. Tell sanskar to get ready fast. We r getting late.
She looks behind him.
Rag: where is sanskar vinit? U both went together rite? Call him fast. We r getting late.
Vin: bending his head, he cant come.
Rag with little fear: wat do u mean he cant come? And y r u bending ur head like this? Call my sanskar. Where is he.
Due to her shout akshat and riya too comes there.
Vin: he… is… no..more.
Ragini slapped him hardly. Akshat and riya got shocked.
Rag crying and angrily: how dare u to tell like that? He is my sanskar. No one can dare to tel like this.
Aks: vinit. Wat r u saying? Don’t prank.
Vin: its truth akshat. Y shud I lie. See here.
He showed them his wounds. (himself he did to gain sympathy)
Vin: I tried to save him. but (acts like crying)
Rag holds his collar wat trying to save? Tell me clearly.
Riya: vinit tell us properly.
Vin: we parked car at hill. He started to take pics and I was other side enjoying nature. Don’t know when car started to move towards him due to slope. I shouted to save him. but til that he fell with car. But then also I tried to pull him up. I tried my best. I got injured too. but I cudnt save him. I cudnt save my frnd. M not gud frnd.
He started to act like crying. Listening him ragini sat in shock.
Rag: no. Sanskar cant leav me.
Riya consoles her.
Rag: riya. See wat he’s telling. He cant leav me. He promised me that he won’t leav me for life long.
She started crying badly. Akshat and riya too started to cry. Vinit was feeling happy inside.
Police came to investigate.
Pol: we searched everywhere but we found nothing. I think he must b dead. We got these few things. May b it belongs to him.
He gave them sanskar’s jacket and purse. And left from there.
Riya: we shud move from here. lets go home.
Rag shouts: I cant come anywhere. I wont leav my sanskar.
Somehow they convinced her and they left from there.
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They reached home. Ragini was living lifelessly. Vinit was always near to her trying to console her. He was acting very sweet. He was taking care of ragini in all ways. He cooks food for her. He used to take her out. Akshat and riya were observing that.
One day ragini was sitting with recorder. She turned it on.
Sanskar’s voice: happy bday my chinnu. This recording now on ur bday. U r inside getting ready. Soon we will leav for resort. U shud tell how u feel my surprise.
She cried: I really miss u so badly.
She changed audio and played.
Voice: gm my chinnu. U went with riya out leaving me alone. Its holiday. M sitting alone bored here. instead of sitting quite m doing this. U know chinnu, u r my world. I know u already knew this. But still I want to tell this everytime. I feel gud whenever I tel this. My chinnu my life my world. Everything. I love our silly fights. I love ur face when ur mouth is full of cake. I love when u make pout. I just wish god that every birth he make u only my life partner. I cant leav without u. hey akshat came. Whenever u feel alone just listen this. Love u chinnu.
Rag again again repeats that audio and listens. A month passed. Vinit took ragini to evng walk. Akshat and riya were also with him.
Riya: akshat. Did u notice how do vinit care ragini. In this situation she really needed frnd like him. as a frnd he’s fulfilling his duty.
Ragini falls unconscious while walking. All ran to her. They called doctor.
Riya: doc. Wat happened to her?
Doc: its gud news. She’s 3months pregnant.
He left.
Riya: don’t know whether we shud b happy by this news or not. Happy cos its ragsan ansh. Sad coz sanskar is not here at this time. M feeling very bad to ragini.
Vinit was angry but soon get calm as sanskar only not alive.
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After 1 month.
Riya with akshat comes to ragini.
Riya: ragini , don’t take me wrong but I think u shud need someone at this time. I mean u need a partner.
Akshat and ragini both looks on.
Riya: I know u both may take me wrong. But think as a human. Ragini is pregnant. Still u have full life to live. Ur kid wil need a father. U too need a life partner. In my eyes a guy is there who may love u like sanskar. VINIT…
Rag: stop it . no one can love me like sanskar. No one can b my sanskar. Marriage is far away. M happy with his memories. m happy with this baby.
Riya: akshat. Make her understand. M thinking for her future. Ragini. Don’t get angry. Just think once. It’s easy to say but when ur baby grows up he’ll ask abt father. He’ll miss his father. He too deserves father’s love. That time wat U’ll answer. And m telling abt Vinit as I saw him caring u. May b he likes u. U can move on with him. Think abt it. Take ur own time.
They both left. Vinit was standing outside hiding listening their talks.
Vin: I was waiting for this only. Everyone likes me. All thinks m good for u. They are rite. M gud for u Ragini, more than sanskar. I’ll keep u happy. Just say yes for me.
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Rag to herself: I can’t even think anyone except sanskar. I don’t want any other in my life. I’ll take care of my baby. Sanskar’s memories r enough.
She wiped her tears.
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Ragini is 9 months pregnant now. All were taking care of her. Vinit was waiting for her love. He was sure that she’ll come to him.
One day Ragini to Riya.
Rag: Riya, can u pls keep a party to nite.
Riya: for wat.
Rag: I’ll say that to nite.
She agreed. Evng party started. Guests were present. Ragini was wearing salwar.
Rag: thanku everyone for coming here in short time. I wanted to announce something. After a long time m happy. after sanskar my world was shattered. I lost all hope. But one person was there who always looked at me. Always b with me in my every time. Now I want to move on with him. I want to share my happiness with u all. So I called u all here.
All were talking to each other.
Rag: I know u may b thinking who’s he. He’s Vinit.
Vinit was very much happy. But didn’t show up.
Rag: Vinit. Will u marry me?
Vin happily: of course Ragini.
Rag: thanku.
Riya to Ragini: finally u decided to move on. M really happy for u.
She hugged her.
Rag: but I want marriage after tomorrow. No engagement.
Vin: as u wish Ragini.
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At home Vinit was laughing like mad.
Vin: finally u r mine Ragini. No one can stop us from being one.
He switched on TV. He was seeing a movie. In that a scene comes where police was saying.
Pol: murderer thinks that he’s clever but he doesn’t know that every murder leave some clue. We got this camera at that place. Everything is recorded in this. Now he’s under us.
Vinit suddenly remembered something.
Vin: camera? That day sanskar was also having camera. Wat if something recorded in it. I’ve to find it.
He goes to Ragini. She was sitting watching TV.
Vin: Ragini. How r u feeling now.
Rag: gud. Do u need something?
Vin: nothing. Just came to see u. (After a pause) Ragini, do… U…have.. sanskar’s camera?
Rag: yes. That day while leaving from there. A kid came and gave me. He found it near that place.
vinit was sweating badly now.
Vin: did u saw? I mean it’s his last memory.
Rag: who can know other than me. He loved that camera so much. It will be always with me. Thanks for that kid.
Vin: did u saw any video or pics?
Rag: it’s there on table. U can see.
Vin: I’ll see it in home.
He took packet and ran to his home. He checked all photos first. Then he inserted disc. He saw full video. He found nothing in that. He got relaxed.
Vin: thank God. It’s nothing like that which I was thinking.
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Next day.
Rag: Vinit. Tmrw is our marriage. If u don’t mind can u take me to that place where sanskar breathed his last. I want to see last time before starting fresh life.
Vin: of course. Get ready. I’ll also get ready.
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Both reached that hill place. Ragini slowly got down. She starts to walk near that cliff.
Rag: I really curse this place. I hate this place which took my sanskar away from me.
Vin in heart: but I love this place which is going to reason of our marriage.
Rag turns to vin: r u happy with this marriage?
Vin: yes.
Rag: do u love me?
Vin: I love u very much Ragini.
Rag: can u live without me?wat if I leave u?
Vin: I can’t imagine that. I want you Ragini. I love u so much. I can’t live without u.
Rag smiles and takes her mob send him a msg. He took his mob out. It was video. He opened it. He was shocked to see that. Everything was recorded when he was making sanskar to fall. When he was letting him to die. All words, his confession everything was recorded.
FB shown when she got camera she had given it to studio. Then later she saw his true face. But she hide that video.
Mob fell from his hand. He looked at Ragini. She cries.
Rag: y Vinit, y u did like this with me? Y u killed sanskar? How pain he must b felt at that time when u din’t give ur hand to him. He was pleading u to save him. How can u b so cruel? Infront u he fell, and u were simply seeing him. He considered u as his brother but u?
She sat down and cried a lot. Vinit was coming near to her but she stopped.
Rag: don’t move. Don’t come near to me. U don’t deserve me. Not only me, u don’t deserve any girl. That’s y u lost ur love coz of ur this behaviour. U might b thinking y I said yes to marry u. I want to snatch ur happiness as u snatched from me. And I knew u wanted to marry me. So agreed so that u feel happy. Now m leaving. Now u’ll feel how it pains when ur happiness goes away from u. I want u to feel same. I want u to suffer from pain.
She starts to move backwards.
Vin: wat r u doing Ragini? Don’t leave me.
Rag: smiles while crying: feel the pain Vinit.
She was abt to jump from cliff but some one holds her hand. She looked on. It was sanskar. She cudnt believe her eyes. She smiles widely. She hugged him tightly.
Rag: sanskar U r alive. I can’t believe my eyes. M very happy sanskar. I missed u alot. How dare u to leave me.
She starts to hit him playfully.
San: ouch. Stop meri raani. M still injured. Look here.
She sees that still some injuries were there on his body. He was not fully recovered.
Rag: how did this?…?
She shouts sanskar.
He looks behind Vinit standing holding rod to beat sanskar but akshat holds him and beats him. He ties his hands and legs.
San: m alive just coz of our love. I never expected that I’ll b saved. When I fell down, I got hit by many rocks and fell on branch of tree. Few people around there took me and gave me treatment. But my condition was so worst that I cudnt able to walk at that time. After very difficulty I called akshat. He told me that how Vinit is trying to come closer to u. I thought if I Tel that time abt me then he cud have harmed u. So I decided to get cured first then Wil come to u. Till that I told akshat to keep an eye on him.
Rag: then y Riya suggest me to marry Vinit?
Aks: only I knew abt sanskar. Riya dint knew.
San: today when I came to know abt ur coming here I knew that u wud definitely do something like this. So I rushed here with aksaht’s help. M really thankful to God for giving me frnd like akshat. And I hate frns like Vinit who stabs their frnd only.
Rag: forget everything. M very happy that u r alive. U don’t know how I suffered. Now I spend all time with u. I want to forget these painful days.
They hug again. They made Vinit get arrested.
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Riya: sry sanskar for telling Ragini to marry him.
San: no Riya. U r not at fault. U think gud for Ragini. It’s all Vinit who took advantage of our goodness.
Riya: then as we had decided Ragini’s marriage today, then it shud b done rite.
All: of course.
Ragsan get married on same day. Next day Ragini gets pain and admitted to hospital. Sanskar was nervous. Doctor came and says
Doc: congratulations. U have twins. Both r girls.
Sanskar got super happy.
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It was naming ceremony of their kids.
San: m happy chinnu. Now only u and me with our babies. Wel .. have u thought any name?
Rag: yes. Amritavarshini. One’s name Wil b Amrita, others varshini. Hamare aur hamare bacho k life me hamesha Amrit ki varsha ho.
They happily hug eachother with both kids.
……. The end…….
Hoped u liked it frns. And sry for making Parth character negative. But I had already decided story.
Ignore spelling errors.
Love you all ??????
14 Comments
Amazinggggggggggg sis. Happy Friendship day sis.
Awesome yaar
Nice
This is kannada n Telugu movie by the same ryt… U just changed the name of the characters with Lil difference I suppose… I think u should take all the credits just for writing a story of film that to without taking efforts to add ur own brain
Before writing any story I always mention whether its own or inspired by any movie. U can’t point out someone like this. I very well know using my brain. Well.. thanks for commenting.
Dear frns let me Tel u all that I always mentioned whenever I used movie as a storyline or story itself. even if it’s ‘tere ishq me jana’ or ‘death day’ . This shot is also inspired by a movie. Thanku all.
Maam inspired is different… N copying 90 percent is different….its not called pointing out at u… It’s called throwing light at the truth… U don’t have to offended its alright?
U can read my above comment.’ I used movie as a storyline or STORY ITSELF’. Hope u understood. Wel thanks for ur comment. GN.
Awesome
Awesome
Superb dear. Waiting for your other stories.
Nice
Mazhavillu Malayalam movie except last part right???
Yes.