Hey rikarians,back with next part.?
I got a good response from all of you for the first chappy, so this is will have 1 more part?
Those who missed first , Read Here
Thanks to rasika, Sam,Sagithya,Dhar,Shreyanvi, Aneez, Kanfi, Alekhika,mahi ,Palak ,B.K., Samm , YAashu, Nikitajai , Sanyukta, Verna, Astha for your support and also all silent readers who enjoyed this.
Part 2
He was simply watching the moon and smiling; but I… I was actually admiring him because I have seen this omkaraji only in photos, not for real.
His hair was flying high, his face had a certain glow which was complimented by moonlight. Oh, this chirotta…
His eyes are more intense today, his smile is more gentle today, he is in a new andaaz today. My heart is beating faster seeing him like this?
Suddenly he looked upon me, I was standing Freezed; so he asked me
” why do you stare me like the heroes of movies? I’m not a girl ,ok?”
I smiled at this, I decided to surprise him.I rounded his neck with my hands and moved closer. He was literally shocked because we had opened up our feelings just 2 days before and we never shared a moment like this in these 2 days.
“ye …ye kya kar reh gouri?” he was stumbling.
I decided to play with him.
” Mein na, pyar kar raha hoon. Kuch aitraaz hai kya?” I asked in a soft tone.
His eyes were glowing but the next moment his face had an expression of fear. Is he acting?
I moved closer and began enjoying the fragrance of his hair. It was giving me goosebumps. I slowly touched his hair; it was smooth just like him. I was so lost in enjoying it such that it was later I noticed that he was seeing me. I shifted my eyes to his face and once again had a feeling of losing my self into those magnetic eyes.I told him,
“tumhare Baal hain na..?” before I could complete he told,
” make me more romantic isn’t it?” he spoke with utter pride.
I just had a good laugh, oh so he is not bad; but I wasn’t ready to give up..
“nahi omkaraji, darsal your hair’s fragrance reminds me of my shampoo..” I laughed loudly.
His face turned to an embarrassed one. I had a doubt when I saw the bottle finished; but didn’t think of a twist like this.
“woh… actually gouri… I wanted to give you the surprise today itself and I didn’t have my usual stock with me. So I thought I will adjust with yours.”
He was standing like a kid who stole toffee,pouting lips; how much I love this face.
I was smiling and then again started admiring him.
“kya hua gouri, why are you seeing me like this?” His doubt is genuine, because I have never watched him for long like this; I dont know his face is really attracting me towards him.
All these days I never had this sort of feelings; I was only a dharam patni who did all her duties. But today, his eyes, smile, hair everything is pulling me closer to him.
“woh…log kahetein na..hmm…hmm.. tum bohot hand…hand…!!”
“oho gouri… handsome” he said in a special tone.”I know gouri I’m very handsome. Tumhe pata, even in my college there were many girls who used to fangirl me; they just loved my look. When I used to go for exhibitions, many girls used to come and round me for selfies and autographs!!” He said with a smirk.
I didn’t like this but didn’t want to show my anger, what will he think; he will think that I’m jealous and start to tease me.I moved off and went and sat on the couch near window.
I was just staring the moon and stars. Don’t know whether he read my mind; I could feel a cold touch on my shoulder; this cold touch surprisingly made me warm.From past 2 days, his closeness is creating a magic on me.
“oho MERI jealous chiraiyya, dekho na.” he was buzzing near my ears.
I reluctantly faced him; but my sight was downwards.I understood that he was trying to make me jealous.
He slowly raised my chin with his index finger and he smiled. Hey Sankarji, this smile is creating a fountain of happiness in my mind. How much I had waited for this smile and joy on his face???
” why did you do this?” I asked him.
“kya??” he asked doubtfully.
“woh.. yeh Baal..” I asked touching his hair
He cupped my cheek and told
“tumhe pata gouri…love is like that. It can make big changes in anyone. You know even rudra had asked me many times to open my hair, to become the old Mr.artist.But … I don’t know, my mind never went back to my old self, something was missing in my life.I couldn’t love my life. I couldn’t go back whole heartedly to my art, my passion even though all problems were solved.
But then ,when I realized that I couldn’t move forward without you; that I’m affected by you ,that you are my love… I found out that you have filled the void in my life, I was rejuvenated. I could feel energy filling upon me; I began loving my life, my art, I was feeling that this is my second birth which is destined to live and die with you.”
I couldn’t bear the word death from his mouth; even I didn’t know when I had kept my finger on his lips. My eyes were blurred with tears. I could feel his pain; in fact my heart was aching all this time. How much this person had suffered in spite of having every pleasures in his life.
My tears were wetting his hands; I knew it. But as I looked, he smiled even though his eyes were watery. He brushed my cheek softly and was coming closer.
As he moved closer, my mind was asking me to move closer to him. I just followed the instruction, and moved forward like a robo. We both even forgot to blink our eyes and to breath.
We were so close that we could feel each other’s breath. I was saying Omkara and he was saying Gouri so softly that only our minds could hear it.
I was being drowned in his eyes and he was seeing my lips; I knew what will happen next. I don’t know whether I’m ready for this. But that anxiety…it was rising in my mind.
It was making its effects on me.
I didn’t know when my hands moved up to circle his neck and strode through his silky hair. My eyes were half closed making me prepared for the upcoming event.
As his lips touched mine, suddenly he….
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45 Comments
NYC os
Thanks alekhi
Continue supporting?
Dat was awesome diii.. ..but yeh kya y u left incomplete not fair haan????…plzzz post nxt part soon….
Nd di..update ur ff also naa..i m eagerly waiting for it…
Lots of luv???
Byeee
Hey, I know that was a cliff hanger, shall update today itself.
So happy to know that you all missed my canvas, shall come back with that too?
Amazinggggggggg!!!!! ?????
Even I love rikara n want some really cute moments of them….. U did an amazing job dear… loved it so much!!! ?
Hey Richard, I think this is the first time you r commenting on my ff. Thank you.
Please keep following.
Shall come up with more romantic scenes?
Yeah this is the first time…. N I loved it…. ?
Shraddha a romantically epi
Hey, thanks dear rasi ?
Badhiya badhiya! Jaldi se post karo next part pleasseeeeeeeeejjjjjj!
Hey anonymous, mein zaroor jaldi post karungi ?
What is this ? Why did you ended it like this ? But it was amazing . I don’t know that from where these type of thinks come in your pensive mind . Totally enjoyed it .
Oho prathi, I know I wasn’t supposed to stop there But wanted to keep some suspense.
Just wait for the next?
Awesome and cool and amazing part
Thanks a lot Sathi?
Hey what is this.. u can’t do this shraddha.. I want next episode.ow itself..
I loved Gauri’s prank on his hair shampoo.. that was really gud humor touch between couples.. loved it and pls teach me some romantic moments like this dr.. seeing u ppl I feel like I’m very poor in writing my FFs..
Hey Verna, you r so wonderful in crea ting romantic scenes. In fact I’m inspired by you.
Anyway thanks a ton for reading and enjoying my os?
Hey Shradha… Sorry Dr for not commenting in ur previous part but Dr what u did??? Really I speechless and just enjoing the parts.. Post soon…
Hi kiya, yes I missed you in last part but thanks for coming back.
Shall come up with next soon?
Awesome yaar…. But y u ended before completing….I loved it… waiting for the next one….. Post it as soon as possible
Hi sagi, just wait and watch dear?
It’s awesome….I love it…
Thnx for mentioning me dear…
It was an ammmazing part…
U described it eeally very well…
Keep it up
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
Romantic. Love it keep writing more
Lovely epi. Waitind for next one.
Awesome….loved it
Omkara realised that he had fallen in love with his wife and this love is making him reach a height …like he is rising in her love to live life with a thousand of new pleasure. If not for her presence.. her shampoo can remind him of her existence and importance for him.
Gouri has recently seen the change of his life and no doubt the sole reason is she.. she know it . The chand chirota Omkara Singh Oberoi Nandi and this old shayar Om are one yet completely different . She had face the first one and managed to reach his heart by cracking all the shell around his heart , her native place for rest of their life.Now she deserve to enjoy life eith her discovery the second yet original one. He shared the reason for his several action with her and teased to capture the priceless reaction she gave.
Gouri returned the sweetness to his life, returned the better him and this moment of happiness is meant to celebrate by some sweet… “Happiness.. kuch meetha hojaaye”… and the most tasty sweet is you know they shared( ahem ahem!!) , to devour the taste of each other through their lips.
Hi astha di, such a lovely comment.
But ? it’s not yet the time for then to enjoy that sweet
U left at a cliffhanger , plzzzz do post the next update ASAP, loved this version of omkara ?
Yep, I wanted to build up the surprise.
Yearning to see this om in screen?
Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr…… I loved it to the core dr…..
Thank you bk, waiting for ur ff too?
Awesome episode. I loved it.
There were so many highlights in ur ff,
1.including Gauri’s prank.
2.Omkara’s line “oho my jealous chiraiyya”.
3.Romance was damn nice.
Keep writing dear. Eagerly waiting for ur next ff. Thank you for mentioning my name. sorry for late commenting.
Hi sanyu, thanks dear for the comment.
Please keep following?
First of all sorry for not commenting on previous part and your last chapter of your ff…..and this OS was awesome….loved Omri a lot…..keep going like this…..waiting for next part…both OS and aff
Thank u San, u don’t have to say sorry.
So happy that u commented?
It’s good, feelings are well portrayed here and loved the way roamnce is exprssed…am concluding it in one word because shraddha, my pain has went severe and i have 2 undergone a surgery for my left eye as now completely it is troubling …..tmrw onwards it will start ….so it’s so hard for me 2 type and read…….bye….
Oh di, I didn’t knew u will read this now.
U should have took rest.
I didn’t want u to strain, OMG!!
PLEASE come back ONLY when u r fine..
Thanks 4 reading this….
Praying for ur fast recovery??
It is nice one dear
omg! so cute! omkara’s shampoo secret was so funny 😀 on to the next now 🙂
Awesome
Post next one soon
Thank you NEHA, already posted the next.
Please do read
Awee…so sweet of Gauri to not let Om know she is jealous and how nice of Om to express his pain to Gauri his soulmate and life oartener, who changed his way if thinking and made him what and how he actually is from inside……this is fantastic…and now since you left this at midway …i have to run to read the next part…meet you in part-3
Awwww….. this was a cute one…. I am so happy that I started reading it.? You’re a great writer Shraddha Di ?