Hey guys its Riana…and i am bored watching all the boring scenes at present of Original Sns…So here i have wrote an OS of Gohem’s lov story n How the show ends…Pls share the comments below…
SCENE-1
After all the courtroom drama…
Gopi and Dharam proves that Jaggi is innocent n real murderer of Ahem is Manoj…
Manoj is sentenced for lifetime imprisonment…
Gopi: Today i am really happy kanha ji i was not able to save my ahem ji but i saved jaggi ji today…
Jaggi: Gopi thankyou so much for saving me…you r proving that we r moving one step ahead in our husband-wife relationship…
Gopi: Jaggi pls stop this nonsense…i told you several times that i love only ahem ji who is no more!!…
Jaggi gets sad…
Urmilla whispers: Stop it..i told you to control your emotions…
Jaggi nods..
Kokila comes…
Kokila folds are hands n apologises to gopi…
Kokila cries: Gopi bahu mujhe maaf kardo..
Gopi: Maaji..
Kokila cries: Meh galat thi…maine hamesha tumhe galat samjha…tumhe bura bhala kaha…pls forgive me!!..
Gopi: Maaji pls dont embarras me…i was never angry with you…i am happy that you understood that jaggi ji is innocent…
Kokila: Jaggi pls forgive me…
Jaggi: Arey maasi…pls dont do like this…
Kokila hugs him..
Urvashi: Accha tum log ghar jao meh mandir ho aati hoon…
Gopi: Ji maasi ji…
They all leaves…
SCENE-2
MODI MANSION
Everyone welcomes jaggi…
Pari n Mona are quite upset..
Jaggi: Gopika i want to say you something…
Gopi: Jaggi not now…i have some work…
She goes to mandir…
SCENE-3
SURYAVANSHI HOUSE
Meera,Vidya and Priyal r playing with the babies…
Cops comes suddenly…
Dharam n Shravan: Inspector aap log yaha…
Inspector: We came to Arrest Mrs. Gaura Suryavanshi..
All gets shocked!!..
Meera: What did she did??
Inspector: In Ahem Modi death case…Manoj told that Gaura Suryavanshi had gave her instructions to kill any one among Ahem,Gopi or Kokila…
All gets shell shocked!!!…
Meera: I cant believe this…she is my dad’s murderer..
She screams: Gaura…Gaura Suryavanshi bahaar nikal…
Gaura comes out…
She starts her acting..
Gaura: Meera kya hua beta…why are you shouting??
Meera shouts: You bl**dy old woman…you killed my dad…
Gaura gets shocked!!…
Vidya: Inspector dont leave her…let her get arrested!!…
Dharam n Shravan yells at gaura..
Gaura: No no its not true…
Meera shouts: Shut up!!..
Meera slaps Gaura!!!…
Dharam: You deserve this…
Gaura: Chor mujhe…
She gets up n pushes meera..
She falls…
Gaura tries to leave but Dharam holds her…
Gaura takes a wooden vase n hits dharam…
Dharam: Aaahhh!!…
Meera: Dharam ji..
Gaura: You can never catch me!!…catch me if you can…
She flees…
Police follows her…
Inspector: We have to find her…
Gaura hides somewhere n calls her goons…
But police somehow catches her…
Police informs Dharam that Gaura is been caught…
Dharam cries: Dont leave her…let her die…
Meera n Vidya cries hugging there babies..
SCENE-4
MODI MANSION
Jaggi: Gopika…
Gopi: Okay say jaggi what is your important speech…
Jaggi: Five years ago…
FLASHBACK..
Ahem’s car falls on cliff…
He screams for help…
Jaggi comes..
Ahem gets shocked seeing his lookalike…
Jaggi: Oye jaggi yeh toh bilkul tera xerox copy hai…
Ahem: Pls save me pls..
Jaggi is in druked condition but still he somehow saves ahem…
But his clothes gets torn while saving ahem…
Ahem thanks jaggi…
Jaggi: Its okay…but clothes my pant n T shirt…
Ahem: No problem you can take my clothes…
He gave his clothes to jaggi to wear…
Ahem takes a jaggi’s clothes n wores it..
Jaggi: I have to go now is waiting for me…But suddenly he starts getting sleepy…
Ahem: What happened r you okay!!!…
Jaggi: I think i will…i will faint…
He comes near cliff end…
Ahem: Dont go far…
Ahem tries to save jaggi but he falls on cliff…
Ahem screams: Jaggi!!!…
He looks at the cliff but gets unbalanced n falls on cliff…but falls on bushes…
After sometime police comes n gets shocked seeing ahem modi dead (which was Jaggi)…
Dead body is taken to Modi mansion…
All r shocked seeing Ahem dead…
ON THE OTHER HAND…
Ahem reaches hospital…
Urvashi: Jaggi beta r u okay!!
Ahem: I m not jaggi…i am ahem…Jaggi is dead…
Urvashi gets shell shocked n falls unconsious…
Doctor checks her..
Doc: Its a major heartattack…if she gets another shock she will die…
Ahem gets shocked n acts as being Jaggi for somedays…
AFTER 15-16 DAYS…
Urvashi hears entire truth from ahem…
She asks Ahem to go n live his life..
Ahem leaves to go…
But some goons kidnaps him..
Goons takes ahem to their place…
Ahem: Why did you captured me??…I am Ahem modi…leave me
A voice says Ahem Modi is dead…
The voice was Gaura’s…
She was calling from police station..
Ahem: Gaura..
Gaura: Yes…Gaura Suryavanshi….that lady whom you all sent to jail for imprisonment…now listen!!…Jaggi is dead but modi family thinks that Ahem is dead…Now if you try open mouth by saying that you r ahem then….
She laughs..
Gaura: I will kill sorry sorry not me bcoz i am in jail so my goons will kill your Gopi…and only gopi but that kokila,Paridhi,Jigar,Hetal….your entire modi family…and you will be alone to stay here…
Ahem gets dumbstuck!!…
Ahem: How insane you are??…
Gaura shouts: You have to listen else Gopi….Hahahaha..
She laughs evilly…
Goons leaves him…
Ahem gets tensed n decides to act as jaggi…
He tells everything to Urvashi…
FLASHBACK ENDS
Gopi in shock falls on floor hearing all this!!!…
Gopi: How jaggi ji how i will believe that you are my ahem ji??…
Ahem shows her Dna reports of his kokila n parag…
Gopi checks the reports..
Gopi: Its tru..
Ahem: Yes gopi i am your Ahem ji!!!…
Gopi bursts out into tears n hugs ahem….
Gopi cries: Ahem ji uss gaura ki wajah seh aapne kitna kuch saha…kitna kuch sacrifice kiya…
Ahem cries: I had lost the hope but when that day on janmashtami when i hold you…i was so happy…
Kokila: Whaaattt???…
Gopi n Ahem looks…
Entire family hears the truth…
Kokila cries: Ahem…mera ahem dikra…
Everyone hugs ahem n rejoice…
Gopi n Ahem r married once again..
A voice says: After hearing all this incidents the court has decided that Gaura hasnt changed yet after her wrong deeds and by Mr.Ahem Modi n Mrs. Gopi Modi’s statement…Mrs.Gaura Suryavanshi is sentenced till death…The court is adjourned…
Gaura gets punished for her evil sins n sentenced to death…
6 MONTHS LATER…
Chanda delivers Meera’s babies(One girl n one boy)…
And leaves by taking her money professionally…
Vidya names them Akash and Ganga…
Meera: Dharam ji today i am so happy…
Dharam kisses on Meera’s cheeks…
AFTER 20 YEARS
Its Gohem’s 50th anniversary…
That is Golden Jubilee…
Modi family is all together dancing n celebrating…
HAPPY ENDING SONG PLAYS…
Gohem cuts the cake n blows the candles…
New gen n Old gen family members all dances together…
SAATH NIBHANA SAATHIYA TITLE TRACK PLAYS…
They all clicks a family photo…
Gohem looks at each other…
Photo gets clicked…
Everyone smiles n Screen Freezes…
THE SWEET END??
___________________________________________ It was my first OS…Was it good??…Pls no Harsh comments☺☺….Share the comments below??…
19 Comments
Good one Raina??Hope in SNS also story goes like this?.
Thanks a lot Sid???
Hi Riana, awesome os, awesome thoughts, I enjoyed a lot. Hope real sns has gone like this. Where jaggi is revealed to be ahem. and once again thank you for updating today, as submissions will
Be closed on next two/2 days.’thank you. Flashback was surprising.’I took it in reality. You have awesome writing skills. But will more happy if you have Make jigar back too. Rashi Jr has too married. Lol. Please to write more OS on current track. Gohem of 75+,hahahaha.please to comment in my ff,
https://www.tellyupdates.com/relation-souls-pmhmdishqbaaz-part2
Thanks a lot Shakaib???
Perfect ending!!!? I loved it. However the real show won’t end like this. They’ll end it with a Big Bang. Like the Radha track lasted for over a year and it ended at the Shiva temple with her death as the grand finale of the track.
I don’t think Gaura is the final vamp of SNS because most Indian tv vamps have a special connection to the main heroine.
Trishna from KGGK was Parvati sautan. Komolika from KZG was Anurag ex wife. Niharika from BALH was Ram stepmother. Radha was Gopi sister.
I think SNS might end next year as KGGK and Kyunki lasted for almost 9 years.
I think SNS might end with Gopi daughter in law being the last vamp. Rashmi sharma herself has wrote the track and I feel this is the last track.
I’m very sure Gopi daughter in law is the last vamp because SNS started with the story of Kokila and Gopi. Now, I’m sure Gopi will face problems because of her daughter in law.
Anyways, Gaura will be the main vamp of season 1 in my ff. She will hide from Ahem that his real mother Kokila is alive!
Thanks a lot Isaaq???
Amazing os u should write more os from now on☺after reading d fb scene I thought it hs happens in real in d serial thy should shw this n gohm unitng once again ?good for tht gaura gt arrestd finally?
Thankyou Mansi???
You should write more
Thanks Happy???
I hope jaggi Will be ahem. And well done for your OS.Keep it up .
Thanks Shakti???
Atleast in your ff we got what we wanted. So happy that the real culprits including gaura got arrested. Loved kokila apologizing to gopi and jaggi which we can only dream in the show. How jaggi turned out to be ahem was written so well.Shocking that its because of gaura that ahem had to pretend to be jaggi.it was my dream to read a story where jaggi turns out to be ahem and you fulfilled my dream gracefully. I never liked ahem who always screamed at gopi and blamed her for everything. I like jaggi very much as he is jovial and doesn’t fight with gopi unnecessarily. But I want gopi to be a one man woman.so marrying thrice and loving 2 of them is not digestible for me.so I want jaggi to be ahem.but I don’t want ahem to be serious and short tempered like before.I want him to be fun loving cheerful and funny like jaggi.loved chanda leaving after delivery without causing problems like in the show. Dharam kissing meera was cute.20 years leap was surprising.loved gourmet wedding anniversary celebration
Thanks a lot Jas???…for such a detailed comment…
Wish you had shown what happened to paridhi..Mona…I wonder whether they will reform anyday.also urvashi’s reaction seeing kokila ahem reunion
Sorry that i didnt that paridhi became positive n Mona too…
Special thanks to you for giving capital punishment to gaura.otherwise she would have returned and caused problems again
My pleasure!!
It was my first OS n i never thought that you all will like it so so much…Thankyou so so much guys…in future i will write more OS as possible…