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WHERE WERE WE???
YES….SWASAN HAD PROPOSED EACH OTHER….
They sat for a long time there itself before they returned back……due to their busy schedule they had not talked properly for days …one day…
At night…..our night convo call…..
Sanky’s pov……
‘And, in everybody’s presence, our eyes will be talking to each other.
Those unsaid words which will be heard very clearly by them. When you will look into my eyes,
you will understand what I am feeling, that very moment, gazing at you.’
‘And when the people will be busy helping themselves to the food, my eyes will ask you to come
upstairs, to the terrace. And I will make my way to the staircase and head upwards.’
‘And my eyes will tell you to go on ahead, and at the first opportunity, I will soon escape, saying I
have to go to washroom,’ she said, in that girlish, mischievous tone.
‘I will be on the terrace, standing just behind the door where the staircase to the terrace ends.’
‘You will hear my anklets and my bangles tinkling as I come up the stairs to the dark terrace,’ she
said, slowly.
‘But you won’t know that I am standing behind the door,’ I whispered.
‘And I will push the door and go straight ahead,’ she too started whispering.
‘The moment you go two steps ahead, I will grab you from behind.’
I don’t know what was happening to us. Was it the fruit of spending those weeknights without talking to each other, or something else?
Outside, it had started raining, adding to the sensation of the moment. I could hear the rain
spattering on the ground, and the cold breeze blew open the windows and came into my room that
night.
‘Sanskar!’ she cried my name with pleasure.
‘And grabbing you from behind, I will take you and lock you in my arms.’ I closed my eyes. And
maybe she did the same when she said, ‘Shona!’ again, very slowly, full of love, taking a deep breath.
‘And with my hand I will bring your long hair in front of your left shoulder and I will bring my face
very close to your neck on the right, with my other hand playing on your bare waist …’
I tried to keep my emotions in check because I did not want to scare my sweetheart too much, so
early. She didn’t say anything for a while, but our breaths were getting louder. My own heart was
pounding inside me with pleasure.
‘And then?’ she finally asked. I understood her state of mind, the ripples, the troughs and crests in
her heart. But, above all, she wanted to enjoy that moment with me.
And I answered her, ‘And then you will feel my lips behind your right ear, on your neck.’
‘Mmm,’ she murmured, breathing heavily.
‘I am feeling something so different at this moment. Are you?’ I asked her very silently.
‘Yes, something very different. What are you feeling?’
‘With you in my arms, I am able to smell the cologne that you are wearing, your sweet feminine
fragrance. I feel my lips kissing your shoulder and going down your back, licking the slightest sweat
adhering to you …’ By this time, even my voice had started shaking.
I asked her, ‘Tell me, what are you feeling?’
‘I feel …’ she was struggling to complete her sentence and I could still hear her breath loud and
clear.
She hesitated. I waited.
‘I … I feel,’ she paused and then tried again, ‘I feel as if you are hypnotizing me, casting a magic spell that I don’t want to come out of.’
She was breathing faster now, shivering. Her passionate voice was stimulating me further.
‘Now my other hand is moving on your waist. And then …’ I paused.
‘And then …?’ she insisted I go on.
‘And then, all of a sudden, it has started raining,’ I brought the rain from outside my window into our sweet dream.
‘Mmm … And then …?’
Very slowly, I whispered, ‘And then, I have turned you towards me. We are wet from the rain. I am
watching you in your wet sari which is sticking to your body. I am seeing the raindrops falling on your
forehead, running down your nose and hanging on your lips for a while before running further down
your body. Strands of your wet hair are glued to your cheek.’
‘And then …?’ She started whispering again.
‘You are looking down, somewhere on my shirt, too shy to look into my eyes. I am raising your
chin, to help you look into and read my eyes which are staring at you.’
‘A … n … d … t … h … e … n …?’ she was hardly able to speak any more and was losing her
words.
‘With our heads tilted slightly, my lips feel the raindrops sticking to your lips, swallowing them,
further discovering the softness of your lips …’ And that passionate kiss which I described to her
lasted for quite a while. That was the first time, I felt, she allowed me to cross a few boundaries. Miles
apart from each other, we felt each and every shiver of that moment.
We were lost in each other when, suddenly, she turned mischievous. ‘Hey! People down there will
be looking for us. I have to rush before my parents come upstairs, searching for me,’ she shouted.
I wonder how she collected her energy and, more than that, how she remembered the fake people in
the fake rain, on that fake engagement night (though it was to come true, in a few months).
‘Aah! The people down there will be happy with their food,’ I tried to convince her.
‘Nah … please. Come on dear, now open your arms. We have to go and change our clothes before they see us,’ she urged, laughing at the virtual reality we were in.
‘Ok. But on one condition.’
‘And what’s that?’
‘I want to see you while you change.’
‘Oh … ho … ho … tumhe ungli kya pakdaai, tum to pura haath pakdna chahte ho. Zyaada galat fehmiyaan mat paalo,’ she warned me with a little laugh.
‘Haath pakdna? Not just the hand, I want to hold all of you!’ I responded. I tried hard to convince
her, but she didn’t allow me, even though it was only make believe.
That night, we slept quite late. No, it wasn’t night. I guess it was close to sunrise when we finally
hung up.
I stared at my cellphone and, rising from my bed, I walked to the window. I noticed that the rain had
stopped by then. I was tired and hungry, so I picked up an apple from the kitchen and, munching on it,
I lay down on my bed. Then I went over our conversation again, over all that had happened, every
detail … I don’t know when I fell asleep and started dreaming …
Pov over……
Days flew by and our lovebirds love was growing more intense day by day…….one day their matter was disclosed to the family…..
Suji: Really they love each other….
Ragu: Haa maa…….So what say…….
Ap: Let’s fix their engagement….
Sanky: No……(shouts) All are surprised……
Lucky: You love her naaa……..
Sanky: Yess,,…….she dosen’t always busy with office.she loves it more….(pouts)
All laugh……..
ENGAFEMENT DAY…..
Swasan exchange rings and everyone hoots……..all are happy but this happiness was not for a long time in their lives……..
Swara: You will not use the word I love you Darling for anyone else apart from me okay….
Sanky: Yeh kaisa promise hai ok I won’t…..
Later they all sat playing truth and dare……
Lucky: Sanky bhai truth or dare…..
Sanky: Dare…..
Lucky: Say I love you Darling to Ragini……and a flying kiss too….
Sanky: (unknowingly) I love you Ragini Darling………
Swara’s face was must seen at that time…….
Swara: I need to go to washroom would come in a sec…..
She angrily storms to her room…..
Raglak giggle……..
Later Sanky kept calling Swara……she didn’t open the door…..
Sanky: Swara……open the door naa……
Swara silence……..!!
Ragini: Why is she soo..angry with you………Did you break her promise……
Sanky: Why did you think loke that……
Lucky: Because Di does it everytime when someone breaks her promise…….Remember….did you…..
Sanky thinks for a while…. : Oh noo…..
Raglak smirk…….
Swara opens the door next morning and sees no one and gets sad…..
She was going to the hall when Sanky pulled her towards himself…..
SWARA: Leave me…….you broke my promise…..
Sanky: I am sorry wo bas galti…….
Swara: Abhi hi itne galti kar rahe ho bbad mein kya karoge……
Sanskar becomes num eexpressionless wht was Swara speaking suddenly his Angel started laughing loudly……..
Swara: Lucky tune sahi kaha tha iska toh rang hi utar gaya….haaaa…heee…….
Swalak hifi each other……..
Sanky: Swara ki bacchi…….
And runs after her……….
Fb over
Sanky: Kitni der aur Lucky…….
Lucky: Bas bhai 5 hrs aur……
Fb continues……..
Their first kiss was after their engagement….
Sanky’s pov…….
No one was at home…….everyone gone for shopping…..we were talking when suddenly Shonaa hugged me……..i hugged her back…..
She suddenly asked me….without any shyness……
Swara: Have u ever got butterfly kissed….
Butterfly kissed…….!! I repeated those cute words…..they sounded so lovely as I spoke them……
Hmm……….?? She started laughing…….
Naah……….’
‘let me show u then..’she said as she took off her shoes and leaned over me……..
Wait..!! No………..Hey give me a sec…..i pleaded I wanted to capture this moment
But she was not in a mood to listen…….
She sealed my lips with her forefinger…….and pushed me back as she climbed on to me……I was still trying to speak when I read what was wriiten on her t shirt……
YOU are Wrong……. I am right……..
I simply smiled and politely surrrenerded myself to her……
She confidently blew a puff of air on to my eyes……and brought her right closer to my eyes I was about to close my eye………when she told me not to…..her hair smelled amazing……I felt her poised body on me….
It was great to hold her…she then beautifully fluttered her eyrlashes against mine…..i followed her doing the same…..
The tiny hairs of our eyelashes……..rubbed against each of the other fluttering eye,,
You know naa wht u are going to experience rght now……she politely asked….
A butterfly kiss….. I answered……
A little later she slid down and and connected my lips with hers……I firmly held her in my arms and turned her over.she allowed me to do so……
Then I gently took her lower lip within mione and watched her closing her eyes…….
I kissed her paasionately……
We remained in that couch for a while……..
Pov over……
Swasan and Raglak’s wedding rituals were all going well..all happy……..
Sanky trying to irritate our Swara in every way possible………
Entering her room to apply haldi………forcing her to come to his room at night and other……..
Then suddenly one day Sahil visited her and ………
Next Day news came over that Sahil was dead…….
Swara was completely shocked not knowing what to do what not to do…….
She was completely shattered……
Sanky tried to talk to her but she ignored him…Strange,……..
And two days before Sanky met with a minor accident……..and was soon discharged……
Sanky observed Swara’s sweating face but ignored it it was just cocern…….
Swasan’s wedding day………
Sanskar was performing the rituals when message was spread to call Swara……..
She didn’t come……..
He waited and waited and soon……….
Sumi: She is not anywhere in the house……
It was like a thunderbolt to our Sanky……
He searched her everywhere…..but Alas…….no where to be found…….Sanky was still under shock on why did she leave him all so suddenly……..
2 yrs passed ……
And one day…….They got to know abt her……
They were going back to her…
Fb over…….
Lucky: Bhai we reached……
Sanky hurriedly got down and saw a big mansion old one infront of him………
He heard that voice again……..she was singing yet again ….
Voice full of pain…..
Mujhe ishq se rehna tha door
Gham iske bade jo hain mash’hoor
Par ye dil hai ki bilkul mana nahi
Mujhe kheench kar dekho le aaya wahin
Jahaan ishq hai, bas ishq hai
Haan ishq hai, bas ishq hai
Yaariyan ve.. Yaariyan ve..
Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x2)
Tu jo mila to zindagi hai badli
Main poori nayi ho gayi
Hai be-asar duniya ki baatein badi
Ab teri sunu main sadaa
Hmm..
Milne ko tujhse bahaane karun
Tu muskuraye wajah main banun
Roz bitana saath mein tere
Saara din mera
Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x2)
Kya hua asar tere sath reh kar na jaane
Ke hosh mujhe na raha
Lafz mere thhe zuban pe aake ruke
Par ho na sake woh bayaan
Dhadkan tera hi naam jo le
Aankhein bhi paigham yeh de
Teri nazar ka hi yeh asar hai
Mujhpe jo huaa..
Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x2)
Swara heard the footsteps….the familiar steps and she saw him……after a long time……
Swara got down from her place signaled the kids to go inside and she sat with her back to him to let not see him her crying face……
Sanskar approached her…..
Sanky: Shonaaa………….
Swara couldn’t herself and cried and she ran from there….
Sanky followed her……
Sanky: I will keep following you shonaa..no matter where you go and hide from me…….
Swara stops and turns…….
Swara: Go away from here…….. I DON’T LOVE YOU………..PLEASE LET ME LIVE…….
Sanky was shocked……he stopped there itself…..
Sanky: Ok I would leave you on one condition…….
Swara: What??
Sanky: You have to say those words again by seeing in my eyes…..Agreed??
Swara: Ok…….
She steps closer to him….
Swara: San……….sk…..Sanskar I don’t love you…..(her eyes were down)
Ssanky: Shonaa I promised that we will face all the problems together…….Then why did you leave me.Shonaa…….Why???
Swaraa cries……..
Sanky engulfs her in a hug…..
Sanky: Tell me what happened………!!!
Swara: ..yo…u remember Sahil coming to meet me and next day he died…..
Sanky: Haa……..
Swara: He was murdered Sanksar………
Sanky breaks the hug……
Sanky: What.????
Swara: He came to warn me that he was that Ashok is trying to kill me and to be careful………and Sahil was murdered for this…….
And cries………
Sanky: Who Ashok??
Swara: Our rival business partner……..Sahil was hi Daughter’s wife……but she died in an accident…….and then ..when I signed the deal with them and Sahil and me became friends he said he didn’t like it……but Sahil ignored…. And when we became more close friends due to many similarities.his father mistook him and killed him and vowed to destroy my life…..in the process of saving me he killed himself……for me…..
Sanky silent….
Swara: (continues) I thought all problems are solved but….he tried to kill m Sanskar which I couldn’t bear…..and he told me if I would leave everyone he would keep my family safe…….and that accident it was not accident it was attempt to murder you……and to kill me in the other way Sanky…..
And cries……..
Sanky: Swara you be here only……..i would come afer sometime…….
Lucky came and hugged her……
Laksh: Ky di aap hummko kaise chod ke jaa sakti hai……..Ragu aur Sumi maa ki haalat bahut kharab hai…..mujhe pata hai…..hw I was controlling them…..
Swara sadly smiles……
Sanky: Ashok is arrested……..he has commited to everthing now let’s go home…..
Swara: (surprised) How…….??
Sanlak: Let me a secret with us only….
Actually Laksh had recorded everything while Swara was speaking to SAnky…..so proof provided he arrested……
Haa……
Sanky: Now you have to promise me one thing…….
Swara: That you won’t leave me ever again……..
Sanky: Thodna nahi hai…..
Swara: SWARA SANSKAR MAHESHWARI promise nahi thodti……….woh SANSKAR MAHESHWARI ki tarh nahi hai………
And laughs…….
Sanky: I love you Swara..
Swara: Love you too Sanskar……
They unite……..
So how was it guys……sorry if it was boring…..and soon I will come up with another ss or ff of Swasan and haa I would try to upload Swasan Eterniy love as soon asap……
Love you all bye…!!
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