Hi friends ….
I got low comments….u didn’t like this track na…
So that yesterday I little upset,,… here the next part
If u guys don’t like this track and tell me plsssss
.( all r enjoy while ShiOmRu are so jealous)
Ani: so sweet of u Rishi u still remember that i love white rose
Rishi: how can i forget yaar
Gauri: This is not fair rishi..u remember only di na no me na
Somu:sss rishi u forgot ur teddy also na
Rishi: How could Iforgot u to ….here there ur gifts…(he gives dairymilk to gauri and teddy to somu)
Gau&so: u remember this also.. and they give side hug
(this things are notice by shiomru and their stomach starts burn)
Ru:bhai I want kill this rishi
Om:y u want kill him
Ru:how could he do flirt with my somu..
Shi:ur somu..
shiOm:awwww his somu..right right
shi:but o he croosing his limits..
ShiOm ru now get more tensed ……………..
Om: Gauri why u always irritate others…..
Gauri: it’s Gauri …..n am not irritating anyone okay
Om: u are
Gauri: no i am not n u are irritating me
Om: mee? it’s u
Gauri: u
Om: u………an……
Gauri: U U U U U …………
Rishi: oh oh stop it gauri….
Gauri: u are supporting this jadathari hippy …..rishi u r my friend
rishi : yes Gauri i am your friend but OM is right so i am supporting him ..
gauri: ahhh!!! u dog ( she hits rishi)
they all enjoy except ShiomRu they just have a fake smile on their faces
ShiOmRu
Shi: Om i just want to kill him
Om: Shivaay control yourself….
SH: no om i am fed up can’t u see how he was behaving with Anika . i can’t see Anika with him
Ru: what do u think that i am very happy to see somu with him or wht
SHi: we have to do something yaar ……he is doing too much
Ru: yes bhai he was like ( Ru imitates Rishi) hey Somu please help me …….heyy teddy
they laughs …….
AniGauSomu come there
Shi: what a pleasant surprise . where is your friend how could leave him alone go to him i think u missed your way …(in serous tone)
Gauri: what’s wrong with u Jiju
Sanskar: what’s wrong with me u ar……..
OM: hii guys what r u doing here ?? now ur eye sight’s are clear ( the sighs Shi to keep quiet)
Ani get angry on shivay’s behavior…he move from there with angry GauriSomu follow her
The party starts
Ani wears a red full length gown with a open hair she was hot
gauri wears a black cocktail dress upto knees n braided her hair with make up she was superb….
Shi was wearing a blue jeans , white shirt with blazer
Om was wearing formals
ShiOmRu get mesmerized seeing AniGauSomu they just stare them continuously .AniGauSomu come to ShiOmRu but just then Rishi comes there n says
Rishi: WOW! U TRIO ARE LOOKING SO Pretty ……..
Anigau Somu: thank u
shiomru are irked
they go to where the party is held . there are already some people most of them were business associates……..there is also music been played
anigauso enjoy the party where shiOmRu are standing at corner n watching everything………Rishi asks for Ani to dance with him she does the that dance on the dance floor … rishi n Ani dance ( not romantically ) but with intense ……shivay gets teary eyed he goes out of the hall ..gauri see going outside n calls for him but he does not reply n goes away……gauri come inside n tell Om that Shi went outside n aks him is everything fine…
om says yeah n he also goes out in search for shi….
in garden:
Om: Shivaay
Shi: OM please go away i want to spend sometime alone
OM: please Shivay
Shi: why is this happening to me Om i love anika a lot but it seems like she is going away from me
Om tries to console Shivay but fails …Shivay cries like a small boy n says i love Anika a lot i can’t see her with anyone ….n hugs Om….
Rishi overhears their conversation n smiles……….
the party is done all the associates left . rishi ready to leave
Shivay is so sad…..
just then rishi comes to them
Rishi: hi guys . we met yesterday but we didn’t spoke properly with each other
just then rudy comes and joint with them
Ru: rishi please leave us
rishi: come on guys
Shi: Om tell him to leave from here or else i don’t know wht i will do with him…..i just can’t take in anymore
rishi : Shivay calm down . i don’t love anika n i don’t have any intention to take her away from u
Shivay: what? (confused)
Rishi: yes ! i know that Ani is your wife n i know everything about your marriage Anika said to me i just can’t believe what she said to me. i know u hate me like hell . i am just crazy for her i don’t love her
Shivay: what do u mean u are crazy for her??
Rishi: i used to live with my grand mom my parents are dead . even my grand mom left me when i was in +12.after that i was in depression i was like robot then Anika and my teddy came to life they was with me they introduced me to her family n i got a family. i used to stay in room n work for part time . Anika was there for me all while she cared for me like mother she is everything for me our relation have no name but all i can say is she is more than a friend to me but less than a lover …………Anika too loves u . u thought that we were talking about our college things right but not she was talking about u all the while ……..Shivay was like that like this , he hates that , he loves this OMG!! Shivay u both are just two people with one soul…..it’s amazing….i am happy for my Anika a lot…….
Shivay: gets teary eyed…….he thinks of Anika
Rudra: when did u know before why didn’t u informed us
Rishi: come on Rudy how can i tell u . i met Anika after a very long time i need to know about her love , does he care for her or not??? right shivay??
Shivay: thank u
Shivay hugs rishi……..Rudy and Om smiles(but is tensed if he don’t love Anika bhabhi then what about somu)
Rudy: Rishi is somu also your friend??
ShiOm smiles
rishi: hmm……….i should think over that
rudy gets worried….
Rishi: cool Rudy she is just my teddy and my lovely sis
Rudy: really?
Rishi: yes really if u doubt me u can ask Somu about my gf.
rudy: thanks yaar
Rudy leves form there with kushi
Rishi: and Om Gauri she is very tough to deal she is very stubborn . i can see the spark in her eyes n smile on face when she talks about you……..she started to feel for u but you have to make effort she is not a random girl , she is t gauri kumara sharma she is gauri the rockstar………
Om(in mind):what gauri Had feeling on me…this is not possible..actualy she don’t like this marriage and he hates me.that y he sign this papar na…om lost his thought
Rishi: what happened om
Om:kuch nahi
Just then gauri comes down
Shivay: shhhhhh! (shivay see Gauri coming down )
Gauri: heyy guys
Rishi: okay gauri i will leave now
Gauri: okay tc
Shivay:this time
Ansh: ya i have to some meeting in kolkata after the meeting in kashmir
Gauri: okay see u soon bye ..
rishi: bye have fun guys
Shi: where is Anika??
Rishi: i already informed her i will leave now byeee…..
Rishi leaves……….
Shivay : now will u call your sister as we have to go and sleep.. it’s being late…….
gauri: actually I want spent some with my sis pls jiju
Shivay: what??
Gauri: as far as i know u borthers are want should spend some time together .
Shivay(in mind):how could I spend my time this guys..i want to spend with time with my love na…I want to consoln her….love her….hug her and spend some quality time with her but this gauri na
Gauri: ps pls pls ……sumo also come here na we want spent time with our sis plssss.
Shi: no i can’t.
om: pls shivay don’t behave like a child..and is that long time na we all spent quality time.. so we both sleep with rudy
Anika:don’t worry my sister is not so cruel , she not get angry on u we will explain di u don’t bother about my di. We do care of care …….okay
Om is so happy ……because he don’t want to see gauri….he never want repeat what that moring happened
Shivay: okay……gud ni8 gauri n Om hugs Shivay n says all the best bhai .
And they goes inside …………
hope u guys like it………..please comment…………:-)
once again am so sorry n i hope u like this track……please comment…..
silent readers….. thanks a lot for you comment i hope u like the 6 episodes …..u were so excited for O’bros getting jealous i just hope i reached your expectations if i don’t am so sorry for disappointing you…..:-
9 Comments
nice epi ya y u think like that we didnot like u r ff
It is awesome dear
Nyc… Hope this happens in ishqbaaz also. I should mention ur too good in writing…?
Nyc… Hope this happens in ishqbaaz also. I should mention ur too good in writing…?
AWESOME AMAZING FANTASTIC FUNNY? INTERESTING SUPERB??????
Dear clemantiah
I know ye RiKara PE based story hai.agar aap saath main Rudy ki funny scenes shivomru ki scenes shivika nok jok RuMya nok jok bhi add karungi tho story intersting hoga specially shivomru omru funny scenes.agar aapko meri ye idea acha laga tho accept kijiye.aur try karna long epi banane ka.dont’ worry yaar we all love your ff and always support.ek baath bool gayi omri ka bhi nhok jok add karna.ek baath yaad rakhna ki shivomru and aniriya ki funny and touching scenes and o bro moments add karna.most imp rudy funny talks and antics okay.?
ALL THE BEST? take care???
Awesome
Awesome…. Loved the part… Excited for the next part… post it soon
superb update…Dont feel upset..ur ff is awesome..continue the track..add more rikara scenes with Obro moments shivika and rumya nok jhoks..I kinda feel that its short..plzz if u can try to make it quite long..sry if my comment hurt you
tnq for ur motivating comments