hi friends ……..i am clemantiah…..
I am writting my first ff
intro
Omkara-USA return.. he is not belive in marriage and rituals…he loves his mother and dadi & his brothers verymuch…
he don’t have awerness of our Indian cultural and sentimate about marriage… he don’t like his father &marrige
Gauri-Good girl.. love her family..she do anthing for her family…..She has Two sister and one brother….she works as shivays PA..
shivay-Omkara’s brother…& Husband of Anika.. They are devericed on some problem… But he loves her family so much… so to help to her family she give the work for Gauri..
Anika-Very loving sis.. she also loves her family so much.. but she don’t like that her sis works in oberies family….
rest of the character same as serial…
omkara returns to india today…
all family member exited so much
after 16 years he comes to india. We can now see Kanaa waiting for someone in the airport. He is carrying a
name board which says “Omkara singh oberoi”. On the other side, we can
see that om’s flight has finally landed. Om gets down from
the flight. He keeps his feet on the ground and looks around. He so looks
dashing.
Om (To himself)- So, finally back to India after 16 years.WTF I don’t wanna live here. Send me back to London please.I only come here for my brother nd my ma only..
Om then sees his driver waiting for him with the name board. He walks towards him.
Om- Let’s go.
K- Are you Mr. Omkara..
Om-spell it correctly I am Omkara singh Oberoi brother of Shivaay Singh Oberoi..
& Hell yeah, I am! Why do you ask? You got a problem with that?
If yes, then give me the f keys and get the hell form here. I
can drive my own car. If not, then shut the shit up and drive the car.
The driver gets scared and drives the car to the Oberoi Mansion. Om gets down from the car and looks at his bungalow
precap: Intro of Gauri…. first meeting of rikara….
guys pls comment if u like…. its my first attempt am little bit nervous and sorry for the typeing mistakes…….
10 Comments
Nice start ..pls cont.soon
its fyn
intro with mystery(y Anika Shivaay seprated),not bad
writting is smthing which comes frm soul so never hesitate to pen a story down
update soon
Nice start.. pls cont. Soon
awesome..waiting for some really intresting scenes
Awesome episode.????????
But i want Om as a self depemdent person .In showwoh apni khud ki pehchaan mein believe krta hai but here he introduce him as SSO brother.
It’s my personal point of view.Sorry,if i hurt someone.
But i hope Om ki thinking jald hi Gauri badal degi.
Eagerly waiting for next episode.
Nice one dear
AWESOME INTERSTING???
Awesome yaar.. interesting too
nice epi & iam also tamilachi ,birthday wishes to ur vijay
thq for ur commends guys thq so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh