Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy everyone I am back again. I know I know that I am veeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy late but I am so sorry.
I was quite busy for few days so I didn’t have the time to write but here I am and now without any other further delay let’s start with the story.
Hospital :
Doctor : mr Maheshwari I am sorry to say this but your wife mrs Maheshwari is DEAD.
These words fell as thousands of bullets which shot sanskaar’s heart directly. What he felt at that moment can’t be described in words. He was numb totally. The words spoken by the doctor were revolving in his mind.
His eyes were turning red in anger in pain, tears started forming in his eyes he stumbled back but akshay held him.
He looked at akshay and then at the doctor.
Akshay : what are you saying dr doshi?? Do you have any idea on what you are saying. Are you in your senses.[ Shouts at the end]
Akshay had seen Sanskaar suffering without swara, he very well knew how difficult it was for Sanskaar to spend these days without swara. And now listening this news when he was feeling this sad then how was he going to handle swara.
Doctor : please control yourself I can understand you… [interrupted by Sanskaar]
Sanskaar : [shouting angrily with tears flowing from his eyes] noooo no you can’t, you you can’t understand what I am feeling right now. Do you have any idea about what you are talking. Just shut your nonsense up. what did you think that I will believe whatever you say, you say that my swara is no more with me and I will believe it. Then listen swara is not DEAD and my heart knows it. Because if I am breathing then my swara is breathing too. If my heart is beating then my swara’s heart is beating too. And If I am alive then my swara is alive too and get that fitted in your head. Akshay come with me we need to find swara as soon as possible.
Saying this he went from there throwing the vase kept there in anger. Akshay followed him. While the doctor was shivering seeing his anger.
Suddenly his phone rang and he picked it up with shivering hands.
Doctor : he he hello.
Other side : [in a evil voice] hello doctor saab. So did he come there?
Doctor : ye yess he he came here. [stammering on his own words]
Other side : and what did you tell him??
Doctor : I told him all the things you told me to, now please don’t file a case on me or my license will be cancelled please.
Other side : [in a evil way] ya ya of course I won’t but but but only until you keep your mouth shut. Hope you understood.
And the call gets cut with the doctor still shivering.
On the other side.
Sanskaar was driving his car roughly. It was already 12 : 30 of midnight and the traffic was really less.
He was driving roughly releasing all his tension. Though he knew that the doctor’s words were not true but still they were revolving in his mind.
[guys please play this song in the background only then you will get the feel]
Song : who lamhe from the movie zeher.
Woh Lamhe, Woh Baatein,
Koi Na Jaane,
Thi Kaisi Raatein,
Hooooo, Barsaatein,
Woh Bheegi Bheegi Yaadein …(2)
All the incidents were coming in his mind from the time he met swara. Their friendship, their love, their mistakes, their pride, their ego, their hate, their decisions. Everything was THEIRS no things were her, no things were his. They both were for each other just for each other for no one else.
Outside the car rain was in its almighty form. The weather was turning out to be more windy but the weather inside him was in a much more worse condition.
He stepped out of the car thinking all this.
Na Main Jaanu, Na Tu Jaane,
Kaisa Hai Ye Mausam, Koi Na Jaane,
Kahi Se Hai Fizaa Aayi,
Ghamon Ki Dhoop Sang Laayi,
Khafaa Hogaye Hum,
Judaa Hogaye Hum,
Woh Lamhe … Bheegi Yaadein
There in Mumbai, the condition of swara was no less, she was fighting with her own self. Her heart was yearning to go to Sanskaar, to hide in his embrace and to let out her pain in front of him. But no this was NOT POSSIBLE at least not for her.
Saagar Ki Gehraayi Se,
Gehra Hai Apna Pyaar,B Sehraoun Ki In Hawaon Me,
Kaise Aayeee-Gi Bahaar,
Kahan Se Ye Hawa Aayi,
Ghataayen Kaali Kyoun Chhaayi,
Khafaa Hogaye Hum, Judaa Hogaye Hum,
Woh Lamhe … Bheegi Yaadein
Sanskaar was sitting on the bank of the river Sabarmati. The river flowing in its almighty form. The water waves hitting the shores vigorously. The sounds of the winds flowing.
Sanskaar was still thinking of all the incidents of this evening when something striked him.
Oh shit!! How stupid was he, like seriously he did not even check the hospital records in his anger and pain. Shit!! Sanskaar how could you be this stupid thought he. And the doctor he was Dr Apoorva Doshi. One of the most famous doctor in ahemdabad. No no don’t think in that way he was one of the most famous doctor in ahemdabad for his ILLEGAL activities and human organs trafficking. Shitt yaar!! What if swara was under some sort of danger, even the thought made him lose all his senses and shiver him to the core.
He mentally noted to check on him the next day and go to hotel as of now.
With this he marched towards the hotel.
A new morning:
Maheshwari mansion.
The sun rose as it does daily, the new morning arrived but it didn’t succeeded in vanishing the gloominess of the mighty mansion and how could it until your inner light doesn’t glow even this sunlight is not capable to lighten your soul and spirit and the same was happening here.
The ladies of the house were so worried about the better future of their children.
After doing all the crap parineeta was still living in the mansion. Acting like a Sanskaari bahu, but did she really change? Well no one knows this and they are all too busy in their life to mind her.
While raglak were busy with each other. As laksh ji had returned after 6 long months and they had faced enough separation they were busy spending some quality time with each other. Ragini once in a month remembers swara, whenever she is feeling lonely or when she needs someone to share her pain or worries. No one accept swara tries to understand her.
[how many of you agrees with this that ragini has shared her pain with none but swara, not even laksh could understand her??]
Sujata was married about the broken marriages of both her children and Annapurna was still worried about adarsh after what all he did.
And with this days were passing in mm.
Mumbai :
Swara was as usual getting ready, wearing a dark blue jeans with a light blue coloured T shirt, a sports watch in her hand. Her hairs were done in a cute puff and then tied in a pony tail , a transparent lip gloss on her lips and a light kajal in the corner of her eyes.
She looked more then breath taking. With her sport shoes put on.
But she still looked quite weak and fragile. The smile which used to enlighten her face was missing.
She was hurrying down the flat when vraj shouted for her.
Vraj : shona stop stop stop. Where were you going haa?? Forgot to take your daily blessings oops I mean your medicines haa?? Take it and then go.
Swara : hmm give it to me. [said in a low voice and gloomily]
She took her medicines and then left to her office. While vraj sighed seeing his best friend’s condition. He had never seen her this sad and gloomy. What fault she did to someone in her life that she is facing all these??
Ahemdabad :
Sanskaar had instructed akshay to check on everything while he had to leave for Mumbai as he had an important meeting there. So he was leaving to Mumbai now.
He was surely going to find swara very soon and this was SURE. Cause his heart was telling him this.
Akshay didn’t want to sadden him more and so he believed on his belief that swara is alive and was ready for his mission.
Precap : swasan meet for sure.
IMPORTANT NOTE:
Guys please please tell me frankly are you not liking this story?? I am getting so less response on this story? I had planned so much for this story but when you people are not liking the story there’s no use writing this, I am planning to end this story in 2-3 episodes.
And I was thinking to see swara’s pain during the whole show from the starting but when none is interested so am planning to cut it down.
I know this part is not good, but what to do I was not having mood to write this story. Sorry for boring you people.
Meet you in the next part till then bub bye..
47 Comments
awesome update next part soon
thanks anu
A bigggggg sorrrryyyyyyyyyyy Neptune dear as i didn’t commented earlier. I had read part 1 of this story and even commented but later forgot that it was your story so didn’t noticed but today when I opened the page I saw this post and you had written big heyyyyyyyyy in starting.
Then it strike my mind that this much
hello tho only Neptune wishes and I opened it and remembered the story.
Then I went back and read other remaining parts.plzzz forgive me I m little bhulakad.But will read for sure now.
its ok marsu and ha u remember my speciality of wishing big hello, glad that you noticed it and please don’t ask sorry its alright
hehehehe right marsuu a big heyyyyyy or helloooo is her speciality
Yup first line parh kar hi mujhe pta chal jata hai its Neptune baby.
Coming to today’s part its just awesome.u described it very well.And u are right ragini shared her pain with swara but never tries to understand her pain.In serial also how much swara had sacrificed for ragini she can never do that.
I like your concept that u tried to shoe swara’s pain which nobody recognized bcoz may be she never tries to become bechari like ragini.
Pllllzzzzzzzzzzzz don’t end it.The story is amazing.
In next part swasan should meet.I will be waiting plzz post soon.
Haye Jada long comments kar diye chal khoi ni path lena
Typing mistakes…..its show not shoe and parh not path.
Thank you
Take care.
you are right dear ragini always had her tears and swara to show her pain or she would do her suicide drama to show that she is in so much pain but no one really did understood swara’s pain even some swasan fans call swara as mahaan and bash her..
thanks for your comment dear glad you liked the story…..
and ha i will surely make swasan meet in the next part…
thanks for yuor long comment i love reading long comments…
awesome ?? and post next part soon ?
thanks stg will post the next one soon….
Awesome dear plz continue
thanks dear
Plz dont end it
In show also they never showed swasan’s miseries after separation
I really wanted to see their pain,their urge to be together and a open talk between the two beautiful souls
will try to continue dear, if i get a good response…
thanks for commenting….
nice…who is this evil person..is it laksh?
thanks for commenting vyshu but about the evil person i cannot reveal who it is, keep guessing dear….
well its nyc dear MM sfamily i can’t say
thanks dear sus….
Nice one
thanks dear…
Can’t u unite swasan
i will surely unite them dear, but it will take some time…
Waiting for it..Finally u posted..
it was awesome..u hv described everything perfectly..plz don’t end it..
continue soon..tc..
thank you so much for your comment Kumu…
will continue it if i get a good response…
Anand ur this part is awesome
thanks mannu…
don’t think that we r not liking ur story… this is one of the best stories for which I wait to read…
yes I agree with u ragini shares her pain only with Swara…not with laksh or her papa or dadi…
this story is very lovely n emotional waiting to read the next part…
thanks for your encouraging words dear…
will try to continue dear…
Loved it dear. Post next one soon.
thanks dear…
Hey dear plzzzz don’t end it.. It was an awesome story.. I read all parts today only..
thanks dear will try to not end it if the response is good…
nice
thanks dear…
Awesome dear
thanks dear…
Neptune!!!!!!
first of all I will throw tomatoes on you for coming this much late huh itna late koi kerta hy kia
coming to the story it was superb but no SwaSan scenes aaaw I want them next time for sure or else …. you better know hihihi
Swara is really having a golden heart which can.understand anyone’s pain don’t she?????
doctor Ki toh…….
huh jaan nikal. dii thi
kon hey ye dushman yahan
ab jldi ana nhi to ab tera suwagaat chappalon se hoga
oops ooops am escaping from tomatoes, yaar suma tu hamesha mere saath esa kyu karti he kabhi chappal kabhi tomato….
ab aa next time me bhi tere saath esa hi karungi…
or tu into late q aati hey
Chal ab tera suwagaat haar or phoolon se karoongi ab khush !!!
ha bohot khush or tu kuch aur kab likhne vaali hai ye bata…
Nice….
thanks dear…
Amazing one dear………….. missed reading ur stories…………….it was beautifully described……….every feeling ………….simply outstanding…………
thanks root 2 even i missed reading your stories….. when are you going to complete yours…
nice dear
Nyc