Okay so yesterday was disturbing for all of us including me…I probably hurt you all a lot….but that happened because I was hurt too….I had decided to stop writing both my ffs as the response on both of them had drastically reduced ! Well I had then declared it last night through a comment on yesterday’s manan ff part itself that I WILL BE CONTINUING ! so, don’t be disheartened as I’m not stopping ! I don’t want to hurt anyone and seeing the response yesterday I felt like many are connected to these stories than I think….actually that I the reason I ask for a response because otherwise how on earth am I going to find out how many are reading my stories and liking or disliking them ?! But I done like to force anyone to comment and I won’t !
I would also ask those few who had been saying yesterday that they will convince others to comment…please don’t say that…I want people to comment because they like it, not because they have a fear of me stopping writing…and that’s what happened yesterday. All the silent readers came up and showed their love because there was a fear of me stopping….but I would like to say, now, whatever may come, I won’t stop ! So, there is no burden on anyone to comment ! Whether you read my stories or not, whether you comment or not, I am not going to stop ! Because I LOVE EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU !! It’s because of you all I am what I am today !!! Sorry that I hurt you all yesterday, you may now enjoy today’s part !
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Recap: Veebha and Ayaz create fake situations which make Niti and Parth decide to talk to one another and sort out the problems between Veebha and Ayaz.
Niti is about to get into her car when she sees Parth’s car come in and get parked beside her car. She stops there and waits for him to park the car properly and come out. Niti was in her blue denims and plain black crop top. Parth gets down from his car after parking it beside Niti’s car and he was in his blue track pants and a plain black tee.
Parth: Hey ! Were you going somewhere ?
Niti: Actually I was coming to meet you.
Parth: Oh. Even I needed to talk to you about something.
Niti: Oh. So, come let’s go upstairs.
Parth: Okay.
They head back upstairs to Niti’s apartment. Niti opens the door and asks Parth to settle himself on the couch and she moves to the kitchen to get some water. She comes back few minutes later with a tray with two glasses of water. She offers him one, takes the other one for herself and places the empty tray on the table. She settles down beside him on the couch with a good distance in between. Both of them finish off their glasses of water and place the glass back in the tray. For some time, none of them speak anything as both of them had been feeling nervous about talking about something uncool about their friends.
Niti: (trying to ease down the situation) Umm…would you like some coffee ?
Parth: Yeah sure..That would be great !
Niti: Okay. I’ll just get it.
While she goes to the kitchen to prepare coffee, Parth tries to prepare himself as to how to start the discussion. He tries several ways but finds none to be appropriate. Niti was doing the same thing in the kitchen while preparing coffee but could not find an appropriate way to tell Parth that his friend was a psycho without offending him.
She pours the hot coffee in two big white mugs and carries them to the living area in the same tray in which she had carried the water glasses before. Parth had been standing in the balcony that was connected to the living area and watching the clear sky, still trying to figure out a way to talk. Niti placed the tray on the table slowly not to disturb him, took both the mugs in her hands and carried them to the balcony. Parth turned around on hearing her footsteps nearing and helped her by holding one of the mugs for himself.
Parth: Thanks. You wanna sit inside ? I was just…
Niti: No, it’s good here. So, what did you want to talk about ?
Parth: Actually I don’t know how to say it. I’m still trying to figure out how to start. You too wanted to say something right ? So, how about you start first ?
Niti: Same is the case with me. Even I don’t know how and where to start from ?
Parth: Let’s do one thing. Let us both speak up the topic first together and then whosoever’s talk seems to be more crucial would begin first.
Niti: Okay.
Parth: Okay then. On the count of 3 ! One…Two…And three…
Parth and Niti: (together) Ayaz and Veebha !
For a while both of them keep looking into each other’s eyes, shocked as well as confused. None of them speak up further. Both of them had the same issue ? How was it possible ? “Maybe she wants me to convince Ayaz for Veebha” thought Parth. “Maybe he wants me to convince Veebha for Ayaz”. Few seconds later, Niti breaks the ice,
Niti: Ayaz and Veebha ? You too ? Okay then you wanna start first ?
Parth: Umm…no…Ladies first. Now that it’s the same topic it should not seem so weird to talk about.
Niti: Okay then..I don’t know how to say this. But you really need to make your friend understand that things won’t work like this. He needs to understand what Veebha is trying to explain.
Parth: Hold on a second ! You really think Ayaz needs to understand what Veebha is saying ? In fact, Veebha needs to understand what’s practical.
Niti: What do you mean ? How is this practical at all ?!
Parth: Of course it is !
Niti: No !! It’s not ! In fact what Veebha says is practical ! Ayaz can’t be breaking someone’s heart like that !
Parth: Exactly the reason Ayaz is correct !
Niti: How does it make him correct ?
Parth: Obviously it does. Look Niti I don’t want to fight here. All I’m saying is please explain Veebha to stay away from Ayaz.
Niti: What ?? Veebha should stay away ? Parth it’s Ayaz who needs to be in his limits.
Parth: Mind your language. He is definitely in his limits. It’s Veebha who is out of her mind. I believe she needs a psychiatrist. Or maybe just a friend. And that’s why I came over to ask you to be with her and support her so that she stops all of this daily drama !
Niti: Daily drama and Veebha ? Are you kidding me ? It’s Ayaz who comes up with a new drama everyday ! I’ve seen it myself !
Parth: Even I’ve seen it all, Veebha doing all possible weird things to convince Ayaz to be with her and leave Priyanka !
Niti: What ? Why would she do that ? In fact it’s Ayaz who is after her and ready to leave Priyanka for her. Veebha in fact asks him not to break Priyanka’s heart as she does not love him.
Parth: Oh really ? She does not love him ? Ms. Niti Taylor, it seems like your friend has a serious issue with her mind. That is the reason she’s doing something in front of Ayaz and telling you some other stories. She madly loves Ayaz ! And Ayaz is fed up of denying her proposal everyday !
Niti: How dare you say that about my friend ?! Now you need to have some control over your language !
Parth: Well I can’t tolerate anything against my friend.
Niti: Well then when your friend is at fault you also need to take the responsibility to accept it and make him realize his mistakes.
Parth: Oh yes you’re absolutely correct ! So I believe you will make Veebha realize her mistakes will you ?
Niti: What mistakes ? She isn’t at fault ! And Mr. Parth Samthaan this is the last time I’m telling you this thing ! Veebha is innocent ! It’s your psycho friend who is after her and she is literally fed up of his stalking !
Parth: Stalking ?! Ayaz would stalk Veebha ? Seriously ? You and your friend have no such standard to have been stalked by anyone ! And you say Ayaz has been stalking her ? Bull shit ! I’m sorry I wasted my time coming here. Because it seems like not just Veebha but you too need help ! Thanks for the coffee. Bye !
He moves out of the balcony, places the coffee mug on the table in the tray, and leaves through the main door smashing it loudly behind him. When the door hits due to the smashing, it makes Niti jerk suddenly. She had gone blank at what had just happened ! She could not believe how things just changed within 10 minutes ! 10 minutes back, she was standing in her balcony with her new friend, having coffee in the middle of the night and having a trustworthy and respectful feeling for one another and 10 minutes later, she was standing there alone with the coffee mug in her hand and an empty heart for that one person she had started to gain respect for. She saw Parth drive away in his car from the parking and it felt like he had been going away from her life. They had come such a long way from hatred, to fights, to strangers and to friends turning into better friends and now again strangers who hate each other to the core. It was like they had traveled a full circle and were back to where they started from.
Parth drove off at an enormous speed, all the arguments with Niti flooding his mind. He was really furious at the way things had turned out. He had gone to her to help his friend and ended up losing another friend. He had believed Niti to be a sensible person and the way she had been denying Veebha’s faults, made him lose respect for her in his heart. He had started to trust her more, like her more, but this one incident, the 10 minutes had changed the way he used to think about her. He wanted to say many more things to her but it was as if he believed she would not agree to any of it and therefore left without saying anything further.
Precap: Sad moments for both Parth and Niti. Both of them ignoring each other on sets, angry at one another. The phase makes both of them depressed !
Tomorrow: Manan ff. Abhi critical in the hospital. Fab 5 reach up to be with Mukti, keeping aside all of their differences.
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I know friends it is a sad phase for all us PaNi lovers. But trust me this was required and I promise this won’t last long and after this will be a new sunshine. How does this get cleared and what is the new sunshine ? Stay tuned to find out.
If you liked this part do share with me your feelings about this part. Have you ever ended up in a nasty fight with a loved one ? If you have, do you or the other person, lose control over language and speak something really offensive and heart breaking ? If you have, you would know exactly how it feels right ?
Thank You !
One more thing, there is an announcement coming up for Valentine’s Day related to my both ffs…so
Please do keep checking the comments section here today for the same !
Lots of love !
#behappy
#spreadsmiles
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OMG inne saray comments Medhavi……superb dear….n i rquest u ….plz n plz donot stop writing……i lyk ua episodes very much…..every feeling is described in detail…..sach bolu tou aapka ff padke….i do frgt my all worries for smtym……..epi was nyc…….very nice……
Thank you so much amsib…. 🙂 It is a great feeling to know that my ff help you forget your worries….and if that is the case, I can never stop writing right ?! 😉
#behappy 🙂
P.S. Do check out my valentines day announcement and do think about participating in the edits competition for valentines…message me on FB or wattpad if interested…FB name: Medhavi Thakkar, wattpad name: medhavi_18…
tq dear..bt i m not on fb….sooty fr dat…..
Its okay…if you still want to participate you can email me on [email protected]
OMG I WAS READING UR AUTHORS NOTE AND U MADE ME SOOOO SCARED!!!!!! I dont read ur other fanfic becausee i dont have enough time during the day because of studies so i didnt know tht you said u were going to stop! BUT THANK GOD U DECIDED NOT TO STOP OR I WOULD HAVE KILLED UUUUUUUU…….sorry but i have to over dramatize this BECAUSE I LOVE UR FAN FICCC…PLEASE NEVER STOP!!! If other people dont read (which will never happen because u are an AMAZING writer and ur fanfic is AMAZING) I WILL READDDDDD!!!!!!! please neverrrrr stopppp… U R TOOO GOOD and if u stop I swear I will cry for a week and be SOOO sad because I am WAYYYY to attached to ur writing skills and the fan fic. OK NOW, I am done giving u a lectureeeee.
Epi comments: I LOVED THE FIGHT! but I hope they make up SOONNN because they are too adorableeeee together and I hope they express there feelings to each other soonnn….ayaz and veebha are SOO SMART! There plan is sooo amazing! Okkk byee…. Hope to talk to u in next episodeeee…….impatient for itt ughhhhh…… hope its soonnnnn
Hey Zoey, it makes me sad to know you could not read my other ff….But it’s okay….I can understand….studies are definitely more imortant….so good you are focusing on it…..and thanks for managing time to read this ff of mine and also appreciating with such kind words….Hahaha !! You would have killed me ?? I know that was drama !! Friends won’t kill each other right ? And friends won’t create such situations as well….So, I won’t let that situation come up…Won’t let you cry friend…. keep smiling always !!! 🙂 🙂
Thank you so much for the appreciation about today’s part….I’m glad you liked the fight as well….now that you did, don’t worry it is going to end soon and a new sunshine would come up….see you on the next part….
Lots of love…. <3 <3
#behappy always !! 🙂 🙂
P.S. Do check out my valentines day announcement and do think about participating in the edits competition for valentines…message me on FB or wattpad if interested…FB name: Medhavi Thakkar, wattpad name: medhavi_18…
Awwww I glad you I think Im ur friend!!!! U are such a great friend even though I barely know anything about you! And thank you for caring about me!!!! LOVE YOU <3 <3 <3
Also, what is the edit competition?? and once you explain it to me, and Im interested I will comment on your wattpad because I dont have a FB.
Thank You,
Zoey
Also, I will read ur other fan fic today since its Saturday 🙂 🙂
NEVER MIND U DO NOT HAVE TO TELL ME WHAT THE COMPETITION IS BECAUSE I JUST SAW YOUR COMMENT? ANNOUNCEMENT WHICH ANSWERED MY QUESTION! I would do it but I have no editing skills and I dont know how to do tht 🙁 Sorry!!!!
Hey really sorry dear…I don’t know if you are going to read this comment now or not….I just came across your comment asking me about the competition….never mind…you can still try if you want….it’s no big competition or anything….just for fun and to make all of you a part of these stories….
I just read your comment and why are you sorry? I dont know what you are sorry for and I told you, I would 100% do it if I knew anything about editing but I dont :/ :/
The phase when misunderatanding takes place and second is the phase after the fight and before the patch up … One looses ur language and other ur mind thinking about the person and the incident…
Getting back .. Hey medhavi ur imagination is amazing and will miss the episodes till valentines day. I am also interested in ur contest but i donno how to go ahead with it.
Also a small request.. I know its too early but 16 th feb is my bday it would be special if i can have pani story that day coz i love pani more than mananff
Hello dear !!! 🙂 thank you so so much for the appreciation….you won’t need to miss the PaNi ff which you clearly like more than the manan ff because the next whole week is a PaNi week and everyday is going to be a PaNi update….
And and and….I’m so happy you requested that…..I would always love to make any of you happy…..but since the next whole week is going to be a PaNi week, and 16th feb is tuesday that is manan ff day according to schedule, I really can’t promise….but would ask you to keep checking…..You might get lucky….cuz I’ll definitely try to do something…. 🙂
Lots of love… <3
#behappy always 🙂
P.S. Do check out my valentines day announcement and do think about participating in the edits competition for valentines…message me on FB or wattpad if interested…FB name: Medhavi Thakkar, wattpad name: medhavi_18…
Nice episode ??
Thanks ! 🙂
#behappy 🙂
P.S. Do check out my valentines day announcement and do think about participating in the edits competition for valentines…message me on FB or wattpad if interested…FB name: Medhavi Thakkar, wattpad name: medhavi_18…
Heyyyyyy pleaeeeeeeeeeeessseeeeeee don’t stop writing Medhavi.. Pleaeeeeeeeeeeessseeeeeee noooo
Don’t worry I won’t 🙂
Hey it’s me again hope you don’t mind a girl from England commenting but just wanted to say this is an amzing job, its ametioanl and hoping that pani get together soon, thank you for carrying on.
Hey Muskan, why would I mind you commenting dear ??? All are equal for me here….all are my lovely friends and I love each and every one of you !!! In fact it makes me feel happy that I have an overseas friend as well who admires my work…..Thanks a ton dear !!!
Lots of love from India 🙂
#behappy
P.S. Do check out my valentines day announcement and do think about participating in the edits competition for valentines…message me on FB or wattpad if interested…FB name: Medhavi Thakkar, wattpad name: medhavi_18…
Hello Medhavi
U r the awesome writer
I have just started reading ur stories
From past one week u r amazing dear. I just love it .
I was just reading other serial written update den wen I realised that there r ff ongoing on my favourite couple
I read ur recent pani update part 42 and 41 which made me read from beginning .
I believe me u have done an amazing work
Awesome story .
Love u for that ☺????
Thank you so much Anu….it feels great to know that you liked my work so much….
#behappy
Medhuu fb pai 4 medhavi thakkar hai which one is yours ? Pic konsi rakhi hai? ?
Hey dear my pic is an animated girl…not my real picture ! ?
i might not accept friend requests on fb, anyone interested in the contest may text me on fb and if that too seems difficult, email me on [email protected]…sorry for the inconvenience !
Awesome episode medhavi dearrr, you’re tooooooooo good…I’m blessed to be friend of you n reading these amazing stories which are straight from your heart n landing straight into my heart…love you soooooooo muchhhhhh for not quitting n come back with a bang…what should I say, after reading these so many beautiful comments, I’m feeling myself so out of words, the way everyone appreciated your hard work I’m very overwhelmed n glad to see it. 🙂 😉 🙂 😉
The episode was really superbbbb n dynamite…the bombarding from both sides was really awesome…n it’s true when it comes to your loved ones, no matter how much you want to stay calm but without even realizing that what has being said by them n those harsh words can hurt their own relationship…very very very well written n narrated, each n every line was really heart touching, amazingly awesoooooome
The valentine’s day announcement is very exciting…I’m in for sure…I never done any edit or anything like this before but now I’ll try my best to make it n let’s see if you like it or not…n like your idea of posting 50th epi of PaNi and 25th epi of manan on valentine’s day….I’m soooooo excited already…is there any deadline for submitting the edits? Should I post it on your fb account?
Please let me know, I loooooove youuuuuuuuu soooooooo muchhhhhh n both of your stories…keep it up my sweeeeeet friend…eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight bear hug. Muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
Hey Roma, this time I’m literally out of words….not that it has happened for the first time….your comments often leave me speechless at times…but the best part is you make my day !!!Like seriously !!! You have no idea, how wide a smile you bring to my face…..
You are happy about others appreciating my work….now that is a true friend….we don’t even know each other properly, never met, and still such love and support for a stranger, is truly overwhelming !!!!
What should I say ?! You are such a sweet friend….you have a real pure heart which I can say because of them way you ae happy on my success…..otherwise these days, people are always busy in their own lives and do not care to think about what the others are doing !
I’m glad you liked my idea about valentine’s day !!! And what makes me more happy that you are ready to participate in the edits competition even when you don’t know how to make them….you still wanna try ??? Now that is true victory for me because I have gained such a friend….thank you so so much dear !!! And you can send me your entry on my email id which is [email protected]…just make sure that the picture contains the name of whichever story you are submitting it for…you can submit 2 for both stories separately or even 1 for any 1 of them….deadline is 13th february saturday, evening 5 pm….will be waiting for your entry !!!
Thank you soooo much !!!! 🙂
Lots of love <3 <3 <3
#behappy 🙂
#spreadsmiles 🙂 🙂
Wow. I really loved these episodes. Sorry was stuckd in work so was unable to read n reply. Missed ur ff’s badly.
It’s alright….thank you di… 🙂
heu plz dnt stop writing this pani ff. Its really good. & may b people who always commented here might be busy in their xams. So chill u r doing well 🙂