hi …priya is back with second os…i m so overwhelmed by seeing ur love and support towards me…tq so much guys…it means alot to me…80+ cmnts that too for my first os …i m really thankful to u people…tqs alot…pls support me like this in this os too…sorry guys many of u asked me to write ff..but thats not possible for me as i was n 11 i should concentrate on studies…i have a big study load i m free today as tomorrow no exams so writing this os…hope u l like it….pls cmnt guys..bcoz thats my strength….
note : guys its not a love story …its a pov of a girl and boy towards there father…i thought to give a tribute to fathers on fathers day…but i know fathers day is gone..but everyday is fathers day only na??so this the belated wishes for every fathers..i choosed ragsan as the girl and boy so it can be posted here …u l come to know everthing while reading it…
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A big gate is shown where the name board is written as FRIENDS FOREVER…if we go inside of that we can see two mansions which is built so near ..one is written as GADODIA MANSION and the other MAHESWARI MANSION…
At night:
Maheshwari mansion:
One girl of 27 years is sitting in a room …she is rotating her pen which is in her right hand and having a paper..she is seeing the moon through the window its clearly shown that she is thinking something..her hair is blowing bcoz of wind…suddenly she can feel a pair of hands on her neck …it is a guy who will be of 27 years…he asks “RAGINI, u didn’t sleep till now?” (the girl was ragini )”no SANSKAR,i was writing a letter to papa” (the guy was sanskar)(ragsan are married they r friends and their parents too)..sanskar rolled his eyes and doubtfully asked”ragini, tum teek toh ho na?” ..”ha sanskar mei teek hun”ragini said…”then y r u writing a letter to papa who is next to us”sanskar asked confusingly..ragini smiled a little and said”sanskar u r buddu” by pulling his cheek..sanskar gives her shocking look…ragini laughed and said “tomorrow is fathers day sanky ..so that only i m gng to gift him this” sanky thought and said “okay! Good nyt sweetheart!!” and gave her a peck on forehead and went to sleep…ragini said “u r not going to give gift to papaji??” sanky nods is head in no…ragini nodded and gone to thought again..
Ragini started to write:
Ragini’s letter:
Hi papa!!before saying the reason for this letter i want to describe something abt u !!!….i still remember what dadi said when i was 8…she said when i was born u got a happy tears on your eyes as u got a princess …in that time nobody will be happy for giving birth to a girl but u r different u gave sweets to whole city and celebrated it all asked u y r u wasting money by giving sweets as ur wife have given birth to a girl but at that time what u said??did u remember???i l say u dadi said to me what u said … u said “my wife didn’t gave birth to a girl she had given birth to a princess ..my daughter is my princess”..really papa…i know u r unique so that only u thought in that way..i still remember the time when u come from office to home with that much stress but u l play with me just for my sake…do u remember what u said to me when i was 5..u said “ whatever stress i have but when u call me papa i feel like all my stress has gone…that happiness that cant be given by any property or money…eventhough i was upset when i hear papa from ur mouth i l feel happy i l forgot all the things” that time i didn’t value the meaning papa but now i can…and i remember when i was going to my first day of school …when i was hugging u and said i wont go ..but u said papa l wait for u n gate till u come..yes papa that day u did , u didn’t go back to home u stand there and took me once school ended for that day…and i even remember the first day i went to school through cycle…u came back of me with ur bike …for seeing i m safe or not…u always thought for my safety only papa…whenever i fall weak …whenever i get fever…whole night u l not sleep ..u l take care of me…u l be near me…always papa…when i got first mark n 10th std…i saw the proudness in ur eyes…i felt happy papa..and same hpnd at 12th also…but when the time came i want to go delhi for my studies..u bid me bye without willing just for my happiness…i wanted to become an IAS officer papa..u sent me their just for my happiness….when i returned back with success..u hugged me and said “I M PROUD OF YOU”i felt happy papa…each and every girl will think that she should get a husband like her father..you gave me that too papa…sanskar ur frnd dp uncles son..he is like u papa…bilkul aapki tarah…but he is my prince but ur my KING…and u l always be…i remember when u did my kanyadan by handovering my hands to sanky u had tears i had too by seeing ur tears…i remember my bidaai day …i came out of mandap and asked mama “where is papa?” she said me that u r inside and not willing to come out…and i came in i saw u crying papa…i always saw happy tears in ur eyes…but first time i saw u crying vigourously like a kid…i came near u and asked”y r u crying papa??if u cry then i l not go…and papa i m not going away from u..i m just next to our house…i l come to our house whenever i want and u can come there too like u do daily…” that time u said” nahi beta…u r going away..if u come back also u l come as a daughter in law of that house not as my daughter” i said u “ no papa wherever i go i l always be SHEKAR GADODIA’S DAUGHTER RAGINI GADODIA” u smiled just for me ( a tear came from her eyes and a unknown smile too) …as i know papa u l come first to me when u return from office just to see i m fine or not… but see now also i m RAGINI GADODIA only…sanky said me not to change name as relation should be built by heart not by changing names….so that neither he forced me nor the other family members forced me to change the name to RAGINI SANSKAR MAHESHWARI…hmm i m always RAGINI GADODIA only papa…ur daughter…papa u r the best…u r the first love of me..u r my hero… u r my king…u r everything for me…i will always take care of u..u r my world papa…”PAPA!I LOVE U “ ur the worlds best dad ever…and cmng to the end HAPPY FATHERS DAY PAPA!!!
By urs ,
Daughter ragini….
Letter ends…
She closes the letter and went to sleep…
After some time sanky waked up and saw whether she slept or not and went to the cupboard and took a paper and pen…and came to the place where ragini sit and he started to think …he started to write…
Sanky ‘ letter:
Hi papa!! Papa now i m gng to say our unshowed relationship which cant be said through words…but i m trying to..papa we l always be against each other i will not accept ur words easily..nor u will accept mine…but papa i will feel that , that is the way we both show love for each other…ha first day of my college i remember …i asked u pocket money but u just gave me 100rs…by saying SAVE MONEY SANSKAR…( he smiled remembering it)…the day when i got my lawyer course completing certificate…u said “I M PROUD OF U SANSKAR” i didn’t show how much happy i was infront of u…but coming into my room i was that much happy by remembering ur words…ha papa forgot to say…i scored first in 10 like ragini u said “good sanskar…but this is not enough u should do more” but what u did after going from home u give sweets to all ur frnds and said my marks very proudly…thats our relationship papa…and cmng to my mrg…i think that u l never do anything wrong for me…but i never showed it to u…but ragini..she is the best wife for me who can handle me very well…haha..ya thats obvious u l select a girl who is best for me only…papa now i m gng to say something to u which i had never said…said kya kabhi dikhaya bhi nahi hoga…”PAPA! I LOVE U” u r the best…i m proud to be said as SANSKAR DURGAPARASAD MAHESHWARI…
By urs…
Son sanskar….
He too slept after that..
Morning :
Dp and shekar came back after jogging..
They saw ragsan cmng towards them ..they gave the letter …dp and shekar got tears after reading it,,hugged their children and said “WE R PROUD OF U TOO”..
Ending…
How is this guys… hope u like it…pls say through cmnts…
80 Comments
Priya!!! It was really fantastic!!! How u hv described their emotions is just commendable!!!!! I had tears in my eyes!! Beautifully displayed!!!
Loved it!! ???
N yeah sorry for late reply ‘!!
Tq so much Richa di.. Pls don’t say sry di….. Tq for loving it…
This was so damn cute!!! You’re such a lovely writer.
You should really write a Fan-Fiction about Ragsan you have great writing skills Priya.
Anyways Hun keep smiling like always aha.
Also what grade are you in?? and how are you xx? If you don’t mind me asking because you might be older xx
~Nusz xx
How old are you* I meant.
~Nusz xx.
aha, I’m 16 years old xx
I just finished grade 11 starting grade 12 in September xx
I’m born in cad and raised in England aha
How about you xx?
~Nusz xx
Oh.. So u r elder to me only… I was born in a village near Villupram dist.. But I m n Chennai for my studies… I just stepped into 11std di….
I mean I m from Tamil Nadu, India..
tq tq so much di…l write ff after 2 years only…i m n 11th std di…no no u l be elder to me…clear me if u r elder to me???i m just 15 di
Wow priya di, it is awesome??Seriously I the eldest 1 and closest to my Papa?? And you wrote it faboulously ??
Regards,
Zuha Fatima.(writer of “Objection my Lord! Ragsan)
tq so much zuha dear….i m a single daughter for my parents dear…