Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….
Kamini ‘’Mahi a business man ‘’ she smirked
Ranveer ‘’Maasi I am suspecting a trap…please don’t take any decisions in haste’’
Kamini ‘’maine kacche goli nahi khaye hain Ranveer….i will claim my rights …but with full back up plan ……and for that I need your help’’
Ranveer ‘’help…what kind of help’’
Kamini ‘’try to locate where is Mahi residing……I thought he went underground on your saying from past one plus year…but I didn’t know he grew upto a business man….get to know everything about him Ranveer’’
Ranveer ‘’Mahi is a big man now and moreover he is linked to IIRO which is happening in Tej Singh Oberoi’s hotel….so my going there will make us fall in troubles…and you know after much difficulties I got my job back’’
Kamini ‘’Ranveer , now Mahi is that hen which lays golden eggs…….once he is with us we wouldn’t need anything , I mean what’s the need for you to work…Mahi will work and we will enjoy the fruits…atleast he can do this much for bringing him up…….so listen to me and find out about him…I need to meet him as soon as possible’’
Ranveer ‘’fine Maasi…but let me know before you take any decision…by evening I will get you all details’’
Kamini ‘’evening is too late Ranveer I need it within maximum of two hours…understand…’’
Ranveer ‘’okay …I will try’’
Ranveer left and Kamini called the lawyer to make some papers
—————-GOBE INTERNATIONAL HOTEL
Shivaay, Anika , Om and Rudra were congratulating Mahi………they were enjoying their time…..
Gauri and Sumo were giving the updates about the whereabouts of family members to Om specially Om asked Gauri to keep an eye on Tej………
Ranveer arrived at GOBE and was enquiring about Mahi at the reception …….he was still an Police officer , so the reception guys unaware of the rivalry between Oberois and Ranveer, were trying to answer his questions…….
Anika excused to go to loo and walked towards reception when she saw ranveer speaking to reception guys…….she hid herself behind a nearby wall and messaged Om that Ranveer has arrived …..
Om replied that he is coming there with Mahi…….
Anika then messaged Rudra to take away Shivaay from there by making any excuse…..
Rudra replied ‘’done ‘’
Anika messaged Shivaay that she is going to meet Chanda and asked him not to wait for her…….Shivaay agreed to her decision happily……
Anika did all that while keeping an eye on ranveer………
Rudra managed to take Shivaay without getting Noticed by Ranveer …………Om brought Mahi till reception and joined Anika to keep an eye on Mahi and Ranveer…….Anika ordered Om to keep his mobile in silent as it might distract Ranveer’s convo with Mahi………
Mahi acted as if he is coming from somewhere , looking at his mobile and he deliberately collided with Ranveer at the reception………
Mahi still looking at his mobile said ‘’I am sorry’’
Ranveer while turning towards him said ‘’it’s okay ‘’ and looked at him……..
Ranveer ‘’Mahi………you ………’’ he hugged Mahi
Mahi reciprocated the hug ..but angrily……..
Mahi ‘’what a pleasant surprise Ranveer…what are you doing here…I mean I thought you went underground and were still in underground’’
Ranveer ‘’I will explain later…how are you my brother? Where have you been all these days? How did you become such a big businessman? don’t you want to meet Maasi? Come I will take you to her…she will be very happy seeing you in such a great position’’
Mahi ‘’will she be happy now?’’
Ranveer ‘’why are you saying so? I know she used to be angry on you…but understand Mahi… that was her way of showing love to you’’
Mahi ‘’ohh …yeah…showing love towards his son by calling NAZAYAZ …am I right ranveer’’
Ranveer ‘’mahi..what happened to you? Your way of talking has changed…..i know you have become a big man now ..but how can you forget all of us? Don’t you remember we were with you all the time…so leave this anger and come with me……in fact…maasi saw you in the news and sent me to get you back to her…I was enquiting at the reception about you?’’
Mahi ‘’ohh is it…great……now please do onething Ranveer…I will be going to OHRI’S as I have some important work that will end in two hours from now…..so ask her to meet me there……..sharp in two hours, because after that I have another important meeting to attend …you know these days I am very busy’’
Ranveer ‘’I can’t believe you changed so much in one year…but that’s fine…I understand work is important so don’t worry we will come to OHRI’s exactly in two hours’’
Mahi ‘’great… see you then…by the way …where are you staying now?’’
Ranveer ‘’it’s not important where we were staying till now…but I am sure from now we will be staying with you …like we stayed before an year ..everyone together…….what say’’
Mahi ‘’ ya off course…why not ‘’ he fake smiled
Ranveer left saying he will be meeting him in two hours……….
Anika and Om were about to come out and meet Mahi when Anika saw Tej keeping an eye on Mahi…….she informed Om about the same and they hid back…….Om took his mobile to call Mahi when he found almost 12 missed calls from Gauri and finally a message…….he got to know Gauri has messaged him about Tej leaving for GOBE ……..Om informed Anika and called Mahi , he asked him to meet at nearby ice cream parlour …from there they will go together to Ohri’s …….Tej had already seen Ranveer and Mahi together and he smiled …He decided to follow Mahi ………
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On the way to Ohri’s hotel , in the car…….
Om ‘’Anika Bhabhi …we cannot take risk in dealing with Ranveer and Kamini…so I will ask Khanna to be with Mahi to keep an eye on both of them.’’
Anika ‘’ sounds good Om ‘’
Anika turned towards Mahi and said ‘’Mahi ..now everything is dependent on you…you need to get the truth out of Kamini ji …’’
Mahi ‘’Anika don’t worry…I will handle this…it’s high time that I act smartly with them’’
Anika ‘’but be careful… I don’t care if truth comes out or not…but for me your safety is important…me and Om will be always keeping an eye on you’’
Mahi ‘’I will take care of myself Anika ..don’t worry’’
Om ‘’Mahi bhai ….what have you decided how will you tackle Kamini ji and ranveer?’’
Mahi ‘’not decided …but I know one thing if I ask directly she wouldn’t answer so I need to show the greed of money and get the truth out of her……..for this we need a fake lawyer along with fake property papers’’
Om ‘’don’t worry I will arrange it’’
Om called Rudra and asked him to arrange a fake lawyer and fake property papers on the name of Mahi within an hour and reach OHRI’S …….
Om called Khanna then and asked to meet him at OHRI’s immediately……..
They all reached OHRI’s and were waiting for Rudra and Khanna……..all of them arrived…………
Khanna was ecstatic to see Anika………Anika too felt happy to see him……….
Khanna went to her ‘’Anika mam………how are you ? how is Shivaay sir ? where is he? Did he not come? ‘’
Anika ‘’Khanna ji…….relax …I am fine and your Shivaay sir is in Mumbai now…very soon I will make you meet him………I am sure Shivaay will be equally happy to meet you…you have taken so much care of my family members till now…….you deserve an reward for that’’
Khanna ji’’that’s my duty Anika mam…but I am feeling like meeting Shivaay sir right now…please mam if you can atleast make me talk to him once…’’
Anika ‘’okay …okay …I am calling him …talk to him…but …don’t say where we are and all these stuff’’
Khanna ‘’okay mam’’
Anika dialled Shivaay’s number
Shivaay ‘’hello… haan.. Anika bolo’’
Anika ‘’I have some surprise..wait……. talk and find who is the one ‘’
Shivaay ‘’okay’’
Anika handed over the phone to Khanna…Khanna had tears in his eyes and his voice was choking…..
Khanna ‘’hello Shivaay sir’’
Shivaay ‘’khanna………..you……….how are you?’’
Khanna ‘’you remember me sir…I am good sir …but now I am better………sir where were you…why didn’t you come back…please come back sir…please’’ he cried………
Shivaay too was in tears…he never knew he would feel so touched talking to his best employee ……..
Shivaay composed himself and said ‘’Khanna you know what happened an year ago…so I cannot come back to OM ..but…but you can come and meet me……..i am staying in Zodiac hotel…so whenever you have an off duty come here and meet me…….and don’t cry…it doesn’t …it doesn’t suit you’’ he smiled while being teary eyed…….
Khanna ‘’yes sir…I know you don’t like me while I am crying…I will definitely meet you sir……..i will’’
Shivaay ‘’good……..so I will wait for you…take my number from Anika or OmRu and ring me so that I will make myself available for you….okay…….’’
Khanna ‘’okay sir..thank you..thank you so much’’ he spoke and handed over to Anika
Anika ‘’so how was the surprise Shivaay?’’
Shivaay ‘’awesome Anika…thank you…but how did you meet him and where did you meet him’’
Anika ‘’woh…woh…aise hi…haan Om has bought him and I met him…he insisted me to make him talk to you..so I did the same’’
Shivaay ‘’you did good…I am really happy talking to him and I promised him that I will meet him very soon’’
Anika ‘’okay..great..now I have work so I am ending the call’’
Shivaay ‘’fine …bye’’
They ended the call
Shivaay pov ‘’why am I feeling Anika is upto something……khanna coming into picture…her fumbling while giving answers and not saying what work she has makes me suspect her…by the way she said she is going to meet Chanda and now she is saying Om and Khanna are with her……something is amiss…I hope my thoughts are wrong and she doesn’t fall into any trouble….i wish these days pass by soon and we are back to Shillong….i am getting negative vibes’’
He got out of thoughts with a beep from his laptop ………..he immersed again in his work……..
Om explained Khanna the plan and Mahi explained the fake lawyer what he needs to do….Anika and Rudra hided themselves behind the door to see if Ranveer and Kamini are coming……
AniRu saw them coming and everyone took their places………
Tej also came then , but he didn’t notice OmRu and Anika and AniOmRu didn’t notice Tej…..he stood at the entrance keeping an eye on Mahi……..
Anika , Om and Rudra sat at other table which was at a pretty good distance from where they can see Kamini and Ranveer but being unnoticed by them……
Mahi and lawyer took their seats …. Mahi and the fake lawyer faced Anika, Om and Rudra…….Khanna stood behind the opposite wall’s pillar, keeping eye on all of them…….Khanna’s back was facing Tej , so there was no chance that Khanna could see Tej and Tej’s complete attention was on Kamini , Ranveer and Mahi without getting noticed by them, so he failed to notice Khanna………..
Tej called a server and said something to him…..the server agreed and left from there………..
Ranveer and Kamini arrived ……..
Kamini placed her hands on Mahi and smiled
Kamini ‘’Mahi, my dear son….it’s a very long time I have seen you…where have you been?’’ she hugged Mahi while speaking……
Mahi parted the hug and said ‘’Maa .. I am good…how are you?’’
Kamini ‘’ how will I be…I am the same…situation is also the same…….but I searched for you in entire Mumbai in this one year…you were not to be found anywhere…where were you all these days?’’
Mahi ‘’maa …relax …first please have your seat’’
While Kamini and Ranveer were taking their seats Mahi received a message………he looked at Anika and OmRu after reading it ……..
Ranveer and Kamini took their seats …their back was facing AniOmRu….
The server came and placed a glass of water with a lid over it and smiled at Mahi……Mahi thanked him……….he was trying to message Anika but Kamini held his hand…….
Kamini ‘’you didn’t answer me yet ?’’
Mahi kept the lid on his lap and drank water, after drinking he again placed the lid on the glass and resumed speaking…. ………..
Mahi ‘’Maa…woh ….i have been out of Mumbai after Ranveer called me and asked me to go underground……..later’’
Kamini ‘’Later you might have started some business and became a big man …am I right?’’
Mahi ‘’yeah…yeah…exactly’’
Kamini ‘’I knew…I knew …you are very talented…but I am sorry Mahi…I used to be very harsh with you…trust me I too used to feel bad after scolding you’’
Mahi POV ‘’I can’t bear her lies anymore…I feel like doing her gangaram right now…but I have to control for Shivaay’s sake’’
Kamini ‘’why are you not speaking anything’’
Mahi ‘’nothing…I am not getting words after seeing you maa..i am speechless….’’
Kamini ‘’how much you care for me my dearest son….so where are you living now?’
Mahi ‘’woh..woh..’’
Kamini ‘’wherever you are staying…I am sure..you will take your mom this time…am I right? Also your brother Ranveer…we cannot forget how much he helped us…….now I can show that Pinky Oberoi that my son Mahi is equal to 10 shivaay singh oberoi’s………’’
Mahi was getting angered by her words and he signalled fake lawyer (FL)
FL ‘’ sir, I think I should leave now…I will transfer your properties to charity as you have asked for …specifically to those who are left illegitimate….i will meet you once the papers are ready……’’
Mahi ‘’okay…here are my property papers take these and get the new paper’s ready’’
Kamini stood up in rage and screamed ‘’what the hell Mahi? What are you trying to do? You are transferring property to orphanage and especially for the illegitimate children as charity? Have you gone mad?’’
Rnaveer held her hand and asked her to look where they are now…everyone in the restaurant were looking at them….she calmed herself and sat again………
Kamini turned towards FL and spoke ‘’Look lawyer whatever is your name…you will not do any such thing….’’
FL ‘’But Mam …sir told’’
Kamini ‘’I am the mother of your Sir, so do what I say and now hand me over those property papers which Mahi gave you just now and leave from here’’
FL took those papers and was about to give to Kamini , Kamini extended her hands to take the papers when Mahi took them in between and Kamini took back her hand giving a fake smile…..
Mahi asked FL to leave and he left from there……..
Kamini ‘’Mahi what did you think before taking such big decision…did you forget your mom and brother’’
Mahi ‘’maa…why do we need so much money…I will earn the living from scratch and be with you…you missed me not my money right…so what’s wrong in doing charity? Moreover I am giving this to those children who are illegitimate …illegitimate like me..so that they don’t face any hardships…why are you so irritated with this…’’
Kamini ‘’I cannot talk to you here…so come with me…’’ she stood up and held his hand and dragged him ……..
Mahi was surprised at her quick reaction and he turned towards AniOmRu……Ranveer observed him turning back and so he too turned back…by then AniOmRu got down so that they don’t get noticed……
Once Ranveer turned front …….they got ready to follow as quickly as possible, when Anika fell down hitting a chair placed at the middle…OmRu stopped and helped Anika first..…Khanna was following them but by the time Anika, OmRu reached outside they saw Ranveer and Khanna lying unconscious and Mahi and Kamini disappeared………
Om, Anika and Rudra were looking here and there while Om noticed Tej leaving in his car from the parking in a hurry………
Precap : the unfortunate turn of events
So this was the twenty second part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….
64 Comments
Awesome update di. Plz post next ASAP.
Thank you so much dwet …next update already in the portal…sorry for the delayed response..
The pls don’t seperate shivika …by these events and pls put kamini and ranveer behind bars
Hey Pallavi…thank you for posting your opinion…Shivika seperation is on cards but whether it’s long or for sometime …you need to wait…i promise this seperation will make way for a new relation…
Omg! Khanna unconscious ?.. Super thrilling epi!! Awesome.
Thank you so much Sam….thanks a lot
I couldn’t comment on the last part but it was also the best as this one , i don’t know what to say. U r theeeee best
Thank you so much Dhar…you too are the best…i read your OS on omkara and Gauri ….it’s superbb….you too are the besttttt….
Di I know something very big is going on in your mind regarding tej , so waiting for the next one. And this one is just fantastic .
Hey Ashwinee….thanks a lot for your awesome comment…i like the way Tej character is shaping up in this FF …but i haven’t yet preplanned anything about turning him villanious or changing him for good…so let’s see…
Loved the epi.. ?
Thank you so much Rasika…thanks a lot
Very nice update di ☺☺☺u express each line very nicely..just magically
But end this track room and give some onerous moments?????.
So our shivika done with 2 years of marriage?????yippeeeeso I would love to see SHIVIKA and ANSH now????? .take your time di
Btw love the 22nd part????
With regards,
Shanaya
Thank you so much Shanaya143….i am happy to know you liked the way i write … coming to this track it will end in a couple of episodes and then the family time will start…….so till that please bear with me…
Good evening di…. Yippeeee…I m so soon.
ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER PART di! Yeah, I agree Anika is intelligent n superwoman but Shivaay is also there na, so definitely he is also very intelligent di!! Shivaay-Khannaji convo, I know its little but very emotional di.. The word GANGARAM remembers me old Mahi! Tej….complicated person! Di, again n again I feel Tej doing this for his selfish motive but that motive is good one. EXCELLENT PART DI…. Eagerly waiting for next part di!
Your writing style is fantastic n ur imagination is also very different. Moreover ur suspenses…..uff! So why don’t u try to write a book di?
Take care urself n ur life too di….. Bye… Keep smiling di!!
Hey Gayathri,
Sorry i am late to respond today……was busy ….thank you so much dear…yeah if Anika is superwoman …Shivaay is a Superhero….yes i wanted our every favourite character in IB to be involved in my FF …..
I made him complicated…lol…what to do…let’s see your telepathy works or not…this i am writing as your friend…as an author i have no clue because i haven’t yet decided how to proceed for further episodes….
Me and a book…are you serious Gayathri ? i am not so good writer dear…well if i write a book i will first send the soft copy to Nithu as promised and first hard copy to you ……..
thank you so much dear….take care and love you loads
Ohh my god it’s such a kidkitod twist ?? … I can’t wait more …. Plz post next Asap ka otherwise my head will burst in curiosity..
Thank you so much Haridhra…all the best for your OS competition….you need not to wait more as the next episode is already in the portal available
Tnq ka ..☺
Thats amazing… bt plz dnt make mahi die…
Thank you so much Siyaa….Mahi wouldn’t die …this is for sure…..am sure you would be happy to read this
OMG di you will kill me by this suspense…..pls pls pls pls don’t kill me…I am desperate to knwi what will happen next ..
Thank you so much Anu…i am not going to kill anayone and become a murderer…next episode is up in the portal already…so i am waiting for your response very eagerly
Fantabulous ?
I m waiting
Thank you so much Ramya…thanks a lot…wait over next episode in portal
OMG!!! Hope Mahi is alright…
Thank you so much fffan1234…….Mahi will be fine don’t worry
As usual nice episode Harika di…u r showing ur detective talents…I’m so much impressed…eagerly waiting for the next part..
Thank you so much Zaveesha…thanks a lot…yeah trying to use all the skills to make sure you don’t get disappointed…well there is a surprise for you in next episode …so waiting to know your reaction …
Saw that surprise and I’m surprised….so sweet of u harika di… I’m overwhelmed…commented there too…this is the best bday wish and surprise for me…thanks to the infinite…?????
Nicr sid
Thank you so much Madhu for posting your opiniuon…but i am not Sid…i am Harika….lol …just kidding..i knew you were to type NICE EPISODE
Awesome dear…. Waiting for the next episode….post it soon… I am excited for the new twist
Thank you so much Sagithya….wait over next episode in the portal…so now i will be waiting for your reaction
loved the update
Thank you so much Alekhika…2 words to 3 words…Is my progress progressing ?
The track is very interesting di…. i hope this will not lead to separate shivika and I hope Mahi is safe…. the precap seems to interesting….. Day by day I am becoming your die hard fan and I also suggested my friends and cousins to read your ff… they are also impressed by your amazing skill…. loves from your sissy and take care…. bye
Thank you so much Bavatharini babu…Shivika seperation you will know in next episodes but Mahi is definitely fine…awee thank you so much dear for letting my work known to your friends and family…that’s a sweet gesture …i hope they would also let me know how they feel reading this………..
lots of love and best wishes to you sissy …bye
Awesome akka chala superb ga undi waiting for the next….????
Thank you so much naa….next part poratl lo already undi…eeroju fast fast ga upload chesi bayatiki vella…
Awesome episode Harika di ?.
Khanna – Shivay conversation was very emotional…
Donno what is tej upto, hope he don’t turn into a villain again..
And you left the end in suspense di…
I’m getting more and more curious to know about it…
Hope everything turns out to be good ?….
Post soon di ?..
Thank you so much Sofiya…thanks a lot for letting me know how much you liked it and what all you liked….
at well that ends well is i follow…a big clue for upcoming episodes …next part up in portal
Omg khanna as well as ranveer unconscious..what’s gonna happen??
But awesome update di
Thank you so much Madhuani…yes both unconscious…what’s gonna happen in next episode which is already up in the portal
Dii..first of all thanku for that long sweet reply on last page.
The whole episode is like a hide and seek game..everyone trying to hide from other..??.
Poor shivay dont know what all is going on behind him.
Like shivay i am also feeling some negative vibes ..donno what will happen next.hope that unfortunate events also turn good for our shivika..dii tej is planning something fishy right..hope his acts also turn good..afterall he is ur fav character in ur ff.hahha.
Gn dii…now i shld watch maha episode of ib and dbo…super exciting.
Hey Chotii,
Thank you so much for the opinion you posted…
Don’t worry Shivaay will also come to know…Shivaay se kuch chupana mushkil hi nahi naa mumkin bhi hain…lol……
Shivaay’s and your’s telepathy haa…negative vibes…cool ….good going sis…very good going…
Let’s see unfortunate events will continue to be unfortunate or turn out to be good….not yet planned anything for next to next episode…….
Yeah Tej is my most loved character…he will have all shades …i always wanted to make someone like this ….
yep…IB mahaepisode is not to miss…take care and bye
Awesome dI. …fabulous part loved it eagerly waiting for next part update soon di
Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot…next episode already in the portal
What an episode yaar… I don’t even realize when it was started and it was ended…. this is awesome… shivay’s conversation with khanna is nice…. now I am worrying for mahi…. what kamini will do?…what’s tej’s motive?…. what will oberois do?…. what will be the reaction when shivay comes to know all these things?…. aaaaaahhhhh toooo many suspences. Waiting for the next one..
Thank you so much Katz…awee so nice of you…..i kept Shivaay and Khanna’s convo very precise keeping Shivaay’s personality in view…but that little convo is being liked is something i feel very happy for……..your every question will be answered in the next two to three episodes…my fingers crossed to see the verdict of next episode which is already in the portal
Oh my god…..didi post soon pl…..
Thank you so much Arthi….next episode up in the portal
Dii plzz post next soon .. i ll be waiting.. and epi was fab as usual.. keep going and lotsss of lubbbhhh
Thank you so much Ahaana…..next episode already in the portal dear…now my turn to wait to know your response
Amazinggg….. Update di… Super excited 4 nxt post ASAP…
Thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot…next update already in the portal
Out of the ? world … i really don’t know what to say you …. eagerly waiting for the next part… just thinking ? will my shivaay ? Come to know about their plan
Thank you so much Nida…you need to to say anything because i understand what you want to say…TUpathy…..i am so happy you are liking this FF dear…ohh ya ”YOUR SHIVAAY” will definitely come to know their plan…i am now waiting for the next response from you, as next episode is already in the portal
Aaare, its so awesome. I am not speechless this time, words are there but they cannot describe it. Beautifully written and expressed. Love you❤
Thank you so much Vedika aka Jerry………i am also feeling short of words to thank you for the immense love you are showing towards me…it feels really awesome to read your opinion everytime you post…….
Awesome….
Khanna & Shivaay emotional convo…..
Khanna unconscious…..Shivaay will b d saviour i guess….
Precap is shocking…
waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂
Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot for the opinion you posted…Shivaay the saviour? i really have no idea about this as i haven’t planned anything…next episode already in the portal