Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….
Om ‘’Shivaay tell quickly whose call it was’’
Shivaay ‘’It’s Bade papa’s call’’
OmRu ‘’What? What did he say?’’
Shivaay ‘’come fast …ask Khanna to reach Godown near Goodluck chawl with Police’’
Om ‘’Called Khanna and asked him to do as Shivaay did’’
They all got into car and Rudra was driving………
Om ‘’Shivaay what did Mr.Tej say’’
Shivaay ‘’Om …Kamini has taken Mahi and my papa in the godown’’
Om ‘’Chote papa also? But how come he has come into picture?’’
Shivaay ‘’we will know everything after we meet bade papa…he is waiting outside godown and keeping an eye on Kamini and Ranveer’’
Rudra ‘’Ranveer is with Kamini…that means …Shivaay bhayya your guess was right …all this is the plan of them’’
Om ‘’yes..and this time we will make sure they are behind the bars’’
Shivaay ‘’only after knowing the truth…I hope Mahi does his best to get the truth out’’
They finally reached Godown …Tej was waiting there……..
Shivaay ‘’Mr.Tej …you here and what’s all this?’’
Tej ‘’sshhhhh……take this and keep listening……..’’ he handed out bluetooths to all of them …….
—————-INSIDE THE GODOWN
Mahi ‘’Maa …why have you brought me here? And why have you tied me?’’
Shakthi ‘’yes Kamini …why did you call me and why did you tie me?’’
Kamini ‘’Shakthi what did you think I didn’t see you outside Ohri’s keeping an eye on us……do you think you are smart…you cannot estimate the intelligence of me………’’
Shakthi ‘’ohh so you saw me?’’
Kamini ‘’yes…I saw you and now I will get what I want from you…..’’ she signalled Ranveer
Ranveer bought papers
Kamini ‘’Come on both of you sign and then I will leave you from here’’
Mahi ‘’maa…what’s all this…these paper’s …why are you doing this? ‘’
Kamini ‘’enough of your drama … I know you were with Anika and Shivaay all this year…and I also know how you became such a big man’’
Mahi ‘’so what’s the problem now? What are those papers?’’
Kamini ‘’are you really a business man…you are asking as if you don’t know? Okk fine you want to listen from me then listen…these are property papers and I want you to sign on these papers, so that I become the owner of all your properties…..’’
Mahi ‘’maa…but why all this…….Shivaay and I both are your sons …so our property is anyways yours…you can stay with us and enjoy your rest of life…I already said that…then why do you want to transfer the properties on your name’’
Kamini was laughing evilly and so was Ranveer…Shakthi and Mahi were looking confused
Shakthi ‘’what Mahi is saying is right … why are you laughing? Mahi and Shivaay are your sons …so logically you can enjoy rest of your life…I am sure if Mahi says Shivaay will give you the same respect as he had given all these years to pinky’’
Listening to Pinky’s name Kamini got angered….
Kamini ‘’don’t take that Pinky’s name infront of me…you know what…she …she is the reason for my this state…….and Shivaay and Mahi will give me same respect as they give it to Pinky…my foot….they can never give me if they know the truth……..’’
Shakthi ‘’what truth?’’
Kamini ‘’not so easily…first sign the papers and don’t waste time….’’
She asked Ranveer to open the knots of Shakthi and Mahi so that they can sign on the papers….
They both signed the papers and Kamini was tying back Mahi while ranveer was tying Shakthi…..
Shakthi at once crossed his legs between Ranveer’s legs and Ranveer tripped but balanced himself……Shakthi threw away the rope and got up…….he hit Ranveer hard and as soon as he fell down he grabbed the Gun from Ranveer and shot it on his leg ….Ranveer screamed in pain …while Kamini was looking horrified at sudden turn of events…he winked at Mahi and pointed Gun towards Mahi……….
Kamini ‘’wait…what are you doing? Why did you shoot Ranveer ? don’t think I am going to leave you so soon….’’ she was about to call someone…
Shakthi ‘’you forgot Kamini I am a sports person and adventurist during college days…so I know how to escape and save myself…..i just shot Ranveer on his legs and if you don’t give those papers back I am going to kill your son Mahi’’
Kamini ‘’Fine …then go ahead and kill Mahi…I don’t care……’’
Shakti and Mahi were shocked ……….
Shakthi ‘’How bad mother are you….you don’t care for your son too….’’
Kamini ‘’ohh shut up Shakthi…Neither Mahi nor Shivaay are my sons…they are your sons …your’s and your dear wife Pinky’s sons’’
Shakthi ‘’what?’’
Kamini ‘’shocked ? yes but this is the truth’’
Shakthi ‘’I don’t believe this’’
Kamini ‘’if you don’t believe ….ask your sister Roop……’’
Skahthi ‘’what has she to do with all this?’’
Kamini ‘’what she has to do….’’ She smiled and continued ‘’she has done everything ……’’
Shakthi ‘’I still don’t believe you…because you are cheater ………’’
Kamini ‘’enough …I will let you know the truth today ‘’
Kamini started spilling the truth to Shakti while Mahi was listening in the room and Om, Tej, Shivaay, Rudra were listening from outside
(FLASHBACK IS THE NARRATION OF KAMINI TO SHAKTI)
——————-FLASHBACK STARTS
After our college …I was trying to earn my living as my state was getting worse with no money …….during college days we were boy friend and girl friend and I got addicted to comforts being with you and imagined my entire life with you …and thought you would marry me………but you married Pinky………I was angered and wanted to seek revenge for leaving and marrying her..…but Oberois were so rich and were amid so much security that reaching you directly was impossible…I was waiting for an opportunity to seek revenge……..i was keeping an eye on you though ……
Pinky on the other hand was unable to bear child given to her medical conditions and was under immense pressure of giving heir to Oberois……. her chances of bearing child were becoming less ….i knew Doctors had said that her chances of becoming a mother was almost getting to zero…. before 34 years , it was the time when differences started to crop between your family and Roop …….
Roop was planning to destroy your family……..i understood Roop’s intention , so I met Roop then and spoke to her about my revenge……she said she will think of a way to help me …so as to complete my revenge and her revenge too…
Roop made a plan ……she wanted to trap you in an extra marital affair relation and wanted to insult you in front of your family members , so that you will be out of OM…….you were going on a tour for some business for a week and that was the best time for her to implement her plan…… Roop followed you…she made me meet you while you were in your business trip ……she sent me in your room in pretext of taking some help and you allowed me……I took you out of the room while talking with you and Roop entered the room and mixed sedatives in water and left from there….as she left we both came in ……I was just waiting for you to drink the water ……you drank it and fell asleep……..next morning when you woke you saw me beside you as if we have had physical relation…….you still did not get moved and left from there angrily…….Roop informed Tej that you slept with me …Tej remained mum……..
I thought my plan failed…………so did Roop…..but when you and we returned back, we got to know Pinky was pregnant…that’s when Roop made her next move………we waited for 9 months till the delivery of Pinky……..finally one fine day pinky was in pains…it was as if God was helping us….your mother was on a pilgrimage, Tej and Jhanvi were on a business trip…..so Roop came in pretext of helping you…you didn’t know what to do and took her help………when Pinky was still in labour , ……Roop in pretext of talking with midwife about Pinky, bribed the midwife in hospital to ask you to get some injection which is not available easily in hospital premises, stating Pinky’s situation…the midwife did what Roop asked her to do……you agreed and left from there leaving Roop alone in the hospital…..…it was then Pinky delivered twins baby boy’s …Roop took away both the twins and replaced with a dead baby girl who was born to someone unknown in the hospital.…….Pinky was still unconscious……
Roop handed over the twins to me and asked me to sleep in the nearby room as if I delivered the babies and not be seen by you………Roop came back and stood outside the labour room…..you too arrived ………….
The midwife came to you from the labour room, and said Pinky gave birth to a dead baby girl………you were shocked as you knew Pinky can never become a mother again…..and you were worried about Pinky’s health and state of mind………
——————–FLASHBACK ENDS
Kamini continued ‘’then you very well knew what happened’’
Shakthi ‘’ yeah I remember…….’’
Mahi was shocked while Kamini was sheepishly smiling…….Shivaay, Om, Rudra, Tej were even more shocked ………when Shakti continued
(FLASHBACK NARRATION AS CONVERSATION OF SHAKTI AND KAMINI)
Shakti ‘’After knowing about dead baby girl….i asked Roop to leave from there as I wanted some time alone for myself..…Roop left…….I was walking in thoughts in the hospital to inform my family members about Pinky’s delivery..…that’s when I heard cries of babies and turned to see …I saw you asleep with twins beside you ……..i took one of the twins and kept beside Pinky…….’’
Kamini ‘’yes…you did that…….unfortunately while doing that a daima saw you………so You gave money to that daima to keep her mouth shut……’’
Shivaay who was listening all this got numb…he remembered the daima video and how he believed it to be Om …he realised that daima was referring to him , and that too daima was mistaken…..
Shivaay came out of thoughts when Kamini spoke
Kamini ‘’YOU WERE ACTUALLY GIVING YOUR AND PINKY’S OWN SON TO PINKY that is SHIVAAY AND PINKY’S OTHER SON REMAINED WITH ME that is MAHI………later you came back to me and asked me where is the child’s father…I acted and cried that you were his father ……as the child was the result of our physical relationship during your business trip…….you still didn’t believe and left from there…..
Roop never came back to me again, as it was decided between us that we will not meet after that and I can do whatever I want to do with the children of your’s and Pinky’s.…..but I met her once and asked her about the midwife who helped her…she smiled and said that she killed that midwife and warned me not to meet her again in my life….i obliged and never met her……..I thought to raise the kid against you all and when he grows up …bring him back to oberoi mansion and ….make him claim his rights as your Son…….. and I as wife of you and as mother of your son born out of our FAKE EXTRA MARITAL AFFAIR.…….’’
Shakti ‘’Now I understand why you didn’t even think once before shooting Shivaay last year……I always used to think how can you kill your own son……..’’
Kamini ‘’Yes, I never cared about Mahi or Shivaay whether they are alive or dead ‘’
Mahi, Shivaay, Tej, Om , Rudra and Shakthi were shocked……………
Kamini smiled ‘’So Shakthi ….now you can very well kill your own blood, MAHI …I don’t mind…all these years I have just insulted Mahi as Nazayaz only to bring out my anguish on you and Pinky…..i wanted to Kill Shivaay to take revenge then……but Anika took the bullet……
one year before when Anika did DNA tests of Mahi and Shivaay they matched …infact they were bound to match…no one even thought of getting DNA test of Pinky and Mahi/Shivaay to be done……..without thinking anything your brother TEJ SINGH OBEROI kicked Shivaay out ….he was also not at fault…Tej would have remembered Roop calling and informing about our affair and he thus did believe that…….
and my revenge of getting insulted during Ranveer and Priyanka’s marriage got settled…..Pinky ne tho apne pairon mein khud hi khuladi maar lii and your relation now is known to me……I just needed money now as my revenge is over……..so I am leaving now….go hell with anything and everything as I got what I want ..’’ Kamini moved taking papers…….
ShivOmRu entered the godown as soon as Kamini completed speaking the truth and trying to leave………
Kamini and Ranveer were shocked………OmRu ran towards Ranveer and held him before he can slip away……..
Tej entered with Police…………..
Kamini was looking confused as how could they come to know about all this………
Mahi smiled and went near Kamini who was by then held by lady police officers……….he snatched the papers from her and tore them infront of her………..
Mahi ‘’Thank you KAMINI……..I thought to give you respect even after what all you did with me all these years….…but you don’t deserve any respect…you brought me up for your revenge and you didn’t think even once about my safety when I was at gun point…all you needed was money……so now earn your money by working in jail……..i never expected you will fall so low to seek revenge …..for you only revenge , greed mean everything…relations, affections, happiness are terms not found in your dictionary………….just leave and I will ensure you to be not at peace……….’’
Shivaay came near Ranveer and slapped him hard for hurting his bade papa and his loyal employee Khanna and there by trapping Mahi which resulted in shock to Anika……….
Shivaay ‘’Ranveer I thought you would have changed but few people can never change……. with your stupid action you have put my wives life in risk and for that I will never leave you…I will kill you…………’’
Mahi stopped Shivaay……….
Police took them away………
Shivaay hugged Mahi…’’you are safe Mahi…you are safe………come we must rush to Anika first’’
Mahi ‘’what happened to Anika? Is she fine?’’
Shivaay nodded No and cried …….Mahi was confused, so were Tej and Shakthi………..
Tej came near Shivaay and held him
Shivaay hugged his bade papa and cried……….he cried helplessly……….Tej reciprocated his hug….
Om had tears of happiness in his eyes…and so was Rudra’s state……
Tej ‘’ Shivaay …what happened to Anika …tell me …’’
Shivaay ‘’bade papa…….can I call you now bade papa’’ he looked at him teary eyed…….
Tej ‘’off course …….you were always my son and you will always be my son……we will talk about this later but first let me know about Anika’’ he spoke looking at Om……
Om smiled looking at Tej , wiping his tears, Tej had a bigger smile….
Rudra explained everything……….and Tej , Mahi and Shakti were stunned……….
Tej ‘’this is all my mistake…….come first let’s go to hospital……..’’
Tej ‘’Shakthi inform our family members and bring them to hospital …fast ……..’’
Shakthi and Khanna left towards OM while Tej, ShivOmRuHi left towards hospital………….
Precap : union of Oberois
So this was the twenty fourth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….
97 Comments
Di I didn’t know tej and mahi’s characters can be moulded like this. Beautifully sketched the characters and an awesome storyline .
And I’m thinking whether to comment on the next part or what . Seriously I have to find new words before commenting on any of your works . Nothing else can be better than this Di.
How can I miss Shakti’s character in this ff
. Adventure and sport’s person. ???could never think of Shakti in this angle
Thank you so much Ashwinee…you write anything beautifully dear..so all i expect is your opinion …not any praises about me……i feel extremely happy to read your opinion everytime…
something is better than this …wanna know what ? you are bestest….
It’s theeeee bestest se bhi bestest wala ff , u r an awesome writer dii . Tej was awesome, plzz plzz plzzzz do post the nextupdate ASAP
Thank you so much Dhar……thanks a lot…I love the way i sketched Tej’s character…i mean my personal choice…….
next update very soon dear
Hari ka I don’t have words to describe tis … U r a phenomenal write. Congo ka next is ur 25th Silver jubilee wala epi ???.. I must say one thing CVS plz see these wonderful works on TU n stuff ur brain with some knowledge that how a story must be written.. Ka This one personally my Fav ff n I tnk u did masters in writing Twist Filled stories haan ..??
Thank you so much Haridhra-The Author…….thanks a lot for Silver Jubliee Wishes……no dear i did masters in computer applications…not in writing twists ………lol…what to say, how to thank i am not getting any words…just wanna say thank you so much
Extremely great ? i felt soo happy ? because you wrote that words with soo much emotions… and beleive me no one ☝️ can take your place in my heart ❤️… not even shivaay….. i am soo lucky to get a friend like u …. and this short was something unpredictable ??????☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️??????????????????????????
Thank you so much Nida….choooooo chweeeeetttttttttt of you…my place is my place but i will adjust and allow YOUR SHIVAAY too…as you have confirmed about me…….me too…am also lucky dear…touchwood …let us be friends like this ……thank you so much for letting me know you liked the episode……….
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Hey Vishnu…yaa nenu happy ga feel ayyanu neede first comment ani choosi…thank you nanna…nenu fb lo friend request pampisthanu kacchitham ga
Chala Profiles vacchayi ee peru isthe andulo deniki pampinchanu ? Teacher at Nellore, studied at VR college, Lives in KOvur …idi nee id na ?
Di I’m dumbstruck by your writing.
Tnq god tej wasn’t involved in it n according to his point he was right.
Finally the biggest truth got revealed.
I’m at loss of words right now really that wonderful it is.
Congo in advance for your silver jubilee.
Thank you so much Madhuani……yep Oberois are good …no they are awesome….yes biggest truth revelation done…i hope i passed in proving everything……Thank you so much once again for the wishes Madhuani…thanks a lot
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Awesome….Loved it…..
Finally truth revealed…..Mystery Solved…..
Congratulations fr completing 24 episodes….
Waiting fr d reunion….
Post d nxt ASAP….. 🙂
Thank you so much Shivika…
yeah everything cleared now…
Next shot very soon….
Hope you would like it………..
Superb update
Finally the truth is out clearing all the misunderstanding.
Thank you so much Alekhika…..
I will be celebrating today as i got a full second line from you….
I took a long jump from 2 words to 2 lines…………
yuppieeeeeeeeee
Thank you so much
Wow….superb planning and ur way of putting up d missing parts in position in real ib is going on…and i think most of d loopholes in ib are covered by u…great going dii.
Kya story banaya aapne…kamini and roop’s devilish union ..shakti’s heroism (??) cant imagine him doing all those stunts..anika’s trauma state…dii i really loved that part when anika really lost herself completely when she was ensured my shivay’s words that she will loose shivay’s love.. Excellently portrayed..dii but i thought shivay would propose anika though its not d most appropriate time but i had a weird idea that he would do soo..but shivay’s idea of treating her is awesome and for me the complete story is above my imagination.hatsoff to u dii.
Heyy…okela reunion ayipothe ee ff ayipodda..???..
Thank u dii for u love and care..nenu mundu part lo comment chesa ..aa comment choodava ..i poured out my feelings geniunely there.
Gn dii.
Hey Chotii…
LOL shakthi didn’t do stunts…he just tripped Ranveer , pushed him…shot bullet at his legs…….yeah but he seems fit enough to all these….
Anika’s trauma state bringing out is getting over my nerves i must find a way to bring her genuinely out of that state…let’s see what my brain says and my hand types
Your question is suspense and i have a surprise planned for you…don’t ask me what the surprise is …just keep reading the episodes……
Reunion taruvatha ventane ayipothe janalu chameli lu visurutharu clear ending isthanu nanna……
chaduvuthanu kacchitham ga…akkada reply isthanu
Gud night dear
Awwwwwwwesome update dii….. Finally d truth come out with a new twist….. Can’t wait more plzzzz post soon…
Thank you so much Banita ….yes the truth revealed……next episode very soon dear……..
Hey di ( i know u r elder to me hehe) long time…. but finally I’m back… thank u so much for taking the extra effort n sending the links to me everytime u update… it means a lot…. by the way the updates r really mindblowing it ttook me quite a while to read them but they were all worth it… ur 25th epi coming wow! Congratulations in advance! Post soon….
Thank you so much Anu…great to see you back…thta’s not a problem dear…i am gald to know you found the episode worth reading and thank you so much for reading it patiently……yeah 25th episode ..can’t believe i came this long way….will post soon
Avunu akka adi naa fb ne friend request pampi accept chesthanu..??
sorry …i wqas going through all episodes and just saw these opinions…u know now we are connected in FB
It was a emotional episode after reading the second half of this i was crying my family members asked me why i was crying after reading the precap i think next will be also emotional and i have one request plz don’t end this ff after reunion of oberoi keep writing
Hey Shona…aweee…now you know everything…sorry i didn’t notice these opinions so couldn’t reply…sorry again for superest late response ……..thank you so mucch dear…
Hello di !! This one is also an excellent one by you. The characters were beautifully portrayed and displayed. I was enjoying while reading the whole episode. Thank you for such a great chappy. Love you di❤
Hey Jerry…sorry for the superest late reply…actually i missed these opinion those days and now i was going through the FF from morning and saw this…….Thank you dear…thank you so much
Episode 15
Kitchen masti was fun……
when Om said all the things abt gauri, i thought aake ek jaap diwar pe satka degi…..but atleast she explained her side of story….agar purana wala Om hota toh maan leta but tgis SSO part 2, wants proofs for everything….abhi bhi usko strike nahi ho raha ke wo sach mein tab usse help mang rahi thi….
i was thinking ke kese prove karoge but Shivaay faking to pair up with Kaali was really unexpected….waah kya idea tha….
Gaurikara room scene was really so nice….when he asked her whether she accepts him as her husband or not, at that moment i felt i got our old Omkara back…..
Gaurika love scene was really a bliss to read…i really hope i can see that soon as well…
Aur ese goody-good moments ke baad koi esa precap deta hai kya “destruction”….
Wese, while reading this chapter i was thinking ke Rumya ka patchup karvaya, Gaurikara ka karvaya par Shivika ke beech mein toh koi problem thi hi nahi, ab unko alag karne ka plan toh nahi na….vese bhi precap mein destuction likha hai….. you know how to build up suspense di…
Episode -16
Couple moments were really sweet n fun filled….
but Tej has to ruin that everytime doesn’t he….
now i think this point really needs a mention- first Shivaay asked everyone to eat breakfast only then he talked about the matter. And I don’t know how to put it, but this is a very natural human behaviour that not to take decisions with empty stomach. i mean i have seen my mother also say to us that pahale khana khaa lo phir baat karte hai… so i felt i should mention that…
The part where shivaay explains them is very well written…he acted so strong in front of them but then broke down in front of his soulmate…..if anybody else had been in his place, then for sure that person must have left no chance to humiliate the oberois after so much of insult, but he is our shivaay right?
Episode 17
Tej ka yeh gussa hi Oberoi Khandhan ko le duba hai….the BOD was talking something sensible…and decisions are taken in a board meeting my majority…..large shareholders leaving definately has a great negative impact on the stocks of business….but with shivaay’s discussion with Mr Gogai it seems that it will help strengthen the finacial position…
Anika is the best…she knows what should be done when and she proves it time and again…..so many times she has helped/saved the oberois….i didnt expect that actually…well u had left a clue when Shivaay says dadi will want to see both his sons together…i din’t decipher that…..
and thank God that shivaay didnt misundertood her or got angry….
Shivaay/Tej business rules…..OMG…i am once again in awe of you…..u have studied business or what di??? main toh aap ki wapis se bahot badi fan ho gai…..
Has Tej see those points which Rudra wrote??? if so he will immediately come to know that its Shivaay….if he misunderstands then toh ho gaya….
actually i had read these before going and while i was there (u know where) but as i had promised to comment on each and every episode i went through these again…. ab mujhe bhi ek bada wala comment chahiye….
Hey Nita….finally you have reached to this episode and i got to read the opinion on all the rpevious episodes………
Firstly thank you so much for such awesome long opinion ….secondly…i have no idea what crap i was going on writing but as a third person while i was reading my own work ..i felt atleast 0.01 % it is sensible ……
Om’s character was like SSO Part2 and i very well remember …while i was writing all those dialogues or scenes between Gauri and Om then i expected readers to throw chameli’s and then even i stopped writing for 1-2 hrs thinking out of a way to clear this mess that i have spread…..i had actually fallen in my own trap…..lol…and then KT idea popped out……thank God you all accepted it otherwise you can imagine my halath and haalaath…….
I wouldn’t lie but ..Shivaay /Tej business points were my mere observations while reading and watching Business news…i mean they were moral of the story sort…i am no way related to business dear…doooor doooor tak business se koi vaastha nahi………
Well that was past coming to present……..your analysis always make me go aweee….i mean it helps me to improve and makes me think what more an be done to form a gripping story….i very much missed you for all these……but i knew you were busy too….and once again the OS you sent to the competition was bang on……i don’t really are for who will win the competition but for me you are the best……and one more thing your frankness and bang on poi t opinion is something i wait for ….in short YOU ARE JUST AWESOME DEAR……and now i am waiting for your turn and you know what i am referring to……
Kya di…U r my sis, whatever u will write will turn out to be awesome only….N kabhi agar aage atko toh mera naam le lena….”Om Nitay Namah” ka jaap kar lena….haha just kidding(u know that right??)
N di Kali Thakur wala idea was seriously fab….I really never expected gauri n Omkara to unite this way….
Only business news…..I doubt….phir Wo letter bhi toh perfectly drafted hai(IIRO Waala) in next chapter….par aap bol rahe ho toh maan leti hu…
Itna sara pyaar….aakhon mein aasu aa gaye *wiping of fake tears*
Actually OS was just a simple n common story of man who is afraid of love until he finds his true love….N I was obviously going to write on our fav pair Shivika….N Shivaay had the reasons also….
But di I want to clarify one thing, I know I don’t need to do that but still, there are many things which I say or comment on a lighter person…I am a jolly natured person(or that’s what it is called I guess) so plz don’t mind n agar meri kisi bhi baat ka bura lage toh plz tell without hesitating…..I don’t want any misunderstandings to affect our relation….I have got an elder sis after so long and I can’t afford to lose here. Frankly speaking I haven’t been so open with anyone….
Di don’t ask for that…u have motivated me so much and that’s the only reason that the draft is still thereon my laptop….I already feel guilty that I am not able to think anything about the ff. And one more thing but that I’ll tell u in PM.
And Tellyupdates PLEASE PLEASE post my whole comment….
Episode 18
Nice episode…so once again my guess was right…OmRu had forgotten to erase the points….n Mr Gogoi was almost about to give away…..
Liked to see Tej trying to mend relations with everyone (I am going to use these idea sometimes later and only u know why)…..Pinky, i think she deserves this….
I never expected Jhanvi to keep a condition like this, but she doesn’t want her DIL to suffer the same fate as her….such contrasting faces to Jhanvi n Pinky…..
but finally everything settled there….
now the news abt Shivika n SaHi will spread like a wild fire it seems….
Episode 19
wow thats what Jhanvi said in next episode (that she couldn’t let her DIL to suffer the same fate as her) Our thoughts are so similar….(i can swear that i hadn’t read this episode before)….
Shivika scene….it seems so long…..actually not only shivika, but SaHi also…these lighter moments are such a relief from the tensed atmosphere……
Conference…i guess this is how you are paving way to set everything alright….and the event is also in GOBE….but wow di what a perfect drafting of the letter….wow….
Anika is really a gem…i don’t know if such people really exist….she is asking Shivaay to forgive pinky…..if i would have been in her place then maybe i wouldnt have never done so….
Snake type 😛 ;P 🙂 anaconda….. shivaay bhi na….bivi ka lecture sun ne se accha maan gaya…. ;p ;p …. Mahi n Anika ke saath mera bhi *wink* ab yeh Harika di ka ff hai toh milan toh hona hi hai…that also with lots of twists….