Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….
Everyone laughed at Sahil’s cute jealousy and tashan with Khanna….
Mr.Gogoi has left the Haveli open for the Oberoi’s and their relatives for the next day too…so that everyone can stay back and enjoy ………
Khanna took Sahil and went inside the Haveli….
Mr.Bajaj and Gauri’s maasi decided to leave the same night to Bajaj Villa…. Oberoi’s asked them to stay back but they denied……so finally Oberoi’s accepted the decision of them……
Pinky ‘’OMM…we are getting late…so shall we go ?’’
Rudra ‘’kaha? Aap sab kaha aa rahe ho? Aaj tho hame akela chod do’’
ShivOmHi ShrAniGaMya shied in embarrassment……
Jhanvi ‘’Have some shame Rudra…we have to welcome our daughter-in-laws and then we will leave you alone’’
Tej ‘’off course Rudra we will leave you alone…after all , we have our own private life Rudra’’ he smirked
Jhanvi’’ohh God you too Tej’’
Pinky ‘’Jhethani ji aapki tho kismet khul gayi’’
Shakthi ‘’when did I not agree Pinky about you, that you are saying only to Bhabhi…even i……?’’
Pinky ‘’bas bas..aur kuch mat boliye’’
ShivOmRuHi and ShrAniGaMya closed their ears………..
ShaKy and TejVi smiled ………
Dadi came and Said ‘’Jhanvi, Pinky…it’s getting late …we have to go fast and welcome our Daughters …come quick’’
Everyone left to Kalyani villa……….
Pinky and Jhanvi welcomed the couples …………..Soon after …post marriage rituals happened ……Shivaay and Om won in ring finding while Mahi and Rudra lost……….
Pinky ‘’Okay all the brides go to your rooms’’
Anika Gauri Shreya and Sumo left towards their rooms……….actually everyone except Shreya knew their rooms because they have already come here some months before…………
Shreya stood confused………AniGaMya looked at her and understood her problem…….while they took a step towards Shreya…….OmRu came to her ……..so they smiled and left towards their rooms…..
Om ‘’come Shreya we will take you to your room’’
Rudra ‘’you are in my team na…we will sit and chat the whole night’’
Shreya nodded her head excitedly
Mahi ‘’Rudra …mere bhai…aaj tho baksh do….waise tumhare liye meri behen wait karthi hogi’’
Rudra ‘’woh haan..mein tho bhool gaya…so Shreya Bhabhi aaj Mahi bhayya se adjust karlo ..mujhe Sumo ko pareshaan karna hain’’
Jhanvi ‘’Shut up Rudra…not a word more…ohh God this boy is just too much………you are becoming shameless day by day’’
Rudra ‘’Mom..but what did I say now..i just said..’’
ShivOmHi ‘’Shut Up Rudra’’
Rudra ‘’okay…okay..i am leaving’’ saying that he ran towards his room………
Dadi ‘’Shivaay ..you were the first to get married so I expect you to give me the first greatgrandchild…understand…it’s long time I have played with cute little small baby’’
Shivaay shied in embarrassement and
Shivaay ‘’Dadi…good night’’
Dadi ‘’waise good night to you all………’’
Pinky ‘’we will meet you tomorrow morning…lock the doors of the house properly’’
Om ‘’lock the doors of house..i mean where are you all going’’
Pinky ‘’what will we do here in this house…we will be staying in Haveli…you guys enjoy’’ she smiled
All smiled and went to their rooms………
———-RUMYA’s Room
Sumo was sitting on the bed ….she had a south Indian wedding …so she was in Kanjeevaram saree and had no pallu over her head……..
Rudra came to her….she smiled with her head down……..
Rudra ‘’please sumo…not like a typical serial wife……I love you as bold and beautiful’’
Sumo looked at him……
Rudra ‘’do you want me to ask something’’
Sumo ‘’no I want to say something’’
Rudra ‘’what?’’
Sumo ‘’I LOVE YOU DUFFER’’
Rudra ‘’I LOVE YOU TOO SUMO my WRESTLER’’
Rudra put his hands in his pockets and brought out an aluminium wrap outside…..Sumo looked on…..
Sumo ‘’What’s this?’’
Rudra opened and there it was her favourite Parantha…….Sumo looked at him in surprise
Rudra broke a small piece and put it in her mouth……..
Sumo snatched the Parantha from him and started eating it……
Rudra ‘’this is not fair..this was for both you and me’’
Sumo ‘’Rudra I can share anything …not parantha…please…see there is milk here…it’s healthy for you…so you drink it…I am hungry I will eat this’’
Rudra said ‘’no way…I want a bite…I am also hungry…today we have to share everything half half’’
Sumo ‘’no way’’ she teased him…..and ran away………
Rudra ran behind her……finally she gave up and fell on bed……….Rudra came on her ……..they both had an eyelock………Sumo still had a piece of parantha a part in her mouth and a part outside……Rudra was quick enough to bite the portion that was out….Sumo’s heartbeat paced and she quickly gulped the rest and rudra’s lip touched her lips very soon…..she closed her eyes….
Rudra looked into her eyes and she was inviting him…..Rudra again smashed his lips and sumo held him tight……
Their lips locked and clothes were getting freed …..they were united in no time……..they consummated their marriage finally……
————-MAHIYA’s room
Shreya was feeling nervous and awkward and was pacing here and there in room…..firstly her attire was heavy and pricking and secondly she didn’t knew what will happen …..while all this was going on Mahi entered the room……….
Shreya was getting more nervous as she saw Mahi……..Mahi was also typically nervous…….
Shreya did not sit back but was pacing more fast in the room……..
Mahi held Shreya and said ‘’Shreya Relax…why are you walking so fast here and there’’
Shreya ‘’woh…woh…’’
Mahi ‘’woh ..what?’’
Shreya ‘’actually…I am feeling uncomfortable in this heavy lehenga and I want to change the dress…so’’
Mahi ‘’so why didn’t you change’’
Shreya ‘’I thought you would object’’
Mahi ‘’what? I want my old chatterbox Shreya….understand…..go change your dress’’
Shreya ‘’Pakka…shall I change?’’
Mahi ‘’pakka…100%…lock kar diya jaaye’’
Shreya smiled and ran towards the changing room …came back kissed Mahi’s cheek and left……
Mahi held his cheek and sat on the bed with a trance and a smile…Shreya changed and came back…….she saw mahi in a trance holding his cheek…she was confused in the beginning but later she remembered what she did and cupped her mouth…….
Mahi came out of trance with her presence…….He signed Shreya to sit beside her…..Shreya sat……..
Mahi ‘’why aren’t you speaking anything’’
Shreya ‘’nothing…just’’
Mahi ‘’what just?’’
Mahi ‘’ok tell me what all you liked in the wedding’’
Shreya was getting comfortable and she started speaking about the wedding and she was going on talking..talking…talking…Mahi was trying to stop her but she was unstoppable………
finally he locked his lips with her………….her eyes popped out and she reciprocated his action with equal and same reaction…alas the Newton’s third law failed in this case……..
After sometime they parted for breathe and Shreya was shying………
Mahi ‘’you were unstoppable. So I had to
Shreya ‘’I feel like starting again’’ she said naughtily
Mahi ‘’I wouldn’t give you such a chance’’
Shreya ‘’I don’t want to lose such chance’’
Mahi ‘’are you comfortable?’’
Shreya smiled ………Mahi did not make any waste of time……..He made her lay on the bed……the bulbs were dim ……..she was getting tuned and he was playing with her ……..consummation did take place…………
————–GAURIKARA’s Room
Om locked the house and moved towards his room………he was reminiscing what happened some months back with each step towards his room from the living room……
His anger …Shivaay’s talk with Kali Thakur…Gauri’s explanation…He feeling guilty…Gauri’s entry…their confession and his first kiss……..also the awkward situation post the kiss……….he smiled
After the thoughts ………with a smile he entered the room……….Gauri stood the same way as she stood few months before…she had her pallu down…her hair open …..she facing the balcony and enjoying the cold breeze…….she was also recalling the old moments when Om came to her and hugged her from behind……….
Gauri closed her eyes and held the railing tightly…..
Gauri ‘’Om..’’ she whispered in pleasure………
Om kissed her at the crook of her neck and she again pleasurably took her name……..
Om left her and stood beside her…….they both were looking at the full moon……
Om ‘’Gauri do you remember what happened here few months before’’
Gauri ‘’Yes Om…I remember very well…my life changed……you accepted me’’
Om looked at her and she too looked at him……..
Om ‘’no…you forgave me and accepted me as your husband’’
Gauri ‘’it’s the same Om…….and I don’t want either of us to remember any bitter things’’
Om held her hand ‘’Fine as you say’’
Gauri smiled
Om ‘’the full moon looks beautiful right’’
Gauri ‘’yes…the full moon and the stars in the dark blue sky …it’s simply picture perfect’’
Om ‘’picture is perfect when all these are looking at their image’’
Gauri ‘’image …what image’’
Om ‘’image …reflection of them is you…….your face as clear as full moon..the twinkling stars is the twinkling eyeballs and deep blue sky is the background behind you…our beautifully decorated room’’
Gauri smiled………Om pulled her ……..
Om ‘’I love you when you smile……..i love you when I see the twinkle in your eyes……..i love you when you are close to me…I love you when you look at me……I love you the way you are…I just love you Gauri’’
Gauri ‘’I love you too Om’’
They moved towards the bed……..they switched of the lights and moved aside the curtains of the balcony…the full moonlight penetrated through the glass doors of balcony making every view clear…..
Gauri sat on the bed and was smiling……..
Om ‘’Gauri…I know I said you that until we both understand each other we wouldn’t proceed towards consummating….i know it sounds weird but do we require more time ?’’
Gauri looked at him lovingly and smiled ……
Om ’’ Gauri I am waiting for your answer’’
Gauri nodded ‘’Yes……’’
Om sighed ‘’ok’’ and sadly stood up to go….Gauri held his hand and said
Gauri ‘’I was nodding yes to say that….. yes I think we are ready to take our relationship to next level’’
Om stood still………..Gauri smiled not able to look at Om…….
Om ‘’Gauri look at me’’
Gauri looked at him while standing up……Om immediately hugged her…………she too hugged him and closed her eyes while smiling broadly………Om too smiled …….
Om ‘’I love you…sooooo much’’
Gauri ‘’it’s my pleasure’’
Om ‘’I haven’t given the pleasure yet’’ he teased her…..
Gauri patted him……Om picked her up and laid her on bed…..Gauri was trying to hide herselffrom his gaze……..but Om didn’t allow…he was as gentle as his original character was and she was reciprocating with same gentleness….Om was completely over her……and she was in pleasure…..
A sweet gentle moans were listened by the twinkling stars and the moon, as they were consummating their marriage with happiness and pleasure…………
—————–SHIVIKA’s Room
Anika changed her dress before Shivaay entered and was happily seated with her legs crossed on her bed…….Shivaay entered and was shocked to see her like that………
Shivaay ‘’you are impossible Anika’’
Anika ‘’what? What did I do now?’’
Shivaay ‘’I expected you to be a proper Indian bride in wedding attire waiting for her husband to arrive and then touch his feet and ‘’
Anika ‘’ooooooo..oooooo..oooooooooooo…wait…ye kuch jyada nahi ho gaya’’
Shivaay ‘’what jyada…I mean this is how it happens..I mean all the brides come to their rooms and stya in their bridal attire waiting for their husbands’’
Anika ‘’accha…aapko tho bada pata hain…….aur aapko jo nahi pata woh yeh hain ki……..you are Bhagad Billa…tadi Singh Oberoi…confusion singh Oberoi and ……everything else ‘’
Shivaay ‘’but what did I do ?’’
Anika ‘’you do everything and act as innocent……..sometimes you ask me not to act as typical wife…sometimes you say you expect me to be a shying bride…first you get yourself cleared how you want me to be’’
Shivaay ‘’in this’’ he showed the LBD she wore few days ago ‘’
Anika ‘’yeh…yeh kaha se aaya? I mean I have left it in OM’’ she spoke nervously……..
Shivaay ‘’do you think I can leave such things behind’’ he said naughtily………
She looked at him with embarrassment..
Anika ‘’Shivaay mein ye sab kaise? I mean mein ye sab’’
Shivaay ‘’tum tho aise bol rahe ho jaise kabhi chote kapde pehne hi nahi’’ he spoke moving towards her while she took steps backwards
Anika ‘’haan ye sachh tho hain’’
Shivaay ‘’accha ye sach hain…fir uss din Hollywood actors se jealous hoke tumne jo pehna…’’
Anika ‘’bas ..bas…aur kuch mat boliye’’ she closed her ears
Shivaay moved near her…she started stepping back…..he pinned her to the wall and stared into her eyes…….
Anika ‘’Shivaay’’
Shivaay put his finger on her lips……….
Shivaay ‘’I am dying to see you in that dress since you sent me the picture……now the time is perfect too…wouldn’t you do this for me’’ he spoke huskily……
Anika was breathing heavily ……She shied and looked away from him…..
Shivaay leaned towards her and again whispered ‘’Don’t worry I will definitely help you in changing..if you feel it’s difficult’’
Anika pushed him and ran away…he turned and smiled looking at her……she ran into changing room taking the dress………
Anika finally came out in that LBD , exactly in the same way she sent him the picture…..and stood before Shivaay nervously……..Shivaay stood up and gazed at her giving an mesmerising look…..Anika was also getting drowned in his eyes and looks…..
Shivaay ‘’beautiful’’
Anika smiled with lot of emotions and butterflies in her body…..
Anika ‘’Shivaay stop checking me out..i am feeling michmichi’’
Shivaay ‘’aaj mujhe bhi alag type ka michmichi ho raha hain’’
Anika ‘’stop it Shivaay’’
Shivaay knelt down before Anika and asked for her hand for dance……..Anika gave her hand
Shivaay played the Song ‘’KHAMOSHIYAN AWAAZ HAIN..TUM SUNNE THO AAOO KABHI…’’
They danced and while dancing Shivaay came close to her…..she hugged him unable to bear his looks and proximity………Shivaay reciprocated and whispered
Shivaay ‘’Dadi wants a greatgrandchild….shall we give her, the gift she asked for’’
Anika smiled and tightened his hug…….
Shivaay parted the hug and took her onto bed……he asked her not to take off her eyes from him for the whole night……..she obliged and they united themselves… experiencing the pleasure of witnessing the bonding of souls…….
THE NIGHT ALSO SHIED WITNESSING THE UNION OF COUPLES AND WAS WISHING THAT IT SHOULD ALSO HAVE A COMPANY OF MOON UNDER LIGHT OF STARS, TO STAY FOREVER……….BUT IT HAD TO END TO GIVE WAY FOR HER CHILD…THE MORNING……….
All four couples had a war with their soulmates the entire night and while it was getting to be morning they slipped into sleep…….
The sunrays fell on the couples and they slowly opened their eyes to look at their positions and at their partners, still cuddling in each other arms……….
———RUDRA’S ROOM
Rudra ‘’Sumo…..you were too good…’’
Sumo ‘’shut up and don’t dare to speak about this night infront of anyone’’
Rudra ‘’fine..but I can speak with you about this anytime…am I right?’’
Sumo ‘’I am going to get ready’’
They both got ready and went down
———Om ‘S ROOM
Gauri got up and kissed Om and went to get freshened up……….She came with wet hairs and was drying them with towel …when Om got up and looked at her……….
Om smiled and said ‘’Gauri…one more time please…you look so beautiful that I can’t resist’’
Gauri ‘’jee nahi…go and get freshened up…mummy ji will be arriving anytime here and it will not look nice’’
Om ‘’only if you promise that tonight once again’’
Gauri ‘’aap bhi na …’’ she smiled and left the room……..
Om got ready and came down………
——————MAHI’s ROOM
MahiYa were still sleeping and were in no mood to get up………Shreya was slowly opening eyes when she heard Gauri and Sumo talking…….
She quickly ran and got freshened up and woke Mahi……..
Mahi pulled her close and gave a good morning kiss……..Shreya smiled and brushed his hair and asked him to wake up……..He smiled and woke up , hugged her and left for getting freshened up………
He too came out……….
All the couples went to kitchen to find Shivaay already preparing the breakfast………
OmRuHi SaGaYa together ‘’Shivaay /Bhayya/Jiju aap yaha itni jaldi?’’
Rudra ‘’lagta hain raat ko jaldi so gaye..hamari tarah thodi na’’ he looked at everyone
Everyone except Rudra shouted ‘’SHUT UP RUDRA’’
Rudra ‘’ohh sorry’’
Om ‘’Haan Shivaay …where is Anika Bhabhi?’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika…she is kumbhkaran’s real sister…do you think she will get up so early…what’s the time now?’’
Shreya ‘’8:45’’
Shivaay ‘’exactly wait for 15 minutes she will wake up’’
Shreya ‘’Exactly 15 minutes or nearly 15 minutes or more than 15 minutes or’’
Mahi ‘’Shreya…Shreya….exactly 15 minutes…no more questions and predictions please’’
Shreya ‘’but how can you be so sure’’
Rudra ‘’Habit…it’s habit of Bhabhi’’
Gauri ‘’ek ek minute…what did you call my sister Jiju?’’
ShivOmRuHi ‘’kumbhkaran’s real sister’’ they screamed in unision………
Sumo ‘’that mean’s either Sahil or Khanna bhai are kumbhkaran..i mean according to Ramayana ‘’
Shivaay ‘’Sumo…this is just expression and I beg you don’t say this to Anika or Sahil…Khanna I can deal with but Anika and Sahil are hard nuts to crack’’
Rudra ‘’then why do you call them so?’’
Shivaay glared at Rudra…clock ticked 9……………they all listened a shout
‘’Shivaay…….where are you? My tea………….please ………….’’
Shivaay ‘’I am getting it right now Anika…just brush your teeth and I am coming’’ he shouted ……..
Anika ‘’Okk…fine………come fast….’’ She replied in a louder voice…….
Shivaay looking at his gang ‘’ok fine move…another 5 minutes I have to be in my room with her order…so don’t disturb me now’’
He quickly poured tea and placed biscuts in plate and put both of them in tray , held the tray and looked at others nervously ,adjusted his collar excused himself and left towards his room………
Every burst out into laughter………..
Rudra ‘’Shivaay bhayya …poor shivaay bhayya……..he became butler, chef , waiter for Anika Bhabhi…I mean seriously Anika Bhabhi is something else’’
Om ‘’she is jaan of this family without any doubt…..’’
Mahi ‘’I agree…….she is the only one who can control Shivaay in his emotions and that’s the reason all the time we spent in this house his duty was the same as he did now after getting up’’
Everyone smiled ……..
Shivika joined them and hugged all of them………they had a good breakfast and then the elders arrived……..
The days passed by Shivika and Mahi were visiting Shillong every now and then, Sahil was shifted to Mumbai for education this time permanently….Bajaj, Chabbra’s and Oberois used to join for a get-together once in a week , in all their house ……… Khanna had an altogether different respect in Oberoi Mansion…now Shivaay dares not to shout on him anymore as his four sisters shielded him……he used to dine along with the family members every weekends……..Sahil was pampered a lot…specially by Tej and Shakthi…….
In a span of three months Priyanka gave the good news of pregnancy and there were celebrations in Oberoi family……
The weekend came and it was the turn of Chabbra’s and Bajaj’s to meet in Oberoi mansion……
Shivaay decided to cook for everyone as his sister gave him the best news ……All the IB gang helped him……
The guests arrived and food was served the day went with loads of happiness……….after everyone left………
Gauri, Shreya, Sumo ran into washrooms and were vomiting………….Later Anika also felt like vomiting and ran towards her room…Shivaay followed her…but none else noticed Shivika……….
Jhanvi, Dadi, Pinky were handling Gauri, Shreya and Sumo along with their Om, Mahi and Rudra while Shivaay took care of Anika singlehandedly……..
Doctor was called then and there and she said that Gauri, Shreya ad Sumo had indigestion…….
Anika and Shivaay were also coming towards Gauri Shreya and Sumo …while walking Anika fainted and doctor who was about to leave stopped and came to her and checked her and smiled……….Shivaay had a broader smile as he knew what doctor meant……..doctor left without speaking anything…….
Om ‘’ab Shivaay…why are you smiling and why didn’t doctor say anything?’’
Dadi, Pinky, Jhanvi ‘’OmRuHi …you didn’t understand till now?’’
Rudra ‘’if you say we will understand na?’’
Dadi ‘’Khoteyon Anika and Shivaay are going to gift me something which I demanded ..’’
Mahi ‘’wait a minute dadi…will you say clearly’’
Gauri –Shreya-Sumo ‘’it means you all are going to become chachu / chote papa and we all will be becoming choti maa / Maasi and Khanna and Sahil will become Maamu’’
Rudra ‘’ohh ok..like that’’ he paused and then
OmRuHi screamed ‘’whaaaaaaaaaaaat? That means Bhabhi is pregnant………..yeeeeee ……..yuppieeeeeeeee’’
They all hugged and gave a OBEROI POSE FOR SELFIE
All obros were invidually united…… Joys were doubled…….. and generation was going to be tripled……
They were together and decided to be together to face any storm awaiting to hit them…..
—————————-THE END——————————————–
SO THIS WAS THE THIRTY SEVENTH part and the LAST PART TOO…PLEASE LET ME KNOW HOW YOU FELT AFTER READING THIS…ANY COMMENTS GOOD OR BAD ARE WELCOME…I WILL TRY TO RESPOND AS SOON AS POSSIBLE…
AUTHOR’S NOTE :
FIRSTLY ………..
NIDA this is for you ………’’All the scenes involving YOUR SHIVAAY is dedicated to you dear …….I will really miss our conversations through comment section……..Always stay happy and keep smiling….we will be in contact through TU Page…I donno how else to thank you for being my bestest support…..i wish we stay friends for our lifetime though it is not practically possible to see each other and meet in person because of geographical barriers……..Take care and All the very best’’
SECONDLY…………..
Thank you so much to all the readers who stood by throughout these 37 days of the journey……..i know without you these would not have been possible………Navya aka Shreya of this FF/ Chotii, Amayaa, Vivikhtha, Arpita, Jerry aka Vedika., Dhar, Dwet, Nikki aka Nikita, Niriha, Shivika, Gayathri my darling sis, Vishnusri, Katz, Sri, Aastha_Reddy, Jhanvi_patel, Sagithya, Ahaana, Ahsana_98, Aashi, UF, Fffan1234, Haridhra-the author, san , sam, Anu16 , Anu Johnson, Alekhika – my strict teacher and many more who stood as pillars and supported me……. (Sorry if I forgot any name in this list..but heartfully I acknowledge them too)
THIRDLY ……….
I listed all the names of readers, who posted their opinions on all , some or for a single time……..i hope I haven’t missed any of you till 36th episode being posted…….
THANK YOU TO ALL THE BELOW ADDRESSED READERS WHO TOOK THEIR TIME TO POST THEIR OPINION DESPITE OF THEIR BUSY SCHEDULES
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LASTLY ……………………
I am thankful to all the readers and all the silent readers for their valuable time…..
Few episodes I know I have disappointed you …sorry for that………..
This FF has been VERY SPECIAL to me
I MADE LOTS OF SISTERS ….THIS WAS MY LONGEST FF TILL DATE……146 READERS POSTED THEIR OPINION TILL 36 TH EPISODE….1250 OPINIONS RECEIVED (Not including my responses)….AND I HOPE I GET MANY MORE RESPONSES ON THIS EPISODE TOO…….
I AM NOT SURE WHEN I WILL BE BACK…BUT I WILL COME BACK WHENEVER A GOOD IDEA PASSES MY BRAIN …..THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN FOR GIVING ME SO MUCH OF LOVE…..THANKS A LOT ……….
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???? felt like crying ? but still have a big smile on my face…… I really don’t know where to start … the dedication you gave me is something out of the world ? I really don’t know how to thank you ? for this. … even i will miss your awesome ?? reply on my comments.. we will definitely be in contact though TU….. and you too always stay happy ?.. and even I don’t know ? how to thank god for getting me such a good ? friend like u … who will not be friend with a person like you till there last breath…. i always appreciated you because of your immense talent you have got from god .. .. and you still don’t know how much you made me happy ?… thanks ?? ???????????????? lots of love ❤️ back … i guess this is the first and best Eid gift ? ever i have got
Hey Nida …today i just want to write one line…this is the best return gift for me from my dearest dearest friend ……..thank you so much and i am glad you feel the same as i feel regarding our freindship…touchwood
Hi didi, loved this whole ff.
The story was going Ina a very beautiful way and I just loved it…
Please please please do come back with a a khidkitod ff ??
Thank you so much Shraddha-DBO…thanks a lot and as you liked the story the same way i loved all the opinions you posted and specially i love you loads dear…will be back as and when the right time comes…take care and keep smiling
Heyoo Harika di.
Well, this journey doesn’t end here. I will always look forward for your works. And I really hope that you come with much more great works of yours. Will miss you very much. Try to come up with more soon.
Coming to this episode I don’t have to say anything, as you know what I’ll say, my opinions about you will always be positive and this time too, the chapter is full of awesomeness.
You know through this ff, I found a big sister for me, who cares for me. Let me tell you when I had fever, I told you, how you cared for me and asked me to take medicines, I haven’t told you but I loved this gesture of yours??
You are a wonderful writer and I really appreciate that. You have a quality that readers stay connected with you. The way you reply to everyone is also amazing, and many of the readers wait for your reply only *me too*?
So I have a request for a amazingly fantastic writer here to come up with your works soon. Love you to the infinity and more. I’ll be waiting❤❤
Hey Jerry……my Vedika dear……true this journey of my writing will definitely not end here ..but the journey of this FF ends here…i am not gonna miss you because i am gonna ping you in TU messenger now and then ……because i can’t stay away from this lovely darling for a long time…so sweet of you to let me know that you liked my gesture…thanks dear…always keep smiling and rock with your writings…i did post my comment on your latest episode i am waiting for it to get moderated and appear in your page……..last but not the least….THANK YOU SO SO SO SO MUCH dear for all the support……..Love you to loads and infinity
Akka just awesome pls.. Pls… Come back soon with another ff pls………… Will miss u so much…
Thank you so much naann…vastha malli venakki vasthanu…kani koncham time teesukuni vasthanu…and i am gonna stay connected with you in FB
From Sakash.
Touched my heart.Loved to the core.
Love u di.I hope u write ur next FF.Come back soon.Miss u & ur FF.
Every sentence is crystal clear & beautiful.
Bye di.
Thank you so much Sakash…thanks a lot dear…i love you too dear…always keep smiling…yes will come back as early as possible…take care and bye
Very well written journey
Thank you so much R…thanks a lot for all the support……..
Nice update…
Thank you so much Anju…thanks a lot
no words sister. wonderful work.
go ahead with future ff stories like this.
Thank you so much Ramya…hopefully whatever i write next and whenever i write next …i will get the same amount of love , support and appreciation that i gathered through this FF…thanks a lot once again for all the opinion yous posted and for all the compliments you gave
A very beautifuly wrriteen journey
Thank you so much once again and whenever i am back i wish to see you back to support me the same way you supported me during this FF
Congratulations to you akka. With all the 37 episodes you have taken the way of thinking and written according to the readers to another level . Feel so blessed to read your ff which I personally wanted something of this sort to happen and it happened in your way. Thank You so much for this lovely ff. And loads of love to you.
Asalu naaku maate vochhaledu ee ff gurinchi . But still nenu wait chestunnanu inkokati ff or OS kosam.
Hope you will do it for all of us.
Hey Ashwinee……thank you so much dear for those awesome lines….i too feel blessed to gather so much of love and affection from each one of you…you all made my day today with such wonderful opinions….
I will come back whenever right times and right idea strikes ..till then we have many more amazing writers here and let’s support them …what say ?
We will keep in touch through TU messenger
Wao Di it was phenomenal ff I ever read….. I’m was one of the silent readers but your writing style is so flawless that I could not resist to appreciate it……. Just loved it to the core❤……i wish this journey never ended…….but I hope to see u soon with a new thought ND Idea….. Till then lots ND lots of love ? ND best wishes….nd come back soon Di
Thank you so much Komal…i remember you posted your first opinion on one of the episodes of this FF and from then on you mostly never missed to post your opinion…you know what that was an amazing achievement for me…a best prize for a writer is when he/she compels their silent readers to post their opinions and you gave me such an amazing prize…i will cherish this forever…thanks a lot for this Komal…will gonna miss you…but whenever i come back i am sure i will find you to support me once again…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Today’s episode was really awesome n fantastic…loved it…. But we will surely miss ur ff…. Feeling so sad tat here afterwards I won’t be able to read ur ff… Come soon Di…. I will miss u…..
Thank you so much Sagithya…all the best for your first day college as Super senior…and we will always keep in touch and you very well know where….i will be back sometime or other and then you will not miss my writings anymore
Loved this whole ff…??wl b waiting for ur another ff…Come back soon… Take care??bye??
Thank you so much Viji…loved all your opinions too…will come back as soon as possible and then we both will make an bang in opinion section …love you loads…take care and keep smiling
I was a silent reader from the start but this was no doubt till now my best ff on ishqbaaz. Thank u so much and congrats on gr8 storyline. Cheers.??
Thank you so much Arshi…i am so glad you broke out the shell of being a silent reader and started posting your opinion…thank you a lot for that…and i am glad you found this FF to be worth reading allotting time from your busy schedules…that’s so sweet of you…thank you for all the amazing lines too…cheers to you and keep smiling as always
Spell bound
Thank you so much Charitha…thanks a lot
Loved the whole ff…..just loved it……it’s awesome…..love your writing skills…..do come with another ff that to soon….will miss u so much and I am a silent reader who read your ff with full dedication will miss u..?? and part was awesome….loved it….??
Thank you so much Tanu…thanks a lot for all those super awesome lines…awee so sweet of you…yeah whenever right time comes i will be back and so will you am i right? i will miss you too dear….yeah true i knew that you read all my episodes and even posted your valuable opinion too…what more and how can i thank you for that…keep smiling take care
In whole episode i was blushing blushing and blushing ?…
Ek dum khidkitod ending thi dii..
love uhh baht saaraa…
gonna miss this one …it was just outstanding..
u know like every morning i used to first get up hold my phone then i used to first search that either this ff is updated then i used to see dii have posted automatically a smile on my face and then i used to read this is what i gonna miss the most..?..
i really want u to come back soon.. plzz dii i ‘ll be waiting ??
Awee so i made you blush …isn’t that overwhelming for me to read..yes offcourse…love you too bahutt saraaa….and i am gonna miss your khidkitodh opinions…awee so sweet of you to let me know you used to check the TU page to see whether my FF is posted or not…how nice…i am so happy to bring smile on your face and i wish you contniue to smile always……you can always ping me wheneever you feel like talking to me in Tu messenger and i will be very happy to stay connected with you….and i pormise i will be back but when i have no idea…take care and love you sooooooooooo much
Hi vhm… fantastic update…. you have concluded the whole story to an awesome end…. without any unwanted twists (like in the original serial, for the sake of trp).
Thank you for this amazing journey…. even though I read all your previous ffs, this will be one of my all time favourite in TELLYUPDATES for sure. I am happy with the bond we share here… and thanks for inspiring me to write my own ff here in TU. Waiting for one more beautiful journey through TELLYUPDATES….. BYE. … TAKE CARE…..
Hey Katz…i still remember in the episode where i wrote business points that was the first time you posted your opinion and from then on you had always stayed beside and behind me to write something which atleast not crap…thank you for all the support and encouragement… and you are truly an awesome writer dear…i just saw your next episode is posted …i am ginna read an post my opinion there…i know our bond grew stronger with every passing day an di hope we maintain this bond throughout….will come back whenever right idea and right time comes ..till then i want to enjoy your writngs and writings of many more amazing wirters in TU page like you….keep smiling…love you loads and take care
Hi di I am a slient reader and I am sorry I have never comment on ur ff but u really write beautiful and I have read ur untill now every ff u write really beautiful u explain each expression beautifully plz soon come with new ff .plz
Hey Rhea…super excited after reading your opinion…i mean seriously you made my day by posting your opinion and made me glad by letting me know you liked the FF…THANK YOU SO SO SO SO MUCH dear…
Hi di ,I am a slient reader and I am sorry I have never comment on ur ff but u really write beautiful and I have read ur untill now every ff u write really beautiful u explain each expression beautifully plz soon come with new ff .plz
Thanks again for those special lines fro me and for this FF Rhea and i will come back as early as possible …but then i want you to continue to post your opinion too…till then take care and keep smiling….
Hello Di…
I don’t know what to say… This ff is very special for me… Bcoz I got such loving caring and talented sister like u through this ff… I really mean it… as u know through one and a half year I am silent reader here but just bcoz I want to talk to u personally I create my account in tu just bcoz of u… This full ff I am reading third time and I really wish u come back soon with double DHAMAKA… But till then we will be in contact… Bcoz I don’t want to lose my sissy… Plzzz… Thanks A lot for this brilliant ff Di… Love you Di… And lots of you to akki too… ???
Hey Jhanvi…thank you darling for such awesome lines…and i know you mean all these because i know you….i will come back at the earliest but will definitely wait for the right time and when i come back you will know automatically because we are connected now …off course we will be in contact you should not worry or request me because we decided this way right?…love you too darling…thank you for bearing with me dear
Dii…i have used every word i know to describe all these 36 parts and when this 37th part(last part) is before me ,i dont understand what to say now.this part is full of happiness ,joy that is desired by every couple and every family and when it came true what can i say other than “i am really feeling that happiness to d core.”
While reading this ff, i have experienced all the emotions (happy,sad,anger,pity,love,suspense) everything.THANKU DII…FOR THIS MORE THAN BEAUTIFUL STORY WHICH MADE SHIVIKA and all other couples CLOSE TO HEART.
THANKU DII…EVERYTIME I AM SAYING DII…I DID REALLY MEAN IT AND I FELT U AS MY SISTER.
ee roju ekkuva matladesanu kada,all those words came out instantly.
On lighter side, thanku for addressing me as shreya also..hehe????.spl thanks for all those funny convos of my chubby cutie babies rumya.???.
Tons and tons of love is being sent to u by ur chotti , recieve them and take utmost care of them.hahaha.
Hoping another beautiful idea to strike ur mind as fast as possible and waiting for ur next writing…ur chotti aka navya is signing off.bye dii.
Chotii…you need not to find words because i know how and what you feel…..awee so sweet of you that you have let me know that you are feeling happiness to the core…how sweet of you…..you have experienced all the emotions but i have experienced only two emotions Sisterly bond and love ..and i am so happy with this …i know darling you really mean it and i an understand too…thank you for bearing with me for this long and keep in touch……..
nuvventha mataldithe naaku antha happy ga untundi …so ala eppudu navvuthu matalduthu undu ade best…….
Nuvvu shreya ni nuvvu ga oohinchukunnavu annavuga anduke raasanu……
Finally eeroju oka mystery resolve ayyindi NAVZ ante NAVYA ani…but naaku nuvvu epuudu Chotiii ve……….take care, love you loads and keep smiling
First of all thank you for giving us such amazing and marvellous parts…… Continue writing such more.. ???
Di…. U always deserved this appreciation.. So no need to thank…
Keep smiling and laughing and all the best…
Thank you so much Jannat…off course i need to thank you dear…imagine if you all would not have poured your love i wouldn’t have come this long way am i right? thanks a lot for the awesome lines for me and for this FF….you too take care and keep smiling
Firstly talking about today’s episode….it was splendid marvellous amazing fantastic nd very beautifully written…(as always)…
Nd thanku soo much for mentioning each nd every reader including me…
Nd about the whole journey on THE PAST AND THE PRESENT…it was a beautiful nd amazing journey including usual ups nd downs, happiness nd tragedy but it was indeed a roller coaster ride…
I just simply love each nd every episode…
I love the way u describe each nd every points precisely nd in a manner in which i can imagine it happening….
I love the way u whole hearted reply to each comments which connects the reader to u more….nd me too always wait for ur reply…the way u define the situation nd connected all the loopholes nd points is indeed commendable….
You are a fantastic writer nd I wish that God fulfill all ur dreams nd aspirations…
I was addicted to ur ff very badly…don’t k ow how many times i have checked ur id to see that the next episode is published or not…
In short the whole journey of more than one months was very awesome and unforgettable…
Nd I’ll wait for ur another fantastic work…
All tue very very best for ur future life ahead..all my best wishes are with u…
Love u loads…
Take care…
Thank you so much Zaveesha….thanks a lot dear….i had to take everyone’s name and thank them in person for giving me so much love through posting their opinions……..
Thank you so much for penning down your thoughts on this FF…it really means a lot for me…thanks a lot Tanzeela for everything all the love affection you gave me…all the PM’s , suggestions , happiness , that you shared with me…indeed it was a roller coaster ride for me too…as few episodes i wrote really crap…and some episodes i personally liked…
I will also cherish this FF more than any of my work till now as this is indeed very special…
Thank you for the wishes and all the very best to you for all your future endeavors……love you loads…take care and keep smiling
AMAZING AWESOME CUTE EXCELLENT FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING NICE SWEET SUPERB????????????
Thank you so much UF…Thanks a lot for your continous support…thanks again
Akkuuuuuu……?? nenu ninnu Chala Miss avtaaaaaaaa
Mohitha…nenu ninnu chala miss avuthaanu…eppudu navvuthu undu…happy ga undu……
superbbbbbbb diiiii.but im going to miss ur ff a lot.todays episode it is just awesomeeeeeeeeee.
Thank you so much Sanjanaa…thanks a lot…glad to know you liked todays episode …and will miss your opinion from now on…keep smiling and all the very best
Good afternoon Harika di.
OUTSTANDING FF DI!! HAPPY N PERFECT ENDING… Seriously I will miss this impossible O’bros, Anika’s tadi, Gauri’s innocence, Sumo’s research, chatter box Sherya, cute Prinku-dev n Sahil, protective Khannaji, Tej….all other characters n most importantly, U didi! This full journey, I really enjoyed it! This time I can’t tell u di which is my fav scene……bcz I loved full part n I loved more Shivika scenes. Didi I m getting emotional, so I stops here.
By the way about krpkab, before I used to watched it. But not now di. And u know one thing, I m from Kanchipuram(Kancheevaram)! Its my home town!! Till now I read many ffs. And u r very punctual than others but 2nd punctual author.(1st is Stella, my friend. Swasan writer).
Didi, u got my friend request n u accepted it….am I right? That is ur id na? Plz….plz….tell me di.
Sorry di, I can’t write more. I felt like crying. I will miss u di! Come back soon…. Till then a tight hug for u di!! TAKE CARE URSELF N UR LIFE….. KEEP SMILING.
Bye di!!
Hey Gayathri….
Firstly i got your friend request and i accepted it…secondly i never want in my dreams want you to get emotional that you shed tears…you should always smile and be happy ……and you will not miss me because we are going to stay connected though TU and FB ……
Thank you so much for letting me know you liked the episode and most importantly you liked everything in this……
Ohh is it…seriously i love Kanhipuram silk sooo much…my favourite attire …and i prefer to buy them every year whether there is occasion or not…….and coming to KRPKAB ..same pinch i used to watch it earlier but now now…i just read written updates now…
keep smiling …love you loads
Outstanding marvellous to ND tears in eyes ND miss you a lot please come back with another ff
Thank you so much Tanu…thanks a lot…and no tears only smiles…even i cannot stay for a long time without writing so i hope i will be back soon and then you will be there to support me…am i right…take care and keep smiling
Awesome di. Loved it. ? please come back with another ff. Miss you.
Thank you so much dwet…thanks a lot….i am also gonna miss you and i will come back at the right time with something else