Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….
Everyone laughed at Sahil’s cute jealousy and tashan with Khanna….
Mr.Gogoi has left the Haveli open for the Oberoi’s and their relatives for the next day too…so that everyone can stay back and enjoy ………
Khanna took Sahil and went inside the Haveli….
Mr.Bajaj and Gauri’s maasi decided to leave the same night to Bajaj Villa…. Oberoi’s asked them to stay back but they denied……so finally Oberoi’s accepted the decision of them……
Pinky ‘’OMM…we are getting late…so shall we go ?’’
Rudra ‘’kaha? Aap sab kaha aa rahe ho? Aaj tho hame akela chod do’’
ShivOmHi ShrAniGaMya shied in embarrassment……
Jhanvi ‘’Have some shame Rudra…we have to welcome our daughter-in-laws and then we will leave you alone’’
Tej ‘’off course Rudra we will leave you alone…after all , we have our own private life Rudra’’ he smirked
Jhanvi’’ohh God you too Tej’’
Pinky ‘’Jhethani ji aapki tho kismet khul gayi’’
Shakthi ‘’when did I not agree Pinky about you, that you are saying only to Bhabhi…even i……?’’
Pinky ‘’bas bas..aur kuch mat boliye’’
ShivOmRuHi and ShrAniGaMya closed their ears………..
ShaKy and TejVi smiled ………
Dadi came and Said ‘’Jhanvi, Pinky…it’s getting late …we have to go fast and welcome our Daughters …come quick’’
Everyone left to Kalyani villa……….
Pinky and Jhanvi welcomed the couples …………..Soon after …post marriage rituals happened ……Shivaay and Om won in ring finding while Mahi and Rudra lost……….
Pinky ‘’Okay all the brides go to your rooms’’
Anika Gauri Shreya and Sumo left towards their rooms……….actually everyone except Shreya knew their rooms because they have already come here some months before…………
Shreya stood confused………AniGaMya looked at her and understood her problem…….while they took a step towards Shreya…….OmRu came to her ……..so they smiled and left towards their rooms…..
Om ‘’come Shreya we will take you to your room’’
Rudra ‘’you are in my team na…we will sit and chat the whole night’’
Shreya nodded her head excitedly
Mahi ‘’Rudra …mere bhai…aaj tho baksh do….waise tumhare liye meri behen wait karthi hogi’’
Rudra ‘’woh haan..mein tho bhool gaya…so Shreya Bhabhi aaj Mahi bhayya se adjust karlo ..mujhe Sumo ko pareshaan karna hain’’
Jhanvi ‘’Shut up Rudra…not a word more…ohh God this boy is just too much………you are becoming shameless day by day’’
Rudra ‘’Mom..but what did I say now..i just said..’’
ShivOmHi ‘’Shut Up Rudra’’
Rudra ‘’okay…okay..i am leaving’’ saying that he ran towards his room………
Dadi ‘’Shivaay ..you were the first to get married so I expect you to give me the first greatgrandchild…understand…it’s long time I have played with cute little small baby’’
Shivaay shied in embarrassement and
Shivaay ‘’Dadi…good night’’
Dadi ‘’waise good night to you all………’’
Pinky ‘’we will meet you tomorrow morning…lock the doors of the house properly’’
Om ‘’lock the doors of house..i mean where are you all going’’
Pinky ‘’what will we do here in this house…we will be staying in Haveli…you guys enjoy’’ she smiled
All smiled and went to their rooms………
———-RUMYA’s Room
Sumo was sitting on the bed ….she had a south Indian wedding …so she was in Kanjeevaram saree and had no pallu over her head……..
Rudra came to her….she smiled with her head down……..
Rudra ‘’please sumo…not like a typical serial wife……I love you as bold and beautiful’’
Sumo looked at him……
Rudra ‘’do you want me to ask something’’
Sumo ‘’no I want to say something’’
Rudra ‘’what?’’
Sumo ‘’I LOVE YOU DUFFER’’
Rudra ‘’I LOVE YOU TOO SUMO my WRESTLER’’
Rudra put his hands in his pockets and brought out an aluminium wrap outside…..Sumo looked on…..
Sumo ‘’What’s this?’’
Rudra opened and there it was her favourite Parantha…….Sumo looked at him in surprise
Rudra broke a small piece and put it in her mouth……..
Sumo snatched the Parantha from him and started eating it……
Rudra ‘’this is not fair..this was for both you and me’’
Sumo ‘’Rudra I can share anything …not parantha…please…see there is milk here…it’s healthy for you…so you drink it…I am hungry I will eat this’’
Rudra said ‘’no way…I want a bite…I am also hungry…today we have to share everything half half’’
Sumo ‘’no way’’ she teased him…..and ran away………
Rudra ran behind her……finally she gave up and fell on bed……….Rudra came on her ……..they both had an eyelock………Sumo still had a piece of parantha a part in her mouth and a part outside……Rudra was quick enough to bite the portion that was out….Sumo’s heartbeat paced and she quickly gulped the rest and rudra’s lip touched her lips very soon…..she closed her eyes….
Rudra looked into her eyes and she was inviting him…..Rudra again smashed his lips and sumo held him tight……
Their lips locked and clothes were getting freed …..they were united in no time……..they consummated their marriage finally……
————-MAHIYA’s room
Shreya was feeling nervous and awkward and was pacing here and there in room…..firstly her attire was heavy and pricking and secondly she didn’t knew what will happen …..while all this was going on Mahi entered the room……….
Shreya was getting more nervous as she saw Mahi……..Mahi was also typically nervous…….
Shreya did not sit back but was pacing more fast in the room……..
Mahi held Shreya and said ‘’Shreya Relax…why are you walking so fast here and there’’
Shreya ‘’woh…woh…’’
Mahi ‘’woh ..what?’’
Shreya ‘’actually…I am feeling uncomfortable in this heavy lehenga and I want to change the dress…so’’
Mahi ‘’so why didn’t you change’’
Shreya ‘’I thought you would object’’
Mahi ‘’what? I want my old chatterbox Shreya….understand…..go change your dress’’
Shreya ‘’Pakka…shall I change?’’
Mahi ‘’pakka…100%…lock kar diya jaaye’’
Shreya smiled and ran towards the changing room …came back kissed Mahi’s cheek and left……
Mahi held his cheek and sat on the bed with a trance and a smile…Shreya changed and came back…….she saw mahi in a trance holding his cheek…she was confused in the beginning but later she remembered what she did and cupped her mouth…….
Mahi came out of trance with her presence…….He signed Shreya to sit beside her…..Shreya sat……..
Mahi ‘’why aren’t you speaking anything’’
Shreya ‘’nothing…just’’
Mahi ‘’what just?’’
Mahi ‘’ok tell me what all you liked in the wedding’’
Shreya was getting comfortable and she started speaking about the wedding and she was going on talking..talking…talking…Mahi was trying to stop her but she was unstoppable………
finally he locked his lips with her………….her eyes popped out and she reciprocated his action with equal and same reaction…alas the Newton’s third law failed in this case……..
After sometime they parted for breathe and Shreya was shying………
Mahi ‘’you were unstoppable. So I had to
Shreya ‘’I feel like starting again’’ she said naughtily
Mahi ‘’I wouldn’t give you such a chance’’
Shreya ‘’I don’t want to lose such chance’’
Mahi ‘’are you comfortable?’’
Shreya smiled ………Mahi did not make any waste of time……..He made her lay on the bed……the bulbs were dim ……..she was getting tuned and he was playing with her ……..consummation did take place…………
————–GAURIKARA’s Room
Om locked the house and moved towards his room………he was reminiscing what happened some months back with each step towards his room from the living room……
His anger …Shivaay’s talk with Kali Thakur…Gauri’s explanation…He feeling guilty…Gauri’s entry…their confession and his first kiss……..also the awkward situation post the kiss……….he smiled
After the thoughts ………with a smile he entered the room……….Gauri stood the same way as she stood few months before…she had her pallu down…her hair open …..she facing the balcony and enjoying the cold breeze…….she was also recalling the old moments when Om came to her and hugged her from behind……….
Gauri closed her eyes and held the railing tightly…..
Gauri ‘’Om..’’ she whispered in pleasure………
Om kissed her at the crook of her neck and she again pleasurably took her name……..
Om left her and stood beside her…….they both were looking at the full moon……
Om ‘’Gauri do you remember what happened here few months before’’
Gauri ‘’Yes Om…I remember very well…my life changed……you accepted me’’
Om looked at her and she too looked at him……..
Om ‘’no…you forgave me and accepted me as your husband’’
Gauri ‘’it’s the same Om…….and I don’t want either of us to remember any bitter things’’
Om held her hand ‘’Fine as you say’’
Gauri smiled
Om ‘’the full moon looks beautiful right’’
Gauri ‘’yes…the full moon and the stars in the dark blue sky …it’s simply picture perfect’’
Om ‘’picture is perfect when all these are looking at their image’’
Gauri ‘’image …what image’’
Om ‘’image …reflection of them is you…….your face as clear as full moon..the twinkling stars is the twinkling eyeballs and deep blue sky is the background behind you…our beautifully decorated room’’
Gauri smiled………Om pulled her ……..
Om ‘’I love you when you smile……..i love you when I see the twinkle in your eyes……..i love you when you are close to me…I love you when you look at me……I love you the way you are…I just love you Gauri’’
Gauri ‘’I love you too Om’’
They moved towards the bed……..they switched of the lights and moved aside the curtains of the balcony…the full moonlight penetrated through the glass doors of balcony making every view clear…..
Gauri sat on the bed and was smiling……..
Om ‘’Gauri…I know I said you that until we both understand each other we wouldn’t proceed towards consummating….i know it sounds weird but do we require more time ?’’
Gauri looked at him lovingly and smiled ……
Om ’’ Gauri I am waiting for your answer’’
Gauri nodded ‘’Yes……’’
Om sighed ‘’ok’’ and sadly stood up to go….Gauri held his hand and said
Gauri ‘’I was nodding yes to say that….. yes I think we are ready to take our relationship to next level’’
Om stood still………..Gauri smiled not able to look at Om…….
Om ‘’Gauri look at me’’
Gauri looked at him while standing up……Om immediately hugged her…………she too hugged him and closed her eyes while smiling broadly………Om too smiled …….
Om ‘’I love you…sooooo much’’
Gauri ‘’it’s my pleasure’’
Om ‘’I haven’t given the pleasure yet’’ he teased her…..
Gauri patted him……Om picked her up and laid her on bed…..Gauri was trying to hide herselffrom his gaze……..but Om didn’t allow…he was as gentle as his original character was and she was reciprocating with same gentleness….Om was completely over her……and she was in pleasure…..
A sweet gentle moans were listened by the twinkling stars and the moon, as they were consummating their marriage with happiness and pleasure…………
—————–SHIVIKA’s Room
Anika changed her dress before Shivaay entered and was happily seated with her legs crossed on her bed…….Shivaay entered and was shocked to see her like that………
Shivaay ‘’you are impossible Anika’’
Anika ‘’what? What did I do now?’’
Shivaay ‘’I expected you to be a proper Indian bride in wedding attire waiting for her husband to arrive and then touch his feet and ‘’
Anika ‘’ooooooo..oooooo..oooooooooooo…wait…ye kuch jyada nahi ho gaya’’
Shivaay ‘’what jyada…I mean this is how it happens..I mean all the brides come to their rooms and stya in their bridal attire waiting for their husbands’’
Anika ‘’accha…aapko tho bada pata hain…….aur aapko jo nahi pata woh yeh hain ki……..you are Bhagad Billa…tadi Singh Oberoi…confusion singh Oberoi and ……everything else ‘’
Shivaay ‘’but what did I do ?’’
Anika ‘’you do everything and act as innocent……..sometimes you ask me not to act as typical wife…sometimes you say you expect me to be a shying bride…first you get yourself cleared how you want me to be’’
Shivaay ‘’in this’’ he showed the LBD she wore few days ago ‘’
Anika ‘’yeh…yeh kaha se aaya? I mean I have left it in OM’’ she spoke nervously……..
Shivaay ‘’do you think I can leave such things behind’’ he said naughtily………
She looked at him with embarrassment..
Anika ‘’Shivaay mein ye sab kaise? I mean mein ye sab’’
Shivaay ‘’tum tho aise bol rahe ho jaise kabhi chote kapde pehne hi nahi’’ he spoke moving towards her while she took steps backwards
Anika ‘’haan ye sachh tho hain’’
Shivaay ‘’accha ye sach hain…fir uss din Hollywood actors se jealous hoke tumne jo pehna…’’
Anika ‘’bas ..bas…aur kuch mat boliye’’ she closed her ears
Shivaay moved near her…she started stepping back…..he pinned her to the wall and stared into her eyes…….
Anika ‘’Shivaay’’
Shivaay put his finger on her lips……….
Shivaay ‘’I am dying to see you in that dress since you sent me the picture……now the time is perfect too…wouldn’t you do this for me’’ he spoke huskily……
Anika was breathing heavily ……She shied and looked away from him…..
Shivaay leaned towards her and again whispered ‘’Don’t worry I will definitely help you in changing..if you feel it’s difficult’’
Anika pushed him and ran away…he turned and smiled looking at her……she ran into changing room taking the dress………
Anika finally came out in that LBD , exactly in the same way she sent him the picture…..and stood before Shivaay nervously……..Shivaay stood up and gazed at her giving an mesmerising look…..Anika was also getting drowned in his eyes and looks…..
Shivaay ‘’beautiful’’
Anika smiled with lot of emotions and butterflies in her body…..
Anika ‘’Shivaay stop checking me out..i am feeling michmichi’’
Shivaay ‘’aaj mujhe bhi alag type ka michmichi ho raha hain’’
Anika ‘’stop it Shivaay’’
Shivaay knelt down before Anika and asked for her hand for dance……..Anika gave her hand
Shivaay played the Song ‘’KHAMOSHIYAN AWAAZ HAIN..TUM SUNNE THO AAOO KABHI…’’
They danced and while dancing Shivaay came close to her…..she hugged him unable to bear his looks and proximity………Shivaay reciprocated and whispered
Shivaay ‘’Dadi wants a greatgrandchild….shall we give her, the gift she asked for’’
Anika smiled and tightened his hug…….
Shivaay parted the hug and took her onto bed……he asked her not to take off her eyes from him for the whole night……..she obliged and they united themselves… experiencing the pleasure of witnessing the bonding of souls…….
THE NIGHT ALSO SHIED WITNESSING THE UNION OF COUPLES AND WAS WISHING THAT IT SHOULD ALSO HAVE A COMPANY OF MOON UNDER LIGHT OF STARS, TO STAY FOREVER……….BUT IT HAD TO END TO GIVE WAY FOR HER CHILD…THE MORNING……….
All four couples had a war with their soulmates the entire night and while it was getting to be morning they slipped into sleep…….
The sunrays fell on the couples and they slowly opened their eyes to look at their positions and at their partners, still cuddling in each other arms……….
———RUDRA’S ROOM
Rudra ‘’Sumo…..you were too good…’’
Sumo ‘’shut up and don’t dare to speak about this night infront of anyone’’
Rudra ‘’fine..but I can speak with you about this anytime…am I right?’’
Sumo ‘’I am going to get ready’’
They both got ready and went down
———Om ‘S ROOM
Gauri got up and kissed Om and went to get freshened up……….She came with wet hairs and was drying them with towel …when Om got up and looked at her……….
Om smiled and said ‘’Gauri…one more time please…you look so beautiful that I can’t resist’’
Gauri ‘’jee nahi…go and get freshened up…mummy ji will be arriving anytime here and it will not look nice’’
Om ‘’only if you promise that tonight once again’’
Gauri ‘’aap bhi na …’’ she smiled and left the room……..
Om got ready and came down………
——————MAHI’s ROOM
MahiYa were still sleeping and were in no mood to get up………Shreya was slowly opening eyes when she heard Gauri and Sumo talking…….
She quickly ran and got freshened up and woke Mahi……..
Mahi pulled her close and gave a good morning kiss……..Shreya smiled and brushed his hair and asked him to wake up……..He smiled and woke up , hugged her and left for getting freshened up………
He too came out……….
All the couples went to kitchen to find Shivaay already preparing the breakfast………
OmRuHi SaGaYa together ‘’Shivaay /Bhayya/Jiju aap yaha itni jaldi?’’
Rudra ‘’lagta hain raat ko jaldi so gaye..hamari tarah thodi na’’ he looked at everyone
Everyone except Rudra shouted ‘’SHUT UP RUDRA’’
Rudra ‘’ohh sorry’’
Om ‘’Haan Shivaay …where is Anika Bhabhi?’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika…she is kumbhkaran’s real sister…do you think she will get up so early…what’s the time now?’’
Shreya ‘’8:45’’
Shivaay ‘’exactly wait for 15 minutes she will wake up’’
Shreya ‘’Exactly 15 minutes or nearly 15 minutes or more than 15 minutes or’’
Mahi ‘’Shreya…Shreya….exactly 15 minutes…no more questions and predictions please’’
Shreya ‘’but how can you be so sure’’
Rudra ‘’Habit…it’s habit of Bhabhi’’
Gauri ‘’ek ek minute…what did you call my sister Jiju?’’
ShivOmRuHi ‘’kumbhkaran’s real sister’’ they screamed in unision………
Sumo ‘’that mean’s either Sahil or Khanna bhai are kumbhkaran..i mean according to Ramayana ‘’
Shivaay ‘’Sumo…this is just expression and I beg you don’t say this to Anika or Sahil…Khanna I can deal with but Anika and Sahil are hard nuts to crack’’
Rudra ‘’then why do you call them so?’’
Shivaay glared at Rudra…clock ticked 9……………they all listened a shout
‘’Shivaay…….where are you? My tea………….please ………….’’
Shivaay ‘’I am getting it right now Anika…just brush your teeth and I am coming’’ he shouted ……..
Anika ‘’Okk…fine………come fast….’’ She replied in a louder voice…….
Shivaay looking at his gang ‘’ok fine move…another 5 minutes I have to be in my room with her order…so don’t disturb me now’’
He quickly poured tea and placed biscuts in plate and put both of them in tray , held the tray and looked at others nervously ,adjusted his collar excused himself and left towards his room………
Every burst out into laughter………..
Rudra ‘’Shivaay bhayya …poor shivaay bhayya……..he became butler, chef , waiter for Anika Bhabhi…I mean seriously Anika Bhabhi is something else’’
Om ‘’she is jaan of this family without any doubt…..’’
Mahi ‘’I agree…….she is the only one who can control Shivaay in his emotions and that’s the reason all the time we spent in this house his duty was the same as he did now after getting up’’
Everyone smiled ……..
Shivika joined them and hugged all of them………they had a good breakfast and then the elders arrived……..
The days passed by Shivika and Mahi were visiting Shillong every now and then, Sahil was shifted to Mumbai for education this time permanently….Bajaj, Chabbra’s and Oberois used to join for a get-together once in a week , in all their house ……… Khanna had an altogether different respect in Oberoi Mansion…now Shivaay dares not to shout on him anymore as his four sisters shielded him……he used to dine along with the family members every weekends……..Sahil was pampered a lot…specially by Tej and Shakthi…….
In a span of three months Priyanka gave the good news of pregnancy and there were celebrations in Oberoi family……
The weekend came and it was the turn of Chabbra’s and Bajaj’s to meet in Oberoi mansion……
Shivaay decided to cook for everyone as his sister gave him the best news ……All the IB gang helped him……
The guests arrived and food was served the day went with loads of happiness……….after everyone left………
Gauri, Shreya, Sumo ran into washrooms and were vomiting………….Later Anika also felt like vomiting and ran towards her room…Shivaay followed her…but none else noticed Shivika……….
Jhanvi, Dadi, Pinky were handling Gauri, Shreya and Sumo along with their Om, Mahi and Rudra while Shivaay took care of Anika singlehandedly……..
Doctor was called then and there and she said that Gauri, Shreya ad Sumo had indigestion…….
Anika and Shivaay were also coming towards Gauri Shreya and Sumo …while walking Anika fainted and doctor who was about to leave stopped and came to her and checked her and smiled……….Shivaay had a broader smile as he knew what doctor meant……..doctor left without speaking anything…….
Om ‘’ab Shivaay…why are you smiling and why didn’t doctor say anything?’’
Dadi, Pinky, Jhanvi ‘’OmRuHi …you didn’t understand till now?’’
Rudra ‘’if you say we will understand na?’’
Dadi ‘’Khoteyon Anika and Shivaay are going to gift me something which I demanded ..’’
Mahi ‘’wait a minute dadi…will you say clearly’’
Gauri –Shreya-Sumo ‘’it means you all are going to become chachu / chote papa and we all will be becoming choti maa / Maasi and Khanna and Sahil will become Maamu’’
Rudra ‘’ohh ok..like that’’ he paused and then
OmRuHi screamed ‘’whaaaaaaaaaaaat? That means Bhabhi is pregnant………..yeeeeee ……..yuppieeeeeeeee’’
They all hugged and gave a OBEROI POSE FOR SELFIE
All obros were invidually united…… Joys were doubled…….. and generation was going to be tripled……
They were together and decided to be together to face any storm awaiting to hit them…..
—————————-THE END——————————————–
SO THIS WAS THE THIRTY SEVENTH part and the LAST PART TOO…PLEASE LET ME KNOW HOW YOU FELT AFTER READING THIS…ANY COMMENTS GOOD OR BAD ARE WELCOME…I WILL TRY TO RESPOND AS SOON AS POSSIBLE…
AUTHOR’S NOTE :
FIRSTLY ………..
NIDA this is for you ………’’All the scenes involving YOUR SHIVAAY is dedicated to you dear …….I will really miss our conversations through comment section……..Always stay happy and keep smiling….we will be in contact through TU Page…I donno how else to thank you for being my bestest support…..i wish we stay friends for our lifetime though it is not practically possible to see each other and meet in person because of geographical barriers……..Take care and All the very best’’
SECONDLY…………..
Thank you so much to all the readers who stood by throughout these 37 days of the journey……..i know without you these would not have been possible………Navya aka Shreya of this FF/ Chotii, Amayaa, Vivikhtha, Arpita, Jerry aka Vedika., Dhar, Dwet, Nikki aka Nikita, Niriha, Shivika, Gayathri my darling sis, Vishnusri, Katz, Sri, Aastha_Reddy, Jhanvi_patel, Sagithya, Ahaana, Ahsana_98, Aashi, UF, Fffan1234, Haridhra-the author, san , sam, Anu16 , Anu Johnson, Alekhika – my strict teacher and many more who stood as pillars and supported me……. (Sorry if I forgot any name in this list..but heartfully I acknowledge them too)
THIRDLY ……….
I listed all the names of readers, who posted their opinions on all , some or for a single time……..i hope I haven’t missed any of you till 36th episode being posted…….
THANK YOU TO ALL THE BELOW ADDRESSED READERS WHO TOOK THEIR TIME TO POST THEIR OPINION DESPITE OF THEIR BUSY SCHEDULES
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LASTLY ……………………
I am thankful to all the readers and all the silent readers for their valuable time…..
Few episodes I know I have disappointed you …sorry for that………..
This FF has been VERY SPECIAL to me
I MADE LOTS OF SISTERS ….THIS WAS MY LONGEST FF TILL DATE……146 READERS POSTED THEIR OPINION TILL 36 TH EPISODE….1250 OPINIONS RECEIVED (Not including my responses)….AND I HOPE I GET MANY MORE RESPONSES ON THIS EPISODE TOO…….
I AM NOT SURE WHEN I WILL BE BACK…BUT I WILL COME BACK WHENEVER A GOOD IDEA PASSES MY BRAIN …..THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN FOR GIVING ME SO MUCH OF LOVE…..THANKS A LOT ……….
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awesome update. I just loved it. I’m gonna miss this ff…… pls come up with another ff/os/ts soonnn… I’m waiting for it eagerly…
Hey Lincy Arnav…thanks a lot dear…i am gonna miss this FF and you too…and whenever right time comes i will come back
Hii dii.. You are the best… I am feeling sad… This beautiful ff is come to his final way…
Love you the most…. Sorry for troubling you… What to do.. My pm are not reaching to you… I will try my luck again… Plz check out your mail.. I am sended… And plz tell me.. You received or not…
Thank you so much Nikita…don’t feel sad dear…we will for sure stay in contact…yeah this FF had to end and i was mentally preparing for that…see now i am job less…love you too and never did you trouble me so don’t say so….yeah i checked the settings and you are not blocked…i received your mail and i replied it too….keep smiling and be happy always and i love you loads …this you know very well
Well, this journey doesn’t end here. I will always look forward for your works. And I really hope that you come with much more great works of yours. Will miss you very much. Try to come up with more soon.You are a wonderful writer and I really appreciate that. You have a quality that readers stay connected with you. The way you reply to everyone is also amazing, and many of the readers wait for your reply only *me too*?
So I have a request for a amazingly fantastic writer here to come up with your works soon. Love you to the infinity and more. I’ll be waiting❤❤
will wait for your next ff and plz let as know if u come with new ff
Thank you so much Shona…thanks a lot dear…i am so happy to find a dear friend in you…how can i deny your wish dear…i will at the right time come back dear and whenever i come back i will definitely let you know…
And giving replies to all of you…that’s the minimum i can do for all of you who spare your time to read and respond …and i am glad that you like this gesture of mine ….thanks a lot dear for everything…
Love you too to infinity …always keep smiling and be happy
thank you di for the episode it was fabulous
I loved the story
thank u for this story & for mentioning me
be back soon,we’ll miss u
luv u di
Thank you so much Aashi…glad you liked the story and mentioning your name is a pleasure for me…so don’t thank me for that…instead i need to thank you that you beared me all these days
Thank you dear for a Super duper awesome khidkkitod journey of Ishqbaaz gang. I have absolutely loved this story and have already started missing it.
The ending was like cherry on the top of a yummy cake. I hope you will co
Thank you so much Fffan1234…thanks a lot…even i am missing all my writing from past one month ….and most importantly miss everyone over here
Thank you dear for a Super duper awesome khidkkitod journey of Ishqbaaz gang. I have absolutely loved this story and have already started missing it
The ending was like cherry on the top of a yummy cake. I hope you will come up with another Khidkkitod ff. Looking forward to it. In the meantime I am going back to first part of this journey to read it again .
Glad you liked the episode and i will come back and with your thought most probably in a different way but when will that happen is not yet decided……awee so sweet of you to read it again…take care keep smiling and love you loads
It was just amazing dii…..but I m sad as well cz it ended???…
Plzz come back wd another ff soon….i will b waiting for ur toddu ff…..miss u??…bye …
Thank you so much Shreyanvi…thanks a lot dear…don’t be sad…i will come back with something else very soon…and then will find you to be by my side then…miss you too…keep smiling and take care dear…bye
Awesome….
Marvelous & Apt Ending…..Finally all the couples are happy….
I kept smiling throughout d update….
The journey has seriously been amazing but surely it doesn’t end here I’ll be looking forward for your works….
You r an amazing writer & u portray all the emotions beautifully….I really appreciate ur work….
Thank you for connecting so well & taking out time and replying everyone….
Keep Writing…..Will b waiting…..
Lots Of Love~ Riya 🙂
Thank you so much Shivika…..yeah finally all couples happy….keep smiling always that’s what i will wish for you……
this ff journey will end here but our journey of writer-reader /motivator/supporter will always continue…
Will come back with something new very soon…and then i will be waiting to see you by my side….connecting and replying is the minimum i can do to thank you…
Lots of love Shivika aka Riya…keep smiling and take care
That’s so amazing fun fiction….???? Waiting for another one frm u…. Plz come with another one soon.????
Thank you so much Dini…thanks a lot…yes ..will come back with something new and interesting at the right time…take care
Awesome fabulous mind blowing no words to say di…All couples are happy i really enjoyed this ff di i’m so happy but at the same time i’m sad too because this ff came to an end.this ff will always remain best in my heart di. I will really miss u and ur ff di..I hope you will come back with ur new work. I will waiting for ur next work di
I love you so much di?????????Take care
Thank you …thank you…thank you…thanks a lot Niriha…don’t be sad and always be happy…and your opinions and support will always stay in my heart…i too will miss you dear and at the right time i will be back…i love you too loads dear…keep smiling and take care…all the very best to you too
HAPPY ENDING FOR A NEW BEGINNING…expecting more and more ff s?????
Thank you so much Salma…thanks a lot…will try to come up with something new at the right time…
Hey its a khidkitod epi….Luved it from core of my heart. …
Thank you so much Nimmi….thanks a lot…glad you liked it …take care and keep smiling
Sooo sorry di for the late comment actually my net was down but as usual u know what I’m gonna say , means I really don’t have any words , dii u shouldddd I mean mustttt come back with a bang , just remember that there is ur little sister whose not that little but waiting for ur dose of writings
Hey Dhar…don’t say sorry…you have posted your opinion on all episodes without fail…is it something less…you have always given me the much required boost to write something good and not fall below expectation of readers…thank you so much …thank you for your support, motivatuon , encouragement, compliments, amazing lines and for everything……
i will always remember you and can never forget you because you will always remain in my heart….as my NOT SO LITTLE but A LITTLE SISTER…..
will come back with something new and interesting at right time…till then i will wait for your writings …take care, keep smiling and all the best sissy
Am sorry didi…….I couldn’t comment on ur last two parts…..but I njoyed all the two parts so much and this one just loved it…….superb……and ll definitely miss ur writing pl do come up with another idea pl……….
If u dont tink bad then pl do think about writing regarding the spoilers which are talking about anikas divorce and their separation….pl….just wanted to read ur writing again pl…..
Thank you so much Arthi…no worries dear…i know and can understand your busy schedules so please don’t say sorry…
Thank you so much for having trust on me and suggesting me to write something based on the spoilers …i cannot promise but i will definitely think about your suggestion…..and one more thing you can anytime order me and ask me no need to say please for all these…because you call me didi ….
keep smiling and take care…love you loads dear
I feel like crying. I’m really gonna miss this ff. You are awesome. Waiting for your next khidhkitod ff. This ff always remains in my favorites .
Hey Kiki…please don’t think of crying….i will miss you all your opinion and affection…thank you so much for all the amazing lines …thanks a lot once again…keep smiling and all the very best
Awwwwww…..its really nice……Nice ending and waiting for your another work….???
Thank you so much San…thanks a lot…and whenever i find something very interesting i will come back…i hope whenever i come back you will be there to support me as you did till now
Beautiful ending with everyone happily living altogether
Thank you so much Alekhika….yeah everything sorted out and they stay together happily….thanks for being the strict teacher for me…you post a two line comments only if you feel something worth and you did such for few times…i am so happy for that…thank you…thanks a lot
It’s Awesome di…. Happy ending… Eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt work…. Cme back soon…
Thank you so much Banita…i am so happy that you liked it and thank you for being with me , by my side throughout this FF…i can never forget this gesture of you….thank you thanks a lot …and how many ever times i say thank you will be less…….
It’s Awesome di…. Happy ending… It’s one of my fab ff ever…. Eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt work…. Till then i miss u…
Thank you once again and i will come back whenever the right time comes….
Wow! An amazing journey of ff. Sad that this ends, but really happy that i got to read this beautiful work. Hoping for more of ur writings.. ?Keep rocking!!!
Thank you so much Sam…thanks a lot…i am also happy to find a very good friend in you…thank you for bearing me for 37 days and i will come back whenever right time comes…keep smiling and take care
An amazing one as usual di…U have made me smile… U r really very talented n this ff is a proof of it… everyday I log in the TU page I eagerly wait for ur ff… how much ever i am busy or even off mood ur ff just lights up my face… surely going to miss this one… but do give us some more works to relish ur writings,to just get transported into another world…I have not communicated much with anyone on TU.. but after talking to u i really felt good… thank u so much n do come up with something soon… hope to see you soon…
Hey Anu…thank you so much dear…i donno how talented i am but now i can say i am very lucky…cann’t believe that i got so many well wishers in this forum….i too love to talk with you…keep in touch and ping me whenever you feel like connecting with me…i will respond at the earliest…
Thank you so much for the support, care and affection that you showered on me….it’ truly a blessing…and i will definitely come back whenever a good thought or right time arrives….and then i will look for you to stand by my side to show your support…
I hope you choose the best option for the future…keep smiling stay happy and love you loads
An amazing one as usual di…U have made me smile… U r really very talented n this ff is a proof of it… everyday I log in the TU page I eagerly wait for ur ff… how much ever i am busy or even off mood ur ff just lights up my face… surely going to miss this one… but do give us some more works to relish ur writings,to just get transported into another world…I have not communicated much with anyone on TU.. but after talking to u i really felt good… thank u so much n do come up with something… hope to see you soon…
Thank you so much once again
Amazing finale…but I wanted you to continue it dii….as season 2….please….u were amazing……this ff remains forever in my heart….than real ishqbaaz ????love u dii????….and also thank you soo much for mentioning my name…..I have just commented only once in your ff…but you proved your a kind hearted person to mention this one tym commented gal name…with lots of love????
Hey Girija…thank you so much dear…it was indeed a pleasure to read all the opinions posted and that includes yours too…and regarding mentioning your name ..every opinion matters once or many times…it’s as precious as you are …coming to writing season-2 …i am taking a much needed break so that i come up with something else….so that i can find you beside me with same love and affection……lots of love and best wishes to you from my end too
Tanqqq……hope see with next magnum opus ff?
Wow..SO many comments..Super Cool
And the Credit goes to you for your fantastic writting!
Thanks for mentioning my name…I was so happy
And this update was magnificent !
Do, come with something neww
I waill wait for you
LOve yaa
Thank you so much Neha…all the opinions represent the liking towards my writing and me too….thanks a lot for that….off course dear you too have supported me so how can i forget to post your name…i am glad you liked this episode and this FF too…will take sometime but will for sure come up with something new….love you loads…take care and all the best
Can someone please give me the list of complete ff of ishqbaaz on tellyupdates . I am the new one and I want to read complete stories of ishqbaaz. Plzzzzzzz……
hey Fizza khan…thank you for posting your opinion here…welcome to TU ….I am not sure about your question whether you are asking links of this FF or other FF’s…….however to read this FF from the beginning here you go with the links:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-1-situation-ends/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-2-first-page-past/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-3-fight-past/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-4-important-discussion/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-5-rudras-past/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-6-rudras-past/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-7-reason-exit/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-8-unexpected-situation/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-9-unexpected-situation/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-10-side-story/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-11-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-11-near-yet-far/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-11-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-12-near-yet-far/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-13-reunion-brothers/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-14-good-times/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-15-mission-gauri-omkara/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-16-destruction/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-17-turn-tables/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-18-new-beginning/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-16-turning-point/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-20-clash-events-incidents/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-21-planning-execution/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-22-planning-execution/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-23-unfortunate-turn-events/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-24-shocking-truth/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-25-union-oberois/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-26-revelations-twist-event/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-27-surprise-proposal/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-28-decisions-life/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-29-major-truth-start-unfolding/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-30-small-steps-finding-truth/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-31-eventful-day/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-32-scatterred-pieces-puzzle-join/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-33-final-nail-coffin/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-34-requests-demands-explanations/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-35-fun-moments/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/past-present-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-36-fun-division-wedding/
sorry for the late comment di
episode is really awesome
Thank you so much Pritika…thanks a lot…it’s ok dear you have sooner or later posted your opinion and that is more important…thank you once again…thanks a lot