Hey guys!!!??????
This is Rishika here.. I know u all but none know me?? kyu, sahi kaha na maine?? Ha ha ha ???? mein bhi na ekdum jhalli hu bolna hi bhool gayi..
You know what I’m a silent reader (rather say was till now)
I have read almost all of urs articles.
Must say u guys are really amazing.????????
Ok toh now some of my favyy writers are riya, ruwani, ashnita, riru, rushi, prachi, anita, anee, etc. etc. etc…… (not gonna mention every ones name coz i can’t remember right now.???
Sooo….. Sorry for that???)
But i read all the articles from the starting itself
Phir se ek baar kaan pakadke sorry?itni saari bak bak ke liye
Its my first writing kaise hai bolna zarror plisss it’s a humble request.
Aacha chalo ab story start karti hoon bina kisi bakwass ke
So here i start..
PEHLI MOHABBAT??? (OS) Kanchi
The scene starts with a school
VR International School
In one of the classroom as usual two students were arguing
They are blaming each other for some reasons their face is shown these are none other than our kabir and sanchi.
They both are brilliant students and even competitors. They always argue about who will be first.
Sanchi : kabir you did wrong by keeping my notes with you, you cheater??…(she was stooped in middle)
“Oh!! hello madam it’s the payback for the last time what you did”? said Kabir
They were fighting when veer came to stop kabir and isha came to stop sanchi
( veer and kabir are besties n sanchi and isha are also besties)
Both kabir and sanchi loves to argue with each other. They doesn’t know which force pulls them closer to each other
After some days while their constant fights they both started developing feelings for each other ?
Whenever their eyes meet they used to get lost in them leading to a loving eyelock??
They wanted to confess their feeling bit none could gather enogh courage with a fear that if they confess they may loose them forever
However isha and veer always try to make them close to each other?( they knew as they use to share everything happens with them to their frnds)?
With the passing time love of kanchi for each other grew immense??
Now the time came to the farewell party of them
Kabir finally decided to propose Sanchi
In between of the programmes kabir took sanchi to the corridor of the school
Sanchi : kabir!!! what happened? Why did u bring me here☺
Just then kabir bent on his knees and took out a rose ?
Sanchi : kabir…..
Kabir : sanchi I don’t know how you will take it, but know I can’t hide my feelings any more.
You are like a addiction to me
Medicine to my pains
Your smile is Happiness in all my sorrows
I LOVE YOU SANCHI!!!?? I LOVE YOU!! Tum hi ho meri PEHLI MOHABBAT
Sanchi was in mixed emotions listening to his confession made her teary eyes
Seeing tears dwell up in her eyes kabir stood up and hug her.
Sanchi came out of shock and said ” I LOVE YOU TOO KABIR!!!
You are my heartbeat
You are the reason for me to live
Tum hi meri PEHLI MOHABBAT ho Kabir
I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH” and responded to the hug
Unaware of the two people watching them from behind kanchi was lost in each other
They came back to senses by the clapping sounds ???? made by veer and isha
After completing their studies and gaining a better carrer
They both got married and
lived happily ever after.☺
THE END
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Sorry for boring you guys. It is the first time I’m writing something
So please forgive me for my mistakes
And haan plzzz do tell kaisa hai yeh
And
Thanks for bearing me and reading this
With regards
Your
One and ONLY
Rishika
37 Comments
Welcome to TU dear sis. I’m happy again we got a new writer for our fav couple kaanchi. Now we will get ur articles too. Nd I think u didn’t commented also. But happy u came with articles. Infact I too was a silent reader then I started commenting and then tried in writing ???.
And about this OS. Awesome start sis. Amazing os dear. I hope soon u will start an ff. And about your bak bak don’t worry we too r of same category. We love blabbering ???. Luv u loads sissy ???
It means alot to me dear
N haan u will get to see my articles too par not regularly
Studies k saath time kam milta but koshish poori karungi
I’m really happy that u liked my post
Thanku sooooo much
N haa love you too babes
Welcome dear to our kanchi gang that is tu the os was fantastic u know I was really happy when I got to know u read my ff thank you a lot love you take care???
Thanks alot dear
N im happy that i can also write something nice thanks for ur appreciation
Love you too babes…
welcome dear Rishika…..How beautifull your name Rishika……Your updates was dammm good…but yarr it was very chhotu sa article….I want to say you can you plzz write FF/Fs Or Long wala Os…Coz you have brilient talent of writing…..Bye tc..
Awww sooo…. sweet of you coz my name is really nice i know that
I’m really happy that u find my post worth of reading
Aur haan i know yeh ekdum chinnu sa hai
But I’ll try to write a big one also
N thanks coz i didn’t think anyone would like it. Love you dear
Awsm
Thanks dear
its wonderful dear
hope you will start ff or fs or long os
Thanks dear
N yaa for sure I’ll try
Love you
firstly welcome to TU dear. os was awesome amazing and many more. Thanks for coming as writer or else hame itna acha writter kese milta.Keep rocking dear and if you can then comment on articles. bye take care. love you
Thanks alot dear for appreciating my writings n haan mein itni bhi aachi nahi hoon when it comes to writings
Love you too babes
Welcome to TU and Kanchi family Rishi (can I call you that?) ???. It’s good to see a new writer joining us when lots of old ones are leaving ???. I’m very happy to know I’m one of your favourite writers ???. It really means a lot!!! And coming to the os, it was totally awesome for a first attempt. If you can start a ff or fs, it would be so great ???
Thanks alot ruwani dear. N haan you can absolutely call me rishi no offence in that coz i love people calling me rishi coz my sweetheart calls me the same
N im extremely happy that u liked this chootu sa os
N haan I’ll for sure give a try to ff or fs
Love you babes
Take care
It’s a cute wala os…loved it…write more nd more…
Aww soo sweet of u sanju dear
Thanks alot
Love you
this was really nice
Thanks dear cherry
Its so sweet and and amazing….. Do conrinue writing
Thanks amnaa dear
N yeah I’ll keep on writing
Love you
Firstly a very warm welcome in TU dear.??
We get a new Kaanchi fan….yippee .
Ur first attempt is really appreciatable…loved Kaanchi’ cute nok-jhok.I just loved it to the core.???
Hope to read more of ur work …..but next time lamba wala.
Keep writting dear nd all the best.
Thankd Sohan n who doesn’t like cute si nok-jhok
Glad that u loved it
N haan I’ll surely write rather try to write big one
N thanks for ur wishes
Mention not dear.And ya i m Sanyukta.Yesterday i commented from my elder brother’s id.
Welcome rishika……….your first writing is rock yaar……so so amazing and beautiful story yaar……..keep it up rishika……..write some more story yaar……
Thanks anu dear I’m happy that u liked my story love you
Welcome in the kanchi family dear.. Amaz sweet os dear.. Came back asap..??.. Till then tc.. Bye
Awwe thanq sooo much dear
Love you
superb os and welcome in kanchi’s family…………..comeback soon with new story………………tc……….bye
Thanks dear
Wowwwww dear its just sooooo cute sweet sensible amazing this words are less to describe how much I loved ur writing and it doesn’t seem that ur writing for the first time
Paru meri jaan tuna apna overdrama mat kar par haan tune kaha tha tu yeh waste tp nai karti phir bhi tune mere ek baar kehne par padha thats alot for me
Love u shona
It is nice to get a new writer and that to such an amazing one and this is really nice but a bit small next time try to write big
Rishu tujhe kabse mujhe appreciate karne me maza ane laga par tussi meri life line ho naa love u cuttu
Babes this was good story …..
I loved it ….. Come back with a new story …
Awww so sweet vishu…
I no u would definitely love it shona
Rishika……..wow……….tum bilkul apni naam ki tarah sweet ho…..now, first of all, Swaagat hai tumhara(wo bhi Swag ke saath…..hehe) hamare TU, especially kanchi family me……but haan, swaagat ke saath meri sorry bhi accept karlo, late cmmnt ke liye……ab koi excuse nhi doongi, coz, ye problem toh common hai, sabka……padhaai & exam naam ka yamraaj……..uff……..pakk gyi ho na meri bak bak se, now, bina tumhe aur tang kiye, I just want to say that, u r simply amaaaaaaaaaaaaazing……..wow boss, maan gye tumhe……..pehli hi ball me ball ko aisa maara ki ball seedhe stadum se bahar……..wow…….osm, ravishing……..just one line to say, boss, I’m already in love with ur writing……..luv u sweetieeeeee & jaldi se hame apne writings ka jalwa dikhaao………apni ff,fs,os ke through……..till then…….bye, tc, luv u…….
Awww…… Soooo sweet riya and thanks for the swag ke saath wala swagat… n haan soory happily accepted coz meri khudki yehi problem hai exams and padhai by god yaar too much hai yeh? bak bak se mein kabhi tang nahi meri khudki habit hai start hui toh koi stop hai bhi nai
N haan thanks alot
Love you tooo…… janna