I m really disappointed guys now its been more than enough.
I cant tolerate it…..
I was not about to come …….
I was leaving tu but I m here due to ramya, purvi, thanmy and my cupcake my baby’s request….
These four frnds of mine stooped me bt I tild to dem also dis is ladt post now I wont continue cos now its been really unbearable. ……
. It really hurts wen I write sooo much long episodes for u all but u people dun give hell to that…
Srry if I seem rude but dis has to happen u guys dun even see hw I m taking out time and writing des fr u all bt no none cares…..
And ya sm blo*dy person msgd me on tu pm and abused me and my writings….I mean wat d hell is dis wat I m getting out of wat I did…
Its really untolerable guys…luk guys I m soo hurtened by being abused fr doing nthng wrong….
Just 14 commnts huhhh look guys dus is my last post and I f u all want me to continue u have to tell ur opinions about dat I want at least 20 cmmnts guys….
Nw I wont waste my energy ams will give short yodate of os I wont write so long if u guys dun five it utmost hell.
.
And mind it if I ll get less dan 20 cmmnta I ll leave all my wrtings like dis and gonna leave tu
PEHLI NAZAR MEIN KAISA JAADU KAR DIYA…
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All were sitting in hall.
Kunj baby shivi misha and manish but nt twinkle….
Misha:ty kunj beta hamari twinkle ki help karne ke liye pagal ladki jar wakt siyappa karti rehti hai….
Manish: misha ji meri princess ko aise mat kahiye plss…
Misha:acha manish ji par sach mein P oe gayi hai siyappa
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Manish:misha ji
Misha:acha bas
Kunj’s eyes welled up as he smiled….
Misha noticed and went towards him..
Sat wid him and kept her hand over his…..
Misha:beta kya hua tum .. tum ro kyun rahe ho……
Kunj clears hus eyes and says:nthng aunty…
Misha:pls batao beta mujhe apni mom samjho
Kunj:anti kuch mahi bas wo ap dono ke beech ki nok jhok mein jo oyar tha use dekh kar aankhein bhar ayi…. mere mom dad bhi boht pyar karte the ek dusre ko bt…. leave chodiye ap…
Misha:btao pls beta …
Kunj:my mom is nw dead anti and kunj cries…
Misha consoles him …
He hugs her…. musha smiles and guves him modetly love….
Misha:waise toh kunj beta tum J hi humse mile hi par tumne aj hi hamari madad ki pehle manish ji ki file ke liye(guys dus u dun mentioned earlier waisd hi I added) and den twinkle ki tum boht ache ho aisa kagta hai jaise humata tumse janmon ka rishta ho….. mujhe yeh toh nhi oata tumhari mom ke saath kya hua par aj se tum mujhe maa kahoge……
Kunj brks hug and dats:ty MA.. MAA (dis wrd echoes)he smile ty soo much ao bhi bilkul neti maa jaisi ho caring…
Shivi sensing it emotional says loud:bas ab kunj bhayia bas bhi bff bas maa kitne rote ho ap log huhhhh acha waise kunj bhayia srry bff
Kunj clears eyes and smiles….
Kunj:yess pretty lady….
Shivi: bhayia apki koi gf hai ya u love smone?,?
Kunj:pretty ladu srry to say I dun love smone or I dun have any gf… koi itni oretty lady mili hi nahi jisne mere dil ko ypuch kia ho…. ao se zyada koi pretty lady mili hi nahi ap agar badi hoti na toh ap hi hoti meri gf and he winks…
All laugh.
Jst den dey listen a voice….
Ahhh chsss sss ahhh huhh
All look towards stairs and der mouths left opened……
Kunj pov
Yeh ladki hot model se seedha sansjari mode pe kaise aa gayi waise kitni cute lag rahi hai sambhal nahi raha usse suit deho toh salwar se hi fight kr rahi hai or duppatta drkho khan js raha hai….
Manish:princesss
Misha:meri hot twinkle yeh kya hua tujhe yeh sanskari kabse ban gayi meri beti
Twi:ahhh chup raho sab pehle mujhe usss world war ko complete karne do….
Huhhh
Yss world war hi thi…
She was struggling wid her peach colour simple salwar suit wid simple yellow duppatta and open hair wid glossss…..
Wid one hand she was holding her salwar and again and again she was doing it here der as if she has wore some heavy material… and her dupaata was again and again falling dwn she was picking it uo… dhe was frustrated. …
(Same happnd wid me wen in skool on our annual finc I had to wear salwar duit I was hrll frustrated as I never wear I hate suits and all)
Twi managed to look hot ij dat suit also…..
She and priya has designed dat suit and it was fully backkess salwar suit tied with dori on her back … the suit was nt full backless it was upto her back in middle of stomach its back side…….
Like spinals more dan half part…..
(Bio students got it)
Misha:dekho meri princess apni elegancy and hotness carry karna nahi bjoolti jst like u misha
He says slowly to misha making her blush….
Twi was taking rounds on the stair setying her dupatta was frustrated wen she was abt to fall frm last second stair…
But kunj caught her in nick of time……
Kunj runs fast saying twinkle…
And holds her ….
Kunj was leaning over her as she was falling doen bt was saved….
Both shared eyelock….
Twinkles hairs flies and twinkle feels do happy in his atms
Twi pov
Ty babaji…… mujhe fir se mere pyar ki bahon mein girane ke liye…
I love his touch his cologne…
Kunj senses awkwardness and makes her stand and asks her if shes ok
She nods and says ty to him
He smiles…..
Misha and manish smiles…..
While baby and shivi also smiles….
Twi runs to her hero her gather amd hugs himm
He smiles amd hugs her…
Manish:meri hot ftnd aa gai tune toh misha ji ko bhi fail kr dia
Misha foes haww expression
Manish and twi hi gi wid each oder…
Twi: dun wrry my jealous mom my superhero ap pe hi marte hain aj bhi tensiin naji lene ka ok… amd she hugs her…
Misha smiles amd manish hugs misha
Misha:manish ji bacje hain chodiye
Manish:pyar kia toh darna kya
Shivi:fad bas bas apna romane ao bad mein krna
Manish:cjup kr shivi ki bachi
Shivi :dad fr ur kind info meri koi bachi nhi hai haha
Manish:pulls her ears bataun tujhe bas ab chup….
Look my princess looking so cute and beautiful
Baby:hot too twinkle tu kabhi hot dikhna nahi chodti na ismein bhi hot lag rahi hai backless suit par tujhse dambhal toh raha nahi hai….
Waise aj tune suit kaise pehan liya skirts or shots chod kr….
Twi stammerrs says:wo kuch mhi water lily aur maine design kia tha toh I thot to give it a try
Baby:mujhe toh dal mein kuch kaala lag raha hai
Kunj smile seeing der lovely bond and wen listen babys talks he cough
Kunj pov
Waise yeh ladki whes so difff and looks cute beautiful hot rrally so diff apne mom dad ko frnd bnaya hai interesting waise agar isne kabhi siit mhi pehne toh kya isne mete kehne oar pehma hai!!!!!
Epi ends on his astonished face…..
I dun know wether I ll give nxt part it depends on u all so no recap bye…..
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You still need words…. to describe how awesome the episode was …. just fab … Twinkle was awesome …. world war and all … bio student got it ?
Loved the parents bond and all with Kunj too
Love you and post soon ❤My emotional queen hope you Don’t mind me calling you that ?
Hey Paavu
It was absolutely amazing
Don’t feed sad and please don’t quit
Post soon
Loads of love
Hwy paavu I was excellent mind blowing…..
Funny twinkle struggling with suil……Loved it…..Don’t pay heeds to word of idiots they’re jealous of your exlnt writing because they can’t write of their own……Do continue
Loveee uuuuu….
This was amazing update girl.. n plz don’t be disheartened.. n leave us all na pyaari si ladki??
Yrr it was awesome yrr
Paavu my angry bird I’m really very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very sorry for not commenting on your previous episodes ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? actually I was too busy so could not read nd when I read it was too late so didn’t comment sorry please maaf kar do ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? nd waise puri galti meri nahi hai tune bhi mujhe nahi bataya ki ye tera ff hai ????????????????? pata nahi kab aati hai nd pata nahi kab chali jati hai bin bataye????? pata hai I’m not your friend na that’s why you never paid any attention to me ??????? well sorry again but I’m really very busy you can ask to baby.
By the way ye hamesha dhamki kya deti rehti hai don’t you dare to leave tu????? if you consider me your friend ??
????. I loved your writing nd ff ????????????
Anyways episode was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb. Kunjs nd twinkle’s scenes were too good. Loved it nd please write long episodes.
Nd I’m not on insta but WhatsApp nd Gmail so it you like you can give me your number nd id by Pm????????????
Nd haan don’t pay attention on bashers just ignore them ye toh unka kaam hai
Well post next asap.
Love you ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
So sorrryyy for not commenting on ur previous episode because exam are going on……So maama took away my phone…
That’s why I couldn’t comment on or read. Any FF or OS….
Ishuuuu myy suspense queen plsshhh plsnhhhhh
Yeh sari bashers ke baaare mai dhyaan mat de
Bcoz der r more people who loves ur ff much more den anything
So plssss upset na hona aur sad bilkul bhi nahi hona
Bvoz mujhe bata hai tu meri suspense queen ke saath innocent queen bui hai so plsss sad nahi hote
N I always feel ki mai late comment kar rahi hu n always used to feel guilty but today I won’t bcoz of dis I got to know about dat bashers
Yaar bashers ko ignore karde those comment r nthng infront of d comment u got frm ur loved one a
Plssss don’t be ss
N I loved today update
Awesome amazing dwar
Der bond was superb amazing
Loving it
Aur ab achi janu ki tarah smile karde
Karo na plssxss
Thodi di
Choti wali
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Yeh hui na meri ishu wali baat
Love u keep smiling
Hloo ramyu who saidi deleyed look its here
Pavvu dear I am solly I didn’t commented. Dear I don’t know why I was unable to see your message or send you any message. May be you have blocked me by mistake. Bye. Coming to your writing….
Ga sakun apka nagma wo saaaz kahan se laun,
Suna sakun kuch apko wo andaaz kahan se laun,
Yun to chandani ki tarif karna asaan hai,
Kar sakun aapki tarif wo alfaaz kahan se laun…..
You know what tumne pehli nazar mein aisa jaddu kar diya khota hai bas tere liye…
Love you yaar and don’t pay head to that bashers. They just know these cheap things. Love you to the core. Keep it up…
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hey ishu my jaan i got dem deleted n have asked den nt to post any of these kinda comments…….now just forget it all….please……..
i asked dem why dey r not posting my comments dey told me that they will delete them and now not post these commentss……….☺
thanks babu jaan pls cm on hangouts
ohk m dere u come..☺