Hello guys.I am writing for the first time.Sorry in advance if you didn’t like it.
Veer: Here look Sanchi I have now known the identity of Sanchi Mishra. It was really a tiring work. But still I did it! I have just got her photo. I thought I would check the photo in front of you. After all I am going to do a great deed. So I would do it in front of the one I love. So the Sanchi Mishra is………………
He stopped.He fell down on his knees. Once he looked at Sanchi who was standing in front of him then again at the same Sanchi who was there in photo.
Veer: Why Sanchi?Why did you do this?You are Sanchi MISHRA????You are the daughter of Jaya Mishra? The same Jaya Mishra who tried to kill my mom?
Suddenly Veer got up.
Veer: Get out Sanchi. Get lost from my sight. Dad was right. You are such a cheap girl. You trapped me in your love so that I would be Majnu in your love and you would try to kill my mom. But now your good days are over. You would now not be able to even harm my mom’s single strand of hair.I will tell your truth to this world then you would go to jail on fraud charge. Just wait and watch Sanchi Mishra what I would do to u now.
Sanchi who was mute till now spoke up.
Sanchi:No Veer whatever you r thinking is all misconception regarding me. I admit that I am Sanchi Mishra but I have never wanted to harm your mother neither has my mom tried to do so.Look Veer I can explain this.
Veer:Bas Sanchi ab aur kitna jhoot bologi? Tan aachuka hoon main tumhare dhoke se.Chalijao mere jindagi se.
He dragged Sanchi to the store room door, inside which they were till now. And threw her out of the room.
Unknown to them there was someone else who was listening to all their convo. Kabir!!!!
Kabir’s pov: No Sanchi you cannot do this.I know my Sanchi isn’t someone like this who would try to harm anyone. I am sure there is something which is invisible to my eyes. I need to find this out. You are always my dear honest talented dedicated Sanchi be it Mishra or Agarwal. I am sure there is some big reason that you took up someone else’s identity in this hospital. I need to find what that reason is.
Author’s pov:
Kabir stormed out of the area to find Sanchi who had run away from there.He asked Ishagya if they had seen Sanchi.They said they had only seen Sanchi going to the storeroom.
Kabir searched Sanchi in the entire hospital.But he could see her nowhere.He rushed outside the hospital only to see Sanchi walking out of hospital premises.
Kabir followed her. Sanchi was walking across the road hysterically that she didn’t see a truck approaching her. Kabir saw this and shouted Sanchiiiiii !!!! He reached there in nick of time to pull Sanchi towards him into his arms.
Kabir:Sanchi are you out of your mind? If anything had happened to you then……
Sanchi:Then what Dr.Kabir? Why do you care? Why does anyone care about me? Main to bohot buri hoon na. Dhokebaaz hoon.Kya fark padta hai mere marne ya jeene se?
Kabir:Fark padta hai Sanchi. Kyun ki I love u damn it ! I have always loved you and I wil always do.
Sanchi: You don’t know my reality so you are saying this.I am not Sanchi Agarwal.I am Sanchi ……..
Kabir: MISHRA. Sanchi Mishra right? I know it Sanchi but I trust you.I know you wouldn’t do anything wrong. Tell me Sanchi what compelled you to do this.You can confide in me.
Sanchi said everything about her this deed Everything even about Dr.Malhotra’s wrongdoings.
Sanchi: I know sr you may not believe me as I know you consider Dr.Malhotra like your father.But truth cannot be hidden for long..
Kabir: I know Sanchi that Dr.Malhotra is a corrupt person. He has done favours on me so I need to to stand by him. But that doesn’t mean I would support him in his wrong doings. I am with you Sanchi.
Sanchi hugged Kabir.He also reciprocated.
They broke hug.
Sanchi:But Veer…..
Kabir:I know Sanchi Dr.Malhotra has instigated Veer against you. But we two will fight against the world. Jab Kabir hai saath toh darne ki kya baath!!!!
Sanchi smiled. Even though she was scared about her future somewhere in her heart she knew that Kabir for whom she felt would support her in any circumstances.
They returned back to SDCH.They knew bad news would be awaiting for them. But together they would face it.
Author’s note: This was it guys. I have tried for the first time to write a fanfiction.Even though I am poor at writing skills,I thought to give it a try.
Plz give your feedback.Plz no rotten tomatoes and chappals.I don’t like tomatoes and, Chappals,I think they would hurt.
I am sorry if I did some typo errors. I apologize if I left some loopholes in the plot. And about the sequel plz someone among you give it a continuation as part 2 if you liked it. I think I am going to run out of ideas.
Please don’t forget to like subscribe and comment which I am if course not going to say.Plz comment if you liked it and even if you didn’t liked it as negative feedbacks are also welcome.I would improve next time onwards.
38 Comments
superb one but is this end or you continue like part 2 of this os kind of .
if you continue this os i would love to read what happened next .
i request you please continue this os at least part 3 or 4.
keep writing dear.
It is the end atleast for now. Well I haven’t actually thought about part 2 or more. The thing is that just a mere idea popped out of my mind so I wrote that up.
I am glad that you liked it.
I will then decide the matter about sequel.
It’s nice …..keep writing dearβ
Thank you so much for your appreciation.
Yeah I will try to write if time or my mood permits.
Anonymoussa… it was really amazing one.. i can’t believe that this is your 1st article.. damn cool yaar.. welcome to Writers Club dear.
Cheers to ur 1st article success ?
Aww……thank you sooo much sweetie.
Even though yeah it’s my first article I am so happy that you liked it.
You made my day dear. Lots of luv from my part for u.
Hey anonymousaa it is gr8 I m so happy u wrote something
Nd talking about the Os it was amazing dear I think u should only write the sequel nd I know it would be gr8 too.
Thanks dear.
I will think about the sequel.If not sequel I will certainly try to post a newer article.
Hahaa
Awesome dear???
Plz post next asap
Pair is kanchi right.?
Thank u Swetha
It was just an OS dear so next part is not certain.
Yeah the pair is Kanchi.
I am such a great fan of Kanchi that while reading Sanveer ff also I imagine Kabir in Veer’s place then only read.And this time here everything was in my grip so I made Kanchi the pair.
Hey dear this was amazing fabulous ! I loved it to the core ! If u don’t mind can I continue this I mean just next part ; length will be as it is of yours ? That’s just an opinion else u might tell me !
Anyways I loved this one ! Keep going !
Okay okay okay okay.I would be more than glad to handover this OS’s sequel’s responsibility to our OS Queen.
I won’t mind about the length.Everything shall be as per your will.You can even write a novel in this(if it was normal). It would be so great honour for me that you would be continuing my OS.
Thank u so so much Trishu dea !!!!
Awww thanku so much for this I will try to write this today dear nd hope I won’t disappoint you sweetie ! Lv uh
I can guarantee that I am not be going to be disappointed.
So I will say” Can’t wait for the sequel of this OS. Plz post ASAP.” π
No dear it is awesome.
Pls don’t be upset and write next one soon coz I’m waiting for it.??
Hey I am not upset.It is just that I had just planned an OS and didn’t want to extend the plot.
I suppose you will get sequel soon.Stay tuned.
Thanks a lot Priyaa !
Welcome Anonymousaa ??? it was great dear!!! Don’t think less of your writing skills, it’s amazing!!! Great start and keep writing ???
Thank you so much Ruwani(if I am not wrong that’s your name I suppose)
Thanks a lot for believing on me.I myself never had this belief on myself as much as u people are showing. It really means a lot. I am feeling short of words to express my gratitude.
wowwww it’s really interesting pliz start soon can’t wait for this
Thank u so so much Ashu.
I am literally on cloud nine reading words of appreciation from such amazing writers.
It was only an OS from my side.So it is the end.(while I cannot guarantee about part 2.It is now in somebody else’s hands if you know who)
Thank u so much again for commenting.
Its gd ….post nxt part of ths OS..
Next part? I am not sure about that.
Nyways thank u so much dea.r.
Superb anonymausaa u did best suberbb yar
Keep writting dear
Thank u Sanju.
Well I have a month long vacation so no college. Then I will think about writing something else and more too. Thanks for the encouragement.
Awsome dear plzzz continue it post nxt part of this asap
Thank u Niyaa.
Next part shall be coming I suppose but perhaps not by me.
Wow dear…it was great…i loved it….amazing…you are very talented….love you
Thank u Tania.I am glad that you liked it.
Talking about talent you deserve the appreciation my dear.I have just started writing.But you are already an established author in tu.I feel I have much more to learn from you.
Luv u tooo so much.Loads of hugs and kisses for you!
Wowwwwwwww it was superrrr we uparrr…jb starting is like this then further is going to be so amazing….. Loved it!!
Welcome to you and keep rocking!!
Thank u so much sweetie.
Sequel is coming very soon I suppose.
Thanks a lot again for the encouragement. I will try to upload more posts dear.
Wow awesome dear please write y he second part it’s amazing superb fabulous sssss
Thank uh sooooo much Divy.
Part 2 will come very soon.Stay tuned dear!
Brilliant … Amazing… The way Kabir trust Sanchi was very heart touching … Plz post the next pay of this OS if possible… Will love to read further… It will be really interesting to know what happened next…
Thank uh soooo much Jessi dear !
I am soooo happy that u liked this.
And yeah the sequel to this OS has already been posted by our OS Queen Trisha. You may read that to know what happened next.
I assure u u would love the sequel.
Anaa dear, first of all kaan pakadke sorry for late comments…………..but dear, ye kya tha!!!!! u just left me awestruck with this os………….tussi toh bade kamaal ke writer ho………..luv u yaar…………
Its okay my dear. I can understand
(Well my phone’s ‘shift’ wasn’t working yesterday so I also couldn’t comment in many ffs) and u need not apologize. U know sissies don’t say sorry to each other coz u know there exists heart to heart connection.
Aur ye to sirf ek OS thi tumhare creativity aur talent ki ek bohot hi nanhi si chhoti behen.
Luv uh a lot. Loads of hugs and kisses for u. π
Please update the 2nd part…I an waiting…
Awww…the part 2 has been already uploaded by our OS Queen Trisha139
You may read it to know what happened further.