Hlewwwwwww…..
Shona here…. i knw..u must me thinking again me wd same os but…. actually dat was incomplete story u knw dat…. but i post it incomplete…. don’t be confuse ek to story phle se hi incomplete above dat mene post bhi incomplete hi ki….. by mistake…. dat h how it all started twinj first meeting nd a lot of thinks r der in diz complete os…. how der relation started…. n all n all…. so i request u all plz read it…. vo by mistake half post hua yrr…. sorry for dat…. but plz read it nd do comments…. shatakshi sameera angita anamika ishq forever purnima sidmin…. sorry for half posting dears but i really want u all to read diz nd dn comments….
Twinkle POV
Oh god i don’t wanna marry dat guy…. y everybody is behind me…. yaa i meet him he is nyc…. but i don’t knw smthng is going wrong…. my family told me dat they won’t fix diz marriage without my will…. but they r pressurising me though it is indirectly but they want diz marriage happen…. nd dat guy wait…. what’s his name…. yaa pushpendra bhalla….. eeeeeehhhhh…. what d type of name it is….
Her thoughts was break by her elder sister mahi (she is engaged already)
Mahi: y r u not saying yes 4 marriage twinkle…. pushpendra is very nyc guy…. they r very rich nd he is handling his family business as well as his mba studies…. d only thing is dat he is not good looking…. lyk ur favourite sidhant gupta…. but he is very well mannered nd very nyc…. i knw somewhere u r saying no bcoz of kunj right…. y don’t u forget him…. all are over twinkle….
Twinkle(irritated): first of all don’t compare my cute sidhant wd dat eww pushpendra plzzz…. nd d second thing is dat der is nothing btwn me nd kunj which got over…. i told u before also it’s just some connection i felt wd him nothing else….
Mahi: nd wht about dat pushpendra…. y r u saying nooo….
Twinkle: di…. he is nyc…. his family is nyc…. nd yaa as u say they r very rich also…. everything is soo perfect with dat pushpendra…. except his name nd his looks…. he is perfect…. but di how can sm1 be soo perfect…. okay i accept diz he is exceptional he is perfect…. but u knw wht i don’t want a perfect guy di…. with his perfection he is so simple so bhola bhala typs…. i m fun loving nd he is very sincere…. he is my opposite…. how will i marry him….
Mahi: twinkle ur kundli is matched wd him…. nd it matched by 31.5 out of 36…. or punditji himself told dat both d girl nd boy r same…. der thinking der likes dislikes r almost same….
Twinkle: it is not same di…. y r u not understanding me…. what i want…. okay fine say yes to all….(after soo much discussion) i m ready…. if u all want dn it’s okay….
Mahi gets very happy nd told d news to whole family….
Twinkle goes nd opens her diary nd starts to write….
I m only 18 now…. my mom dad said dat they want me to engage now but they will do my marriage only after 5 years…. i said yes not bcoz i want diz relation…. nooo nvr…. i said yes for my family…. i remember my mom’s word dat in future if i didn’t find such a nyc guy nd nyc family dn…. i knw i admitt dat they r nyc…. dat is d only reason of saying yes…. my family think dat i m regreting only bcoz i want sidhant gupta…. oh god m not stupid…. he is 9 years elder dn me…. i don’t want sidhant gupta but i want some1 who is not whole but a little lyk my sidhant…. nd yaa i can’t deny diz fact dat i find kunj lyk my sidhant…. kunj is my father’s cousin dat is my uncle (surjeet) uncle’s cousin…. confusing naa…. i knw very confusing…. but in simple words he is my uncle’s cousin… don’t think he is very old…. he is only 2 or 3 years elder dn me…. i still remember our first meeting though it was not an actual meeting….
My first meeting with kunj
I have a very big family my grandfather has 6 brother…. u think dat each nd every brother has der own family…. now think kitniiiiii bdiiii family ho gyi…. a day surjeet uncle decided to celebrate his son’s birthday in our village as we all live in amritsar…. all leave for bhatinda from train…. my first meeting wd kunj is in dat train…. we live 2 days together in bhatinda wd d whole family…. but didn’t notice eo…. smtyms we felt eo presence but didn’t think much about it as we both r busy with our cousins nd friends….
Dat tym unfortunately i didn’t notice him dat much…. but in dat journey his sister(elder sis) becomes my very good friend…. bcoz we were studied in same school…. yaa i didn’t knw dat she was my senior…. but whn we came to knw dat…. we talk non stop abt our school…. we share a good bond…. after dat journey days passes nd i forgot all diz…. dn one day surjeet uncle came home…. though he came many tym not many tyms i think daily bcoz he is my father’s yonger bro as well as good friend…. he respects my dad nd mom…. but dat day whn he came my mom ask him about Sarnas nd kunj for me…. bcoz just lyk he respect my dad…. he respects his mama i.e. kunj’s father…. surjeet uncle is vry close to my family as well as kunj’s family…. luckyly i hear their conversation…. dat my mom likes kunj for me….
She close her diary nd smiles remembering….
Flashback
Twinkle hears der convo….
Twinkle: now who d hell is diz kunj…. i meet him before also buttt…. oh god i didn’t notice him dat much….
Days passes twinkle forgot abt kunj nd one day surjeet came to her home….
Twinkle: uncle whts d plan of diz vacations…. where we r going…. ummm…. gujrat….
Surjeet: hmmm…. gujrat is nyc…. but nxt tym diz tym we r planning for jungle….
Twinkle gets confused nd thinks”y jungle…. nothing is in d jungle”
Leela: twinkle go to ur room….
Twinkle: but….
Rt: go beta…. we wanna talk….
Twinkle(sadly): okay…. (she leaves)
Surjeet,rt nd leela talks smthng…. or i can say they planned to make twinj see eo….
Twinkle is in her room at night before they r leaving for jungle trip….
Twinkle: my god y m i feeling smthng strange…. smthng fishy…. jungle trip is full of adventure y my parents want to go der…. i knw they r not adventure typ they lyk holy places….. y jungle….
At morning around 7 am
(Mahi is not der she leaves for her studies to her grandfather/mother in delhi nd bubbly is der who is rt’s (real) bro’s daughter)
A horn beeps outside der home…. twinkle goes to d balcony nd sees a mini bus…. twinkle goes down….
Twinkle: mom surjeet uncle came wd a mini traveller…. (surjeet comes)
Surjeet: twinkle u r ready naa take diz picnic basket nd sit in d bus…. ur aunty, chinki(surjeet’s daughter) nd all r in d bus we r coming wd remaining stuffs…. go…. (she nods nd leaves)
As she enters in d bus her legs got stuck…. she sees a tall nd handsome boy in d back seat looking at her only….
Twinkle think~
Is he kunj…. yaa…. he is…. oh god is he also coming wd us…. i m feeling lyk leaving diz bus immediately nd go back to my home sweet home….
Her thoughts break by her dad who is came from her behind nd sees kunj’s mom….
Rt: mami…. kese ho aap…. (how r u)
Yaa he calls mami bcoz she is his bro cum friend’s (surjeet)mami…. nd she is elder also….
Chinki: come twinkle sit naa….
Twinkle: yaa….
Anita(surjeet’s wife): twinkle u didn’t noticed me….
Bubbly: dii i will sit with u only….
Priya(chinki’s younger sis equal to bubbly i.e. of12-13 age): di u didn’t smile at me….
Ishaan(5years): di u forgot me….
All r questioning her no all r teasing her nd she only manages to smile kunj smiles seeing all diz…. kunj goes nd sit to d above seat nd all d kids wd twinkle nd chinki sits in back seat(lyk a mini bed) they leaves
Chinki started talking with kunj…. as der bond r amazing….
Twinkle thinks~
Oh god 2 days trip…. wht d hell i m doing here…. i m feeling bore…. nd diz chinki…. she is my sis cum bestiee…. nd see lgi hui h apne bhai no no uncle k sath….
Kunj is chinki’s uncle according to d relation but chinki calls him bhai…. as kunj is only 3 years elder dn her…. kunj nd chinki r talking suddenly chinki says….
Chinki: lets play antakshari….
Bubbly: okay but i m in twinkle di’s team….
Chinki: okay kunj bhaiya is in my team….
Chinki divided every1 in 2 teams…. (only ladies nd kids nd kunj)
Twinkle POV
All started singing songs…. but i didn’t sing any…. though i m a leader of my team…. but they r singing old songs…. i don’t knw old songs…. nd i don’t lyk cheating also…. just look at diz kunj…. he is singing by checking his playlist…. my mom told him to “no cheating kunj” but wait what he reply”chlta h bhabhi”…. wht wht wht…. bhabhi…. he called my mom bhabhi…. stupid guy…. all r forcing me to sing…. yaa except kunj…. i must say he is also a big mobile addictor just lyk me…. he is not leaving his mobile for a second…. now m thankful atlast they stoped der antakshari…. but diz chinki didn’t she stay quite for smtym…. now wht she wanna say….
Chinki(to every1): jungle m soo excited…. nd specially at night it seems lyk happens in horror movies….
Anita: stop it chinki…. ur horror movies…. nd ur scary talks….
Chinki: oh mom i m just saying…. (to kunj) kunj bhaiya say…. u r also scared of horror shows nd movies….
Usha: wht he say chinki…. he is also scared of all diz things…. he didn’t even watch it….
Kunj: it’s not lyk dat…. m not scared i just don’t lyk it…. me nd di used to watch together fear files but after her marriage…. i don’t lyk to watch alone….
Chinki: y don’t u simply tell dat u r scared of all diz….
Twinkle POV
As chinki says diz…. every1 started laughing me also nd kunj seeing diz gives death look to chinki…. oh my poor chinki…. but really he is scared of diz things…. hahaahaha…. i m girl dn also i m not scared of diz things nd look at diz kunj…. be a man kunj…. anyways after all diz we reaches to jungle but wait we only reaches jungle…. der is an aashram in btwn d jungle at d middle…. we planned to stay der as we r not wd our friends but wd our parents…. nd now kunj is also wd us i.e. on back seat yaa he is just near me but he is maintaining a distance…. ahaan gentleman…. though we r in d jungle but we didn’t look outside for a while chinki is talking about sm novels nd kunj nd me r listening her…. but my dad nd uncle didn’t lyk it….
Surjeet: stop ur talkings…. look at d view outside….
Rt: yes we r not in city…. see d jungle outside….
Twinkle POV
Wht our parents want from us…. see d jungle really…. der is nothing in d jungle…. but wait…. kunj turns nd looks outside…. really he wanna see a jungle…. but he forget dat as he turns he is facing me he is looking outside only…. he didn’t even look at me…. now i m also looking outside…. nd wait y m i feeling dat he is looking at…. though i didn’t look at him once but m dam sure he is looking at me…. uffff now diz butterflies…. stupid stop flying in my stomach…. god…. my heart nooo it is not beating fastly but i think it is dancing inside…. within no tym i looked at him to stop all d things running inside me…. nd yes i m right he is looking at me only…. but as i looked him he looks away…. huhhh wht he want…. anyways we reaches aashram…. ohhh it is not aashram it is horror aashram really no one is der…. except d owner of dat aashram…. as we reaches all puts der bag in d aashram nd starts to go smwhere… i asked my mom….
Twinkle: where we r going mom….
Leela: to take a bath at waterfall….
Really waterfall m excited…. after all d mens it’s tym for ladies to do some fun in waterfall…. trust me i m really scared of waterfall swimming pools nd all diz but look at diz yrr soo preety view…. as all mens go up…. ladies goes in d fall but i m standing on a big stone preventing myself from all diz…. chinki held my hand nd drag me in d water…. i shout…. yaa i shout…. bcoz m half in d water nd i m feeling lyk i m gonna slip…. but usha aunty held my hand…. nd smile at me i also smile back…. nd look up…. yaa i m feeling right kunj is looking at me…. he always look at me wd no expression…. oh god…. i held his mom’s hand not his hand y he is looking lyk dat…. but as he looks i remember d vivah movie dat song milan abhi adha adhura h nd d jharna scene…. oh god i m too filmy naa…. but he moves from der…. after dat we all again goes to aashram…. it is lyk we r in d other planet bcoz our phones stop working…. all d phones stops nd we put dm in our bag bcoz no use of dm now nd to make us feel more adventures d lights r also not der in d jungle…. urghhh…. yaa but from solar system some light r der…. which d owner permit us to use…. but diz kunj huhhh how much he loves his phone he is putting it on charging from solar energy…. uffff he is disgusting…. but wait…. his phone is not responding him…. hahaahaha dagabaaz phone…. only one room is in dat aashram nd a big courtyard all d kids nd ladies sleep in d room nd mens r in courtyard…. in my left bubbly slept nd in right kunj’s mom haha…. yes kunj’s mom…. but no1 slept d whole night except chinki yes she slept lyk she is in her bed but in reality no bed only floor…. as sun rises sm gets up sm not…. i get up but kunj is still sleeping or may be lying…. nd chinki she is sleeping peacefully…. as sun shines all got up…. m excited for waterfall again…. but diz tym not waterfall we gone to a brook…. yes a brook…. all d mens r far from d ladies in d river but kunj is with us he is enjoying really he is looking at his mom she is a good swimmer…. omg but he is looking cute…. i m just looking at him…. whn chinki said smthng to him nd he said….. wait…. wht he said “ldkiyaa mrti h mujhpe” isn’t he too confident abt diz…. really girls will die for him…. haha…. i was laughing really whn he said…. but he didn’t bother abt dat…. we came out of dat brook nd again goes to d aashram…. oh der is family lyk us but they came in aashram for goddess yaa der is a temple in d aashram…. nd a girl is also in dat family…. don’t knw y but kunj is continusly staring at her nd talking wd chinki about her…. yaa she is cute but i knw i m d bst…. after smtym we gone in d courtyard as we r in d temple…. wait i think d girl is gone her family is also not der…. but it seems chinki want to tell smthng….
Chinki: kunj bhaiya i think dat girl is gone….
Kunj: really oh god….
Chinki: haahaahaa ur jaaneman jaanebhaar jaanedil jaanejigar…
(Kunj cuts her)
kunj(irritated): enough…. umm…. chinki…. isn’t it tooo much….
As he says diz i really felt smthng…. omg he gets irritated by jaaneman jaanejigar etc etc he is not dat he is showing me…. but yaa all i knw is he is not bad…. i like him…. we leaves from der…. we talk a little as he tries smtym but he is not really trying…. nd honestly i don’t want to talk to him…. m not interested yrr….
Flashback ends (u remember twinkle is thinking all diz)
Twinkle again opens her diary nd starts to write….
After dat journey whole day whole night i was thinking abt him only…. i really don’t knw y…. i knw i don’t love him…. but he gave me d feelings people write novels about…. after d trip my parents didn’t talk about dat…. i don’t knw both d families didn’t talk about dat…. may be they r waiting for eo to take first step…. or his family yaa mine family denied for diz relation…. don’t knw but everything which not started yet is over…. though all d relations r still same…. but after dat journey i didn’t meet him again 7-8 months passed…. one day i gone to my relatives marriage…. i still remember i was with my mom suddenly i feel sm1 is gazing at me from side i turned my face to see…. ohh yaa my heart knws diz it’s always kunj…. he is walking nd suddenly stoped for a second seeing me…. we looked at eo…. it was a deep eyelock…. he breaks diz nd goes away…. ohh god his eyes r saying many things i felt dat he want to say smthng but he leaves…. i see him after many months…. i started liking him…. whts happening with me…. i didn’t even thought of meeting him again…. one day surjeet uncle came to invite us for der home innogration…. listening diz every is happy but i m d only one who is hell happy…. i m waiting for d day of innogration…. n yes d day came…. but wait m still not ready…. oh god wht can i wear it’s too confusing…. though my wardrobe is full of latest collections but m confused…. i asked mahi di nd my mom but wait m still in a confusion…. at last my mom picked a red colour long Anarkali salwar suit from my wardrobe…. nd i was like seriously…. salwar suit nd me…. yaa have many suits but i didn’t wear any…. i feel more comfortable in western…. but it seems my mom is miffed with me now…. she orderd me to wear dat suit only…. i have noooo option left…. i wear dat red colour suit nd go to d party…. as soon as i reach der i started searching for kunj nooo i m not my eyes r searching him…. stupid eyes…. atlast i see him…. no i think he purposely came in front of me…. d way he is standing nd talking wd sm1 he is doing all diz purposely…. but wait…. wait…. waaaaaaaiiit…. did u noticed…. he is wearing red shirt…. dat too of same shade which colour suit i m wearing…. oh god wht u exactly want…. wht a great coincidence…. red d colour of love nd we both r in red…. dat means we both r in love…. oh god m too much filmy…. but wait he is ignoring me…. wht d kind of boy he is…. he himself comes in front of me nd dn is ignoring me…. wht he exactly want…. i also have an attitude nd now i don’t care he is here or not…. but my di want to tell me something…. ahaan…. wht she is telling me…. dat kunj is looking at me again nd again…. i knw di…. i knw him…. all d tym he is looking at me…. but i m me i m busy in my fun though i knw dat he is looking at me…. i don’t want to make an eyelock…. but but but but…. now he is looking at smwhere but y nd where…. i looked dat side nd ohh der is a guy looking at me nd kunj is looking at him haha…. wow jealous kunj sarna…. but as sun sets…. my mom said we have to leave now…. haye wait look at d atmosphere d weather soo romantic…. i told my mom dat i m not going in d car…. i’ll go by my scooty…. kunj hears all diz as he is behind me only…. my family(di gramdpa/ma) leaves in d car except my parents was about to leave in another car but my father remembers some work nd he again goes in…. mom nd me r standing outside d house as function is also running der…. Anita aunty comes nd started talking wd my mom…. but i m looking to kunj only he is also looking at me…. he is far from but we both r looking at eo…. he said smthng to his mom nd dad nd started moving towards me…. oOoOoooOoo y he is coming towards me kunj go plz i m wd my mom nd aunty kunjjjjj…. he came nd stands near me he touches my mom nd aunties feet nd says to my aunty”i have to go now” my aunty said its so soon kunj stay here naa nd he said”ystrdy was my paper nd today early i came here i m very sleepy nd tired i wanna go”y aunty says ok nd dn my mom ask kunj how is he “ekdum chkachk(m fine)” ohh god is diz d way to give anwer…. but he is so cute…. he is standing near me…. but he doesn’t even look at me directly…. i accept indirectly he is looking at me only…. but i like him nd i like his everything…. dn after diz talking he leaves sm tym later we also leaves…. 7 months passed but we didn’t meet for a once dat was our last meeting…. hope we meet in future but some questions r still in my mind wht happen to our relation y it didn’t got fixed…. nd nd nd he loves me or not…. love is very far i don’t even knw dat he likes me or not…. let’s leave it to d destiny…. if our fate wants dn we will definately meet sm day…. wait i forgot smthng…. oh how can i forgot diz…. just now i said yes to marry dat pushpendra…. ohhh god so diz my fate wants from me….
Suddenly mahi knocks d door nd she close her diary….
Mahi: u knw twinkle wht happen just now…. mom ask punditji for engagement date but punditji said…. he said it’s better for u to engage two years later…. it will be bad if u engaged now….
Twinkle(happily): really…. dn wht happens nxt….
Mahi: mom talked to pushpendra’s family but they want engagement now…. any how…. sooo mom canceled diz relation…. bcoz they want der son’s marriage soon…. nd we didn’t want u to marry soon…. u r not dat big naaaa….
Twinkle: reallyyyyyy…… i mean ohhhh soooo sad naaa….
Mahi says”dramebaazzzz i knw u r vry happy stop ur acting now” saying diz she leave….
Nd twinkle starts jumping nd dancing in her room…. suddenly kunj strikes in her mind nd she smiles….
The End
Now diz is complete whch i want u to read yaa but still incomplete….. nd yupzz it is my story…. u lyked it or not plzzzz tell me through comments…. plz do comments…. love u all….
16 Comments
Shona loved it I it was very sweet 🙂
Shona it is a request will you read my ff Tashan e revenge to sadda love
Its your story like seriously!???….amazing…loved the start
It was awesome shonaa
Shonaaaaa di..seriously amazing.. And it’s ur story..!!.. U were going to be engaged at the age of 18!!..MATLAB..may ni the last part is your dimag ki Upaj(I dono what it means..but you used it in the previous part..so Maine bhi use kar liya..hehe)..but its really veryyyyy cute…Love u?
Shona
U know…all the time I was smiling becoz at some point of time we all have experienced such cute incidence…. Ya ya I agree me too
N u know I m getting a gut feeling that its ur personal story…. Sorry again.
But I really loved the realistic scenes❤❤❤❤
Awesome. ..loved it… ur story is very cute… really kind of filmy…
plzz update ur ff also.. waiting for it
Wow superbb awesome mind blowing fantastic no words just loved it really it’s ur story ???
Well nice story haa ??????
Loved it
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Amazing yar…..ur story is just fab
Shona. .. It was really too gud.. That connection.. Omg. .It was story of every u and me.. Osum
awesome…..really loved it….
Shona it was really awesome . You know all the time I read flashback my lips was smiling . I was remembering my time . … wel awesome story . And I have read above comments so just wanted to ask .. whether is it really based on your autobiography….
In ends for you. .
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Awesome yaar just too good
omg..thts really awesm……evrythng seemed so real..i mean its real in ur lyf bt ur description ws fab….
it was great!
shonaa amazing yr luvd it pls continue it asap pls w8ing fr it vry eagerly