Hi guys i am here with an os i have not written it but i read this which was very nice hope you all will like it
My husband is an business man by profession, I love him for his steady nature, and I love the warm feeling when I lean against his broad shoulders.
Three years of courtship and now, two years into marriage, I would have to admit, that I am getting tired of it. The reasons of me loving him before, has now transformed into the cause of all my restlessness.
I am a sentimental woman and extremely sensitive when it comes to a relationship and my feelings, I yearn for the romantic moments, like a little girl yearning for candy. My husband, is my complete opposite, his lack of sensitivity, and the inability of bringing romantic moments into our marriage has disheartened me about love.
One day, I finally decided to tell him my decision, that I wanted a divorce.
“Why?” he asked, shocked. “I am tired, there are no reasons for everything in the world!” I answered. He kept silent the whole night, seems to be in deep thought with a lighted cigarette at all times. My feeling of disappointment only increased, here was a man who can’t even express his predicament, what else can I hope from him? And finally he asked me:” What can I do to change your mind?”
Somebody said it right, it’s hard to change a person’s personality, and I guess, I have started losing faith in him. Looking deep into his eyes I slowly answered : “Here is the question, if you can answer and convince my heart, I will change my mind, Let’s say, I want a flower located on the face of a mountain cliff, and we both are sure that picking the flower will cause your death, will you do it for me?” He said :” I will give you your answer tomorrow….” My hopes just sank by listening to his response.
I woke up the next morning to find him gone, and saw a piece of paper with his scratchy handwriting, underneath a milk glass, on the dining table near the front door, that goes…. My dear, “I would not pick that flower for you, but please allow me to explain the reasons further..” This first line was already breaking my heart. I continued reading.
“When you use the computer you always mess up the Software programs, and you cry in front of the screen, I have to save my fingers so that I can help to restore the programs. You always leave the house keys behind, thus I have to save my legs to rush home to open the door for you. You love traveling but always lose your way in a new city, I have to save my eyes to show you the way. You always have the cramps whenever your “good friend” approaches every month, I have to save my palms so that I can calm the cramps in your tummy.
You like to stay indoors, and I worry that you will be infected by infantile autism. I have to save my mouth to tell you jokes and stories to cure your boredom. You always stare at the computer, and that will do nothing good for your eyes, I have to save my eyes so that when we grow old, I can help to clip your nails, and help to remove those annoying white hairs. So I can also hold your hand while strolling down the beach, as you enjoy the sunshine and the beautiful sand… and tell you the color of flowers, just like the color of the glow on your young face… Thus, my dear, unless I am sure that there is someone who loves you more than I do… I could not pick that flower yet, and die.. ”
My tears fell on the letter, and blurred the ink of his handwriting… and as I continue on reading… “Now, that you have finished reading my answer, if you are satisfied, please open the front door for I am standing outside bringing your favorite bread and fresh milk… I rush to pull open the door, and saw his anxious face, clutching tightly with his hands, the milk bottle and loaf of bread….
Now I am very sure that no one will ever love me as much as he does, and I have decided to leave the flower alone…
That’s life, and love. When one is surrounded by love, the feeling of excitement fades away, and one tends to ignore the true love that lies in between the peace and dullness.
Love shows up in all forms, even very small and cheeky forms, it has never been a model, it could be the most dull and boring form.. flowers, and romantic moments are only used and appear on the surface of the relationship. Under all this, the pillar of true love stands and that’s our life.. Love, not words win arguments.
#Pink is the colour of ‘True Love’
So guys do you like it and do comment
56 Comments
Beautiful….
Just speechless
Thanks sanchi
Ohh that’s a very touching story
Thanks gangu
Wat to say……my mouth is sealed by this perfect piece of work…..emotions are coming out but soundless ……..beautiful…..every word is less to praise this os….but would just say that was beyond words……..u nailed it……loved it to the power of infinity…..
Thanks Shivika
No comments as i just my comment cannot justify it’s beauty. …
Thanks ahana
Very touchy
Thanks charitha
Left speechless yaar…
Thanks vinthiya
BEAUTIFUL. … all I could say us ..
I literally, have no words , u left me speechless . Loved it to the core ….
Thanks surbhi
No words to express ..and appreciate your piece of work…..you have expressed your thoughts very clearly and reading it was a awesome feeling ….continue writing. …
Thanks quinn
Speechless awwww beyond the words wonderful OS
Thanks shivika
Superb…. loved it…
Thanks lily
It’s awesome….loved it….
Thanks Nita d
I just want to tell that I need a partner like him….WOW really no words to describe. …mind blowing dude sammaa chancey illa awesome episode. ….
Thanks mitrabrindha
That’s awesome but I wasn’t able to understand it completely. But it was beautifully expressed.
Thanks archisa
Beautiful os
Thanks alekhika
omg !!!!!!!!
my comment is nothing infront of dis beautiful piece of ur work……
lyk seroiosly thouched my heart……. 🙂
keep writing lyk dis dear……..
Thanks Pooja
You have got the best ways of writing . Liked it and wish you will give another one soon 🙂
I’ll definitely try to and thanks
Beautiful story …. Just speechless. Your understanding for relation is just beyond words. Keep writing dear…❤❤❤
Thanks rupali
It is simply beautiful…. Wants more…
Thanks nikita
Shot is perfect and resembles the real love life. Loved it dude. You did an awesome job. Waiting for your next story
Thanks akshaya
It’s awesome. I have no words to tell then awwwwww
Thanks madhu
awesome so cute
Thanks shabnam
Awesome….completely in awwww with this os…loved it…
Thanks Bhavana
Superb
Thanks kerthi
Hey shivikasince2016 thanku 4 bringing this os 2 us n also thanks 2 d anonymous writer who wrote this. It was beyond words.☺☺
welcome Jerry and I read all ur os i just love them and i am waiting for the next one please post the next one ASAP
no words…..
really….
loved it…..
hope u understand unspoken feelings….
Yes I completely did and thanks
This is called plagarism!!!!!! You yourself said at the starting that you didn’t write this, then how can you take credit and prises for the work of someone else??
Don’t you have any self respect? This is actually a crime and can be punishable by law. You aren’t supposed to copy other’s ideas and pass them off as their own. You should have wrote a paragraph saying tht you read this somewhere else and are simply sharing it with others and tht it isn’t your own idea! ufh!
Everybody has read that and took the screen shot of the screen and send it from where i read it and I didn’t took any credit for it and i just said thanks in place of the original author don’t tell me about and i never said that this is my os so keep ur mouth shut
Superb. A perfectly expressed prospective.
Thanks Shruti di
Amazing….Unique….
🙂
Thanks Shivika