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Piya ke Rang, Rang Deeni Odhani: One shot Devakshi (Part 24.2)

Piya ke Rang, Rang Deeni Odhani: One shot Devakshi (Part 24.2)
Hi guys!!! So sorry for the delay!!! This is the second instalment of Part 24!!! The 25th Part shall be extra special with Devakshi marriage and reception!!! Everyone welcome!!!

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Recap:
GKB (Radha Rani): Shall we go now?
Ria: Ji mami…
Neha, Ria and Nikki leave along with GKB
Rabi and Sidhanto who watched everything from outside; stand shocked, with same thought in mind – Was that cone intended for their dear Sona? Should this marriage happen? Is it safe to send Sona to that home?
Rabi and Sidhanto rush to the hall and grab Sharan; taking him to a corner…
Sharan: What’s the matter now?
Rabi: A big problem… ~quickly shares everything about Radha Rani and the mehendi cone~
Sharan: Oh god… It means that our Sona isn’t safe there? Let’s do something! We should stop this wedding…
Sidhanto: Oh my Sharan bro…. There is no FIR filed here… We can’t take action just on a mere suspicion… Hell, there’s no complaint too…
Sharan: So? Should we wait till someone files actual FIR after marriage? We need to be prepared…
Rabi: ~thinking about Neha~ Before we take any action, let’s ask Neha once… I am sure that she suspected mami…
Sharan: Bhai… She’s the married one na? Let’s say she knows and protected our Sona… But she will not be there forever to protect… After Dev babu’s marriage, she will have to go back to her home!
Sidhanto: What about the other sisters? We should ask them, before they leave!
They rush outside

~Outside the venue~
Ishwari: Achcha Bejoyji… We will leave now…
Sharan, Sidhanto and Rabi come out…
Sharan: Oh no… They’re leaving…
Rabi: ~smiling mischievous~ In two cars… Wait!
Sidhanto: Rabi! What’s he going to do…
Driver: ~rushing~ Dev saab… One car is ready to leave… Another car… The tyre is punctured…
Dev: Then change the tyre immediately…
Driver: Saab, I didn’t find the replacement tyre… I am sure it was there… Now, its missing…
GKB (Radha Rani): Hey bhagwan!!!! For what you are receiving salary?? How can you be so irresponsible?
Driver: ~looks sad~ Mujhe maaf kar dijiye memsaab…
Dev: Mami…. Relax…
GKB (Radha Rani): Dev beta, we have so much of work at home…
Rabi: If you people don’t mind, shall I suggest something? The more important people i.e. Dev jiju, aunty, mamiji, Mamaji and Nehaji can go in that big car… Especially mamiji… She’ll need to leave early na? I will get spare tyre for this car… These both ~pointing at Nikki and Ria~ can wait and leave in this car…
GKB (Radha Rani): ~smiles feeling pleased~ Haan… He’s right… I should go home early… I mean we should…
Nikki: ~getting angry~ What do you mean by that? We are not that important?
Rabi: Arey nahi nahi… What I meant is that there will loads of works na? So many preparations have to be done for the rituals… If they go early, they can start the work… You can go later and help… ~smiles mischievous~ ~Rabi’s pov~ That way I can spend more time with you, my Miss Teekhi Mirchi…
Mamaji: Then, we will leave now… Nikki and Ria… Reach home safely… Okay?
Ria: Ji Mamaji…
Sharan: ~whispering to Sidhanto~ Go with driver and delay him as much as possible… Me and Rabi will ask the girls…
Sidhanto: Me? Okay…
Ishwari and others leave in the big car, while Ria and Nikki stay back…
Asha: You guys take care… We will go home too… And finish the preparations…
Sharan: ~nods; signals Sidhanto~ Don’t worry… We will take care…
Bejoy and Asha leave…
Sidhanto: Come driver… We will find the tyre… ~they both leave~
Ria looks around, feels Sharan approaching… Feeling nervous, tries walking away; Sharan grabs her arm…
Ria: What… Why…
Sharan: Ria, right? Listen… I would like to apologize for the manner I spoke to you… I didn’t mean to hurt you… It’s just that…
Ria: It’s okay… Happens… Mind releasing my hand?
Sharan: Sorry… ~Sharan’s pov~ Why do I feel like holding her arm? Never letting go…. Damn, Sharan concentrate~ Ria… I wanted to ask you something… Something very important…
Meanwhile, Nikki looks outside the gate… ~Nikki’s pov~ Stupid driver… Where is he?
Rabi: ~slowly walks from behind, whispers in her ear~ If you are waiting for driver to come soon, I am sorry to tell, he’ll be late… Very late…
Nikki: ~jumps~ Are you crazy? What’s the meaning of whispering like this???? ~tries walking away~
Rabi: ~grabs her arm~ Kahan chali Miss Teekhi Mirchi?
Nikki: ~getting slightly angry~ Let me go… Don’t you have any other work? Other than troubling me?
Rabi: ~smiles mischievous~ I am doing very important work now… ~looking serious~ Ms. Nikki Dikshit, I am here to ask you something very important… Follow me…
Nikki: Important? ~Nikki’s pov~ He must be joking… Chipku Bose…
Rabi: And if you are thinking that I am joking, I am not…
Nikki: ~looking shocked~ Okay… What is it? ~follows him~
Rabi reaches where Sharan – Ria stand…
Ria: Will you tell what’s going on?
Sharan: Listen… I will ask one simple question… I need straight answer… Is everyone at your home happy with Dev and Sona’s marriage?
Ria: Of course they are… Otherwise, this marriage won’t be happening?
Sharan: Is there anyone who isn’t happy, wants to stop this marriage; irrespective of what measure they take to do it?
Nikki: Why are you asking so many questions?
Rabi: Please Ms. Dikshit… We need to know… Because, what we saw is completely different… Your mami tried applying harmful mehendi to my Sona, through the mehendi lady… Thanks to your Neha di… Sona is safe… We want to know what’s going on there…
Sharan: And if our Sona’s life is threatened there, we will stop this marriage… Right here! We don’t our sis to be harmed in anyway…
Ria: ~looking shocked~ Please don’t stop this marriage… Yes… Neha di told us… That mami is trying to stop this marriage… We don’t know why…
Nikki: That’s why we are trying to ensure that this marriage happens smoothly… We love Sona di… She always has taken care of us… She’s like my best friend… And our bhaiyya loves her a real lot… Please don’t stop this marriage…
Sharan: Why didn’t you tell this to anyone? Why didn’t you warn mamiji? You could’ve atleast told your mom or Mamaji…
Ria: Well… Our mami is expert in twisting things… Besides, if she knew that we know about her plans, she might get cautious and might plan something big… Since she doesn’t know that we know about her plans, she’s not very careful… We are able to keep any eye on her…
Rabi: Very khatarnak mami… What does she have against our Sona?
Nikki: Sona di… I mean Sona Bhabhi is very straightforward… Once or twice she has rubbed our mami on wrong side… From then, she has been like this…
Ria: moreover, we are youngsters in the family… Who will listen to us? They will think that we are bluffing… Worst case scenario, they will scold us for being disrespectful… However, she is, she’s our mami after all…
Nikki: Please trust us… We won’t let anything happen to Sona di… I mean Bhabhi… Please don’t stop this marriage…
Sharan: Alright… But…. Okay… Give me your phones…
Ria: Why?
Sharan: Relax… I am not going to steal your secrets… We will feed our numbers in both of your phones… Any emergency, you can contact us…
Ria: Okay ~hands him her phone~
Rabi: ~smiling sweetly~ Your phone… Ms. Teekhi Mirchi?
Nikki: Don’t call me that! ~gives her phone~ Ria di… Zaroori hai?
Ria: They’re right… We don’t know what else can happen… It’s better to have a backup… ~takes her phone back~
Nikki: ~snatches her phone back; changes Rabi’s name to Mr. Chipku~ Fine then… If there’s emergency, we will call… We won’t give our numbers…
Rabi: ~shakes head innocently~ As you say Madam… ~Rabi’s pov~ Too bad Ms. Teekhi Mirchi… I already gave missed call to my number… And saved it…
Sidhanto arrives with driver who quickly changes the tyre…
Ria: Okay… We are leaving now… Take care ~gazes at Sharan; nods~
Nikki: Bye! ~turns away from Rabi~
Both leave
Rabi smiles softly; putting hands in his pockets…
Sidhanto: What happened?
Sharan and Rabi quickly share everything…
Sidhanto: Good… Let’s see what happens!

Next day
~Haldi Ceremony~
~Dev’s home – Kitchen~
GKB enters; sees the bowl of haldi…. She looks around and mixes some powder in one bowl…
~GKB’s pov~ Aha… See, when they apply this haldi… Dev will feel itchy and will wash before everyone can apply… That will be abshagun and the marriage will be stopped ~smiles~
Ria: ~watches GKB mixing something~ Mami!!! What are you doing here? We are searching for you there…
GKB (Radha Rani): Haan… I just came in to check if haldi is ready…~goes out in hurry~
Ria: ~smiling to herself~ Neha di!!! Come fast…
Neha: Ria, what is it?
Ria: ~points to the bowl on the table~ This is the tampered haldi…. Mami mixed something in it…
Neha: ~shakes her head~ Good job Ria!!!And now… ~takes out the turmeric to grind~
Nikki: ~enters~ Neha di! Ria di!!! What are you doing?
Neha: Nikki! Keep this bowl separately there… I am making fresh haldi for Bhai….
Nikki: Why?
Ria: Mami! Tampered this mehendi…
Nikki: ~hits her head~ She’s troubling our bhaiyya too now… Shall I throw this away?
Neha: ~smiling mischievous~ No… It is reserved for a special person!!!
~Dev’s home – Hall~
Ishwari: Kichu, is everything ready? We need to start the haldi…. Dev… Come beta…
Dev feels excited and sits
Neha comes out with the bowl; signals Ria… Ria nods…
Ishwari: ~calls an elderly lady to start~ Dev… ~smiles~
GKB watches
Ishwari: Bhabhi, you apply now…
GKB (Radha Rani): ~puts fake smile on~ Ji… jiji… ~applies haldi~
Next Ishwari applies…
Dev: ~as Ishwari applies haldi~ Ma… Why do grooms need to apply haldi too?
Mamaji: I will tell that… So that guys can look handsome beside the beautiful bride!
Dev: Really? Then why only face, arms and feet? ~tries removing the cloth covering his torso~ Why don’t you apply all over my body? ~looks mischievous~
Ishwari: Dat… Badmash!
Nikki, Ria and Neha come out…
Neha: I will apply now! ~sits and keeps the tampered bowl beside the good one; signals Ria; hides the good bowl~
Ria: Wait di! ~nods; slowly takes the tampered bowl~ I want to apply for the most beautiful lady here… Mami… Shall I apply for you?
Nikki: Haan… Even Rabi told you are so beautiful…
GKB (Radha Rani): Arey… Nahi… Nahi… ~GKB’s pov~ Why isn’t it affecting Dev? How will I say yes to this?
Ria: Mami… Please!
Mamaji: Radha… Maan jao na…
GKB (Radha Rani): Since you are telling so much, okay… ~GKB’s pov~ Guess that stupid fellow didn’t give correct powder… Anyhow Dev is fine, I can let them apply
Nikki: Yes!!!
Ria and Nikki take betel leaf and apply haldi on both cheeks and arms of GKB…
Nikki: ~clapping happily~ Everyone will think that it’s mami’s haldi today!
GKB (Radha Rani): ~looking pleased~ Nikki! Tum bhi… ~GKB’s pov~ Why do I feel slightly itchy?
Mamaji: Nikki beta… Now I have seen how your mami would have looked during her haldi!!
Dev: ~smiles brightly~ Mami toh A1 hai! ~Dev’s pov~ I wonder how my Sona looks…
GKB (Radha Rani): ~gasps~ Kya aap bhi! ~starts scratching a little; tries to stand straight~
Ria: Kya hua mami? Is everything okay?
GKB (Radha Rani): Haan… Haan… I will come back… ~GKB’s pov~ What is this? Why do I feel so itchy? Dev is alright… How can this happen?
GKB rushes to her room
Neha and Ria smiles as Nikki does thumbs up! All 3 quickly apply haldi…
Dev takes out his phone…

~Sona’s home~
Asha: Bejoy… See our Shona… She’s looking so beautiful today… ~goes and puts kajal teeka under Sona’s ear~
Bejoy: Of course! She got her good looks from me…
Asha: No way! Look at her eyes… She has received beautiful eyes from me…
Dadi: No… You both are wrong… In beauty’s department, she inherited my beauty! And brains from her dadaji…
Sona: ~smiling brightly; hugs her dadi from behind~ Shochi dadi!!
Bejoy: Ma!
Dadi: ~smiling mischievous~ Let’s start gaye holud (Haldi) function now…
Everyone apply haldi on Sona…
Sharan, Rabi and Sidhanto watch everything and smile
Sharan: ~whispering to Rabi~ Do you think that mami would have tried something?
Rabi: I hope not… Anyway, the girls would have managed it… ~thinks about Nikki; smiles to himself~
Sharan: True… I am sure of it… ~dreams of Ria’s smile; smiles peacefully~
Sidhanto: How can you both be so sure?
Sharan and Rabi: We are sure! Ria – Nikki will take care…
Sidhanto: Achcha… ~Sidhanto’s pov~ Why do I feel that love’s in air…
Suddenly phone beeps
Sona tries taking phone… Elena grabs it quickly…
Sona: Elena! Give my phone!!
Elena: No… Not today!! ~checks the message~ OOOHHH A message from jiju!!!! ~shakes the phone near Sona’s face~
Sona: ~tries grabbing~ Elena!!! Give it here!!! ~tries getting up~
Asha: Arey re… No getting up! The function hasn’t completed yet!!!
Sona: Ma… Dekho na… She isn’t giving the phone!
Elena: Hai hai… So desperate???? Shaadi se pehle yeh haal hai, toh shaadi ke baad kya hoga!! ~gives her phone~ Take it my darling Sona!!!
Sona: ~reads the message~ “Very eager to see your haldi pics…. Send photos please ~with heart eyes~
Sona smiles and takes photo; sends Dev
~Dev’s home~
Dev’s phone beeps
Dev: ~opens the phone; sees the images~ ~Dev’s pov~ Not fair Sona!!! You sent images of haldi bowls!!!!
~reads the message~ Patience Mr. Obodhro ~kisses~
Dev shakes his head smiling…
~In the evening~
Everyone get ready for the marriage… Ishwari looks proudly at her Dev
GKB sneaks into Ishwari’s room
~Ishwari’s room~
GKB opens a box and sees mangalsutra…. ~GKB’s pov~ My last two plans failed; this time I will succeed… ~slowly tries removing~
Nikki: ~gazing at GKB; enters suddenly~ Mami!! You are here!!! I am searching you everywhere…
GKB (Radha Rani): ~feels shocked; drops the box~ I was just checking… If everything is present here… ~grabs the box, places among the other jewels~ Why are you asking?
Nikki: Mami… See, I am so confused… Which jewellery to wear? Which one matches with my dress? Only you have knowledge regarding this…
GKB (Radha Rani): ~feeling relieved~ Let’s go… I will tell you….
GKB rushes out with Nikki….
Ishwari comes in and takes away all the jewellery boxes to be given to the bride and leaves the room…
~Dev’s home~
Ishwari: Let’s leave now…
Nikki: ~excited~ Yes!!!
Everyone leave the home…
The baraat has left!!!
~Sona’s home~
Sona: ~gazes at herself in the mirror~ I am waiting Mr. Obodhro…
Sona smiles brightly
~Dev’s home – Ishwari’s room~
The mangalsutra has fallen near bed…

Oh no!!! The mangalsutra is at home… And the baraat is on the way!
What will happen next!!!
Guys!!!! Next part is the mahaepisode!!! I am touching quarter of century now!!!
P.S. Sorry for delaying Devakshi marriage so much!!!
Comments please!!!! (Even the silent readers!!!)

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