HEY GUYS…THNK U FOR ALL UR COMMENTS…
HI SHANAYA…LISTEN TO ME…SABA POSTED SWASAN FF BUT ONLY UPTO EPI 16 AND SHE STOPPED WRITING…SHE LEFT EVEN BEFORE THE MID OF STORY…AND I M WRITING THE STORY ON MY OWN…AS FOR SWASAN FF WHICH U R TALKING ABOUT WAS A STORY TAKEN FROM NOVEL AND IT IS ALSO FROM THE SAME NOVEL BUT WITH A LITTLE CHANGES…AND EVEN IT IS A HOLLYWOOD MOVIE STORY…WHICH I HAVE READ AND WATCHED…ITS UPTO U THAT U FIND IT WORTHY OR NOT AS I AM WRITING ON MY OWN….WISH SABA WOULDNT HAVE STOPPED THEN U WOULDNT HAVE COMPLAINED…IF U R NOT LIKING IT I WONT FORCE U TO READ OR COMMENT BUT AT LEAST U HAVE NO RIGHT TO BASH …. KINDLY FORGIVE ME IF IT HURT YIU BUT I HAD TO CLEAR UR MISUNDERSTANDING…….
RECAP: sher finds that shraddha knows his truth
TODAY:
shraddha goes to room and panicks
shraddha:damn u shraddha,,,what was the need to open ur mouth?but wts my fault…he just tricked me…ahan,,,wt do i do?
she goes to bed and pretends to sleep
after half an hour sher comes there and she still is pretending .
shraddha thinks he will again be rude but instead sher sits by her side,holds her hand and kisses her forehead
sher:open ur eyes i know u are awake
shraddha opens her eyes
sher half leans on bed and shraddha hugs him and he caresses her hair
shraddha:i thought u would be angry on me
sher;no i m not
shraddha:really?
sher:hmm
shraddha:and akira
sher:shraddha…if u wanted to know about my past then u should have asked me
shraddha:u were already so tensed so…
sher:its not fair shraddha…u r my wife u should have asked me…
shraddha:did u ever give me a wife’s right?
sher:wt do u mean?i give everything to u shraddha
shraddha:no sher…i still feel incomplete bcz i want u
sher:shraddha ….i m hollow man,,,i cant give u anything
shraddha keeps her finger on his lips
shraddha:sshhh….will u give me some promises?
sher:what?
shraddha:promise me that u will nver leave me…promise me that u will stay with me till the end just the way u r….promise me no other woman will take place in ur life except me….promise me that…
sher sees shraddha’s tears and becomes emotional and before she could say further he places his lips on hers and kisses her immensely and she too responds back
they depart
sher:al promises accepted
shraddha hugs him
shraddha holds his hand and starts playing with his fingers
YEH MOH MOH K DHAAGE
TERI UNGLIYON SE JA ULJHE
KOI H TOH NA LAGE
KIS TRHA GIRHA YE SULJHE
HAI ROM ROM IK TARA
JO BADLAUN MEIN SE GUZRE
YE MOH MOH K DHAGE
REI UNGLIYON SE JA ULJHE
KOI TOH TOH NA LAGE
KIS TRHA GIRHA YE SULJHE……
sher kisses her fingers and feels them and shraddha shuts her eyes.they have an eyelock.sher keeps his other hand on her waist and shraddha kisses him on cheek by one side cupping his face and sher shuts his eyes.he makes her lie properly and caresses her cheek and smiles.he romances her neck and bits it hard and she moans his name which drives him crazy and both make love by tucking themselves under blanket…..
next day both wake up and sher sees shraddha
sher thinks:again u made me lose my control….the more i try to keep distance the more i have ur hangover…
two days pass
at morning sher tells shraddha about the party
shraddha:ok
sher:what happened
shraddha:family?
sher:i have informed ur parents
shraddha:can i call someone too
sher:who?
shraddha:ur mom and mama ji
sher looks at her
sher:why
shradha:why can i?after all i m ur wife and i have a right too
sher smiles
sher:fine
#shraddha:really?
sher:yes
shraddha higs him
sher thinks:i know they will not come….they know i will lose my control if it happens…
sher leaves
at afternoon akira knocks at door
akira:shraddha i need help
shraddha:yeah?
akira:sher is not talking to me since two days as i told u his truth…oh God its been two days…wht do i do?
shraddha gives her water
shraddha:dont worry i will talk to him
akira:i know he wont agree,,,he is very egoistic and ziddi guy…
akira gives back the glass…….
akiraL:so he has to come now
shraddha:who?
akira:rony…
shraddha:rony?who is he
akira:my son…
shraddha is shocked
shraddha:u have a son?
akira:yes he is actually our son…rony is son of mine and sher
shraddha is hell shocked and drops the glass on floor….
next epi: shraddha is beaten