Hii guys, happy to see u all again ?…..Thanks for waiting……here we go for the next part…..
Recap: Shanaya is hired by Bhavri as her goon.
TODAY:
Shanaya comes to Bhavri’s haveli with Shamsher……
Lallan sees her and fumes…..he approaches them…..he stands near Shamsher at points at Shanaya….. Shanaya too is a bit vexed to see him.
Lallan: Bhaiyya ji!! Isine humko maara! Ab aap ise saza do…..
Shamsher looks irritatedly at him and Shanaya smiles wickedly at him…..
Shamsher: Isne tumko maara??
Lallan: Haa…..isine….
Shamsher gives a blow on the backside if Lallan’s head….. Shanaya giggles…
Shamsher: Achha hai maara….
Lallan: Par….
Another blow…..
Shamsher: Tumhe sidhi baat samaj mein nahi aati na…..isliye….
Another blow …..
Shamsher: Ladkiyo ko chhedne mein maza aata hai na tumko….
He goes to give another one…..
Lallan: Bud bus bhaiyya ji, sorry…..aage se aisa nahi hoga…..
Shamsher: Hoga hi nahi, aaj se ye aaji amma ke liye kaam karegi……tamiz se pesh aana…..
Lallan widens his eyes: YE!!
Shamsher: Koi problem hai??
Lallan: Nahi!! Bilkul nahi….
And he runs away…..
Shamsher: All of them are a bit empty from top…..I hope u will manage….
Shanaya: Yes I will….
Shamsher nods and looks down……
Shamsher: Come, Aaji amma must be waiting inside….
Scene 2:
Shernaya go inside the haveli…..
Bhavri: Aa gayi tum…..achha hai…..iska samaan upar ke kamre mein rakh do…..
Munna: Yaha ka kaam sikh sakogi tum?
Bhavri eyes munna…..he keeps quiet……
Shanaya tells confidently: Hamare liye kuch mushkil nahi he, ham sab kar lege……
At this, Bhavri eyes her in her goon way ( as she used to with Shraddha ) she turns to Shanaya …..
She stares in her eyes…..
Bhavri: Itna bharosa hai apne aap par?
Shanaya: Aazma ke toh dekhiye…..
Bhavri: Toh phir theek hai…..jara ham bhi dekhe, kitna dam he tumme……
Shanaya holds up her head in pride…..
Bhavri: Lekin agar haar gayi toh?
Arjun: Aaji amma jaane do na …..
Bhavri eyes him too and he keeps quiet……
Shanaya reminisces her Nani Maa telling her in the room…..
Nani maa: Bhavri mein bahut ghamand hai Shaani, uss ghamand ke aage jhukna mat…..
Bhavri: Haa toh hum kaha the? Agar tum haar gayi toh?
Shanaya: Toh hame waise hi aukat se rakhna …..
Bhavri gets impressed……she nods and turns to leave…..
Shanaya: Lekin agar hum jeet gaye toh??
Bhavri stops,
Munna thinks: Is ladki mein toh bahut jigar hai…..kahi jijji ko ye Munmun se bhi achhi na lag jae….
Bhavri turns to Shanaya, she nears her and stares at her fierce eyes…..
Bhavri: Jo mangogi milega….
Shanaya smiles, Bhavri and Munna go away…..
Arjun: See Shanaya, it’s really not easy to work here……
Shanaya: Its ok arjun. I’ve handled worse than this…..I’ll manage it…..
Shamsher: I just hope u don’t repent….
Shanaya: Hmm…..
Scene 3:
Maid shows Shanaya her room……
Shanaya: What’s ur name?
Maid: Bijouria…..
Shanaya smiles: Since when u work here?
Bijouria: four years….
Shanaya: Hmm…..ok, so will u help me whenever I need u? Wanna be friends?
Bijouria: Ok madam…..
Shanaya: No, call me jijji…..
Bijouria: Ok…..
A servant comes in….
Shanaya: Yes?
Servant: Bhavri devi ne bulaaya hai ….test ke liye…..15minutes ke baad niche aa jaana…..
Shanaya gets alarmed: Yaa, okay…..
Shanaya thinks: She’s so up to the point…..I need to be careful
Bijouria: Which test jijji?
Shanaya: U just see…..u will know….
Scene4:
Bhavri and others were all down at the backyard…..she was sitting on her chair and there was a ring circle marked with chalk on the ground…..
Shamsher: Ye kya hai aaji amma?
Bhavri: Shanaya ka imtehaan. Jara hun bhi tasalli kar le, ki ye kitni takatwar hai …..
Arjun gets a hint as to what will happen …..he just hopes good for Shanaya……
Bhavri thinks: Hum dekhna chahate hai Shraddha, tumhaara ye naya roop…..
Shanaya meanwhile comes……she is wearing a dark blue skinny jeans and a plain black short sleeve top…..
Bhavri: Tyaar ho….
Shanaya nods…..
Bhavri: Ye dekh rahi ho …
She points to that circle…..Everybody looks…..
Bhavri: Tumhe ladna hai, lekin agar iske bahar gayi, to haar gayi….
Everyone are shocked as to how a slim girl will fight…..
Shamsher thinks: U shouldn’t have been so confident Shanaya…..
Bhavri: Sharte toh yaad hai na..?
Shanaya: Haa…..hum tayyar hai….
Bhavri: Hand me ur guns…..
Shanaya hands her gun to Bhavri….
She enters the circle…..
Munna and Munmun too watch….
Munmun: Daddu, ab to iski chhutti…..
Munna: Bus tamasha dekho….
Bhavri: Chalo! Khel shuru karo!!
A man comes forth in the ring…. Shanaya gets ready….
Everybody watch with interest …..
Bhavri and Munna are eager to see her fight while Arjun and Shamsher want her to return safely….
The match starts….
The man runs toward Shanaya and lifts his hand to hit her…..but she strongly catches his hand and gives it a sharp twist, and blows him off his head…..
Bhavri and Munna are damn shocked as they couldn’t believe their eyes…..they can just imagine Shradhha fighting with the goons …..
Bhavri: Ab sab saath aao…..
Six men come towards her…..
Shanaya fights with each one, giving kicks, punches, boxes and fracturing some….
Munna and Munmun are irritated to see her win…..
Shanaya gets some wounds and is tired….
The last and strongest of the goons come…..
Shanaya tries to defeat him…..but he overpowers her……he catches her head and tucks it on the ground…..with Shanaya trying hard to get off…..
Munna and Munmun are happy, Shamsher and Arjun are tensed…..Bhavri had mixed feelings….
Goon: It’s all u can do?
Shanaya struggles to get free….
Munna: Jijji, she lost…..
Shanaya shouts: No, I didn’t accept defeat….
Bhavri watches with interest….
Man laughs: Aurat hoke kya samaj rahi thi apne aapko?…..
Shanaya fumes….
Shanaya: Kya kaha saale…..
She scratches his hand with her sharp nails…..he takes away his hand in pain….
She now gets up…..hits him many times on his head, bangs his head against the floor…..
Everybody sees her strength with amazement….
The mans head bleeds all over…..
Shanaya then drags him to Bhavri’s legs….
Bhavri looks at Shanaya who holds up her head proudly, her fierce eyes….
Bhavri stands up from her chair: Tum jeet gayi…..Saabit jar diya apne aapko……
She pats her on her shoulder…..
Bhavri: Ab tum hamare layak ho…..Maango, kya chhahiye tumhe?
Shanaya’s heavy breathing comes to rest….
Shanaya: Phir kabhi maang lege….
Bhavri: Theek hai, jab maangogi, jo chahogi, wo milega ……badle mein….
She hands over a new gun to Shanaya,
Bhavri: Hamare yaha shaamil hone ka tohfa….
Shanaya takes it….
Munmun gets irked….
Bhavri: Tum aaj aaraam kar lo…..kaam kal se shuru hoga….
Shanaya nods….
Everybody leaves….
Scene 5:
Bhavri was in her room…..
Munna: Is laundhiya ne to saabit kar liya….
Bhavri: Nahi, Shraddha ne saabit kar liya….
She walks to the window….
Bhavri: Humne bahut pehele Shraddha ko lalakara tha, ke wo hamare jaise banke dikhae……us waqt wo fail ho gayi…..par aaj……aaj dusra janam lekar hamari aakho ke saamne usne ye baat saabit kar li…..
Munna: I don’t think this girl is right for us …..I mean, what if she ditched us? Our Munmun is dere with us. We don’t need her…..
Bhavri: No, Shanaya will stay here…..she is better and strong….
Munna gets quiet….
Scene 6:
Shanaya cleans her wounds…..
Bhavri comes to her room….
Shanaya tends to get up…..
Bhavri: No it’s ok…..sit….
She sits by the bed…
Bhavri: I had to show others that u are too capable, that’s y I took the test…..
Shanaya: Yes, It was ur duty…
Bhavri: Hmm…..I want u to know….We have this enemy, Dheerchand.
Shanaya: I know him….
Bhavri: That’s y I called u…..I wanted to finish him off once and for all….that’s y ur here for….
Shanaya nods…..
Bhavri: Once he is dead u can go home….u can go anywhere u want….do whatever u want…..but u serve me whenever I need u….
Shanaya: Yes…..
Bhavri: Ok, so tomorrow u start ur job….
Shanaya: Yes aaji amma…..
Bhavri goes….
Shanaya sleeps…..
Precap: Shanaya works for Bhavri……she senses Shraddha’s spirit…..
9 Comments
nice one.pls post the next one soon and make it more lengheir.
after long time you post it.however it was really nice.but post the next one soon.today part have no shernaya scene .pls try to give the next part asap and more long .with this give shernaya romantic scene.pls pls.
awesome.post next.part asap and agreed with mona.
loved shanay fighting part and waiting for next part.
like always you are awesome.i also read your ishqbaaz ff.loved it.post the next part asap.
Awesome it was a splendid episode
Purpleeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!What u done yaar..Tu kis cheez se bani hai re??? Dear its awam..Nothing to say..No words to describe..Stay blessed dr n study well..Always do study at first then ryt ff OK..
Purple my sweety you are an amazing writer yaar…You always rocks and today also you rocked again…Shamsher’s behaviour towards Lallan make me laugh???…You are really great…And I messaged you in Whatsapp…Just check it out…Stay blessed dear…
Hii guys. Wanted to tell u all that I will post next part on 1st January 2017. Luv u all till then