Soooo veeerrrryyy soorrryyy guys!!!!! Actually I was REALLY VERY BUSY in studies and exams. I had my 12th boards on 28th Feb to 22nd March so could not reach you…….Thanks for waiting.
Here is the next update, I’ve especially made it big for u all….
Recap: Shanaya arrives at Bhavri’s place. She proves her capabilities to Bhavri by winning a fight. Munna and Munmun are alerted to see this.
TODAY:
It’s early morning.
Shanaya wakes up in bed to her ringing phone…..she looks at the screen and smiles.
Shanaya: Hiii….good morning.
Varun: Gm beautiful. Sleepy??
Shanaya: Hmm…..
Varun: It’s ur first day at the ‘Don House’.
Shanaya: Ya I know. I start working from today.
Varun: All the best Shaani. I miss u.
Shanaya: And I love u.
Varun: Muaah!!
Shanaya giggles. There is a knock on the door.
Shanaya: Varun I’ll talk to u later. Bye. Take care of everyone over there.
Varun: Yaa, bye. U take care too.
Shanaya keeps the phone…..
Shanaya: Come in…..
Bijouria enters.
Bijouria: Jijji ….Bhavri Devi has called you at the breakfast table.
Shanaya nods : Ya okay, thanks….
Bijouria leaves.
Shanaya then walks up to the mirror….looks at herself.
Shanaya: Hmm…….first impression, is the BEST impression……but always be who you are…..
Scene 2:
All were at the dining table. Bhavri is waiting for Arjun, Shanaya and Munmun.
Munna: Jijji, aaj kaunsa kaam dene waali hai aap uss laundhiya…..
Bhavri eyes him…..
Munna: Hamara matlab uss Shanaya ko??
Bhavri: Maal ki len-den ( give-n-take)…….
Munna: Par jijji! Waha toh wo Paltu Singh bhi hoga na…..
( Guys I hope u remember that Paltu Singh!)
Bhavri: Haa hum jaante hai, aur wo phir se paltega, jaise pehele kiya tha…..
Shamsher: Haa aaji amma, wo aasaani se maal chhodta nahi…..
Munmun arrives…..
Bhavri: Iss liye Shanaya ko bhi bhej rahe hai…..dono haath ek saath jaege toh hame chinta nahi rahegi….
Munna gets irked to see Bhavri relating Shanaya as her ‘haath’ (hand)……
Shamsher is waiting to see how this strategy unfolds. He was going to fight the first time with Shanaya as his partner….
Munna interrupts : Toh jijji, hamari Munmun bhi waise kam nahi hai…..wo bhi sambhaal sakti thi…..
Bhavri: Haa, par hamne use kabhi bhi eisa koi kaam nahi diya…..toh ham risk nahi le sakte…..
Munna and Munmun are upset…..
Shanaya arrives…..she is wearing sea blue skinny flaring long skirt and a plain red crop top and kamar patta
….and yeah! there is a gun holder with a gun tied around her skirt……
Everybody looks at this newly arrived modern goon…..Munmun glances at Shanaya’s clothes and then her’s…..
Shanaya comes near Bhavri……
Shanaya: Hum aa gaye….
Bhavri: Hmm…..jao, waha baith jao…..hum sab saath khaate hai….
Shanaya goes near a chair…..
Bhavri: Waha nahi…..waha….
And she points to the other chair….
Shanaya and everyone looks at Bhavri….
Bhavri: waha baitho toh hum tumhe dekh sake…..
Shanaya smiles and sits on THAT chair…..a familiar chair which was longing for a familiar person….
Bhavri thinks: Shraddha bhi wahi par baitha karti thi……mandir se nazdeek wali chair par….
Everybody starts having…..Bhavri explains the task to Shanaya…..
Shanaya carefully listens to her….
Shanaya: Paltu Singh is…..
Bhavri: Your Dadda’s enemy….
Shernaya look at each other and then at Bhavri…..Arjun too is interested……
Bhavri: That’s why I’ve chosen you.
Shanaya : So whatever bonus I earn from Paltu, will be mine, as a payment,…… deal??
Everybody glances at Shanaya, her guts to speak up like this to Bhavri….
Bhavri smiles: Done, but anything goes wrong and…..
Shanaya: You kill me…..done!.
Bhavri: Bahut hoshiyaar dacoit ho…..
And she gives an approving look to Munna, who is irked again….
Bhavri: You two leave in half an hour.
Shamsher: Ji aaji amma…..
Shanaya: Arjun wont come??
Dead silence everywhere….
Bhavri and Shamsher try to speak…..Arjun replies….
Arjun: I prefer handling the political affairs of aaji amma…..
Shanaya smiles: Okay….
Arjun looks down at his food plate….
Arjun thinks: Iss kaale jungle mein phir se nahi phasna chahata mein…..
Shamsher looks pitifully at his brother….
Scene 3:
Shanaya dresses herself in her goon clothes….
She reminisces a man’s voice…..
‘Always, remember the power lies within YOU. There is a fire within you, keep it under control and ignite it when the moment comes……’
She is teary eyed and a blaze is shown in her face.
Shanaya: I’m ready.
Shamsher was waiting for Shanaya with his goons…..
His goon assistant, Chaitan who is like a ‘bhai’ to Shamsher and Arjun, breaks the silence…..
Chaitan: Bhai, ye ladki eisa kaam kar paegi?
Shamsher looks at him…..
Chaitan: Kyuki ye madam toh tayaar hone mein hi itna waqt laga rahi hai….
All the other goons laugh along….. Shamsher gives a mischievous smile……
Shamsher: Shayad tumne dekha nahi, uski uss din ki fight….
Chaitan: Fight?? Her??
Shamsher: Koi baat nahi, aaj dekh lena….
Meanwhile Shanaya is shown coming forth…..
Orange sleeveless short top beneath a brown leather jacket ( girls wear)……black jeans with a gun holder and a kamar patta around her bare slim waist below the crop top….hair styled as usual…..sun glasses placed on the top neck…..and a silver locket around her neck.
She walks up to Shamsher confidently while Shamsher, Chaitan and everyone else stares at her…..
Chaitan gives an approval look to Shamsher who smiles at Chaitan…..
Shamsher: Chale??
Shanaya: Hmm….
Shernaya sit in the front seats of the jeep, Chaitan at the back. The other goons follow their jeep behind with another car.
Shanaya removes her jacket and wears the glasses….
Shamsher: Since when you know Paltu?
Shanaya: Right from the beginning, Dadda hates him….but I have never seen him….just heard about him from Dadda…..
Shamsher: He always plays tricks, but kya kare? Kaam nikalana hai….
Chaitan was longing to talk to Shanaya…..
Chaitan: Hii….I’m Chaitan….
Shanaya looks back….: Ohh! Hii…. Shanaya….
Chaitan: I take charge of Bhaiyya’s work in his absence…..where are you from….
Shanaya: Uhh I’m from Ruthamgarh…. Shamsher, u didn’t told me you have another brother?
Chaitan: Uhh no no. I’m not his real brother, I had no one in this world so I started working here. Shamsher bhai treats me like his bro only….
Shanaya: Ohh….
And she smiles maturely at Shamsher, who remembers his liking towards it again, and smiles at her….
Shamsher: U know, Chaitan sabko maska bahut lagata hai….
And he winks at him….
Shanaya smiles at Chaitan……
Chaitan: Aap bhi na bhaiyya ji….
Scene 4:
Munna and Munmun are in a room…
Munmun: Daddu! U see how that girl just got a status in front of aaji amma?
Munna: Hum bhi vahi soch rahe hai…..saala ham itne saalo se itni mehenat karte aa rahe hai, wo jijji ko kabhi nahi dikha…..
Munmun : Hamare Manohar ki bhi kaha kadar thi unhe? Shamsher ne hamare bhai ko maar daala, par unhe koi saza nahi mili….
Munna: Milegi Munmun, ham badla lege…..uss Shanaya ko bhi saath saath dekh lege…..
Munmun: Lekin uss Shanaya mein eisa hai kya jo aaji bua ko itna pasand aaya??
Munna knows the answer……but Bhavri had warned him not to tell anybody that Shanaya is Shraddha’s look alike…..
Munna: U leave that…..now if that Shanaya is in Bhavri’s team, she too will have to suffer….
Scene 5:
Shamsher reaches the location….. Shanaya sees Paltu’s place, it was the same as before, when Sherdha had visited it…..just it’s visitors had changed….
Paltu had arrived on the spot with his goons……
He sees Shamsher and Shanaya……he slowly recollects Shraddha’s face, he just cannot believe his eyes!….
He had heard the death news of Sherdha years back and had partied to hear his enemies die….but he had to make a good partnership with Bhavri to keep his business running….
He recollects Shraddha in a sanskari gon outfit with Sher and now sees het replica with a deadly goon avatar…..he just cannot help but stare Shanaya…..
Shamsher sees Paltu and his goons eyeing Shanaya and gets kind of angry…..he then turns towards Shanaya to see if she is feeling odd or no…..
But….
Shanaya is eyeing EACH AND EVERY goon with a lioness stare, with her hands on her waist, standing upright proudly….her fearceful eyes immediately make all the faces of Paltu’s goons go down in fear…..
Shamsher thinks: She is so comfortable, good aaji amma…..good job!!
Shamsher: Paltu Singh, milo hamari nayi saajedaar se…. Shanaya….
Paltu and Shanaya eye each other, Shanaya wonders as to why Paltu is looking at her in a shocked way….
Paltu: Kaa Shamsher bhai!! Kam se kam batakar lanaa chhahiye thaa….humari patni inke liye kuch intazaam kar leti…..
He was playing the same trick on Shernaya as he had done to Sherdha,….( I hope u remember guys!) He wanted to take Shanaya inside side and trap her too…..
Shanaya intervenes: Koi jarurat nahi hai….hum yahi theek hai….tumhari patni se kaho ki koi tayyari naa kare, warna kya naa, tere ghar ki aukaat nahi reh jaegi….
Shamsher, Paltu and all the goons present are damn amazed to hear her say this with a command….
Paltu feels insulted…
Shamsher: Ab baatein ho gayi ho, toh deal complete kare?
Paltu: Chaliye….
They sit face to face by the table….Paltu starts talking with Shamsher, partly eying Shanaya….
Shanaya sits like a lioness on her chair…..she carefully scans the place, his trucks, the cottage, his goons, and also hears the deal….
Paltu: So, are we done?
Shamsher: Hmm….give the stock…
Paltu signs his goons to bring in the stock….
Shanaya: Er…. Shamsher, I want take some rest. I’m tired kind off.
Paltu: Yeah sure-
Shanaya: Did I ask u??
Paltu and Shamsher are taken aback…
Shamsher: Fine, I’ll wait for u…
Shanaya turns to Paltu: Now where is ur wife?
Paltu: Yes,yes …..Shilpa!!
A woman comes….
Paltu: Pls take her to our service…
Shilpa: This way….
Shanaya and Shilpa walk in….
Paltu: Kaa Shamsher bhai! Itne bure din aa gaye ki ek ladki ko saajedaar banaa diya?
Shamsher: Ye ek mamuli ladki nahi, aji amma ne sahi kiya….
Paltu: Ise kahi dekha hai maine…
Shamsher: Ho sakta hai, ye Dharasingh Raichand ki don hai….unki right hand….
Paltu gets tensed, as Dharasingh is his enemy…..
Paltu: Dharasingh dushman-
Shamsher: Pata hai, lekin usse hamare beech koi fark nahi hoga…
Paltu remains quiet….he had heard a lot about Dharasinghs ‘right hand’….but he didn’t knew that it was Shanaya….
Scene 6:
Shanaya is in the room when Shilpa comes.
Shilpa: Here, water…
Shanaya: Well I didn’t ask u for it..
Shilpa is taken aback: Ah! It’s hot outside, so if u drink…
Shanaya senses someone else in the room… ( Maybe another goon to trap her )…
Shanaya: Ok, yeah actually I was thirsty, thanks..
She takes the glass, smiles at Shilpa…and….grabs her by her strong arm and makes her drink it forcefully. Shilpa then, falls down unconscious.
Shanaya senses someone approaching her from behind. She swiftly turns around and hits the goon hard on his head.
Scene 7:
Shamsher is waiting for Shanaya…Paltu is smiling in anticipation that his wife has done her job….
Shamsher: Kaha gayi ye…?
Paltu was about to utter the words: ‘ Kaun ladki? U had come here alone.’ as he had done it to Sher.
But,
Shamsher: Lo, aa gayi….chalo Paltu, hum chalte hai.
Paltu turns back to see Shanaya, proudly eyeing Paltu….Paltu got to know his plan failed. He would have got more money if he had trapped Shanaya and sold her….but it was a bad luck..
Shanaya: Sorry, I took late, chale?
Shamsher: Hmm…
And they leave….
Paltu is relieved to see them go….but…
He sees Shanaya smiling at him in a ‘revenge mode’. He now knows that she saw his real face today. Something is fishy, he runs inside his house only to find his goon and wife tied with a rope.
He finds a letter nearby, by Shanaya…
‘ We will meet soon….’
Scene 8:
Bhari gets a call from Shamsher. She is relieved on hearing that they are coming home without any mess created by Paltu….
Bhavari: Ab raahat hui.
Munna: Kyu?
Bhavari: Wo dono sahi salamat aa rahe hai…
Munna: Haa, Shamsher jo hai…
Bhavari: Hmm,
Munna: Vaise ek baat puche jijji?
Bhavari: Haa kaho?
Munna: Ye Shanaya ekdum Shraddha jaisi lagti hai na? Yakeen nahi hota…
Bhavari: Ham bhi chauk gaye the…aaj bhi eisa lagta hai jaise Shraddha hi ghoomti firti hai iss ghar mein….
Munna: Ye Shanaya ji barabar jaankaari hai tumko?
Bhavari: Matlab?
Munna plays his game : Kahi eisa nahi ki ye fraud ho….ek baar-
Bhavari: Eisa kuch nahi hai. Hum phir bhi ek aur baar pakka kar lege…
Munna: Hum khabar nikaale?
Bhavari was about to say something….but she paused for a while.
Bhavari: Haa, nikaal lo.
Munna smirks.
Scene 9:
Shamsher and Chaitan chit chat and laugh along the way. Shanaya is quiet.
Chaitan: Kaa hua? Aap thak gayi hai aaj?
Shamsher: Haa Shanaya, u wanted a little rest over there too…
Shanaya is lost….
Shamsher: Shanaya…
No reply….
Shamsher: Shanaya!
She startles…: Yes! Atleast let me see the scenery in peace.
Shamsher: All this jhaad ped and jungle is ‘scenery’ for u? Really?
Shanaya: So what?
Shamsher: So uncool…
Shanaya: Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder….my friend.
Chaitan: Well said Shanaya…..
Shamsher: Do u wanna get down and walk pedal all the way Chaitan?
Chaitan: Uh…no…
Shanaya: This is like a coward….Ur afraid to face me alone so making him fear-
Shamsher: I ain’t scared of anybody, ok?
Shanaya: Achha??
Shamsher: Yes, nobody…
Shanaya: And what if u are?
Shamsher: Anything u say, bet….
Shanaya: Aaji amma?
Shamsher is confused….
Shanaya: Hehehe….
Shamsher: Ok fine, everyone are scared of their eldest family member…..
He looks at her: U must be too…Ur nani maaaa…
Shanaya: No haa, pls…
Shamsher: Oh yes. Ur like hamari nani maa dekh legi, hamari naani maa dekh legi….
Shanaya is angry as he imitates her….
Shamsher: Hehehe….. Atleast Aaji amma isn’t like that…
Chaitan: Btw bhaiyya ji, nani maa kya dekh legi?
Now both Shernaya are speechless, how and what to say about their previous story?
Shanaya: Chaitan, u wanna walk pedal?
Chaitan: Ok, sorry…
Shernaya smile at each other childishly.
Scene 10:
Shernaya arrive home. Everybody arrive.
Arjun: How was ur day Shaani?
Shanaya: Yes, it was fine….hey how u know my nickname?
Shamsher kind off feels uneasy. He doesn’t know why.
Arjun: Ohh, that’s just a quality of mine. Many more to go.
Shanaya smiles at him: Ok, Ill wait…
Arjun: And u bhai? Urs must be good as always…
Shamsher: Yes it was-
Arjun: Chaitan, tell the cook to arrange the table. U all freshen up.
Shanaya nods and runs upstairs. Arjun goes away.
Shamsher feels really bad at his brothers attitude towards him. It’s was all bcoz of him. He hopes Arjun forgives him one day.
He takes his guilty and sad face and goes to his room.
Chaitan, aware of all this thinks : Shamsher bhai, don’t worry, now that ur paying for ur deeds now, everything will be fine.
Entire family eats dinner. Talk about day’s activities. They then go to their rooms.
Shanaya takes a walk around the house. She takes a quick shower and wears a simple white colour, backless ghagra choli ( guys I wanted her to have a blend of testimonial clothes also )
She remembers seeing a mandir on her arrival.
Shanaya: Ohh! How can I forget….let’s pay a visit now…
She goes downstairs and meets Bhavari….
Bhavari, seeing her in an ethnic look, feels like seeing Shraddha…
Bhavri: U wear this at night?
Shanaya: Yes, I like it.
Bhavri: How was ur work today?
Shanaya: Yes it was good…
Bhavri: Any problem faced?
Shanaya: Paltu did try…
Bhavri: Kidnapping u…yes I know.him very well.
Shanaya: U didn’t tell me?
Bhavri: I was like a test. U did great. Paltu should know that my new goon is not to be underestimated…
Shanaya: Ohh….that’s correct.
Bhavari: Hmm….u should sleep now…I’ll see u tomorrow.
Shanaya: Yes, good night…
Bhavari goes off….
Shanaya thinks: That lady has her brains left….hmm, chalo, I have a strong boss….
She steps in the mandir….she again feels a kind of sensation. A feeling, like she has been there before, like as if, it was her own place….
She slowly proceeds towards the idol, and stares it…
Shanaya thinks: Why I feel that I have encountered this place before? Well, whatever…
She joins her hand and prays….
‘Maa, I am new at this place. But still dont feel so. I dont know what is gonna happen, but u stay with me always. Just stay, whenever I feel lost. And pls keep my own family in safety there.’
As.she is immersed in her own words, she feels a soft hustle….as if someone walking gently past her…
She is startled. She opens her eyes and looks around.
Nobody.
Shanaya thinks: I DID feel it. But yahan toh koi nahi hai…
She is tensed and also tired. She gets uncomfortable and hurriedly walks up to her room. Shuts the door and sits by the bed.
The moonlight lights up her white choli and long shimmering one sided dupatta.
She lies on the bed and curls her hair behind her ears….
Shanaya: Lets leave something for tomorrow too….good night Shaani…
And she sleeps….
Tonight, the mandir was also happy, as it had been awaiting it’s bhakt since 25 years….
And somewhere, a soft hustle, which she heard, is again shown as a gentle blow of air near the window curtains.
Precap: Shanaya finds more about Paltu. Munna plans against Shanaya. Shernaya spend some time and Shanaya senses Shraddha again.
{ Again very sorry guys for waiting beyond the limits. I really missed all of u. Waiting for ur long missed, sweet comments…. Luv u!! }