Hii everyone… chhaya is here again…back wid another story….pls keep supporting guys….nd my best wishes to all TU writers…as i am not reading regularly…nd one more thing as i love both ragsan nd raglak i will give both the couples turn by turn…
Here it starts:
Shekhar nd sumi gadodia-parents of swaragini..nd swayam,best frnds of dp nd ap,owner of “gadodia industries”
Swara gadodia-elder to ragini by 2 yrs nd to swayam by 5 yrs…a beautiful nd bubbly girl…manages her father’s business
Ragini gadodia-younger to swara ,nd elder to swayam by 3 yrs…an innocent nd loving girl….manages her father’s business
Swayam gadodia-youngest of gadodia siblings….a fun loving guy….is in 2 yr of clg
Ap nd Dp maheshwari-proud parents of sanlak bd uttara….best frnds of gadodias…owns”maheshwari industries”
Lakshya maheshwari-elder to sanskar by 3 months nd to uttara by 6 yrs…a handsome nd awesome guy….manges his father’s business
Sanskar maheshwari-his biological parents r rp nd sujata (who died in an accident when he was 1 yr old)…so frm then nly his bade papa nd maa had taken his care(everyone knows abt it but doesn’t makes any difference)……a calm nd loving guy….manages his dad’s business…
Uttara maheshwari-younger sis of her 2 brothers….a fun loving girl…a 1 yr student…
*maheshwaris nd gadodias r bff,when the leads were kids ,maheshwaris move to US for managing business…. so the leads doesn’t know much abt eo…now maheshwaris r returning back….after so many yrs….nd will now live in India nly…
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Shekhar nd sumi was on doorstep…waiting for their frnds….swara nd swayam were in the balcony of the first floor…nd was looking around through binoculars…. suddenly swara sees something nd runs downstairs… seeing her running… swayam also follows her ….they reach near sette nd swara shouts”maa…pa wo log aa gye”…nd she sets down on sofa…tired of running…
Sumi hold up the “aarti thaal”….nd stands on the doorstep.
Then a white Mercedes…. stops in front of the house….a couple in their 50s comes out very excited…they r ap nd dp maheshwari….they comes nd hugs sumi nd Shekhar respectively…
Shekhar”finallly after so many yrs,u r back my frnd…”
Dp”i was physically there…but my mind nd heart was here nly…”
Ap”sumi u r looking same as 24 yrs back”
Sumi”oh ty…u also don’t changed…same as earlier fit nd fine”
Dp”where r my dolls…nd that ladoo swayam!!”
Shekhar”there they r….”pointing towards swara nd swayam who were coming towards them…
Swara nd swayam takes their blessings….
Ap while caressing her face”u grown up so beautiful”
Dp”nd my boy u doesn’t look lije a ladoo now…u grown up handsome”
Sumi”where r my bacchas…i am dying to see them”
Ap”oh they were coming in another car…..why they haven’t reached yet”
At that time ,a black benz car…stops there…ap smiles…2 young dashing man steps out of front seats…while a cute girl steps down from back seat…
They come stands near their parents….
Ap introduces them…
Ap “this is lakshya,sanskar nd uttara,nd they r sumi,shekhar ,swara nd swayam”introducing everyone…
The 3 tooks blessings.. nd hand shake wid younger ones..
While shaking hands wid swara…lakshya feels something diff…same case wid swara…
Shekhar”let’s step in!!”
Sumi”let me do the aarti first”she does their aarti…
Everyone settle down on sofa..nd was talking normally…
Then ap asked”where is my other doll…ragini”
Listening to ragini’s name, sanskar’s heartbeat raises..
Sumi”wo…she has fever….so she had taken the medicine nd is sleeping”
Ap”is she fine now”
Sumi”yaa she is fine…just normal fever”
Ap”i wld was waiting to meet her…but no matter…i wld meet her tommorrow”
They had some snacks. ….nd were chitchatting… nd then they took dinner…
By this time…swra nd uttara…sanlak nd swayam had a good tuning…
Then uttara says”i want to eat ice cream”
Sgekhar”i wld order now”
Uttara”no uncle ….the real fun is @stall nly,we wld go there na”
Swayam”yaa…she is right,we shld go there”
We elders won’t come as we r going to eat our paan ..u can go.
Swara”i am not feeling to eat anything… so u go nd enjoy”.
Sanskar”same here”
Lakshya”i am also feeling same…. so pls u both go”
Swayam”ok we both will enjoy”
Uttara nodded nd they both went….
Swara, lakshya bd sanskar were chitchatting
Swara”let me show u my house”
Lakshya nd sanskar followed her…
Lakshya nd swara was moving along side ..while swara was telling abt the house…lakshya was lost in her…
Sanskar was @ back of them was busy wid his phone
Swara”nd this is ragini’s room…we can’t go inside as she is resting”
Lakshya nodded…
Nd they move outside…
Nd then her room arrived… she take him inside…
Meanwhile sanskar doesn’t saw wgere they was going….nd entered inside ragini’s room…
Just as he entered…. the light goes off…
Precap-love ….love everywhere…??
19 Comments
is it ragsan? awesome
Superb
Is it a swalak ragsan ff
Interesting and thanks for RAGSAN nowadays very less stories are here
Awesome post soon
Hi ragsan are not less at all but compared to swasan ff they are raglak ff bhi jyada nhi hai mai bhut se ragsan ff bhi pdh chuki hun.pls just a request raglak ya ragsan dena but pls swa—–lak mt dena yar pls.mere liye to is ff ke liye RAGLAK is preferable. So pls make it raglak.
Awesome awesome dear, loved it. Waiting for next part
awesome dear….loved it alot…is it ragsan….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…
Superbb . Eagerly waiting for next chappy update sooon .
Awesome
Aww u comeback with my ragsan nice
Superb
fab start xx
Awesome sissy
Amazing dr
Awesome
Awesome
Superb waiting for RAGSAN face off
Nice