Hey guyzz….This is Maria again…With my ff….Sorry for last update ..Iwas not well that’s why…I started to type yesterday …It will be a long…episode
Hey readers some of the friends asked me to concentrate in Rumya & Om’s love story also…What is ur opinion….Thank u Gayathri.Visu 4 ur suggestion…I will surely take it for consideration…Then everyone will be having equal scenes .I mean none of them will be simply sitting (4 couples will share the screen) …(Now my tension increased(just joking yaar..If my reader want it I will surely take their ideas for consideration if possible) ,so here continues my ff :-
TODAY’S DIALOGUE
Nafrat kabhi bhi akele itni gehri nahi hoti
Hey guyxx Delated Happy Slap Day….Did anyone of u got slaps?…I got 7…If u got pls share ur experience or comment about it in 2 to 3 sentences it’s a request…Pls………
If you forgot story of last episode or didn’t read don’t worry here’s the link:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/please-dont-go-shivika-priveer-love-story-episode-7/
Recap:- Om’s love entry……..Anika finds truth about her life…… Soumya faints…….Ranveer shocked Prinku rocked……..
Episode 8
It’s Morning
Oberoi Mansion
All three couples r shown
1st Shivaay & Anika sleeping cuddling to eachother
2nd Rudy & Somu sleeping next to eachother (seemed to have consummated their marriage)( I thought to write their scenes but I will only start writing whn I get opinions)
3rd Priveer who was looking soo cute…Their Jodi was perfect
AT PRINKU’S ROOM
Prinku was lying next to Ranveer & was hugging him ( just as shivika’s scene behind the moon)…Ranveer was also in deep slumber ….He was holding Prinku by her waist….They were looking so cute….
Om entered their room….Om was shocked to see Ranveer and Prinku…
He went near Ranveer & Pulled him by his collar…Ranveer woke up by Om’s sudden reaction…..he was shocked to find himself sleeping near Prinku…Prinku as woke up rubbing her eyes…
Prinku: What happened Mr Oberoi? Why came to our room so early?
Om gave a tight slap in Ranveer’s face
Om: I told u stay away from my sis….But u won’t change (he again was going to slap him but Prinku holds his hands)
Prinku: He is my Husband…Don’t dare to raise ur hands against him…
Om: Prinku he is not ur husband…He is just using this opportunity
Prinku: Stop ( shouting)………Can u pls go from this room…Mr Oberoi u have not rights to interfere in my life nor in my husband’s life…..Just leave from here
Om was going to say something but Prinku pushed him towards the door and closed it in front of his face…
Om was shocked by his action …..He leaves from there & goes to his art gallery…
INSIDE THE ROOM
Prinku: Did it hurt? Don’t worry stay here I will bring first aid box
Ranveer: It’s not needed it’s just a small injury. But keep it with u as whn it will be useful can’t be predicted (He was thinking a way to hurt Om)
Prinku didn’t understand anything but still she nodded in a positive manner…
Ranveer laughed at her innocence ….Prinku was first time see Ranveer so happy….She was starting at his cuteness….
Prinku: U look so cute while smiling
Ranveer: (Ranveer was happy with her comment but he just scratched his hair & escaped from there with embarrassment)
Ranveer(in mind):Don’t know y is feel attracted to this girl….
Prinku(in mind):Thank u god for giving me such good looking and cute husband…He is soo cute..
Ranveer heard her last sentence….He looked at Prinku and found her smiling. When he looked she started to blush Ranveer was looking at her. He remembered something and left the room…
AT HOTEL
RUMYA was shown in a hotel room……they were sleeping cuddling to each other’s embrace….They seem to have consummated their marriage(If u want their consummation scene to be written pls do comment so in next episode their consummation scene with twist will be written)
Rudra was holding soumya….Due to sun’s ray Soumya woke up… She was shocked to find herself near Rudy & naked….She covered herself with blanket…Rudy was still in sleep…(Soumya was blushing)
Soumya: Rudy………….Wake up…
Rudy: Let me sleep bro…(He took a pillow and covered his head)
Soumya: Rudy wake up it’s a serious matter
Rudy ( Rubbing his eyes): Now what happened….Why are u screaming like this
He noticed something….
Rudy: Somu what r u doing under the blanket (He was pulling it..Somu gave a slap in his face(not so hard))
Rudy: Somu y did u slap me…I didn’t do anything ( with puppy face)
Somu: Just look at urself Rudy……
Rudy looked at himself & found that he was half naked..
Rudy: Mummy……Somu wat did u do to me…….
Somu: I should have asked this question to u Rudy….
Soumya: wat happened yesterday…I don’t remember anything
Rudy: Even I don’t remember…….Chubby…Chubby must have done something
Somu: Wat??
Rudy: I mean Chubby must have mixed something in our drink
Soumya: But I didn’t drink anything
Rudy (Thinking): I also didn’t drink anything..Then y i’m not remembering anything
Rumya(in mind): This hould have happened someday then y I’m I possessive about this…Just leave it I think I should change the topic
Rumya( together): I think we should forget about this…
Soumya: I was also thinking about this
Rudy: U go get ready …I think we should leave to OM..
Soumya: Hmmm
They both get ready & went from there….A person in was looking at them from far…..Person throws his/her phone in anger seeing Rumya together(Person will be revealed soon)
AT OM
Shivaay & Anika woke up but they were not ready to move from bed as they were lazy….There was a knock in the door ,,,Anika looks at the clock it was 10.00 am….She was about to go when Shivaay pulled her back to bed..
Anika: Leave me Shivaay….I need to open the door….
Shivaay was not showing any response …He was still playing with Anika’s hair and shawl…Anika kissed shivaay…In sudden action…Shivaay leaves his hand from her hand…
Anika rushes to open the door…It was Pinky…
Pinky: Anika r u fine…?
Anika: Yes mummyji…Y u asked..
Pinky: Usually u woke up early than this so ,I thought u r not fine….Dadi was calling u….By the way where is Shivaay..I didn’t see him today….
Anika: woh actually…mummyji…….he is here…….
Pinky: I think my dreams for Kanji eyed grandchildren will be fulfilled within weeks……….
Anika: Weeks??
Pinky: U two r romancing too much these days….So it can be fulfilled in any time(Anika blushed)
Pinky(holds anika’s face): My bahu is blushing to hard today…U became tomatoes….Go get ready and come fast…
Anika nodded yes…Pinky left the room (She didn’t enter but was standing near doorstep)
Anika came inside and saw Shivaay who was sleeping peacefully after many days..She went to closet…. took her clothes …..Went to washroom…without disturbing him….
She came out after bath….She went near Shivaay…..& was about to cover him with blanket….But shivaay pulled her towards him…He showed his cheeks…Indicating he wanted one more kiss….Anika was about to give him…This is when his phone rings…..
Caller:………………………
Shivaay: Ok ,I will come within two to three mins..
He looked at Anila
Shivaay: Anika I have a meeting …I need to hurry up ……(showing his cheecks)
Anika understood wat he meant ….She kisses him…Shivaay goes to washroom and after sometimes he comes out and kisses Anika…and says bye to her….He leaves for office……….
Anika gets a call from a caller
Caller: Mrs Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi………
Anika: Yes…..Who is this……
Caller: I’m just a well wisher….
Anika: What nonsense
Caller: I called u to give u a bad news………
Anika: Wat?
Caller: First listen…..then react..
Anika: Pls tell fast
Caller: Ur Devar’s life is in danger?
Call ended…………..
Anika panicked she called Om but Om was not picking the phone…She again tried……..She then calls Rudy…Rudy picked the phone
Rudy: Hello .Bhabi
Anika: Rudy where r u?
Rudy looks at soumya
Rudy: I’m with soumya
Anika: That I know where the location….
Rudy : Near Rose palace…(which is near OM)
Anika: Rudy u people come fast…
Rudy: Ok Bhabi
Anika( in mind): Rudy is 5n…But Om…….
She again tries to call Om but he is not picking his phone……Just then Rudy and Soumya enter
Soumya : Rudy…I think Bhabi is in tension. Let’s ask her the matter
Rudy and soumya came near her….Anika saw them she was happy as they were fine she hugged them
Rudy and Somu was confused b her action they ask Anika wat’s the matter ..Anika tells them wat the caller told her….Suddenly Rudy tells Om Bhaiya…
Anika again tried this time Om picked the phone,,He was driving the car
Om: Hello ,Bhabi..
Anika: R u 5n Om
Om: Yes….Y u asked…
Anika: What r u doing know
Om: I’m driving the car
Anika: R u mad Om u ………Stop the car Om now….Ur talking in phone while driving u could have parked the car …..
Om: Ok bhabi..I will park and the we will talk( This is when he realises that car’s brakes r not working)
Om: Bhabi barkes is not working…..
Anika was not able to hear clearly due to network problem…..
Suddenly BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its was all that she could hear…
Anika shouted Om!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rudy & Soumya rushed to her……..Anika was crying…….She tells them about the accident……
Anika calls shivaay
Anika(crying): Shivaay…………Om……
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Shivaay: What happened to Om?
Anika: (tells everything to him crying)
Shivaay: u didn’t think its necessary to inform me Anika…
Anika was about to say something Shivaay cuts the call
AT ACCIDENT SPOT( IT WAS NEAR A JUNGLE)
Om is lying in a pool of blood….A girl is shown coming in car….None of the cars stops seeing him………This girl reach the spot she stops the car ….She goes near him and takes selfi…..with Om who was lying in pool of blood…..
suddenly a another girl from car comes and gives a tight slap in first girl’s face…She then bends and look at Om…She found that he is breathing…She carries him with the help of other girl to Hospital…She found Om’s phone ringing …&carried it to hospital…
IN HOSPITAL
Again Om’s phone rings…It was anika…Girl picks the call
Anika: Om r u fine?
Girl: Sorry Didi….I’m Gauri Sharma…Ur brother is admitted in CITY HOSPITAL
Anika: Is he fine?
Gauri: Operation is going on…Can’t say anything
Anika started to cry hearing it…Gauri tries to console her…Rudy take mobile from anika & enquires about Hospital he also informs Shivaay…All family members except Prinku went to Hospital……
They reached the hospital….Anika runs to Operation theatre …..She saw Gauri sitting infront of theatre…
Anika goes near door and looks through it….Family also reach there….She was crying…Family tried to console Anika and Jhanvi….Doctor came out of OT..
Anika rushes to him
Anika: How is Om?
Doctor: It’s a deep injury it will take time to heal….Nut now he’s stable..
Anika: Can we meet him?
Doc: No he hasn’t become conscious…..Now pls excuse me
He leaves from there….Anika again started to cry Rudy was also crying but he stopped crying after hearing Om is stable…He asked Anika not to cry
Rudy: Bhabi u r crying? Y r u wasting ur tears…Om is 5n..Its just some more mins after that he will be conscious…Nothing to worry
Gauri was surprised to such a lovely brother in law and sister in law bond …She came to know that Om is also Anika’s devar…But she was surprised seeing Anika considering them more as bros than brother in law…
Gauri introduce herself to the family and gives Om’s phone to Rudy ….She was about to go….She gets some flashes about her past hearing Om’s name, Oberoi etc…She was stopped by Anika
Anika: Thank u Gauri for bringing Om to hospital. We will never forget this….
Gauri: Its ok….I think I should go if any requirements do call.Here’s my mobile number…
Gauri says bye to Anika and goes from there. Anika and Gauri feels some connection between each other….They go in different directions…
AT OM
Ranveer is in a call…
Ranveer: Did u do what I said?
Person: Yes…I have removed Omkara’s cars’ brakes …
Ranveer: Good
Person: I also have asked a truck to hit his car he will not be alive…
Ranveer: U did a very good job…….U money will be transferred to ur account
Person: Ok
Call ends…
Ranveer was shocked to find Prinku standing ….behind
Ranveer: Prinku u here?
Prinku: Y can’t I come here..
Ranveer: Its not like that..
Prinku: Then wats its like
Ranveer: Y u look angry Prinku?( he was coming towards Prinku)
Prinku: Stop right there (Ranveer was shocked to see Prinku)
Ranveer: Y r u behaving like this Prinku?
Prinku (Laughing): u got scared……..
Ranveer takes a sign of relief, but Prinku understood that it is not good to trust Ranveer completely& also she have some relation with oberoi’s (she does not show this outside)
Precap: Gauri and Omkara’s past revealed……..Prinku says sorry to Ranveer & Ranveer kisses her……..A villain in Rumya’s life…..Shivika relation in danger
Sorry guys for late update& for long episode bur still I was not able to write it properly,as im not well….Anika’s life truth will be revealed in next episode..Rumya scenes I need suggestion …Omkara and gauri’s past will be interesting ..hope u all will like…& sorry priveer fans I know it was the last part..i will improve it Once again sorry late update and bore episode…I will do better next time..